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上海纪实:美军战机练全球快速机动

2019年10月22日 05:55

【<】【p】【>】【我】【正】【伏】【案】【疾】【书】【,】【稍】【作】【休】【息】【间】【,】【偶】【然】【瞥】【得】【这】【美】【景】【,】【眼】【前】【一】【亮】【,】【心】【中】【略】【惊】【讶】【,】【随】【又】【回】【复】【到】【卷】【上】【,】【题】【,】【太】【难】【了】【,】【焦】【急】【的】【我】【已】【然】【罗】【列】【出】【了】【一】【稿】【纸】【的】【公】【式】【,】【良】【久】【盯】【着】【它】【们】【,】【脑】【中】【毫】【无】【解】【题】【的】【思】【路】【,】【汗】【早】【已】【浸】【湿】【了】【衣】【襟】【。】【紧】【张】【的】【我】【浑】【身】【发】【颤】【,】【腿】【肚】【子】【在】【不】【停】【的】【哆】【嗦】【着】【,】【刺】【眼】【的】【阳】【光】【打】【在】【卷】【上】【。】【无】【尽】【的】【燥】【热】【,】【无】【尽】【的】【焦】【急】【。】【这】【不】【和】【适】【宜】【而】【来】【的】【光】【给】【我】【带】【来】【了】【不】【小】【的】【烦】【恼】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

【<】【p】【>】【我】【不】【是】【一】【个】【长】【情】【的】【人】【,】【身】【边】【的】【一】【个】【事】【物】【消】【失】【或】【被】【丢】【弃】【,】【只】【是】【当】【时】【难】【过】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【而】【后】【,】【便】【忘】【记】【了】【这】【个】【事】【物】【的】【存】【在】【。】【但】【是】【,】【我】【<】【u】【>】【作】【文】【h】【t】【t】【p】【:】【/】【/】【w】【w】【w】【.】【z】【u】【o】【w】【e】【n】【8】【.】【c】【o】【m】【<】【/】【u】【>】【对】【儿】【时】【的】【旧】【物】【有】【着】【难】【以】【言】【说】【的】【情】【感】【,】【仿】【佛】【三】【生】【石】【上】【曾】【执】【手】【许】【过】【誓】【言】【,】【在】【分】【开】【后】【的】【偶】【然】【一】【天】【,】【必】【会】【再】【次】【相】【遇】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】上海纪实【<】【p】【>】【秋】【天】【阳】【光】【已】【不】【再】【炎】【热】【,】【但】【这】【片】【绿】【色】【却】【泛】【出】【了】【点】【点】【枯】【黄】【,】【随】【着】【绵】【绵】【细】【雨】【,】【清】【凉】【的】【秋】【风】【一】【点】【点】【散】【去】【。】【那】【一】【片】【绿】【色】【在】【秋】【风】【中】【化】【为】【一】【群】【金】【黄】【的】【蝴】【蝶】【消】【散】【在】【天】【地】【间】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【地】【球】【转】【动】【3】【6】【0】【°】【,】【需】【要】【2】【3】【时】【5】【6】【分】【4】【秒】【,】【每】【一】【度】【,】【都】【是】【一】【分】【感】【动】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【—】【—】【题】【记】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【起】【床】【了】【,】【再】【不】【起】【床】【就】【要】【迟】【到】【了】【!】【”】【妈】【妈】【故】【意】【提】【高】【了】【音】【调】【。】【睡】【眼】【惺】【忪】【的】【我】【坐】【在】【床】【上】【,】【慢】【慢】【地】【将】【衣】【服】【穿】【好】【,】【洗】【漱】【完】【毕】【,】【便】【坐】【到】【了】【餐】【桌】【旁】【。】【妈】【妈】【慢】【步】【走】【来】【,】【手】【中】【端】【着】【一】【杯】【热】【气】【腾】【腾】【的】【牛】【奶】【放】【到】【桌】【上】【,】【还】【将】【杯】【子】【转】【动】【了】【9】【0】【°】【,】【将】【杯】【柄】【刚】【好】【朝】【向】【我】【。】