A recent survey shows that people who get higher salaries generally work longer hours than those who get lower salaries. Some people favor higher-paying jobs, even though such jobs always result in longer work time. They believe that money is so indispensable in people’s lives that without it no material comforts or well-being can be guaranteed.
  However, others have different preferences. They would rather take up lower-paying jobs with shorter hours. In their eyes, money doesn’t necessarily ensure happiness and well-being. They want to spend more time in doing their likes and getting together with their family and friends.
  As for me, I prefer to take up a job with shorter hours even if it pays less. In my opinion, work is not our whole life. We should allocate enough time to our family and friends and have more time to enjoy our life. Besides, we are not machines. We need time to relax and rest so that we could be energetic enough to do our job better." />

梦想的力量作文800字【梦想的力量】

多出来的两步

红稚莲球松:"读书,入书"

2019年10月22日 06:03

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【试】【题】【导】【入】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【的】【家】【乡】【每】【天】【都】【在】【变】【化】【着】【,】【城】【市】【在】【变】【化】【,】【农】【村】【在】【变】【化】【,】【人】【们】【的】【生】【活】【在】【变】【化】【。】【楼】【房】【越】【来】【越】【多】【,】【房】【屋】【越】【来】【越】【亮】【堂】【,】【道】【路】【越】【来】【越】【宽】【,】【路】【边】【绿】【化】【也】【越】【来】【越】【美】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【们】【在】【追】【求】【物】【质】【生】【活】【的】【同】【时】【,】【对】【精】【神】【生】【活】【也】【有】【了】【新】【的】【追】【求】【。】【衣】【食】【无】【忧】【的】【人】【们】【开】【始】【关】【注】【外】【面】【的】【世】【界】【,】【关】【注】【中】【国】【的】【经】【济】【发】【展】【,】【关】【注】【世】【界】【的】【热】【点】【问】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【留】【心】【身】【边】【的】【这】【种】【变】【化】【了】【吗】【?】【细】【致】【观】【察】【并】【深】【切】【感】【受】【你】【身】【边】【的】【这】【种】【变】【化】【,】【用】【生】【动】【的】【文】【笔】【描】【绘】【你】【的】【所】【察】【所】【思】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【以】【“】【家】【乡】【新】【变】【化】【”】【为】【话】【题】【写】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【,】【文】【体】【不】【限】【,】【题】【目】【自】【拟】【,】【6】【0】【0】【字】【以】【上】【。】【要】【写】【出】【真】【感】【受】【、】【真】【变】【化】【,】【既】【可】【写】【事】【物】【,】【又】【可】【写】【人】【物】【,】【切】【忌】【泛】【泛】【而】【谈】【,】【空】【洞】【乏】【味】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【作】【指】【导】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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】【 】【对】【奶】【奶】【话】【最】【感】【兴】【趣】【的】【是】【妈】【妈】【。】【妈】【妈】【接】【上】【话】【茬】【:】【“】【我】【像】【你】【们】【这】【么】【大】【的】【时】【候】【,】【最】【爱】【看】【电】【影】【了】【。】【”】【“】【你】【到】【哪】【儿】【的】【电】【影】【院】【去】【看】【啊】【?】【”】【妹】【妹】【好】【奇】【地】【问】【。】【妈】【妈】【说】【:】【“】【哪】【里】【是】【到】【什】【么】【电】【影】【院】【呐】【。】【那】【时】【候】【公】【社】【里】【的】【电】【影】【队】【一】【年】【到】【每】【个】【村】【放】【几】【次】【电】【影】【。】【电】【影】【队】【来】【本】【村】【呀】【,】【我】【就】【催】【家】【人】【早】【早】【做】【饭】【,】【吃】【饭】【。】【没】【等】【天】【黑】【,】【人】【家】【影】【布】【扯】【起】【来】【,】【我】【就】【搬】【矮】【凳】【抢】【占】【个】【好】【地】【方】【。】【有】【时】【候】【饭】【都】【顾】【不】【上】【吃】【,】【饿】【着】【肚】【子】【看】【完】【电】【影】【再】【回】【家】【吃】【。】【外】【村】【放】【电】【影】【,】【我】【就】【跟】【着】【大】【人】【们】【去】【。】【那】【时】【候】【哇】【,】【看】【电】【影】【可】【是】【新】【鲜】【事】【,】【十】【几】【个】【村】【子】【的】【人】【挤】【成】【黑】【压】【压】【一】【片】【。】【有】【时】【候】【电】【影】【放】【到】【半】【夜】【,】【人】【们】【还】【在】【看】【。】【有】【时】【有】【人】【搞】【恶】【作】【剧】【,】【说】【外】【村】【来】【了】【电】【影】【,】【我】【们】【就】【急】【匆】【匆】【赶】【了】【去】【,】【结】【果】【挨】【了】【骗】【,】【就】【只】【好】【一】【路】【吵】【吵】【嚷】【嚷】【,】【屁】【颠】【屁】【颠】【地】【赶】【回】【来】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【奶】【奶】【搭】【话】【:】【“】【还】【是】【你】【们】【有】【福】【。】【饭】【来】【张】【口】【,】【衣】【来】【伸】【手】【。】【没】【事】【就】【待】【在】【家】【里】【看】【电】【视】【,】【你】【们】【生】【在】【什】【么】【时】【候】【哇】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【有】【什】【么】【福】【呀】【?】【”】【妹】【妹】【一】【努】【嘴】【,】【“】【人】【家】【都】【是】【二】【十】【五】【寸】【、】【二】【十】【九】【寸】【的】【大】【彩】【电】【了】【,】【咱】【家】【还】【是】【这】【么】【个】【二】【十】【一】【寸】【的】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【你】【这】【个】【小】【妮】【子】【,】【身】【在】【福】【中】【还】【不】【知】【足】【!】【”】【奶】【奶】【脸】【一】【阴】【,】【有】【点】【生】【气】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妹】【妹】【吐】【了】【吐】【舌】【头】【躲】【一】【边】【。】【我】【拉】【着】【奶】【奶】【的】【手】【说】【:】【“】【奶】【奶】【,】【咱】【家】【也】【该】【买】【大】【彩】【电】【了】【,】【大】【彩】【电】【比】【小】【的】【更】【好】【看】【。】【买】【了】【大】【彩】【电】【,】【这】【小】【彩】【电】【就】【归】【你】【自】【己】【,】【光】【让】【你】【看】【戏】【。】【行】【吧】【,】【奶】【奶】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【咱】【家】【是】【该】【买】【大】【彩】【电】【了】【。】【这】【事】【已】【列】【入】【计】【划】【,】【近】【期】【就】【办】【!】【要】【买】【,】【就】【买】【好】【的】【,】【买】【一】【台】【液】【晶】【大】【屏】【的】【,】【而】【且】【连】【电】【脑】【一】【块】【买】【。】【年】【底】【看】【中】【央】【电】【视】【台】【春】【节】【晚】【会】【,】【保】【证】【看】【的】【是】【大】【彩】【电】【!】【”】【爸】【爸】【在】【外】【屋】【发】【表】【“】【严】【正】【声】【明】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妹】【妹】【乐】【了】【:】【“】【电】【脑】【归】【我】【!】【”】【爸】【爸】【忙】【说】【:】【“】【是】【为】【了】【你】【和】【你】【姐】【姐】【的】【学】【习】【买】【的】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【奶】【奶】【一】【听】【笑】【了】【,】【妈】【妈】【笑】【了】【。】【我】【和】【妹】【妹】【也】【笑】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【时】【候】【,】【妹】【妹】【调】【换】【了】【频】【道】【,】【电】【视】【里】【播】【放】【的】【是】【奶】【奶】【最】【爱】【看】【的】【戏】【—】【—】【“】【咿】【呀】【咿】【呀】【咿】【咿】【呀】【呀】【…】【…】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【围】【绕】【家】【庭】【关】【于】【电】【视】【的】【话】【题】【,】【单】【刀】【直】【入】【,】【如】【数】【家】【珍】【,】【曲】【折】【细】【腻】【,】【摇】【曳】【多】【姿】【,】【巧】【忆】【往】【事】【,】【今】【昔】【对】【比】【,】【反】【映】【了】【百】【姓】【生】【活】【水】【平】【的】【不】【断】【提】【高】【,】【折】【射】【了】【时】【代】【的】【巨】【大】【变】【化】【,】【以】【小】【见】【大】【,】【意】【旨】【深】【切】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【通】【篇】【以】【人】【物】【对】【话】【而】【制】【胜】【。】【对】【话】【富】【有】【浓】【郁】【的】【生】【活】【气】【息】【,】【个】【性】【鲜】【明】【。】【特】【别】【是】【奶】【奶】【的】【话】【,】【别】【有】【情】【趣】【。】【文】【章】【结】【构】【简】【明】【自】【然】【,】【一】【气】【呵】【成】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【开】【心】【练】【笔】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【以】【“】【身】【边】【的】【变】【化】【”】【为】【题】【,】【写】【一】【个】【作】【文】【片】【段】【,】【要】【运】【用】【细】【节】【描】【写】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【法】【点】【拨】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【事】【物】【的】【变】【化】【过】【程】【,】【可】【运】【用】【场】【面】【描】【写】【或】【景】【物】【描】【写】【;】【写】【人】【物】【的】【变】【化】【,】【可】【灵】【活】【运】【用】【语】【言】【描】【写】【和】【行】【动】【描】【写】【等】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【素】【材】【积】【累】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【一】【年】【没】【回】【家】【了】【。】【走】【在】【家】【乡】【熟】【悉】【的】【街】【道】【上】【,】【我】【却】【有】【了】【一】【种】【陌】【生】【感】【。】【不】【少】【人】【家】【新】【盖】【了】【二】【层】【小】【楼】【,】【弄】【不】【清】【到】【底】【是】【谁】【家】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【奶】【奶】【见】【了】【我】【高】【兴】【地】【合】【不】【拢】【嘴】【:】【“】【妮】【子】【,】【我】【让】【你】【饱】【一】【饱】【口】【福】【。】【”】【等】【饭】【菜】【端】【上】【来】【,】【我】【愣】【了】【:】【“】【奶】【奶】【,】【我】【还】【以】【为】【你】【给】【我】【做】【了】【大】【鱼】【大】【肉】【呢】【…】【…】【”】【奶】【奶】【做】【个】【鬼】【脸】【:】【“】【傻】【妮】【子】【,】【这】【年】【头】【大】【鱼】【大】【肉】【都】【吃】【腻】【了】【,】【有】【啥】【好】【吃】【的】【?】【现】【在】【电】【视】【里】【说】【要】【吃】【绿】【色】【,】【吃】【营】【养】【。】【你】【看】【,】【这】【饭】【菜】【你】【不】【愿】【吃】【啊】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【饭】【桌】【上】【摆】【上】【了】【奶】【奶】【亲】【手】【酿】【的】【面】【酱】【,】【还】【有】【大】【葱】【,】【曲】【曲】【菜】【、】【婆】【婆】【丁】【等】【别】【有】【药】【效】【的】【野】【菜】【,】【香】【喷】【喷】【的】【窝】【窝】【头】【。】【外】【加】【一】【大】【盆】【紫】【菜】【鸡】【蛋】【汤】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【于】【是】【埋】【头】【吃】【了】【个】【不】【亦】【乐】【乎】【。】【心】【里】【直】【感】【叹】【连】【老】【人】【的】【饮】【食】【观】【念】【都】【与】【时】【俱】【进】【了】【!】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【叙】【文】【靠】【具】【体】【、】【生】【动】【的】【形】【象】【感】【人】【。】【这】【就】【要】【求】【我】【们】【无】【论】【是】【记】【人】【叙】【事】【,】【还】【是】【写】【景】【状】【物】【,】【都】【应】【具】【体】【生】【动】【,】【有】【血】【有】【肉】【,】【切】【忌】【空】【泛】【造】【假】【,】【贫】【瘠】【枯】【瘦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【先】【谈】【写】【人】【。】【写】【人】【除】【了】【必】【须】【具】【体】【描】【写】【人】【物】【的】【外】【貌】【、】【表】【情】【、】【动】【作】【、】【语】【言】【外】【,】【还】【要】【注】【意】【细】【节】【描】【写】【。】【这】【是】【突】【出】【人】【物】【性】【格】【,】【把】【人】【物】【写】【得】【精】【彩】【的】【重】【要】【手】【段】【。】【有】【些】【同】【学】【恰】【恰】【忽】【略】【了】【这】【一】【点】【。】【他】【们】【写】【人】【,】【往】【往】【采】【用】【“】【贴】【标】【签】【”】【的】【方】【法】【,】【首】【先】【给】【他】【“】【定】【了】【性】【”】【,】【堆】【砌】【几】【个】【华】【丽】【的】【辞】【藻】【,】【如】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【有】【一】【个】【好】【妈】【妈】【,】【慈】【祥】【的】【脸】【上】【永】【远】【带】【着】【和】【蔼】【的】【笑】【容】【。】【因】【为】【旧】【社】【会】【她】【没】【有】【念】【过】【多】【少】【书】【,】【所】【以】【总】【是】【一】【个】【劲】【地】【督】【促】【我】【们】【好】【好】【学】【习】【,】【并】【在】【生】【活】【上】【、】【学】【习】【上】【对】【我】【百】【般】【照】【顾】【,】【无】【微】【不】【至】【,】【处】【处】【体】【现】【了】【伟】【大】【的】【母】【爱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【后】【面】【还】【有】【具】【体】【的】【描】【写】【,】【这】【段】【话】【作】【为】【开】【头】【,】【当】【然】【可】【以】【,】【但】【遗】【憾】【的】【是】【,】【这】【竟】【是】【文】【章】【的】【主】【体】【部】【分】【。】【仅】【用】【“】【百】【般】【照】【顾】【”】【“】【无】【微】【不】【至】【”】【“】【伟】【大】【的】【母】【爱】【”】【这】【些】【空】【洞】【的】【词】【语】【,】【能】【说】【明】【母】【亲】【就】【是】【一】【个】【“】【好】【妈】【妈】【”】【吗】【?】【这】【很】【难】【使】【人】【信】【服】【,】【修】【改】【后】【的】【文】【章】【就】【写】【得】【具】【体】【多】【了】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【…】【…】【不】【知】【什】【么】【声】【音】【把】【我】【从】【梦】【中】【惊】【醒】【,】【我】【睁】【开】【眼】【睛】【一】【看】【,】【厨】【房】【里】【的】【灯】【已】【经】【亮】【了】【,】【不】【时】【传】【来】【锅】【碗】【的】【轻】【响】【。】【我】【伸】【手】【拿】【过】【桌】【上】【的】【闹】【钟】【,】【借】【着】【从】【厨】【房】【里】【映】【过】【来】【的】【亮】【光】【看】【了】【看】【,】【还】【不】【到】【五】【点】【。】【今】【天】【是】【星】【期】【日】【,】【妈】【妈】【还】【和】【往】【常】【一】【样】【,】【起】【得】【这】【样】【早】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【翻】【过】【身】【,】【细】【听】【着】【厨】【房】【里】【的】【声】【响】【。】【“】【哗】【—】【—】【”】【,】【这】【是】【妈】【妈】【在】【轻】【轻】【地】【舀】【水】【;】【“】【哧】【—】【—】【噗】【!】【”】【这】【是】【妈】【妈】【在】【开】【煤】【气】【炉】【;】【“】【咔】【啦】【咔】【啦】【”】【,】【这】【是】【妈】【妈】【在】【拿】【碗】【筷】【。】【在】【静】【静】【的】【清】【晨】【,】【这】【声】【音】【是】【那】【样】【的】【清】【晰】【,】【又】【是】【那】【样】【的】【熟】【悉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【者】【用】【醒】【来】【的】【所】【见】【、】【所】【闻】【,】【具】【体】【地】【写】【出】【了】【妈】【妈】【每】【天】【起】【早】【做】【饭】【的】【情】【景】【。】【这】【真】【实】【、】【具】【体】【、】【生】【动】【、】【形】【象】【的】【记】【叙】【比】【起】【对】【妈】【妈】【“】【任】【劳】【任】【怨】【、】【辛】【勤】【劳】【作】【”】【的】【赞】【叹】【,】【不】【知】【要】【强】【多】【少】【倍】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【大】【家】【都】【知】【道】【《】【水】【浒】【传】【》】【中】【的】【打】【虎】【英】【雄】【是】【武】【松】【,】【而】【不】【是】【李】【逵】【。】【为】【什】【么】【武】【松】【打】【死】【一】【只】【虎】【会】【深】【深】【地】【震】【动】【我】【们】【的】【心】【弦】【,】【而】【李】【逵】【杀】【了】【四】【只】【虎】【,】【留】【给】【读】【者】【的】【印】【象】【却】【远】【不】【如】【武】【松】【呢】【?】【这】【里】【面】【的】【诀】【窍】【就】【在】【一】【个】【描】【绘】【的】【具】【体】【生】【动】【,】【精】【彩】【异】【常】【,】【另】【一】【个】【则】【“】【缺】【少】【细】【节】【,】【贫】【瘠】【枯】【瘦】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【细】【节】【不】【仅】【能】【充】【实】【内】【容】【,】【使】【之】【具】【有】【浓】【厚】【的】【生】【活】【气】【息】【,】【具】【有】【震】【撼】【人】【心】【的】【艺】【术】【力】【量】【,】【更】【重】【要】【的】【是】【,】【具】【有】【典】【型】【意】【义】【的】【细】【节】【,】【能】【表】【现】【出】【人】【物】【鲜】【明】【的】【个】【性】【。】【吴】【敬】【梓】【的】【《】【儒】【林】【外】【史】【》】【中】【,】【有】【一】【段】【对】【严】【监】【生】【死】【前】【伸】【着】【两】【个】【指】【头】【这】【一】【细】【节】【的】【描】【写】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【此】【,】【严】【监】【生】【的】【病】【,】【一】【日】【重】【似】【一】【日】【,】【再】【不】【回】【头】【,】【诸】【来】【六】【眷】【都】【来】【问】【候】【…】【…】【晚】【间】【挤】【了】【一】【屋】【的】【人】【,】【桌】【上】【点】【着】【一】【盏】【灯】【。】【严】【监】【生】【喉】【咙】【里】【痰】【响】【得】【一】【进】【一】【出】【,】【一】【声】【不】【倒】【一】【声】【的】【,】【总】【不】【得】【断】【气】【,】【还】【把】【手】【从】【被】【单】【里】【拿】【出】【来】【,】【伸】【着】【两】【个】【指】【头】【。】【大】【侄】【子】【走】【上】【前】【来】【问】【道】【:】【“】【二】【叔】【,】【你】【莫】【不】【是】【还】【有】【两】【个】【亲】【人】【不】【曾】【见】【面】【?】【”】【他】【就】【把】【头】【摇】【了】【两】【三】【摇】【。】【二】【侄】【子】【走】【上】【前】【来】【问】【道】【:】【“】【二】【叔】【,】【莫】【不】【是】【还】【有】【两】【笔】【银】【子】【在】【那】【里】【,】【不】【曾】【吩】【咐】【明】【白】【?】【”】【他】【把】【两】【眼】【睁】【得】【溜】【圆】【,】【把】【头】【又】【狠】【狠】【摇】【了】【几】【摇】【,】【越】【发】【指】【得】【紧】【了】【。】【奶】【妈】【抱】【着】【哥】【子】【插】【口】【道】【:】【“】【老】【爷】【想】【是】【因】【为】【两】【位】【舅】【爷】【不】【在】【跟】【前】【,】【故】【此】【惦】【念】【。】【”】【他】【听】【了】【这】【话】【,】【把】【眼】【闭】【着】【摇】【头】【,】【那】【手】【只】【是】【指】【着】【不】【动】【。】【赵】【氏】【慌】【忙】【揩】【揩】【眼】【泪】【,】【走】【近】【上】【前】【道】【:】【“】【爷】【,】【别】【人】【都】【说】【不】【相】【干】【,】【只】【有】【我】【晓】【得】【你】【的】【意】【思】【!】【”】【…】【…】【“】【你】【是】【为】【那】【灯】【盏】【里】【点】【的】【是】【两】【茎】【灯】【草】【,】【不】【放】【心】【,】【恐】【费】【了】【油】【。】【我】【如】【今】【挑】【掉】【一】【茎】【就】【是】【了】【。】【”】【说】【罢】【,】【忙】【走】【出】【挑】【掉】【一】【茎】【。】【众】【人】【看】【严】【监】【生】【时】【,】【点】【一】【点】【头】【,】【把】【手】【垂】【下】【,】【登】【时】【就】【没】【了】【气】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【严】【监】【生】【是】【个】【吝】【啬】【鬼】【,】【因】【为】【多】【点】【一】【茎】【灯】【草】【,】【死】【不】【瞑】【目】【。】【作】【者】【通】【过】【这】【一】【典】【型】【细】【节】【的】【描】【绘】【,】【把】【这】【个】【吝】【啬】【鬼】【特】【有】【的】【精】【神】【面】【貌】【和】【鲜】【明】【个】【性】【深】【刻】【地】【表】【现】【出】【来】【了】【。】【淋】【漓】【尽】【致】【地】【表】【现】【了】【这】【个】【吝】【啬】【鬼】【的】【丑】【恶】【灵】【魂】【,】【真】【是】【写】【得】【入】【木】【三】【分】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【这】【里】【也】【可】【以】【看】【出】【,】【选】【择】【细】【节】【要】【根】【据】【表】【现】【人】【物】【性】【格】【的】【需】【要】【和】【表】【现】【主】【题】【的】【需】【要】【,】【否】【则】【再】【生】【动】【的】【细】【节】【也】【毫】【无】【意】【义】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【再】【说】【记】【事】【。】【要】【把】【一】【件】【事】【写】【得】【具】【体】【,】【就】【得】【抓】【住】【重】【点】【详】【写】【,】【要】【浓】【墨】【重】【彩】【,】【要】【精】【雕】【细】【刻】【,】【不】【能】【只】【用】【那】【些】【概】【括】【抽】【象】【的】【语】【言】【。】【如】【,】【同】【样】【是】【写】【《】【联】【欢】【会】【》】【,】【一】【个】【同】【学】【是】【这】【样】【写】【的】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【联】【欢】【会】【开】【得】【太】【热】【烈】【,】【太】【丰】【富】【,】【太】【激】【动】【人】【心】【了】【!】【悦】【耳】【的】【歌】【声】【,】【翩】【翩】【的】【舞】【姿】【,】【还】【有】【增】【长】【才】【智】【的】【文】【学】【知】【识】【抢】【答】【,】【从】【下】【午】【2】【点】【一】【直】【进】【行】【到】【8】【点】【,】【大】【家】【才】【恋】【恋】【不】【舍】【地】【离】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【里】【,】【华】【丽】【的】【辞】【藻】【掩】【盖】【不】【了】【内】【容】【的】【空】【洞】【,】【铿】【锵】【的】【语】【句】【难】【以】【粉】【饰】【内】【在】【的】【贫】【乏】【。】【须】【知】【,】【“】【热】【烈】【”】【“】【丰】【富】【”】【“】【激】【动】【人】【心】【”】【,】【只】【有】【通】【过】【事】【件】【表】【现】【出】【来】【,】【才】【是】【成】【功】【的】【记】【事】【。】【修】【改】【后】【的】【文】【章】【就】【具】【体】【、】【生】【动】【得】【多】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【水】【,】【水】【落】【石】【出】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【出】【,】【出】【其】【不】【意】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【意】【,】【意】【气】【风】【发】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【发】【,】【发】【扬】【光】【大】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【大】【,】【大】【义】【凛】【然】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【然】【,】【然】【—】【—】【然】【—】【—】【”】【这】【下】【可】【把】【周】【皓】【月】【难】【住】【了】【,】【只】【见】【她】【双】【眉】【紧】【锁】【,】【在】【极】【力】【思】【考】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【请】【周】【皓】【月】【表】【演】【节】【目】【!】