【我】【双】【手】【捧】【起】【杯】【子】【,】【细】【细】【地】【品】【味】【着】【妈】【妈】【给】【我】【的】【9】【0】【°】【感】【动】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妈】【妈】【总】【是】【那】【么】【爱】【唠】【叨】【,】【一】【边】【说】【话】【,】【一】【边】【看】【着】【吃】【早】【饭】【的】【我】【:】【“】【你】【去】【学】【校】【加】【倍】【努】【力】【一】【下】【,】【哪】【天】【弄】【个】【第】【一】【名】【让】【我】【沾】【沾】【光】【…】【…】【”】【终】【于】【将】【早】【餐】【吃】【完】【了】【,】【我】【站】【起】【来】【,】【对】【着】【还】【在】【唠】【叨】【的】【妈】【妈】【说】【:】【“】【哎】【呀】【!】【再】【不】【走】【就】【迟】【到】【了】【。】【”】【听】【到】【这】【话】【,】【妈】【妈】【才】【准】【备】【动】【身】【。】【我】【将】【鞋】【子】【换】【好】【,】【待】【妈】【妈】【换】【完】【鞋】【子】【,】【看】【见】【她】【将】【我】【的】【拖】【鞋】【又】【转】【了】【1】【8】【0】【°】【,】【鞋】【子】【口】【朝】【向】【外】【,】【便】【于】【我】【回】【来】【的】【时】【候】【好】【换】【鞋】【子】【。】【四】【周】【弥】【漫】【着】【1】【8】【0】【°】【的】【感】【动】【气】【息】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【在】【去】【学】【校】【的】【路】【上】【,】【突】【然】【想】【起】【妈】【妈】【还】【没】【吃】【早】【餐】【,】【我】【便】【从】【书】【包】【中】【拿】【出】【一】【个】【准】【备】【带】【去】【学】【校】【的】【面】【包】【递】【给】【妈】【妈】【。】【妈】【妈】【仿】【佛】【知】【道】【我】【的】【心】【思】【,】【将】【面】【包】【推】【回】【我】【的】【手】【中】【,】【说】【:】【“】【不】【用】【,】【你】【自】【己】【吃】【吧】【,】【我】【等】【下】【回】【去】【再】【吃】【。】【”】【我】【立】【刻】【反】【驳】【道】【:】【“】【那】【怎】【么】【行】【,】【等】【下】【谁】【知】【道】【你】【是】【不】【是】【早】【饭】【、】【午】【饭】【一】【起】【吃】【啊】【!】【”】【在】【我】【的】【一】【番】【劝】【说】【下】【,】【妈】【妈】【吃】【下】【了】【面】【包】【。】【很】【快】【,】【我】【们】【走】【到】【了】【学】【校】【门】【口】【,】【我】【的】【围】【巾】【散】【开】【了】【,】【妈】【妈】【急】【忙】【走】【过】【来】【,】【拿】【起】【围】【巾】【绕】【了】【3】【6】【0】【°】【,】【将】【其】【再】【次】【围】【到】【我】【的】【脖】【子】【上】【,】【我】【带】【着】【3】【6】【0】【°】【的】【感】【动】【走】【进】【了】【校】【园】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【6】【0】【°】【的】【感】【动】【就】【在】【我】【的】【身】【边】【,】【它】【很】【简】【单】【,】【就】【像】【“】【猫】【吃】【鱼】【,】【狗】【啃】【骨】【头】【,】【奥】【特】【曼】【打】【小】【怪】【兽】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【许】【弟】【明】【)】上海纪实【<】【p】【>】【时】【光】【在】【飞】【花】【月】【影】【中】【平】【静】【地】【流】【去】【,】【伴】【你】【红】【尘】【经】【世】【,】【地】【老】【天】【荒】【的】【旧】【物】【,】【将】【永】【远】【安】【静】【一】【隅】【,】【不】【言】【别】【离】【。】【人】【与】【旧】【物】【,】【于】【觥】【筹】【交】【错】【间】【相】【忘】【江】【湖】【,】【戏】【游】【人】【生】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

上海纪实:瑞典一半图书馆被毒贩利用!