【”】【班】【主】【任】【曹】【老】【师】【话】【音】【刚】【落】【“】【哗】【—】【—】【”】【掌】【声】【雷】【动】【,】【周】【皓】【月】【落】【落】【大】【方】【地】【走】【上】【台】【,】【放】【开】【歌】【喉】【唱】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【联】【欢】【会】【又】【进】【行】【下】【一】【个】【节】【目】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【现】【在】【,】【我】【把】【某】【个】【同】【学】【的】【面】【貌】【描】【绘】【一】【下】【,】【请】【同】【学】【们】【说】【出】【这】【人】【是】【谁】【。】【”】【班】【主】【任】【说】【道】【:】【“】【白】【皙】【的】【皮】【肤】【,】【眼】【睛】【虽】【不】【大】【,】【可】【炯】【炯】【有】【神】【,】【剪】【着】【一】【个】【游】【泳】【头】【,】【一】【副】【运】【动】【员】【的】【样】【子】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【同】【学】【们】【你】【瞧】【瞧】【我】【,】【我】【望】【望】【你】【,】【突】【然】【,】【不】【知】【哪】【位】【同】【学】【说】【:】【“】【是】【沈】【玉】【兰】【!】【”】【顿】【时】【,】【几】【十】【道】【眼】【光】【一】【下】【子】【集】【中】【到】【沈】【玉】【兰】【身】【上】【,】【继】【而】【人】【们】【又】【摇】【头】【否】【认】【,】【不】【对】【!】【沈】【玉】【兰】【梳】【着】【两】【条】【小】【辫】【子】【。】【那】【是】【谁】【呢】【?】【几】【十】【道】【眼】【光】【像】【是】【几】【十】【盏】【探】【照】【灯】【,】【四】【处】【扫】【视】【着】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【我】【的】【眼】【光】【一】【遇】【到】【身】【旁】【的】【程】【铭】【时】【,】【我】【就】【像】【得】【到】【宝】【贝】【似】【的】【心】【头】【一】【热】【,】【脱】【口】【而】【出】【:】【“】【是】【程】【铭】【!】【”】【在】【座】【的】【人】【异】【口】【同】【声】【欢】【呼】【:】【“】【对】【!】【是】【程】【铭】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【笑】【声】【、】【掌】【声】【久】【久】【不】【息】【,】【程】【铭】【难】【为】【情】【地】【涨】【红】【了】【脸】【,】【而】【我】【因】【为】【是】【第】【一】【个】【说】【对】【的】【,】【所】【以】【得】【到】【了】【两】【颗】【糖】【的】【奖】【励】【。】【这】【真】【是】【在】【甜】【甜】【蜜】【蜜】【、】【欢】【声】【笑】【语】【中】【长】【知】【识】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【修】【改】【后】【的】【文】【章】【抓】【住】【了】【一】【些】【关】【键】【性】【的】【细】【节】【,】【重】【点】【突】【出】【,】【具】【体】【形】【象】【,】【写】【得】【有】【声】【有】【色】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【后】【,】【说】【说】【写】【景】【状】【物】【。】【要】【写】【出】【景】【和】【物】【的】【具】【体】【形】【象】【,】【主】【要】【靠】【描】【写】【手】【段】【的】【运】【用】【。】【比】【如】【说】【,】【这】【个】【地】【方】【很】【美】【,】【究】【竟】【美】【在】【哪】【里】【?】【是】【亭】【台】【楼】【阁】【美】【,】【还】【是】【花】【草】【树】【木】【美】【?】【是】【绿】【水】【青】【山】【美】【,】【还】【是】【名】【胜】【古】【迹】【美】【?】【景】【物】【中】【有】【代】【表】【性】【的】【是】【哪】【些】【?】【它】【们】【有】【什】【么】【特】【征】【?】【如】【果】【能】【把】【重】【点】【景】【物】【的】【特】【征】【、】【状】【态】【描】【写】【出】【来】【,】【文】【章】【就】【会】【具】【体】【生】【动】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【个】【同】【学】【写】【《】【狮】【子】【林】【》】【,】【初】【稿】【是】【这】【样】【的】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【说】【起】【假】【山】【,】【便】【想】【起】【了】【狮】【子】【林】【,】【狮】【子】【林】【里】【那】【些】【天】【然】【岩】【石】【构】【成】【的】【狮】【子】【的】【神】【情】【姿】【态】【,】【极】【为】【逼】【真】【,】【一】【个】【个】【栩】【栩】【如】【生】【。】【更】【妙】【的】【是】【,】【在】【山】【底】【或】【山】【腰】【,】【一】【个】【洞】【连】【着】【一】【个】【洞】【,】【层】【层】【叠】【叠】【,】【人】【们】【钻】【来】【穿】【去】【,】【妙】【趣】【横】【生】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【后】【来】【,】【在】【老】【师】【的】【指】【导】【下】【,】【他】【对】【初】【稿】【进】【行】【了】【修】【改】【,】【增】【加】【了】【具】【体】【生】【动】【的】【细】【节】【描】【写】【,】【基】【本】【上】【描】【绘】【出】【狮】【子】【林】【的】【特】【色】【,】【给】【人】【以】【身】【临】【其】【境】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【全】【文】【如】【下】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【说】【起】【假】【山】【,】【便】【想】【起】【了】【狮】【子】【林】【。】【狮】【子】【林】【里】【那】【天】【然】【岩】【石】【构】【成】【的】【狮】【子】【的】【神】【情】【姿】【态】【,】【极】【为】【逼】【真】【。】【有】【的】【龇】【牙】【咧】【嘴】【,】【昂】【首】【长】【啸】【;】【有】【的】【瞪】【着】【两】【眼】【,】【威】【风】【凛】【凛】【;】【有】【的】【闭】【目】【养】【神】【,】【无】【精】【打】【采】【…】【…】【真】【是】【千】【姿】【百】【态】【,】【栩】【栩】【如】【生】【。】【它】【们】【组】【成】【一】【个】【个】【高】【耸】【的】【假】【山】【。】【从】【山】【脚】【到】【山】【顶】【沿】【路】【怪】【石】【嶙】【峋】【,】【迂】【回】【曲】【折】【。】【有】【时】【看】【得】【见】【山】【顶】【上】【的】【游】【客】【的】【眉】【目】【,】【也】【听】【得】【见】【他】【们】【的】【谈】【笑】【,】【可】【就】【是】【没】【法】【登】【山】【。】【等】【到】【你】【好】【不】【容】【易】【登】【上】【山】【巅】【,】【才】【会】【发】【现】【,】【竟】【有】【好】【几】【条】【石】【路】【可】【达】【山】【顶】【。】【更】【妙】【的】【是】【,】【在】【山】【底】【或】【山】【腰】【,】【一】【个】【洞】【连】【着】【一】【个】【洞】【,】【层】【层】【叠】【叠】【,】【人】【们】【钻】【来】【穿】【去】【,】【妙】【趣】【横】【生】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【细】【节】【描】【写】【是】【指】【抓】【住】【生】【活】【中】【细】【微】【而】【又】【具】【体】【的】【典】【型】【情】【节】【,】【加】【以】【生】【动】【细】【致】【的】【描】【绘】【,】【它】【具】【体】【渗】【透】【在】【对】【人】【物】【、】【景】【物】【或】【场】【面】【描】【写】【之】【中】【。】【正】【确】【运】【用】【细】【节】【描】【写】【,】【对】【表】【现】【人】【物】【、】【记】【叙】【事】【件】【、】【再】【现】【环】【境】【有】【着】【极】【其】【重】【要】【的】【作】【用】【。】【细】【节】【描】【写】【运】【用】【得】【好】【,】【做】【到】【写】【人】【则】【如】【见】【其】【人】【,】【写】【景】【则】【如】【临】【其】【境】【,】【文】【章】【就】【能】【形】【象】【鲜】【明】【,】【更】【具】【感】【染】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】红稚莲球松【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【学】【阶】【段】【,】【我】【一】【直】【是】【个】【优】【秀】【的】【学】【生】【。】【上】【了】【初】【中】【以】【后】【,】【因】【为】【我】【的】【同】【桌】【喜】【欢】【上】【网】【,】【他】【总】【是】【在】【我】【面】【前】【吹】【嘘】【网】【络】【如】【何】【如】【何】【的】【神】【奇】【,】【如】【何】【如】【何】【的】【过】【瘾】【…】【…】【三】【番】【五】【次】【,】【我】【终】【于】【经】【不】【住】【他】【的】【引】【诱】【,】【跟】【着】【他】【第】【一】【次】【走】【进】【了】【网】【吧】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【的】【同】【桌】【家】【里】【很】【富】【裕】【,】【他】【身】【上】【总】【是】【带】【着】【很】【多】【钱】【,】【随】【便】【伸】【手】【到】【口】【袋】【里】【一】【抓】【,】【就】【是】【数】【张】【百】【元】【大】【钞】【。】【开】【始】【上】【网】【的】【钱】【都】【是】【他】【帮】【我】【支】【付】【的】【,】【我】【没】【有】【出】【一】【分】【钱】【。】【他】【不】【但】【帮】【我】【出】【上】【网】【费】【,】【还】【手】【把】【手】【地】【教】【我】【如】【何】【操】【作】【,】【如】【何】【打】【字】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【很】【快】【,】【我】【也】【就】【真】【正】【地】【喜】【欢】【上】【了】【网】【络】【这】【虚】【拟】【的】【世】【界】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【初】【,】【受】【到】【同】【桌】【的】【影】【响】【,】【是】【上】【网】【玩】【游】【戏】【。】【网】【络】【游】【戏】【真】【是】【太】【多】【了】【,】【太】【好】【玩】【了】【。】【什】【么】【《】【魔】【兽】【世】【界】【》】【《】【穿】【越】【火】【线】【》】【《】【地】【下】【城】【与】【勇】【士】【》】【呀】【,】【什】【么】【《】【永】【恒】【之】【塔】【》】【《】【降】【龙】【之】【剑】【》】【《】【龙】【之】【谷】【》】【《】【梦】【幻】【西】【游】【》】【《】【千】【军】【破】【》】【《】【夺】【宝】【传】【世】【》】【呀】【…】【…】【太】【多】【了】【,】【真】【是】【玩】【不】【胜】【玩】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【只】【是】【玩】【网】【络】【游】【戏】【,】【后】【来】【我】【又】【迷】【上】【了】【网】【络】【聊】【天】【和】【浏】【览】【色】【情】【网】【页】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【开】【始】【是】【同】【桌】【帮】【我】【付】【钱】【,】【几】【周】【后】【他】【就】【不】【愿】【意】【付】【了】【,】【得】【我】【自】【己】【掏】【了】【。】【上】【网】【费】【虽】【然】【不】【多】【,】【每】【小】【时】【1】【.】【5】【元】【,】【后】【来】【涨】【到】【了】【2】【元】【。】【但】【由】【于】【我】【玩】【得】【时】【间】【太】【久】【了】【,】【往】【往】【一】【玩】【入】【迷】【,】【就】【是】【整】【整】【一】【上】【午】【或】【一】【下】【午】【4】【个】【小】【时】【。】【再】【后】【来】【是】【整】【整】【一】【个】【白】【昼】【1】【2】【个】【小】【时】【,】【最】【后】【是】【整】【整】【一】【天】【2】【4】【个】【小】【时】【。】【虽】【然】【晚】【上】【从】【1】【2】【点】【钟】【开】【始】【,】【一】【直】【到】【第】【二】【天】【早】【上】【的】【8】【点】【可】【以】【用】【1】【0】【元】【包】【下】【,】【省】【去】【6】【元】【,】【但】【算】【下】【来】【,】【2】【4】【小】【时】【的】【上】【网】【费】【也】【要】【4】【2】【元】【,】【加】【上】【吃】【饭】【、】【喝】【水】【的】【费】【用】【(】【就】【在】【网】【吧】【里】【买】【)】【,】【一】【天】【最】【少】【要】【花】【去】【5】【0】【元】【。】【几】【天】【下】【来】【,】【我】【就】【把】【一】【个】【月】【的】【生】【活】【费】【花】【光】【了】【。】【于】【是】【就】【东】【借】【西】【挪】【,】【只】【要】【能】【弄】【到】【钱】【,】【就】【什】【么】【都】【不】【顾】【不】【管】【了】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【疯】【狂】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【和】【我】【的】【同】【桌】【,】【连】【续】【上】【网】【了】【四】【天】【三】【夜】【,】【除】【了】【上】【厕】【所】【,】【就】【未】【离】【开】【过】【一】【下】【座】【位】【。】【渴】【了】【饿】【了】【就】【叫】【老】【板】【买】【水】【买】【饭】【,】【累】【了】【困】【了】【就】【趴】【在】【桌】【子】【上】【打】【个】【盹】【。】【至】【于】【上】【课】【、】【学】【习】【、】【外】【面】【的】【事】【情】【一】【概】【不】【知】【不】【管】【了】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【家】【里】【是】【农】【村】【的】【,】【父】【母】【辛】【辛】【苦】【苦】【劳】【作】【一】【年】【的】【收】【入】【,】【只】【够】【维】【持】【一】【家】【人】【的】【基】【本】【生】【活】【,】【我】【上】【初】【中】【的】【费】【用】【虽】【然】【不】【多】【,】【但】【还】【是】【感】【到】【紧】【张】【。】【虽】【然】【免】【除】【了】【学】【杂】【费】【,】【但】【由】【于】【我】【住】【校】【,】【生】【活】【费】【还】【是】【不】【能】【少】【的】【。】【一】【个】【月】【3】【0】【0】【元】【左】【右】【的】【生】【活】【费】【,】【父】【母】【都】【掏】【得】【非】【常】【紧】【张】【,】【但】【他】【们】【还】【是】【乐】【于】【给】【他】【们】【的】【儿】【子】【我】【,】【还】【总】【是】【说】【,】【不】【够】【的】【话】【再】【回】【家】【拿】【。】【开】【始】【时】【我】【还】【会】【想】【想】【这】【些】【情】【况】【,】【想】【想】【父】【母】【的】【辛】【苦】【,】【但】【自】【从】【我】【迷】【上】【网】【络】【以】【后】【,】【就】【从】【不】【想】【这】【些】【了】【,】【没】【钱】【我】【就】【伸】【手】【向】【父】【母】【要】【。】【由】【于】【要】【得】【太】【多】【太】【频】【繁】【了】【,】【父】【母】【就】【追】【问】【我】【原】【因】【,】【我】【总】【是】【搪】【塞】【他】【们】【说】【学】【校】【里】【买】【这】【买】【那】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【由】【于】【请】【病】【假】【太】【多】【,】【逃】【课】【太】【多】【,】【成】【绩】【自】【然】【是】【一】【落】【千】【丈】【,】【从】【班】【上】【的】【前】【5】【名】【,】【一】【下】【落】【到】【了】【班】【上】【的】【最】【后】【5】【名】【。】【由】【于】【要】【钱】【要】【得】【太】【多】【太】【频】【繁】【,】【父】【母】【追】【问】【到】【了】【学】【校】【,】【老】【师】【和】【父】【母】【一】【碰】【头】【,】【我】【的】【“】【末】【日】【”】【也】【就】【到】【了】【。】【由】【于】【身】【体】【瘦】【掉】【了】【十】【多】【斤】【,】【加】【上】【父】【母】【的】【一】【顿】【猛】【揍】【,】【我】【昏】【了】【过】【去】【…】【…】【从】【医】【院】【出】【来】【后】【,】【泪】【水】【模】【糊】【了】【父】【母】【的】【双】【眼】【,】【也】【模】【糊】【了】【我】【的】【双】【眼】【…】【…】【学】【校】【勒】【令】【我】【停】【课】【一】【周】【,】【回】【家】【反】【省】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【看】【着】【家】【里】【的】【空】【空】【荡】【荡】【,】【家】【徒】【四】【壁】【,】【看】【到】【父】【母】【的】【寒】【酸】【饭】【菜】【…】【…】【我】【猛】【烈】【地】【抽】【打】【我】【自】【己】【。】【漫】【长】【的】【一】【周】【,】【地】【狱】【般】【的】【一】【周】【反】【省】【,】【我】【脱】【胎】【换】【骨】【了】【。】【我】【再】【也】【不】【上】【网】【吧】【了】【,】【有】【百】【害】【而】【无】【益】【处】【,】【痛】【苦】【的】【代】【价】【让】【我】【终】【于】【醒】【悟】【到】【了】【这】【些】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【人】【说】【,】【经】【历】【过】【死】【亡】【的】【人】【,】【更】【懂】【得】【生】【命】【的】【可】【贵】【。】【是】【啊】【,】【我】【对】【这】【话】【理】【解】【得】【更】【深】【了】【。】【一】【个】【人】【不】【能】【沉】【溺】【,】【更】【不】【能】【入】【迷】【,】【特】【别】【是】【对】【人】【生】【无】【益】【的】【事】【情】【,】【沉】【溺】【、】【入】【迷】【了】【是】【很】【危】【险】【、】【很】【可】【怕】【的】【。】【回】【想】【曾】【经】【的】【我】【,】【现】【在】【都】【仍】【然】【心】【有】【余】【悸】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【生】【活】【即】【有】【作】【文】【,】【写】【真】【情】【、】【抒】【真】【意】【即】【是】【好】【作】【文】【。】【该】【文】【叙】【写】【自】【己】【的】【一】【次】【误】【入】【歧】【途】【的】【经】【历】【,】【向】【我】【们】【敞】【开】【了】【他】【的】【心】【扉】【,】【历】【数】【了】【他】【自】【身】【的】【不】【是】【,】【并】【没】【有】【去】【怨】【天】【尤】【人】【,】【而】【是】【深】【深】【地】【反】【省】【自】【己】【,】【并】【获】【得】【了】【对】【生】【活】【对】【生】【命】【的】【深】【刻】【认】【识】【和】【感】【悟】【,】【将】【坏】【事】【变】【成】【了】【好】【事】【。】【与】【其】【说】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【,】【不】【如】【说】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【发】【出】【肺】【腑】【之】【言】【的】【忏】【悔】【录】【。】【俗】【话】【说】【:】【苦】【海】【无】【边】【,】【回】【头】【是】【岸】【。】【值】【得】【庆】【幸】【的】【是】【,】【小】【作】【者】【经】【历】【了】【一】【番】【波】【折】【以】【后】【,】【终】【于】【认】【识】【到】【自】【己】【行】【为】【的】【错】【误】【性】【,】【这】【是】【非】【常】【警】【醒】【人】【的】【,】【很】【值】【得】【那】【些】【仍】【然】【沉】【迷】【于】【网】【吧】【的】【同】【学】【参】【考】【、】【借】【鉴】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【李】【弗】【不】【)】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【技】【法】【点】【拨】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【俗】【话】【说】【,】【“】【从】【善】【如】【登】【,】【从】【恶】【如】【崩】【”】【。】【青】【少】【年】【学】【生】【如】【果】【被】【网】【瘾】【这】【个】【恶】【魔】【“】【附】【体】【”】【,】【可】【真】【如】【崩】【坍】【之】【山】【,】【决】【堤】【之】【水】【,】【其】【后】【果】【是】【很】【可】【怕】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【崩】【溃】【”】【的】【过】【程】【是】【迅】【猛】【的】【,】【但】【作】【者】【的】【叙】【述】【却】【是】【层】【层】【剥】【笋】【,】【逐】【步】【展】【开】【。】【先】【是】【迷】【恋】【网】【络】【游】【戏】【,】【接】【着】【又】【迷】【上】【了】【网】【络】【聊】【天】【,】【甚】【至】【于】【浏】【览】【色】【情】【网】【页】【,】【一】【步】【步】【走】【向】【深】【渊】【。】【就】【这】【样】【一】【个】【出】【身】【贫】【寒】【的】【孩】【子】【,】【学】【会】【了】【挥】【霍】【,】【学】【会】【了】【说】【谎】【,】【开】【始】【还】【有】【内】【疚】【,】【有】【怜】【悯】【心】【,】【有】【耻】【辱】【感】【,】【但】【在】【精】【神】【鸦】【片】【的】【腐】【蚀】【下】【,】【很】【快】【就】【麻】【木】【了】【。】【紧】【接】【着】【是】【身】【体】【的】【透】【支】【,】【学】【习】【成】【绩】【的】【一】【落】【千】【丈】【,】【如】【多】【米】【诺】【骨】【牌】【倒】【塌】【效】【应】【一】【般】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【采】【用】【先】【叙】【后】【议】【,】【叙】【写】【沉】【沦】【,】【文】【字】【细】【密】【,】【为】【的】【是】【告】【诫】【读】【者】【,】【要】【提】【高】【警】【惕】【。】【而】【叙】【写】【觉】【醒】【,】【文】【字】【疏】【简】【,】【“】【漫】【长】【的】【一】【周】【”】【,】【写】【起】【来】【不】【足】【百】【字】【,】【一】【个】【“】【地】【狱】【般】【的】【反】【省】【”】【,】【一】【个】【“】【脱】【胎】【换】【骨】【”】【,】【就】【足】【以】【传】【达】【出】【内】【心】【的】【悔】【恨】【。】【因】【为】【此】【时】【“】【我】【”】【的】【心】【情】【,】【读】【者】【完】【全】【能】【够】【想】【象】【出】【来】【,】【所】【以】【不】【必】【太】【多】【叙】【述】【。】【最】【后】【一】【段】【,】【发】【出】【议】【论】【,】【卒】【章】【显】【志】【,】【画】【龙】【点】【睛】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【甫】【田】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【阵】【寒】【风】【吹】【过】【,】【落】【叶】【飘】【飞】【,】【我】【不】【禁】【打】【了】【个】【寒】【战】【。】【今】【年】【的】【冬】【季】【似】【乎】【比】【往】【年】【来】【得】【早】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【晃】【,】【妈】【妈】【离】【开】【这】【个】【世】【界】【已】【经】【七】【个】【多】【月】【了】【!】【我】【常】【常】【翘】【首】【仰】【望】【苍】【穹】【,】【从】【心】【里】【发】【出】【无】【数】【遍】【的】【呼】【唤】【—】【—】【我】【亲】【爱】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【你】【在】【天】【国】【的】【何】【方】【?】【你】【是】【否】【能】【看】【到】【我】【的】【身】【影】【?】【你】【能】【听】【见】【女】【儿】【对】【你】【深】【情】【的】【呼】【唤】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【去】【年】【冬】【天】【,】【你】【被】【医】【院】【诊】【断】【出】【患】【有】【间】【歇】【性】【精】【神】【病】【。】【你】【的】【记】【忆】【力】【明】【显】【衰】【退】【,】【有】【时】【说】【话】【语】【无】【伦】【次】【,】【甚】【至】【生】【活】【不】【能】【自】【理】【。】【为】【了】【给】【你】【治】【病】【和】【让】【我】【继】【续】【读】【书】【,】【年】【近】【5】【0】【的】【父】【亲】【不】【得】【不】【外】【出】【打】【工】【。】【这】【时】【的】【你】【既】【要】【忍】【受】【病】【痛】【的】【折】【磨】【,】【又】【要】【挑】【起】【整】【个】【家】【庭】【的】【重】【担】【。】【可】【是】【无】【知】【的】【我】【根】【本】【不】【知】【道】【替】【你】【分】【担】【。】【我】【真】【后】【悔】【,】【那】【时】【,】【我】【应】【该】【放】【学】【后】【多】【陪】【陪】【你】【,】【应】【该】【帮】【你】【分】【担】【家】【务】【,】【让】【你】【开】【心】【,】【帮】【助】【你】【恢】【复】【健】【康】【。】【可】【是】【,】【我】【是】【那】【么】【的】【不】【懂】【事】【,】【竟】【常】【常】【为】【一】【些】【鸡】【毛】【蒜】【皮】【的】【小】【事】【,】【一】【次】【又】【一】【次】【地】【惹】【你】【生】【气】【,】【有】【时】【甚】【至】【还】【与】【你】【大】【吵】【大】【闹】【。】【而】【每】【一】【次】【,】【总】【是】【你】【先】【向】【我】【道】【歉】【。】【唯】【独】【在】【那】【个】【星】【期】【天】【的】【下】【午】【,】【我】【们】【在】【一】【番】【争】【吵】【过】【后】【你】【沉】【默】【了】【,】【没】【有】【对】【我】【说】【什】【么】【,】【而】【是】【独】【自】【地】【回】【到】【房】【间】【,】【躺】【到】【了】【床】【上】【。】【我】【分】【明】【看】【到】【你】【额】【头】【上】【冒】【出】【了】【豆】【大】【的】【汗】【滴】【,】【脸】【上】【流】【露】【出】【痛】【苦】【不】【堪】【的】【表】【情】【。】【因】【为】【赌】【气】【,】【我】【没】【有】【管】【你】【,】【只】【顾】【着】【自】【己】【收】【拾】【东】【西】【,】【然】【后】【就】【气】【冲】【冲】【地】【去】【了】【学】【校】【。】【晚】【自】【习】【结】【束】【后】【,】【我】【正】【在】【教】【室】【里】【收】【拾】【东】【西】【,】【忽】【然】【听】【到】【一】【个】【熟】【悉】【的】【声】【音】【在】【叫】【我】【的】【名】【字】【。】【我】【抬】【头】【一】【看】【,】【原】【来】【是】【妈】【妈】【!】【这】【时】【的】【你】【手】【里】【提】【着】【一】【大】【袋】【东】【西】【,】【倚】【在】【教】【室】【的】【门】【框】【上】【,】【脸】【色】【憔】【悴】【不】【堪】【,】【却】【强】【装】【出】【一】【副】【温】【和】【的】【笑】【容】【。】【我】【赶】【紧】【接】【过】【你】【手】【里】【的】【东】【西】【,】【打】【开】【一】【看】【,】【里】【面】【装】【着】【我】【喜】【欢】【吃】【的】【苹】【果】【、】【巧】【克】【力】【,】【还】【有】【保】【暖】【衣】【…】【…】【你】【将】【我】【拉】【到】【旁】【边】【,】【一】【只】【手】【扶】【在】【我】【的】【肩】【头】【,】【另】【一】【只】【手】【握】【着】【我】【的】【手】【,】【竟】【絮】【絮】【地】【向】【我】【道】【起】【歉】【来】【。】【你】【说】【你】【不】【该】【在】【我】【上】【学】【时】【和】【我】【争】【吵】【,】【你】【不】【该】【顾】【着】【自】【己】【去】【休】【息】【,】【你】【不】【该】【不】【替】【我】【收】【拾】【上】【学】【的】【东】【西】【…】【…】【直】【说】【得】【我】【露】【出】【了】【笑】【容】【,】【你】【才】【高】【兴】【地】【转】【过】【身】【,】【迈】【着】【蹒】【跚】【的】【步】【子】【,】【借】【着】【朦】【胧】【的】【月】【色】【回】【去】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 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】【当】【你】【走】【后】【,】【我】【的】【眼】【前】【总】【是】【浮】【现】【出】【你】【那】【张】【充】【满】【病】【态】【而】【又】【温】【和】【的】【脸】【。】