【<】【p】【>】【我】【们】【不】【能】【只】【图】【一】【时】【的】【安】【逸】【,】【我】【们】【应】【该】【忙】【碌】【起】【来】【,】【为】【了】【我】【们】【的】【理】【想】【,】【为】【了】【我】【们】【的】【事】【业】【去】【奋】【斗】【,】【活】【出】【精】【彩】【!】【创】【造】【出】【属】【于】【我】【们】【自】【己】【的】【辉】【煌】【,】【人】【生】【因】【忙】【碌】【而】【精】【彩】【!】【<】【/】【p】【>】上海纪实【<】【p】【>】【那】【日】【,】【我】【合】【上】【了】【那】【本】【书】【,】【这】【历】【史】【的】【沧】【桑】【,】【拨】【动】【过】【我】【的】【心】【弦】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

【<】【p】【>】【摇】【曳】【着】【曙】【光】【那】【支】【温】【暖】【的】【笔】【杆】【,】【悲】【怆】【时】【,】【写】【下】【一】【纸】【殷】【红】【的】【痛】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】上海纪实【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【诸】【位】【,】【你】【听】【说】【过】【《】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【》】【的】【故】【事】【吗】【?】【这】【故】【事】【可】【真】【是】【撼】【天】【地】【、】【泣】【鬼】【神】【哪】【。】【《】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【》】【是】【元】【代】【纪】【君】【祥】【创】【作】【的】【杂】【剧】【,】【依】【据】【《】【左】【传】【》】【《】【史】【记】【·】【赵】【世】【家】【》】【等】【史】【书】【所】【记】【载】【的】【两】【个】【家】【族】【矛】【盾】【斗】【争】【的】【历】【史】【衍】【生】【而】【成】【,】【悲】【怆】【凄】【切】【,】【驰】【名】【中】【外】【,】【被】【称】【为】【中】【国】【文】【学】【史】【上】【的】【《】【哈】【姆】【雷】【特】【》】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【话】【说】【春】【秋】【时】【期】【的】【晋】【国】【有】【两】【个】【重】【臣】【,】【一】【个】【是】【文】【臣】【赵】【盾】【,】【对】【朝】【廷】【忠】【心】【耿】【耿】【,】【另】【一】【个】【是】【武】【臣】【屠】【岸】【贾】【(】【读】【“】【古】【”】【)】【,】【他】【和】【赵】【盾】【不】【和】【,】【一】【心】【想】【害】【死】【赵】【盾】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【屠】【岸】【贾】【挖】【空】【心】【思】【,】【设】【计】【陷】【害】【赵】【盾】【。】【晋】【国】【国】【君】【中】【了】【计】【,】【以】【为】【赵】【盾】【是】【奸】【臣】【,】【便】【下】【令】【将】【赵】【盾】【全】【家】【包】【括】【仆】【人】【3】【0】【0】【多】【人】【全】【部】【杀】【了】【。】【只】【有】【赵】【盾】【的】【儿】【媳】【妇】【庄】【姬】【因】【为】【是】【公】【主】【,】【没】【有】【被】【杀】【,】【被】【囚】【禁】【在】【皇】【宫】【里】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【时】【庄】【姬】【已】【经】【怀】【孕】【了】【,】【不】【久】【在】【皇】【宫】【罩】【生】【了】【一】【个】【儿】【子】【,】【叫】【“】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【”】【,】【她】【希】【望】【孩】【子】【长】【大】【后】【能】【帮】【赵】【家】【报】【仇】【雪】【恨】【。】【屠】【岸】【贾】【知】【道】【公】【主】【生】【了】【孩】【子】【,】【就】【派】【人】【守】【住】【宫】【门】【,】【想】【等】【孤】【儿】【满】【月】【时】【把】【他】【杀】【死】【,】【以】【除】【后】【患】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【赵】【家】【门】【客】【、】【赵】【盾】【生】【前】【好】【友】【程】【婴】【是】【医】【生】【,】【为】【了】【救】【出】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【,】【就】【背】【着】【药】【箱】【假】【装】【来】【给】【公】【主】【看】【病】【。】【公】【主】【将】【婴】【儿】【托】【付】【给】【程】【婴】【后】【,】【自】【缢】【而】【死】【。】【程】【婴】【强】【忍】【悲】【痛】【把】【婴】【儿】【藏】【在】【药】【箱】【里】【,】【想】【把】【婴】【儿】【偷】【偷】【带】【出】【皇】【宫】【。】【可】【是】【在】【宫】【门】【口】【,】【却】【被】【守】【门】【的】【将】【军】【韩】【厥】【搜】【了】【出】【来】【。】【韩】【厥】【也】【很】【同】【情】【赵】【盾】【一】【家】【,】【就】【放】【走】【了】【程】【婴】【和】【孤】【儿】【,】【自】【己】【拔】【剑】【自】【杀】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【屠】【岸】【贾】【知】【道】【孤】【儿】【被】【救】【走】【以】【后】【,】【下】【令】【:】【如】【果】【3】【天】【内】【没】【有】【人】【交】【出】【孤】【儿】【,】【就】【把】【晋】【国】【所】【有】【1】【岁】【以】【下】【的】【婴】【儿】【都】【杀】【死】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【程】【婴】【和】【赵】【盾】【的】【另】【一】【个】【好】【朋】【友】【公】【孙】【杵】【臼】【紧】【急】【商】【议】【后】【,】【他】【们】【认】【为】【,】【只】【有】【一】【个】【人】【肯】【舍】【出】【性】【命】【,】【带】【着】【一】【个】【婴】【儿】【自】【投】【罗】【网】【,】【才】【能】【拯】【救】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【和】【晋】【国】【其】【他】【婴】【儿】【。】【正】【好】【程】【婴】【自】【己】【有】【一】【个】【孩】【子】【,】【和】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【差】【不】【多】【大】【。】【于】【是】【程】【婴】【就】【忍】【痛】【把】【自】【己】【的】【孩】【子】【交】【给】【公】【孙】【杵】【臼】【,】【然】【后】【准】【备】【扮】【作】【告】【密】【者】【,】【去】【向】【屠】【岸】【贾】【告】【发】【公】【孙】【杵】【臼】【私】【藏】【着】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【。】【公】【孙】【杵】【臼】【慨】【然】【应】【允】【:】【“】【我】【老】【夫】【不】【为】【这】【惊】【世】【冤】【案】【搭】【上】【这】【条】【老】【命】【,】【天】【理】【不】【公】【啊】【!】【”】【临】【行】【前】【,】【程】【婴】【抱】【了】【抱】【自】【己】【的】【儿】【子】【,】【失】【声】【痛】【哭】【:】【“】【我】【的】【儿】【啊】【,】【爹】【爹】【实】【在】【对】【不】【住】【你】【呀】【…】【…】【”】【然】【后】【毅】【然】【扭】【头】【离】【开】【。】【公】【孙】【杵】【臼】【挥】【泪】【作】【别】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【屠】【岸】【贾】【以】【为】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【已】【经】【被】【杀】【,】【非】【常】【高】【兴】【,】【他】【自】【己】【没】【有】【儿】【子】【,】【就】【认】【程】【婴】【的】【儿】【子】【(】【其】【实】【这】【才】【是】【真】【正】【的】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【)】【为】【义】【子】【,】【教】【授】【他】【武】【功】【。】【晋】【国】【的】【人】【都】【认】【为】【是】【因】【程】【婴】【告】【密】【而】【致】【使】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【受】【害】【,】【都】【骂】【他】【忘】【恩】【负】【义】【。】【程】【婴】【却】【毫】【不】【辩】【解】【,】【忍】【辱】【负】【重】【,】【尽】【心】【抚】【养】【着】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【5】【年】【后】【,】【晋】【国】【另】【一】【位】【忠】【臣】【大】【将】【魏】【绛】【从】【边】【关】【回】【来】【,】【听】【说】【了】【赵】【盾】【全】【家】【被】【杀】【和】【程】【婴】【告】【密】【献】【出】【孤】【儿】【的】【事】【,】【非】【常】【生】【气】【,】【就】【把】【程】【婴】【痛】【打】【了】【一】【顿】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【程】【婴】【也】【不】【吭】【声】【,】【他】【被】【魏】【绛】【打】【得】【越】【狠】【,】【心】【里】【就】【越】【坦】【然】【,】【因】【为】【魏】【绛】【打】【得】【越】【厉】【害】【,】【就】【越】【说】【明】【他】【越】【痛】【恨】【奸】【臣】【,】【程】【婴】【希】【望】【他】【能】【帮】【助】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【报】【仇】【。】【程】【婴】【试】【探】【出】【魏】【绛】【的】【忠】【心】【后】【,】【就】【把】【自】【己】【舍】【弃】【亲】【生】【儿】【子】【、】【公】【孙】【杵】【臼】【舍】【弃】【性】【命】【救】【护】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【的】【事】【告】【诉】【了】【魏】【绛】【。】