【我】【想】【:】【也】【许】【是】【由】【于】【我】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【段】【女】【孩】【的】【逆】【反】【心】【理】【,】【其】【实】【每】【次】【都】【是】【我】【在】【故】【意】【惹】【你】【生】【气】【,】【故】【意】【找】【碴】【儿】【与】【你】【争】【吵】【。】【如】【果】【说】【有】【错】【的】【话】【,】【那】【可】【是】【全】【在】【我】【呀】【!】【如】【果】【说】【该】【道】【歉】【的】【话】【,】【那】【也】【是】【该】【我】【向】【你】【道】【歉】【呀】【!】【再】【说】【,】【你】【已】【身】【患】【重】【病】【,】【可】【以】【想】【象】【,】【那】【晚】【你】【来】【看】【我】【,】【一】【定】【是】【在】【你】【的】【病】【痛】【稍】【稍】【减】【轻】【后】【,】【才】【手】【忙】【脚】【乱】【地】【收】【拾】【好】【了】【我】【落】【下】【的】【一】【些】【东】【西】【,】【然】【后】【拖】【着】【病】【体】【,】【在】【朦】【胧】【的】【夜】【色】【中】【,】【赶】【了】【1】【0】【多】【里】【的】【山】【路】【而】【来】【。】【看】【样】【子】【,】【为】【了】【不】【打】【扰】【我】【的】【学】【习】【,】【你】【一】【定】【站】【在】【窗】【外】【等】【了】【许】【久】【,】【直】【到】【下】【课】【铃】【响】【起】【,】【你】【才】【怯】【生】【生】【地】【呼】【唤】【我】【的】【名】【字】【…】【…】【想】【到】【这】【里】【,】【我】【愧】【疚】【难】【当】【。】【我】【在】【心】【里】【保】【证】【:】【这】【次】【回】【家】【后】【,】【我】【一】【定】【先】【给】【你】【道】【歉】【,】【并】【且】【从】【此】【永】【远】【不】【再】【惹】【你】【生】【气】【,】【永】【远】【不】【再】【让】【你】【伤】【心】【,】【永】【远】【与】【你】【分】【担】【一】【切】【的】【痛】【苦】【…】【…】【可】【是】【,】【一】【切】【都】【太】【迟】【了】【!】【当】【听】【到】【你】【病】【危】【的】【消】【息】【,】【赶】【回】【家】【时】【,】【却】【再】【也】【没】【有】【看】【到】【你】【站】【在】【门】【口】【焦】【急】【翘】【盼】【我】【的】【身】【影】【;】【再】【也】【没】【有】【看】【到】【你】【接】【过】【我】【书】【包】【时】【的】【那】【张】【笑】【吟】【吟】【的】【脸】【;】【再】【也】【没】【有】【看】【到】【桌】【上】【你】【为】【我】【准】【备】【好】【的】【丰】【盛】【可】【口】【的】【饭】【菜】【…】【…】【我】【知】【道】【:】【你】【是】【永】【远】【听】【不】【到】【女】【儿】【的】【道】【歉】【了】【!】【你】【是】【永】【远】【看】【不】【到】【女】【儿】【的】【悔】【恨】【了】【!】【你】【也】【永】【远】【不】【能】【听】【到】【女】【儿】【呼】【唤】【你】【的】【声】【音】【了】【!】【可】【是】【,】【我】【亲】【爱】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【难】【道】【你】【就】【不】【能】【再】【给】【女】【儿】【一】【次】【改】【过】【的】【机】【会】【吗】【?】【难】【道】【你】【忍】【心】【让】【女】【儿】【悔】【恨】【终】【生】【吗】【?】【难】【道】【你】【就】【这】【样】【狠】【心】【地】【撇】【下】【女】【儿】【而】【独】【自】【远】【行】【了】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【!】【妈】【妈】【,】【女】【儿】【舍】【不】【得】【让】【你】【走】【!】【任】【凭】【我】【千】【呼】【万】【唤】【,】【任】【凭】【我】【撕】【心】【裂】【肺】【,】【我】【割】【舍】【不】【下】【的】【亲】【人】【,】【我】【那】【苦】【命】【而】【又】【伟】【大】【的】【妈】【妈】【还】【是】【走】【了】【!】【可】【是】【,】【1】【5】【年】【的】【光】【阴】【啊】【,】【早】【已】【在】【我】【心】【头】【刻】【上】【了】【一】【道】【深】【深】【的】【印】【记】【,】【我】【又】【怎】【能】【忘】【记】【—】【—】【因】【为】【有】【了】【你】【,】【我】【才】【拥】【有】【了】【那】【段】【最】【宝】【贵】【、】【最】【永】【恒】【的】【幸】【福】【时】【光】【;】【因】【为】【有】【了】【你】【,】【我】【才】【从】【一】【个】【懵】【懂】【无】【知】【的】【小】【女】【孩】【成】【长】【为】【一】【个】【知】【书】【达】【理】【、】【乖】【巧】【懂】【事】【的】【中】【学】【生】【;】【因】【为】【有】【了】【你】【,】【我】【才】【享】【受】【到】【了】【世】【界】【上】【最】【无】【私】【、】【最】【伟】【大】【的】【母】【爱】【;】【因】【为】【有】【了】【你】【,】【我】【才】【携】【着】【感】【恩】【上】【路】【、】【满】【怀】【信】【心】【憧】【憬】【美】【好】【的】【明】【天】【!】【亲】【爱】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【请】【你】【放】【心】【:】【女】【儿】【一】【定】【不】【会】【辜】【负】【你】【的】【殷】【切】【期】【盼】【,】【我】【会】【化】【悲】【痛】【为】【力】【量】【,】【勤】【奋】【学】【习】【,】【掌】【握】【过】【硬】【本】【领】【,】【做】【一】【个】【有】【用】【的】【人】【。】【请】【你】【相】【信】【,】【女】【儿】【一】【定】【会】【说】【到】【做】【到】【的】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【冬】【季】【是】【确】【切】【地】【来】【临】【了】【,】【门】【前】【的】【那】【棵】【老】【榆】【树】【忧】【郁】【地】【立】【在】【那】【里】【,】【树】【上】【的】【叶】【子】【就】【要】【落】【尽】【,】【只】【剩】【下】【一】【些】【深】【褐】【色】【的】【枝】【条】【,】【杂】【乱】【地】【伸】【向】【天】【空】【。】【一】【只】【乌】【鸦】【呆】【立】【在】【枝】【头】【,】【默】【然】【地】【凝】【望】【着】【我】【那】【孤】【独】【的】【老】【屋】【,】【仿】【佛】【也】【在】【回】【忆】【着】【关】【于】【它】【的】【一】【些】【伤】【心】【往】【事】【。】【遥】【望】【远】【处】【,】【一】【缕】【炊】【烟】【袅】【袅】【升】【起】【,】【我】【的】【思】【绪】【似】【乎】【也】【随】【着】【这】【黄】【昏】【的】【炊】【烟】【飘】【向】【了】【那】【遥】【远】【的】【天】【国】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【亲】【爱】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【女】【儿】【为】【你】【祈】【祷】【—】【—】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【愿】【你】【在】【天】【国】【一】【切】【安】【好】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】红稚莲球松【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【温】【馨】【的】【记】【忆】【,】【如】【潺】【潺】【流】【动】【的】【溪】【水】【,】【掬】【起】【一】【朵】【水】【花】【,】【一】【阵】【清】【凉】【蔓】【延】【开】【来】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【上】【初】【中】【时】【,】【我】【们】【都】【开】【始】【骑】【自】【行】【车】【上】【学】【了】【。】【每】【天】【早】【上】【背】【着】【沉】【重】【的】【书】【包】【,】【推】【上】【车】【子】【,】【大】【摇】【大】【摆】【地】【向】【学】【校】【出】【发】【。】【我】【的】【家】【到】【学】【校】【可】【是】【一】【段】【漫】【长】【的】【路】【程】【,】【来】【回】【需】【要】【一】【小】【时】【吧】【。】【爸】【爸】【安】【慰】【我】【说】【:】【“】【这】【可】【是】【减】【肥】【的】【好】【机】【会】【啊】【,】【锻】【炼】【身】【体】【,】【有】【益】【健】【康】【。】【”】【但】【每】【次】【回】【家】【,】【我】【还】【是】【会】【摇】【摇】【晃】【晃】【地】【闯】【入】【家】【门】【,】【四】【脚】【朝】【天】【地】【躺】【在】【沙】【发】【上】【,】【大】【喊】【:】【“】【累】【死】【人】【了】【!】【”】【这】【时】【,】【爸】【爸】【就】【会】【往】【我】【嘴】【里】【塞】【些】【好】【吃】【的】【,】【来】【堵】【住】【我】【这】【张】【嘴】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【到】【了】【冬】【天】【,】【骑】【自】【行】【车】【成】【了】【我】【最】【大】【的】【负】【担】【。】【坐】【在】【教】【室】【里】【,】【看】【着】【窗】【外】【飘】【落】【的】【雪】【花】【,】【我】【不】【禁】【喃】【喃】【自】【语】【:】【“】【这】【么】【冷】【的】【天】【,】【也】【没】【有】【同】【路】【的】【同】【学】【,】【怎】【么】【消】【磨】【回】【家】【的】【时】【间】【呀】【?】【要】【是】【爸】【爸】【开】【车】【来】【接】【我】【多】【好】【啊】【!】【唉】【,】【还】【是】【自】【己】【走】【吧】【。】【”】【一】【阵】【寒】【风】【吹】【过】【,】【我】【裹】【紧】【了】【羽】【绒】【服】【,】【还】【是】【禁】【不】【住】【打】【了】【一】【个】【寒】【噤】【。】【小】【心】【翼】【翼】【地】【推】【出】【车】【子】【,】【积】【满】【白】【雪】【的】【小】【路】【,】【已】【被】【同】【学】【碾】【得】【狼】【藉】【不】【堪】【。】【“】【咯】【吱】【咯】【吱】【”】【的】【声】【响】【中】【我】【推】【车】【上】【路】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【出】【校】【门】【,】【我】【扶】【着】【车】【把】【右】【腿】【用】【力】【一】【蹬】【,】【借】【劲】【要】【上】【车】【。】【谁】【知】【脚】【底】【一】【打】【滑】【,】【呼】【的】【一】【下】【,】【连】【人】【带】【车】【摔】【了】【个】【大】【马】【趴】【!】【哈】【哈】【,】【周】【围】【同】【学】【的】【笑】【声】【如】【雪】【花】【般】【弥】【漫】【开】【来】【。】【虽】【然】【很】【狼】【狈】【,】【但】【也】【只】【能】【装】【作】【无】【所】【谓】【的】【样】【子】【,】【拍】【拍】【身】【上】【的】【雪】【,】【继】【续】【骑】【车】【上】【路】【。】【其】【实】【我】【心】【里】【难】【过】【极】【了】【,】【诅】【咒】【这】【个】【鬼】【天】【气】【,】【又】【怨】【爸】【爸】【不】【来】【接】【我】【。】【心】【里】【正】【怨】【着】【,】【突】【然】【,】【一】【个】【熟】【悉】【的】【身】【影】【出】【现】【在】【我】【眼】【前】【,】【是】【爸】【爸】【!】【我】【好】【像】【发】【现】【了】【新】【大】【陆】【,】【骑】【着】【车】【子】【赶】【过】【去】【。】【爸】【爸】【也】【迎】【了】【上】【来】【,】【手】【里】【拿】【着】【一】【条】【围】【巾】【,】【给】【我】【围】【上】【,】【“】【你】【妈】【怕】【你】【冷】【,】【让】【我】【给】【你】【送】【来】【的】【,】【今】【天】【你】【老】【爹】【我】【也】【骑】【了】【辆】【自】【行】【车】【,】【别】【说】【,】【骑】【这】【么】【远】【的】【路】【,】【还】【真】【挺】【累】【人】【的】【啊】【!】【我】【算】【是】【理】【解】【你】【了】【。】【”】【我】【眼】【中】【一】【下】【子】【蓄】【满】【了】【泪】【水】【,】【赶】【紧】【低】【下】【头】【对】【爸】【爸】【说】【:】【“】【老】【爸】【,】【咱】【俩】【比】【赛】【看】【谁】【快】【!】【”】【一】【路】【上】【我】【们】【有】【说】【有】【笑】【,】【周】【围】【的】【空】【气】【都】【变】【得】【温】【暖】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【事】【情】【很】【单】【纯】【,】【却】【很】【真】【实】【。】【就】【是】【骑】【车】【上】【学】【那】【点】【事】【,】【可】【小】【作】【者】【的】【字】【里】【行】【间】【透】【出】【浓】【浓】【的】【爱】【意】【。】【开】【篇】【简】【洁】【生】【动】【,】【巧】【用】【比】【喻】【展】【开】【叙】【事】【。】【故】【事】【情】【节】【集】【中】【在】【冬】【季】【一】【个】【雪】【天】【,】【狼】【藉】【的】【小】【路】【,】【一】【个】【让】【人】【狼】【狈】【不】【堪】【的】【大】【马】【趴】【,】【雪】【花】【般】【的】【笑】【声】【,】【心】【中】【的】【委】【屈】【怨】【气】【便】【出】【来】【了】【。】【爸】【爸】【也】【 】【骑】【自】【行】【车】【来】【陪】【自】【己】【,】【情】【节】【设】【计】【新】【颖】【。】【文】【章】【没】【有】【大】【气】【磅】【礴】【的】【气】【势】【,】【没】【有】【华】【丽】【精】【美】【的】【语】【言】【,】【情】【感】【上】【没】【有】【矫】【揉】【造】【作】【,】【只】【是】【把】【自】【己】【的】【事】【娓】【娓】【道】【来】【,】【真】【实】【感】【人】【,】【亲】【切】【自】【然】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【郑】【景】【勇】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【温】【馨】【的】【记】【忆】【,】【如】【潺】【潺】【流】【动】【的】【溪】【水】【,】【掬】【起】【一】【朵】【水】【花】【,】【一】【阵】【清】【凉】【蔓】【延】【开】【来】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【上】【初】【中】【时】【,】【我】【们】【都】【开】【始】【骑】【自】【行】【车】【上】【学】【了】【。】