【魏】【绛】【很】【感】【动】【,】【答】【应】【帮】【助】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【报】【仇】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【回】【家】【以】【后】【,】【程】【婴】【把】【当】【年】【赵】【家】【的】【冤】【情】【画】【成】【图】【面】【告】【诉】【了】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【。】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【这】【才】【知】【道】【了】【自】【己】【的】【身】【世】【,】【他】【义】【愤】【填】【膺】【,】【大】【声】【哭】【喊】【:】【“】【不】【报】【这】【深】【仇】【大】【恨】【,】【我】【誓】【不】【为】【人】【!】【”】【程】【婴】【忙】【劝】【告】【他】【:】【“】【屠】【岸】【贾】【兵】【权】【在】【手】【,】【野】【心】【很】【大】【,】【不】【能】【打】【草】【惊】【蛇】【。】【上】【卿】【魏】【绛】【已】【经】【向】【晋】【悼】【公】【奏】【明】【你】【赵】【家】【的】【冤】【情】【,】【并】【准】【备】【除】【了】【他】【,】【为】【你】【赵】【家】【报】【仇】【雪】【恨】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【二】【天】【,】【程】【婴】【带】【着】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【去】【见】【魏】【绛】【,】【三】【个】【人】【商】【量】【好】【,】【在】【大】【街】【上】【由】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【做】【内】【应】【,】【最】【终】【抓】【住】【了】【屠】【岸】【贾】【。】【屠】【岸】【贾】【这】【才】【知】【道】【,】【自】【己】【养】【了】【2】【0】【年】【的】【义】【子】【,】【正】【是】【幸】【存】【下】【来】【的】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【晋】【悼】【公】【为】【赵】【盾】【一】【家】【平】【反】【昭】【雪】【,】【斩】【了】【屠】【岸】【贾】【,】【为】【韩】【厥】【、】【公】【孙】【杵】【臼】【立】【碑】【表】【示】【哀】【思】【。】【屠】【岸】【贾】【临】【死】【前】【疯】【狂】【大】【喊】【:】【“】【哈】【哈】【哈】【…】【…】【报】【应】【啊】【报】【应】【!】【”】【程】【婴】【回】【应】【:】【“】【奸】【臣】【死】【有】【余】【辜】【,】【老】【天】【睁】【眼】【啦】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【程】【婴】【舍】【儿】【救】【孤】【,】【终】【于】【助】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【报】【了】【血】【海】【深】【仇】【。】【赵】【氏】【孤】【儿】【赡】【养】【程】【婴】【到】【老】【,】【尽】【了】【自】【己】【的】【孝】【心】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【正】【是】【:】【舍】【生】【为】【义】【感】【世】【人】【,】【邪】【恶】【必】【亡】【正】【气】【存】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【以】【评】【传】【形】【式】【来】【叙】【述】【故】【事】【,】【体】【裁】【新】【颖】【,】【内】【容】【丰】【富】【生】【动】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【者】【展】【开】【了】【丰】【富】【的】【想】【象】【,】【运】【用】【语】【言】【描】【写】【、】【行】【动】【描】【写】【和】【细】【节】【描】【写】【,】【刻】【画】【了】【个】【性】【鲜】【明】【的】【人】【物】【形】【象】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【入】【情】【入】【理】【的】【虚】【构】【,】【是】【一】【种】【写】【作】【技】【巧】【,】【能】【使】【得】【作】【文】【内】【容】【摇】【曳】【多】【姿】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【孟】【宪】【法】【)】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【病】【文】【展】【示】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【暖】【暖】【的】【豆】【浆】【 】【牵】【动】【我】【的】【情】【思】【 】【庞】【梅】【欣】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【家】【中】【阳】【台】【上】【有】【一】【方】【陈】【旧】【土】【气】【的】【石】【磨】【,】【与】【室】【内】【现】【代】【的】【装】【修】【风】【格】【显】【得】【格】【格】【不】【入】【,】【可】【每】【每】【闻】【到】【那】【股】【从】【阳】【台】【飘】【来】【的】【甜】【香】【却】【牵】【动】【着】【我】【的】【情】【思】【。】【(】【倒】【叙】【开】【头】【,】【巧】【用】【对】【比】【,】【巧】【妙】【地】【引】【起】【下】【文】【。】【但】【最】【后】【一】【句】【表】【意】【不】【准】【,】【需】【要】【稍】【作】【修】【改】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【每】【天】【清】【晨】【我】【都】【会】【喝】【到】【奶】【奶】【为】【我】【磨】【的】【豆】【浆】【。】【看】【着】【白】【花】【花】【的】【豆】【浆】【顺】【着】【石】【磨】【向】【下】【流】【淌】【,】【那】【时】【觉】【得】【豆】【浆】【是】【天】【底】【下】【最】【美】【味】【可】【口】【的】【饮】【品】【,】【喝】【下】【去】【真】【是】【美】【滋】【滋】【的】【。】【(】【“】【清】【晨】【”】【“】【那】【时】【”】【时】【间】【交】【代】【不】【确】【切】【,】【使】【得】【叙】【事】【不】【明】【确】【,】【并】【且】【其】【语】【言】【表】【达】【情】【味】【不】【浓】【,】【缺】【乏】【感】【染】【力】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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】【一】【上】【午】【的】【课】【,】【我】【一】【个】【字】【也】【没】【听】【进】【去】【。】【(】【时】【间】【交】【代】【不】【明】【,】【叙】【事】【不】【清】【楚】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【放】【学】【后】【,】【我】【无】【精】【打】【采】【地】【回】【到】【家】【中】【,】【奶】【奶】【向】【爷】【爷】【嘟】【囔】【着】【:】【“】【这】【豆】【浆】【机】【我】【还】【真】【不】【会】【用】【,】【你】【快】【来】【看】【看】【。】【还】【有】【,】【我】【早】【上】【在】【磨】【豆】【浆】【时】【放】【了】【把】【核】【桃】【,】【女】【儿】【说】【那】【东】【西】【补】【脑】【,】【可】【丫】【头】【好】【像】【不】【喜】【欢】【,】【早】【上】【才】【喝】【一】【口】【就】【不】【喝】【了】【。】【好】【像】【有】【些】【不】【高】【兴】【呢】【!】【”】【我】【顿】【时】【惊】【呆】【了】【,】【不】【知】【是】【喜】【是】【愁】【。】【(】【缺】【少】【必】【要】【交】【代】【,】【叙】【事】【不】【连】【贯】【,】【并】【且】【内】【心】【情】【感】【表】【达】【欠】【准】【确】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【二】【天】【清】【晨】【,】【奶】【奶】【又】【在】【磨】【豆】【浆】【,】【一】【盘】【核】【桃】【放】【在】【一】【边】【可】【却】【未】【动】【过】【。】【石】【磨】【磨】【着】【豆】【浆】【,】【而】【我】【在】【磨】【着】【奶】【奶】【的】【心】【。】【(】【一】【语】【双】【关】【,】【意】【蕴】【无】【穷】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【走】【过】【去】【,】【奶】【奶】【仍】【磨】【着】【豆】【浆】【,】【额】【间】【冒】【出】【的】【汗】【珠】【慢】【慢】【滑】【落】【。】【我】【用】【手】【中】【的】【纸】【巾】【小】【心】【抹】【去】【奶】【奶】【额】【头】【的】【汗】【水】【并】【帮】【着】【奶】【奶】【推】【动】【笨】【重】【的】【木】【把】【手】【,】【她】【吃】【惊】【地】【望】【了】【望】【我】【,】【竟】【傻】【傻】【地】【笑】【了】【…】【…】【(】【“】【推】【动】【、】【笨】【重】【、】【傻】【傻】【”】【等】【词】【,】【用】【语】【不】【当】【,】【描】【述】【欠】【精】【准】【,】【描】【写】【不】【生】【动】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【情】【韵】【大】【打】【折】【扣】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【暖】【暖】【的】【豆】【浆】【总】【是】【牵】【动】【我】【的】【情】【思】【。】【(】【结】【尾】【要】【总】【收】【全】【文】【,】【升】【华】【中】【心】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【升】【格】【指】【导】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【选】【材】【真】【实】【,】【主】【旨】【鲜】【明】【,】【情】【感】【真】【切】【,】【然】【而】【被】【定】【为】【三】【类】【文】【,】【其】【主】【要】【原】【因】【就】【是】【要】【素】【交】【代】【不】【明】【,】【事】【件】【过】【程】【不】【清】【,】【描】【写】【不】【够】【具】【体】【生】【动】【。】