【每】【天】【早】【上】【背】【着】【沉】【重】【的】【书】【包】【,】【推】【上】【车】【子】【,】【大】【摇】【大】【摆】【地】【向】【学】【校】【出】【发】【。】【我】【的】【家】【到】【学】【校】【可】【是】【一】【段】【漫】【长】【的】【路】【程】【,】【来】【回】【需】【要】【一】【小】【时】【吧】【。】【爸】【爸】【安】【慰】【我】【说】【:】【“】【这】【可】【是】【减】【肥】【的】【好】【机】【会】【啊】【,】【锻】【炼】【身】【体】【,】【有】【益】【健】【康】【。】【”】【但】【每】【次】【回】【家】【,】【我】【还】【是】【会】【摇】【摇】【晃】【晃】【地】【闯】【入】【家】【门】【,】【四】【脚】【朝】【天】【地】【躺】【在】【沙】【发】【上】【,】【大】【喊】【:】【“】【累】【死】【人】【了】【!】【”】【这】【时】【,】【爸】【爸】【就】【会】【往】【我】【嘴】【里】【塞】【些】【好】【吃】【的】【,】【来】【堵】【住】【我】【这】【张】【嘴】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【到】【了】【冬】【天】【,】【骑】【自】【行】【车】【成】【了】【我】【最】【大】【的】【负】【担】【。】【坐】【在】【教】【室】【里】【,】【看】【着】【窗】【外】【飘】【落】【的】【雪】【花】【,】【我】【不】【禁】【喃】【喃】【自】【语】【:】【“】【这】【么】【冷】【的】【天】【,】【也】【没】【有】【同】【路】【的】【同】【学】【,】【怎】【么】【消】【磨】【回】【家】【的】【时】【间】【呀】【?】【要】【是】【爸】【爸】【开】【车】【来】【接】【我】【多】【好】【啊】【!】【唉】【,】【还】【是】【自】【己】【走】【吧】【。】【”】【一】【阵】【寒】【风】【吹】【过】【,】【我】【裹】【紧】【了】【羽】【绒】【服】【,】【还】【是】【禁】【不】【住】【打】【了】【一】【个】【寒】【噤】【。】【小】【心】【翼】【翼】【地】【推】【出】【车】【子】【,】【积】【满】【白】【雪】【的】【小】【路】【,】【已】【被】【同】【学】【碾】【得】【狼】【藉】【不】【堪】【。】【“】【咯】【吱】【咯】【吱】【”】【的】【声】【响】【中】【我】【推】【车】【上】【路】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【出】【校】【门】【,】【我】【扶】【着】【车】【把】【右】【腿】【用】【力】【一】【蹬】【,】【借】【劲】【要】【上】【车】【。】【谁】【知】【脚】【底】【一】【打】【滑】【,】【呼】【的】【一】【下】【,】【连】【人】【带】【车】【摔】【了】【个】【大】【马】【趴】【!】【哈】【哈】【,】【周】【围】【同】【学】【的】【笑】【声】【如】【雪】【花】【般】【弥】【漫】【开】【来】【。】【虽】【然】【很】【狼】【狈】【,】【但】【也】【只】【能】【装】【作】【无】【所】【谓】【的】【样】【子】【,】【拍】【拍】【身】【上】【的】【雪】【,】【继】【续】【骑】【车】【上】【路】【。】【其】【实】【我】【心】【里】【难】【过】【极】【了】【,】【诅】【咒】【这】【个】【鬼】【天】【气】【,】【又】【怨】【爸】【爸】【不】【来】【接】【我】【。】【心】【里】【正】【怨】【着】【,】【突】【然】【,】【一】【个】【熟】【悉】【的】【身】【影】【出】【现】【在】【我】【眼】【前】【,】【是】【爸】【爸】【!】【我】【好】【像】【发】【现】【了】【新】【大】【陆】【,】【骑】【着】【车】【子】【赶】【过】【去】【。】【爸】【爸】【也】【迎】【了】【上】【来】【,】【手】【里】【拿】【着】【一】【条】【围】【巾】【,】【给】【我】【围】【上】【,】【“】【你】【妈】【怕】【你】【冷】【,】【让】【我】【给】【你】【送】【来】【的】【,】【今】【天】【你】【老】【爹】【我】【也】【骑】【了】【辆】【自】【行】【车】【,】【别】【说】【,】【骑】【这】【么】【远】【的】【路】【,】【还】【真】【挺】【累】【人】【的】【啊】【!】【我】【算】【是】【理】【解】【你】【了】【。】【”】【我】【眼】【中】【一】【下】【子】【蓄】【满】【了】【泪】【水】【,】【赶】【紧】【低】【下】【头】【对】【爸】【爸】【说】【:】【“】【老】【爸】【,】【咱】【俩】【比】【赛】【看】【谁】【快】【!】【”】【一】【路】【上】【我】【们】【有】【说】【有】【笑】【,】【周】【围】【的】【空】【气】【都】【变】【得】【温】【暖】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【事】【情】【很】【单】【纯】【,】【却】【很】【真】【实】【。】【就】【是】【骑】【车】【上】【学】【那】【点】【事】【,】【可】【小】【作】【者】【的】【字】【里】【行】【间】【透】【出】【浓】【浓】【的】【爱】【意】【。】【开】【篇】【简】【洁】【生】【动】【,】【巧】【用】【比】【喻】【展】【开】【叙】【事】【。】【故】【事】【情】【节】【集】【中】【在】【冬】【季】【一】【个】【雪】【天】【,】【狼】【藉】【的】【小】【路】【,】【一】【个】【让】【人】【狼】【狈】【不】【堪】【的】【大】【马】【趴】【,】【雪】【花】【般】【的】【笑】【声】【,】【心】【中】【的】【委】【屈】【怨】【气】【便】【出】【来】【了】【。】【爸】【爸】【也】【 】【骑】【自】【行】【车】【来】【陪】【自】【己】【,】【情】【节】【设】【计】【新】【颖】【。】【文】【章】【没】【有】【大】【气】【磅】【礴】【的】【气】【势】【,】【没】【有】【华】【丽】【精】【美】【的】【语】【言】【,】【情】【感】【上】【没】【有】【矫】【揉】【造】【作】【,】【只】【是】【把】【自】【己】【的】【事】【娓】【娓】【道】【来】【,】【真】【实】【感】【人】【,】【亲】【切】【自】【然】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【郑】【景】【勇】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】红稚莲球松【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【阵】【寒】【风】【吹】【过】【,】【落】【叶】【飘】【飞】【,】【我】【不】【禁】【打】【了】【个】【寒】【战】【。】【今】【年】【的】【冬】【季】【似】【乎】【比】【往】【年】【来】【得】【早】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【晃】【,】【妈】【妈】【离】【开】【这】【个】【世】【界】【已】【经】【七】【个】【多】【月】【了】【!】【我】【常】【常】【翘】【首】【仰】【望】【苍】【穹】【,】【从】【心】【里】【发】【出】【无】【数】【遍】【的】【呼】【唤】【—】【—】【我】【亲】【爱】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【你】【在】【天】【国】【的】【何】【方】【?】【你】【是】【否】【能】【看】【到】【我】【的】【身】【影】【?】【你】【能】【听】【见】【女】【儿】【对】【你】【深】【情】【的】【呼】【唤】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【去】【年】【冬】【天】【,】【你】【被】【医】【院】【诊】【断】【出】【患】【有】【间】【歇】【性】【精】【神】【病】【。】【你】【的】【记】【忆】【力】【明】【显】【衰】【退】【,】【有】【时】【说】【话】【语】【无】【伦】【次】【,】【甚】【至】【生】【活】【不】【能】【自】【理】【。】【为】【了】【给】【你】【治】【病】【和】【让】【我】【继】【续】【读】【书】【,】【年】【近】【5】【0】【的】【父】【亲】【不】【得】【不】【外】【出】【打】【工】【。】【这】【时】【的】【你】【既】【要】【忍】【受】【病】【痛】【的】【折】【磨】【,】【又】【要】【挑】【起】【整】【个】【家】【庭】【的】【重】【担】【。】【可】【是】【无】【知】【的】【我】【根】【本】【不】【知】【道】【替】【你】【分】【担】【。】【我】【真】【后】【悔】【,】【那】【时】【,】【我】【应】【该】【放】【学】【后】【多】【陪】【陪】【你】【,】【应】【该】【帮】【你】【分】【担】【家】【务】【,】【让】【你】【开】【心】【,】【帮】【助】【你】【恢】【复】【健】【康】【。】【可】【是】【,】【我】【是】【那】【么】【的】【不】【懂】【事】【,】【竟】【常】【常】【为】【一】【些】【鸡】【毛】【蒜】【皮】【的】【小】【事】【,】【一】【次】【又】【一】【次】【地】【惹】【你】【生】【气】【,】【有】【时】【甚】【至】【还】【与】【你】【大】【吵】【大】【闹】【。】【而】【每】【一】【次】【,】【总】【是】【你】【先】【向】【我】【道】【歉】【。】【唯】【独】【在】【那】【个】【星】【期】【天】【的】【下】【午】【,】【我】【们】【在】【一】【番】【争】【吵】【过】【后】【你】【沉】【默】【了】【,】【没】【有】【对】【我】【说】【什】【么】【,】【而】【是】【独】【自】【地】【回】【到】【房】【间】【,】【躺】【到】【了】【床】【上】【。】【我】【分】【明】【看】【到】【你】【额】【头】【上】【冒】【出】【了】【豆】【大】【的】【汗】【滴】【,】【脸】【上】【流】【露】【出】【痛】【苦】【不】【堪】【的】【表】【情】【。】【因】【为】【赌】【气】【,】【我】【没】【有】【管】【你】【,】【只】【顾】【着】【自】【己】【收】【拾】【东】【西】【,】【然】【后】【就】【气】【冲】【冲】【地】【去】【了】【学】【校】【。】【晚】【自】【习】【结】【束】【后】【,】【我】【正】【在】【教】【室】【里】【收】【拾】【东】【西】【,】【忽】【然】【听】【到】【一】【个】【熟】【悉】【的】【声】【音】【在】【叫】【我】【的】【名】【字】【。】【我】【抬】【头】【一】【看】【,】【原】【来】【是】【妈】【妈】【!】【这】【时】【的】【你】【手】【里】【提】【着】【一】【大】【袋】【东】【西】【,】【倚】【在】【教】【室】【的】【门】【框】【上】【,】【脸】【色】【憔】【悴】【不】【堪】【,】【却】【强】【装】【出】【一】【副】【温】【和】【的】【笑】【容】【。】【我】【赶】【紧】【接】【过】【你】【手】【里】【的】【东】【西】【,】【打】【开】【一】【看】【,】【里】【面】【装】【着】【我】【喜】【欢】【吃】【的】【苹】【果】【、】【巧】【克】【力】【,】【还】【有】【保】【暖】【衣】【…】【…】【你】【将】【我】【拉】【到】【旁】【边】【,】【一】【只】【手】【扶】【在】【我】【的】【肩】【头】【,】【另】【一】【只】【手】【握】【着】【我】【的】【手】【,】【竟】【絮】【絮】【地】【向】【我】【道】【起】【歉】【来】【。】【你】【说】【你】【不】【该】【在】【我】【上】【学】【时】【和】【我】【争】【吵】【,】【你】【不】【该】【顾】【着】【自】【己】【去】【休】【息】【,】【你】【不】【该】【不】【替】【我】【收】【拾】【上】【学】【的】【东】【西】【…】【…】【直】【说】【得】【我】【露】【出】【了】【笑】【容】【,】【你】【才】【高】【兴】【地】【转】【过】【身】【,】【迈】【着】【蹒】【跚】【的】【步】【子】【,】【借】【着】【朦】【胧】【的】【月】【色】【回】【去】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【你】【走】【后】【,】【我】【的】【眼】【前】【总】【是】【浮】【现】【出】【你】【那】【张】【充】【满】【病】【态】【而】【又】【温】【和】【的】【脸】【。】【我】【想】【:】【也】【许】【是】【由】【于】【我】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【段】【女】【孩】【的】【逆】【反】【心】【理】【,】【其】【实】【每】【次】【都】【是】【我】【在】【故】【意】【惹】【你】【生】【气】【,】【故】【意】【找】【碴】【儿】【与】【你】【争】【吵】【。】【如】【果】【说】【有】【错】【的】【话】【,】【那】【可】【是】【全】【在】【我】【呀】【!】【如】【果】【说】【该】【道】【歉】【的】【话】【,】【那】【也】【是】【该】【我】【向】【你】【道】【歉】【呀】【!】【再】【说】【,】【你】【已】【身】【患】【重】【病】【,】【可】【以】【想】【象】【,】【那】【晚】【你】【来】【看】【我】【,】【一】【定】【是】【在】【你】【的】【病】【痛】【稍】【稍】【减】【轻】【后】【,】【才】【手】【忙】【脚】【乱】【地】【收】【拾】【好】【了】【我】【落】【下】【的】【一】【些】【东】【西】【,】【然】【后】【拖】【着】【病】【体】【,】【在】【朦】【胧】【的】【夜】【色】【中】【,】【赶】【了】【1】【0】【多】【里】【的】【山】【路】【而】【来】【。】【看】【样】【子】【,】【为】【了】【不】【打】【扰】【我】【的】【学】【习】【,】【你】【一】【定】【站】【在】【窗】【外】【等】【了】【许】【久】【,】【直】【到】【下】【课】【铃】【响】【起】【,】【你】【才】【怯】【生】【生】【地】【呼】【唤】【我】【的】【名】【字】【…】【…】【想】【到】【这】【里】【,】【我】【愧】【疚】【难】【当】【。】【我】【在】【心】【里】【保】【证】【:】【这】【次】【回】【家】【后】【,】【我】【一】【定】【先】【给】【你】【道】【歉】【,】【并】【且】【从】【此】【永】【远】【不】【再】【惹】【你】【生】【气】【,】【永】【远】【不】【再】【让】【你】【伤】【心】【,】【永】【远】【与】【你】【分】【担】【一】【切】【的】【痛】【苦】【…】【…】【可】【是】【,】【一】【切】【都】【太】【迟】【了】【!】【当】【听】【到】【你】【病】【危】【的】【消】【息】【,】【赶】【回】【家】【时】【,】【却】【再】【也】【没】【有】【看】【到】【你】【站】【在】【门】【口】【焦】【急】【翘】【盼】【我】【的】【身】【影】【;】【再】【也】【没】【有】【看】【到】【你】【接】【过】【我】【书】【包】【时】【的】【那】【张】【笑】【吟】【吟】【的】【脸】【;】【再】【也】【没】【有】【看】【到】【桌】【上】【你】【为】【我】【准】【备】【好】【的】【丰】【盛】【可】【口】【的】【饭】【菜】【…】【…】【我】【知】【道】【:】【你】【是】【永】【远】【听】【不】【到】【女】【儿】【的】【道】【歉】【了】【!】【你】【是】【永】【远】【看】【不】【到】【女】【儿】【的】【悔】【恨】【了】【!】【你】【也】【永】【远】【不】【能】【听】【到】【女】【儿】【呼】【唤】【你】【的】【声】【音】【了】【!】【可】【是】【,】【我】【亲】【爱】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【难】【道】【你】【就】【不】【能】【再】【给】【女】【儿】【一】【次】【改】【过】【的】【机】【会】【吗】【?】【难】【道】【你】【忍】【心】【让】【女】【儿】【悔】【恨】【终】【生】【吗】【?】【难】【道】【你】【就】【这】【样】【狠】【心】【地】【撇】【下】【女】【儿】【而】【独】【自】【远】【行】【了】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【!】【妈】【妈】【,】【女】【儿】【舍】【不】【得】【让】【你】【走】【!】【任】【凭】【我】【千】【呼】【万】【唤】【,】【任】【凭】【我】【撕】【心】【裂】【肺】【,】【我】【割】【舍】【不】【下】【的】【亲】【人】【,】【我】【那】【苦】【命】【而】【又】【伟】【大】【的】【妈】【妈】【还】【是】【走】【了】【!】【可】【是】【,】【1】【5】【年】【的】【光】【阴】【啊】【,】【早】【已】【在】【我】【心】【头】【刻】【上】【了】【一】【道】【深】【深】【的】【印】【记】【,】【我】【又】【怎】【能】【忘】【记】【—】【—】【因】【为】【有】【了】【你】【,】【我】【才】【拥】【有】【了】【那】【段】【最】【宝】【贵】【、】【最】【永】【恒】【的】【幸】【福】【时】【光】【;】【因】【为】【有】【了】【你】【,】【我】【才】【从】【一】【个】【懵】【懂】【无】【知】【的】【小】【女】【孩】【成】【长】【为】【一】【个】【知】【书】【达】【理】【、】【乖】【巧】【懂】【事】【的】【中】【学】【生】【;】【因】【为】【有】【了】【你】【,】【我】【才】【享】【受】【到】【了】【世】【界】【上】【最】【无】【私】【、】【最】【伟】【大】【的】【母】【爱】【;】【因】【为】【有】【了】【你】【,】【我】【才】【携】【着】【感】【恩】【上】【路】【、】【满】【怀】【信】【心】【憧】【憬】【美】【好】【的】【明】【天】【!】【亲】【爱】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【请】【你】【放】【心】【:】【女】【儿】【一】【定】【不】【会】【辜】【负】【你】【的】【殷】【切】【期】【盼】【,】【我】【会】【化】【悲】【痛】【为】【力】【量】【,】【勤】【奋】【学】【习】【,】【掌】【握】【过】【硬】【本】【领】【,】【做】【一】【个】【有】【用】【的】【人】【。】【请】【你】【相】【信】【,】【女】【儿】【一】【定】【会】【说】【到】【做】【到】【的】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【冬】【季】【是】【确】【切】【地】【来】【临】【了】【,】【门】【前】【的】【那】【棵】【老】【榆】【树】【忧】【郁】【地】【立】【在】【那】【里】【,】【树】【上】【的】【叶】【子】【就】【要】【落】【尽】【,】【只】【剩】【下】【一】【些】【深】【褐】【色】【的】【枝】【条】【,】【杂】【乱】【地】【伸】【向】【天】【空】【。】【一】【只】【乌】【鸦】【呆】【立】【在】【枝】【头】【,】【默】【然】【地】【凝】【望】【着】【我】【那】【孤】【独】【的】【老】【屋】【,】【仿】【佛】【也】【在】【回】【忆】【着】【关】【于】【它】【的】【一】【些】【伤】【心】【往】【事】【。】【遥】【望】【远】【处】【,】【一】【缕】【炊】【烟】【袅】【袅】【升】【起】【,】【我】【的】【思】【绪】【似】【乎】【也】【随】【着】【这】【黄】【昏】【的】【炊】【烟】【飘】【向】【了】【那】【遥】【远】【的】【天】【国】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【亲】【爱】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【女】【儿】【为】【你】【祈】【祷】【—】【—】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【愿】【你】【在】【天】【国】【一】【切】【安】【好】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【E】【v】【e】【r】【y】【 】【y】【e】【a】【r】【 】【a】【 】【l】【o】【t】【 】【o】【f】【 】【p】【e】【o】【p】【l】【e】【 】【a】【r】【e】【 】【k】【i】【l】【l】【e】【d】【 】【o】【r】【 】【i】【n】【j】【u】【r】【e】【d】【 】【i】【n】【 】【r】【o】【a】【d】【 】【a】【c】【c】【i】【d】【e】【n】【t】【s】【.】【 】【H】【o】【w】【 】【c】【a】【n】【 】【w】【e】【 】【m】【a】【k】【e】【 】【t】【h】【e】【 】【r】【o】【a】【d】【s】【 】【s】【a】【f】【e】【r】【?】【 】【R】【e】【m】【e】【m】【b】【e】【r】【 】【t】【h】【e】【 】【f】【o】【l】【l】【o】【w】【i】【n】【g】【 】【t】【r】【a】【f】【f】【i】【c】【 】【r】【u】【l】【e】【s】【.】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【W】【h】【e】【n】【 】【y】【o】【u】【 】【r】【i】【d】【e】【 】【a】【 】【b】【i】【k】【e】【,】【 】【k】【e】【e】【p】【 】【t】【o】【 】【t】【h】【e】【 】【r】【i】【g】【h】【t】【 】【s】【i】【d】【e】【 】【o】【f】【 】【t】【h】【e】【 】【r】【o】【a】【d】【.】【 】【D】【o】【n】【’】【t】【 】【c】【r】【o】【s】【s】【 】【t】【h】【e】【 】【r】【o】【a】【d】【 】【o】【r】【 】【t】【u】【r】【n】【 】【l】【e】【f】【t】【 】【a】【t】【 】【a】【 】【r】【e】【d】【 】【t】【r】【a】【f】【f】【i】【c】【 】【l】【i】【g】【h】【t】【.】【 】【G】【i】【v】【e】【 】【a】【 】【h】【a】【n】【d】【 】【s】【i】【g】【n】【a】【l】【 】【i】【f】【 】【y】【o】【u】【 】【w】【a】【n】【t】【 】【t】【o】【 】【t】【u】【r】【n】【 】【o】【r】【 】【s】【t】【o】【p】【.】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【B】【e】【f】【o】【r】【e】【 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】【s】【a】【f】【e】【t】【y】【.】【 】【W】【e】【 】【s】【h】【o】【u】【l】【d】【 】【t】【e】【a】【c】【h】【 】【s】【m】【a】【l】【l】【 】【c】【h】【i】【l】【d】【r】【e】【n】【 】【n】【o】【t】【 】【t】【o】【 】【p】【l】【a】【y】【 】【o】【r】【 】【r】【i】【d】【e】【 】【o】【n】【 】【t】【h】【e】【 】【r】【o】【a】【d】【s】【.】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【A】【l】【w】【a】【y】【s】【 】【o】【b】【e】【y】【 】【t】【h】【e】【s】【e】【 】【r】【u】【l】【e】【s】【,】【 】【y】【o】【u】【’】【l】【l】【 】【f】【i】【n】【d】【 】【i】【t】【 】【m】【u】【c】【h】【 】【s】【a】【f】【e】【r】【 】【t】【o】【 】【w】【a】【l】【k】【 】【o】【r】【 】【r】【i】【d】【e】【 】【o】【n】【 】【t】【h】【e】【 】【r】【o】【a】【d】【.】【<】【b】【r】【>】红稚莲球松【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【过】【去】【,】【我】【一】【直】【认】【为】【讨】【价】【还】【价】【是】【一】【件】【很】【俗】【气】【的】【事】【,】【有】【时】【在】【市】【场】【上】【看】【到】【别】【人】【为】【了】【几】【块】【钱】【而】【争】【得】【不】【可】【开】【交】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【甚】【至】【还】【有】【点】【鄙】【视】【。】【可】【经】【过】【自】【己】【几】【次】【上】【当】【花】【冤】【枉】【钱】【的】【教】【训】【后】【,】【我】【决】【定】【去】【实】【地】【“】【考】【察】【”】【一】【下】【还】【价】【的】【“】【艺】【术】【”】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【机】【会】【终】【于】【来】【了】【!】【星】【期】【天】【,】【老】【爸】【要】【去】【买】【家】【里】【装】【修】【用】【的】【卫】【浴】【用】【品】【,】【在】【我】【的】【百】【般】【央】【求】【下】【,】【爸】【爸】【勉】【强】【答】【应】【带】【我】【去】【,】【虽】【然】【我】【嘴】【上】【说】【只】【是】【去】【散】【散】【心】【,】【其】【实】【是】【想】【学】【学】【老】【爸】【是】【如】【何】【还】【价】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【驱】【车】【来】【到】【了】【“】【望】【湖】【美】【家】【居】【”】【。】【宽】【阔】【的】【商】【场】【里】【,】【各】【类】【家】【装】【用】【品】【琳】【琅】【满】【目】【,】【令】【人】【眼】【花】【缭】【乱】【。】【爸】【爸】【领】【着】【我】【径】【直】【来】【到】【卫】【浴】【专】【卖】【区】【,】【只】【见】【他】【先】【是】【不】【动】【声】【色】【地】【逐】【户】【询】【问】【了】【十】【几】【家】【商】【店】【的】【卫】【浴】【五】【件】【套】【的】【价】【格】【,】【对】【该】【商】【品】【的】【总】【体】【价】【格】【先】【做】【到】【心】【中】【有】【数】【,】【便】【于】【后】【面】【砍】【价】【顺】【利】【进】【行】【。】【之】【后】【,】【他】【挑】【选】【了】【几】【户】【基】【本】【符】【合】【自】【己】【心】【理】【价】【位】【的】【商】【家】【,】【准】【备】【开】【始】【砍】【价】【。】【在】【进】【商】【店】【前】【,】【老】【爸】【把】【我】【拉】【到】【一】【旁】【,】【神】【秘】【地】【告】【诉】【我】【如】【何】【配】【合】【。】【他】【要】【我】【进】【商】【店】【后】【,】【表】【面】【上】【不】【要】【流】【露】【出】【对】【看】【中】【的】【商】【品】【特】【别】【感】【兴】【趣】【,】【先】【去】【看】【其】【他】【的】【商】【品】【,】【让】【店】【主】【摸】【不】【透】【我】【们】【的】【想】【法】【,】【要】【不】【然】【他】【是】【不】【会】【多】【让】【价】【的】【,】【然】【后】【再】【慢】【慢】【转】【到】【我】【们】【所】【需】【要】【的】【商】【品】【上】【,】【先】【是】【大】【幅】【度】【地】【跟】【他】【砍】【价】【,】【一】【般】【是】【报】【价】【的】【一】【半】【,】【因】【为】【一】【般】【这】【样】【的】【商】【品】【利】【润】【很】【高】【。】【当】【双】【方】【僵】【持】【不】【下】【时】【,】【爸】【爸】【让】【我】【在】【一】【旁】【“】【鸡】【蛋】【里】【挑】【骨】【头】【”】【,】【作】【为】【降】【价】【的】【理】【由】【,】【或】【者】【故】【意】【说】【不】【买】【了】【,】【说】【去】【另】【一】【家】【看】【看】【有】【没】【有】【更】【便】【宜】【的】【,】【然】【后】【我】【们】【装】【着】【要】【转】【身】【离】【去】【的】【样】【子】【,】【如】【果】【这】【时】【店】【主】【让】【步】【了】【,】【就】【说】【明】【这】【个】【价】【格】【基】【本】【到】【位】【了】【。】【起】【初】【我】【有】【些】【不】【解】【,】【怀】【疑】【这】【种】【方】【法】【的】【可】【行】【度】【,】【能】【否】【真】【的】【把】【价】【格】【砍】【下】【来】【,】【不】【过】【我】【还】【是】【半】【信】【半】【疑】【地】【跟】【着】【爸】【爸】【进】【了】【商】【店】【。】【我】【们】【如】【法】【实】【施】【精】【心】【排】【演】【好】【的】【双】【簧】【,】【经】【过】【老】【爸】【同】【店】【主】【十】【几】【个】【回】【合】【斗】【智】【斗】【勇】【的】【口】【才】【较】【量】【,】【和】【我】【在】【一】【旁】【煽】【风】【点】【火】【的】【配】【合】【,】【对】【方】【终】【于】【“】【败】【”】【下】【阵】【来】【。】【一】【场】【没】【有】【硝】【烟】【的】【价】【格】【战】【终】【于】【结】【束】【了】【。】【嗨】【!】【你】【还】【别】【说】【,】【原】【价】【3】【2】【0】【元】【的】【卫】【浴】【五】【件】【套】【,】【以】【现】【价】【2】【0】【0】【元】【成】【交】【,】【竟】【省】【了】【1】【2】【0】【元】【哟】【!】