【主】【要】【表】【现】【在】【如】【下】【方】【面】【:】【一】【、】【未】【能】【清】【楚】【地】【交】【代】【时】【空】【,】【使】【得】【思】【路】【不】【明】【晰】【,】【文】【意】【表】【达】【不】【畅】【;】【二】【、】【有】【些】【句】【子】【上】【下】【文】【衔】【接】【不】【紧】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【结】【构】【不】【紧】【凑】【、】【不】【完】【整】【;】【三】【、】【对】【于】【事】【件】【的】【经】【过】【叙】【述】【过】【于】【简】【略】【,】【缺】【少】【生】【动】【的】【描】【写】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【中】【心】【不】【突】【出】【。】【另】【外】【,】【有】【些】【语】【言】【过】【于】【粗】【糙】【,】【用】【词】【不】【准】【,】【缺】【少】【美】【感】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【生】【动】【性】【大】【打】【折】【扣】【。】【此】【文】【若】【在】【以】【上】【方】【面】【反】【复】【推】【敲】【,】【精】【心】【锤】【炼】【,】【定】【会】【臻】【于】【完】【美】【,】【分】【外】【出】【彩】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【升】【格】【作】【文】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【暖】【暖】【的】【豆】【浆】【 】【牵】【动】【我】【的】【情】【思】【 】【庞】【梅】【欣】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【家】【中】【阳】【台】【上】【有】【一】【方】【陈】【旧】【土】【气】【的】【石】【磨】【,】【与】【室】【内】【现】【代】【的】【装】【修】【风】【格】【显】【得】【格】【格】【不】【入】【,】【可】【每】【每】【闻】【到】【从】【阳】【台】【飘】【来】【的】【豆】【浆】【清】【香】【,】【心】【中】【便】【涌】【起】【暖】【暖】【的】【热】【流】【,】【总】【会】【牵】【动】【着】【我】【那】【绵】【绵】【的】【情】【思】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【还】【是】【在】【上】【小】【学】【时】【,】【每】【天】【醒】【来】【我】【一】【定】【会】【闻】【到】【淡】【淡】【的】【豆】【浆】【清】【香】【,】【似】【乎】【闻】【着】【这】【股】【香】【味】【,】【从】【早】【到】【晚】【都】【会】【精】【神】【百】【倍】【。】【每】【天】【清】【晨】【都】【会】【喝】【到】【奶】【奶】【为】【我】【磨】【的】【豆】【浆】【,】【看】【着】【白】【花】【花】【的】【豆】【浆】【顺】【着】【石】【磨】【向】【下】【流】【淌】【,】【奶】【奶】【对】【我】【的】【爱】【也】【一】【缕】【缕】【注】【入】【我】【的】【心】【田】【。】【那】【时】【记】【忆】【中】【最】【甜】【的】【不】【是】【糖】【,】【而】【是】【那】【暖】【暖】【的】【豆】【浆】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【上】【初】【中】【后】【的】【一】【天】【早】【晨】【,】【我】【刚】【睡】【醒】【,】【就】【看】【到】【一】【碗】【豆】【浆】【摆】【在】【餐】【桌】【上】【。】【我】【轻】【轻】【地】【抿】【了】【一】【口】【,】【依】【旧】【是】【那】【般】【香】【甜】【,】【但】【却】【多】【了】【一】【股】【说】【不】【出】【的】【味】【道】【。】【我】【去】【找】【奶】【奶】【,】【想】【明】【白】【这】【股】【怪】【味】【的】【缘】【由】【,】【只】【见】【奶】【奶】【小】【心】【翼】【翼】【地】【操】【作】【着】【妈】【妈】【买】【的】【豆】【浆】【机】【。】【以】【前】【奶】【奶】【不】【总】【说】【豆】【浆】【机】【做】【的】【不】【如】【自】【己】【磨】【的】【味】【道】【好】【吗】【?】【今】【天】【她】【却】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【没】【有】【再】【追】【问】【出】【现】【怪】【味】【的】【原】【因】【,】【抓】【起】【书】【包】【走】【出】【门】【去】【,】【经】【过】【阳】【台】【时】【又】【看】【见】【了】【那】【方】【石】【磨】【,】【仿】【佛】【上】【面】【还】【有】【水】【滴】【,】【阳】【光】【的】【反】【射】【刺】【得】【我】【眼】【睛】【生】【疼】【,】【奶】【奶】【不】【再】【用】【石】【磨】【了】【,】【我】【再】【也】【喝】【不】【到】【那】【样】【香】【甜】【的】【豆】【浆】【了】【。】【其】【实】【我】【知】【道】【,】【我】【是】【怕】【奶】【奶】【那】【份】【爱】【会】【随】【着】【时】【光】【淡】【去】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【天】【一】【上】【午】【的】【课】【,】【我】【一】【个】【字】【也】【没】【听】【进】【去】【。】【无】【精】【打】【采】【地】【回】【到】【家】【中】【,】【一】【个】【人】【独】【自】【闷】【在】【书】【房】【里】【,】【情】【绪】【低】【落】【得】【如】【秋】【风】【里】【飘】【飞】【的】【黄】【叶】【。】【蓦】【然】【听】【到】【门】【外】【的】【奶】【奶】【向】【爷】【爷】【嘟】【囔】【着】【:】【“】【这】【豆】【浆】【机】【我】【还】【真】【不】【会】【用】【,】【你】【快】【来】【看】【看】【。】【还】【有】【,】【我】【早】【上】【在】【磨】【豆】【浆】【时】【放】【了】【把】【核】【桃】【,】【女】【儿】【说】【那】【东】【西】【补】【脑】【,】【可】【丫】【头】【好】【像】【不】【喜】【欢】【,】【早】【上】【才】【喝】【一】【口】【就】【不】【喝】【了】【。】【可】【能】【是】【味】【儿】【不】【正】【,】【也】【可】【能】【没】【有】【用】【石】【磨】【磨】【的】【味】【道】【好】【,】【要】【不】【她】【怎】【么】【会】【好】【像】【有】【些】【不】【高】【兴】【呢】【!】【”】【我】【顿】【时】【惊】【呆】【了】【,】【为】【自】【己】【莫】【名】【的】【忧】【伤】【而】【后】【悔】【,】【原】【来】【奶】【奶】【依】【然】【对】【我】【倾】【注】【她】【全】【部】【的】【爱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【二】【天】【清】【晨】【,】【奶】【奶】【又】【在】【磨】【豆】【浆】【,】【一】【盘】【核】【桃】【放】【在】【一】【边】【却】【未】【曾】【动】【过】【。】【石】【磨】【磨】【着】【豆】【浆】【,】【而】【我】【在】【磨】【着】【奶】【奶】【的】【心】【。】【我】【轻】【手】【轻】【脚】【地】【走】【过】【去】【,】【奶】【奶】【仍】【在】【专】【心】【致】【志】【地】【磨】【着】【豆】【浆】【。】【她】【微】【喘】【着】【,】【显】【然】【有】【些】【吃】【力】【了】【,】【额】【间】【冒】【出】【的】【汗】【珠】【慢】【慢】【滑】【落】【。】【我】【用】【手】【中】【的】【纸】【巾】【小】【心】【抹】【去】【奶】【奶】【额】【头】【的】【汗】【水】【,】【并】【帮】【着】【奶】【奶】【摇】【动】【着】【笨】【拙】【的】【木】【把】【手】【,】【她】【吃】【惊】【地】【看】【了】【看】【我】【,】【然】【后】【甜】【甜】【地】【笑】【了】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【无】【数】【次】【闻】【到】【街】【头】【的】【豆】【浆】【香】【味】【,】【却】【怎】【么】【也】【比】【不】【上】【奶】【奶】【磨】【的】【豆】【浆】【那】【般】【甜】【香】【。】【正】【是】【那】【份】【沉】【甸】【甸】【的】【爱】【,】【让】【这】【淡】【淡】【的】【豆】【浆】【滋】【味】【醇】【厚】【,】【回】【味】【无】【穷】【。】【无】【论】【何】【时】【何】【地】【,】【那】【暖】【暖】【的】【豆】【浆】【总】【是】【牵】【动】【我】【浓】【浓】【的】【情】【思】【,】【让】【我】【想】【念】【到】【永】【远】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【升】【格】【评】【点】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【倒】【叙】【开】【篇】【,】【引】【起】【下】【文】【,】【接】【着】【以】【“】【豆】【浆】【”】【为】【线】【,】【追】【忆】【儿】【时】【喝】【豆】【浆】【的】【感】【受】【与】【滋】【味】【,】【为】【下】【文】【作】【铺】【垫】【,】【然】【后】【详】【写】【因】【豆】【浆】【味】【道】【而】【引】【发】【的】【一】【次】【误】【会】【,】【真】【切】【展】【现】【奶】【奶】【的】【爱】【孙】【之】【情】【,】【最】【后】【总】【收】【全】【文】【,】【升】【华】【中】【心】【,】【淋】【漓】【尽】【致】【地】【抒】【发】【了】【我】【对】【奶】【奶】【的】【敬】【爱】【与】【感】【激】【之】【情】【。】【修】【改】【之】【后】【,】【要】【素】【分】【明】【,】【脉】【络】【明】【晰】【,】【叙】【事】【清】【楚】【,】【描】【写】【生】【动】【,】【详】【略】【得】【当】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【结】【构】【紧】【凑】【,】【中】【心】【突】【出】【,】【读】【之】【情】【感】【浓】【郁】【,】【感】【人】【至】【深】【,】【回】【味】【无】【穷】【。】上海纪实【<】【p】【>】【我】【爱】【美】【丽】【的】【春】【天】【,】【炎】【热】【的】【夏】【天】【,】【寒】【冷】【的】【冬】【天】【,】【但】【我】【最】【喜】【欢】【硕】【果】【累】【累】【的】【秋】【天】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

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