【当】【我】【们】【带】【着】【“】【战】【利】【品】【”】【,】【带】【着】【胜】【利】【者】【的】【喜】【悦】【走】【出】【商】【店】【时】【,】【心】【里】【别】【提】【多】【高】【兴】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【回】【家】【的】【路】【上】【,】【爸】【爸】【对】【我】【说】【,】【还】【价】【是】【一】【门】【学】【问】【,】【不】【但】【能】【锻】【炼】【你】【的】【口】【才】【,】【而】【且】【能】【增】【强】【你】【的】【理】【财】【能】【力】【,】【同】【时】【,】【还】【节】【省】【了】【“】【银】【子】【”】【,】【你】【还】【可】【以】【从】【中】【得】【到】【一】【种】【满】【足】【感】【,】【一】【举】【多】【得】【何】【乐】【而】【不】【为】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【一】【次】【尝】【到】【了】【还】【价】【的】【滋】【味】【,】【真】【爽】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【微】【格】【素】【材】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【欲】【凭】【莺】【燕】【留】【春】【住】【,】【无】【奈】【东】【风】【信】【杜】【鹃】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【出】【处】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【宋】【·】【吕】【人】【龙】【《】【春】【归】【》】【:】【“】【过】【却】【清】【明】【艳】【冶】【天】【,】【梨】【花】【飞】【雪】【柳】【森】【烟】【。】【欲】【凭】【莺】【燕】【留】【春】【住】【,】【无】【奈】【东】【风】【信】【杜】【鹃】【。】【”】【(】【过】【去】【了】【,】【这】【清】【丽】【明】【媚】【的】【艳】【阳】【天】【,】【梨】【花】【如】【雪】【飘】【飞】【,】【柳】【条】【密】【密】【如】【烟】【。】【想】【靠】【着】【黄】【莺】【和】【燕】【子】【将】【春】【天】【留】【住】【,】【无】【奈】【习】【习】【的】【东】【风】【只】【相】【信】【杜】【鹃】【鸟】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【哲】【理】【链】【接】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【事】【物】【的】【发】【展】【不】【以】【人】【们】【的】【意】【志】【为】【转】【移】【,】【即】【使】【原】【是】【美】【好】【的】【事】【物】【也】【会】【走】【向】【其】【反】【面】【。】【因】【为】【任】【何】【事】【物】【自】【身】【都】【包】【含】【着】【它】【的】【否】【定】【方】【面】【,】【事】【物】【的】【发】【展】【就】【是】【通】【过】【不】【断】【地】【否】【定】【自】【身】【来】【发】【展】【自】【己】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

红稚莲球松:难忘的拔河比赛300字 难忘的拔河比赛

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【忆】【中】【的】【五】【月】【初】【五】【,】【没】【别】【的】【,】【只】【有】【满】【屋】【子】【的】【粽】【子】【香】【,】【或】【许】【这】【也】【注】【定】【了】【我】【与】【粽】【子】【间】【的】【不】【解】【之】【缘】【吧】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【很】【小】【很】【小】【的】【时】【候】【,】【最】【期】【待】【的】【莫】【过】【于】【端】【午】【节】【。】【等】【到】【了】【那】【一】【天】【,】【外】【婆】【总】【是】【忙】【里】【忙】【外】【地】【包】【粽】【子】【。】【而】【我】【,】【就】【站】【在】【一】【旁】【,】【饶】【有】【兴】【趣】【地】【看】【着】【,】【自】【以】【为】【这】【就】【是】【生】【平】【最】【大】【的】【乐】【趣】【。】【看】【着】【外】【婆】【娴】【熟】【的】【动】【作】【,】【将】【芦】【叶】【卷】【好】【,】【把】【糯】【米】【倒】【入】【其】【中】【,】【用】【绳】【扎】【好】【,】【这】【样】【,】【一】【个】【棱】【角】【分】【明】【的】【粽】【子】【就】【完】【成】【了】【,】【看】【着】【看】【着】【,】【我】【也】【有】【点】【耐】【不】【住】【性】【子】【了】【,】【于】【是】【,】【也】【学】【着】【外】【婆】【的】【样】【子】【,】【将】【芦】【叶】【卷】【好】【,】【倒】【入】【糯】【米】【,】【只】【是】【芦】【叶】【卷】【得】【不】【行】【,】【漏】【洞】【百】【出】【,】【害】【得】【糯】【米】【满】【地】【都】【是】【,】【到】【了】【扎】【绳】【子】【时】【,】【又】【是】【手】【忙】【脚】【乱】【,】【不】【知】【如】【何】【是】【好】【。】【这】【时】【外】【婆】【就】【会】【开】【心】【地】【笑】【着】【,】【并】【认】【真】【地】【教】【我】【,】【于】【是】【形】【状】【各】【异】【的】【粽】【子】【就】【在】【我】【手】【上】【诞】【生】【了】【…】【…】【 】【待】【粽】【子】【香】【飘】【满】【屋】【时】【,】【我】【就】【迫】【不】【及】【待】【地】【品】【尝】【自】【己】【包】【的】【粽】【子】【,】【心】【里】【美】【滋】【滋】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【到】【了】【再】【大】【一】【点】【的】【时】【候】【,】【没】【有】【时】【间】【看】【外】【婆】【包】【粽】【子】【了】【,】【只】【是】【等】【到】【了】【粽】【子】【飘】【香】【时】【,】【品】【尝】【几】【个】【。】【不】【过】【,】【此】【时】【心】【境】【不】【同】【了】【。】【有】【一】【次】【,】【天】【真】【的】【我】【曾】【这】【样】【问】【外】【婆】【:】【“】【为】【什】【么】【要】【送】【粽】【子】【给】【屈】【原】【呀】【?】【”】【外】【婆】【笑】【笑】【说】【:】【“】【他】【很】【善】【良】【而】【且】【爱】【国】【呀】【!】【”】【于】【是】【,】【我】【开】【始】【了】【解】【屈】【原】【的】【品】【质】【,】【屈】【原】【的】【精】【神】【内】【涵】【。】【之】【后】【,】【品】【尝】【着】【清】【香】【醉】【人】【的】【粽】【子】【,】【静】【静】【地】【体】【味】【着】【历】【史】【的】【沧】【桑】【,】【真】【是】【别】【有】【一】【番】【情】【趣】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【而】【现】【在】【,】【端】【午】【节】【的】【时】【候】【,】【多】【数】【情】【况】【下】【已】【不】【能】【在】【家】【中】【与】【父】【母】【团】【聚】【了】【。】【回】【想】【起】【童】【年】【包】【粽】【子】【的】【趣】【事】【,】【回】【味】【着】【外】【婆】【的】【那】【句】【淳】【朴】【的】【话】【,】【我】【顿】【时】【百】【感】【交】【集】【,】【一】【阵】【阵】【的】【甜】【蜜】【也】【会】【涌】【上】【心】【头】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【去】【年】【端】【午】【节】【,】【我】【又】【回】【到】【家】【中】【,】【外】【婆】【仍】【然】【在】【忙】【着】【。】【我】【悄】【悄】【地】【坐】【下】【来】【,】【像】【小】【时】【候】【那】【样】【,】【学】【着】【外】【婆】【的】【样】【子】【包】【粽】【子】【,】【于】【是】【就】【有】【了】【方】【粽】【,】【菱】【粽】【、】【子】【母】【粽】【…】【…】【 】【仔】【细】【一】【看】【,】【跟】【以】【前】【包】【的】【差】【不】【多】【,】【技】【术】【没】【有】【太】【大】【长】【进】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【又】【品】【尝】【着】【自】【己】【包】【的】【粽】【子】【,】【一】【种】【熟】【悉】【的】【滋】【味】【涌】【上】【心】【头】【,】【如】【同】【粽】【子】【馅】【中】【的】【糯】【米】【那】【样】【纯】【正】【,】【又】【如】【芦】【叶】【般】【的】【清】【香】【脱】【俗】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【以】【时】【间】【为】【顺】【序】【,】【从】【小】【时】【写】【起】【,】【思】【路】【脉】【络】【都】【很】【清】【晰】【。】【善】【于】【运】【用】【人】【物】【(】【外】【婆】【)】【的】【动】【作】【描】【写】【,】【有】【人】【物】【对】【话】【描】【写】【。】【这】【些】【描】【写】【在】【记】【叙】【文】【中】【运】【用】【,】【能】【很】【好】【地】【刻】【画】【人】【物】【性】【格】【,】【使】【人】【物】【鲜】【活】【起】【来】【,】【是】【记】【叙】【文】【写】【作】【不】【可】【缺】【少】【的】【要】【素】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【王】【伟】【安】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】红稚莲球松【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【生】【活】【就】【像】【一】【杯】【咖】【啡】【,】【感】【动】【是】【缕】【缕】【醇】【香】【;】【生】【活】【就】【像】【一】【壶】【热】【茶】【,】【感】【动】【是】【丝】【丝】【温】【暖】【;】【生】【活】【就】【像】【一】【簇】【鲜】【花】【,】【感】【动】【是】【片】【片】【绚】【丽】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【我】【的】【房】【间】【里】【有】【一】【个】【花】【篮】【,】【里】【面】【装】【满】【了】【我】【的】【感】【动】【,】【它】【比】【任】【何】【一】【篮】【鲜】【花】【都】【要】【夺】【目】【。】【从】【收】【集】【感】【动】【的】【那】【天】【开】【始】【,】【我】【便】【拥】【有】【了】【幸】【福】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【得】【前】【不】【久】【,】【我】【生】【病】【了】【,】【上】【学】【放】【学】【便】【由】【爸】【爸】【接】【送】【。】【星】【期】【二】【那】【天】【,】【我】【要】【参】【加】【竞】【赛】【班】【,】【所】【以】【不】【能】【正】【点】【放】【学】【。】【可】【爸】【爸】【不】【知】【道】【,】【那】【样】【的】【话】【他】【会】【在】【外】【面】【等】【很】【久】【的】【。】【我】【想】【给】【爸】【爸】【打】【电】【话】【告】【诉】【他】【一】【声】【,】【可】【却】【来】【不】【及】【,】【也】【只】【能】【让】【爸】【爸】【等】【了】【。】【竞】【赛】【班】【一】【下】【课】【,】【我】【便】【急】【匆】【匆】【地】【往】【楼】【下】【跑】【,】【心】【想】【:】【爸】【爸】【会】【不】【会】【等】【不】【到】【我】【先】【走】【了】【?】【可】【我】【一】【出】【校】【门】【,】【发】【现】【爸】【爸】【背】【着】【手】【,】【依】【然】【站】【在】【那】【里】【,】【月】【光】【下】【的】【身】【影】【很】【长】【。】【看】【着】【远】【处】【的】【爸】【爸】【,】【觉】【得】【他】【好】【像】【不】【再】【那】【么】【年】【轻】【了】【。】【爸】【爸】【什】【么】【时】【候】【开】【始】【老】【的】【?】【是】【在】【送】【我】【上】【学】【的】【路】【上】【吗】【?】【我】【的】【鼻】【子】【酸】【酸】【的】【。】【爸】【爸】【见】【我】【出】【来】【,】【微】【笑】【着】【向】【我】【招】【招】【手】【,】【我】【点】【了】【点】【头】【,】【在】【爸】【爸】【转】【身】【的】【瞬】【间】【抹】【了】【一】【下】【眼】【睛】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【路】【上】【,】【爸】【爸】【关】【切】【地】【问】【我】【身】【体】【好】【些】【了】【吗】【?】【有】【没】【有】【咳】【嗽】【?】【中】【午】【饭】【吃】【了】【多】【少】【?】【我】【沉】【默】【着】【不】【说】【话】【,】【怕】【只】【说】【一】【个】【字】【就】【又】【会】【掉】【眼】【泪】【。】【爸】【爸】【见】【我】【不】【说】【话】【,】【小】【心】【翼】【翼】【地】【问】【:】【“】【怎】【么】【了】【?】【不】【舒】【服】【吗】【?】【”】【我】【摇】【了】【摇】【头】【,】【深】【吸】【一】【口】【气】【,】【说】【:】【“】【很】【好】【啊】【,】【只】【是】【我】【今】【天】【忘】【了】【说】【要】【参】【加】【竞】【赛】【班】【的】【事】【,】【让】【您】【等】【了】【这】【么】【久】【。】【”】【爸】【爸】【见】【我】【身】【体】【无】【恙】【,】【便】【松】【了】【一】【口】【气】【,】【漫】【不】【经】【心】【地】【说】【:】【“】【我】【早】【就】【想】【到】【你】【今】【天】【要】【上】【竞】【赛】【班】【的】【,】【所】【以】【晚】【来】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【也】【没】【等】【多】【久】【。】【”】【原】【来】【爸】【爸】【知】【道】【啊】【,】【我】【心】【中】【的】【愧】【疚】【感】【顿】【时】【消】【了】【一】【半】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【回】【到】【家】【中】【,】【妈】【妈】【一】【见】【我】【们】【就】【问】【:】【“】【怎】【么】【了】【?】【怎】【么】【这】【么】【久】【才】【回】【来】【?】【”】【爸】【爸】【连】【忙】【说】【:】【“】【不】【久】【不】【久】【,】【也】【没】【多】【久】【啊】【。】【”】【妈】【妈】【疑】【惑】【地】【看】【了】【爸】【爸】【一】【眼】【,】【又】【看】【了】【一】【眼】【表】【,】【说】【:】【“】【怎】【么】【不】【久】【?】【都】【快】【1】【个】【小】【时】【了】【!】【”】【1】【个】【小】【时】【?】【我】【疑】【惑】【地】【看】【着】【爸】【爸】【,】【顿】【时】【也】【明】【白】【了】【,】【原】【来】【爸】【爸】【在】【凛】【冽】【的】【寒】【风】【中】【等】【了】【我】【1】【个】【小】【时】【!】【愧】【疚】【感】【重】【又】【充】【满】【了】【我】【的】【心】【中】【,】【沉】【甸】【甸】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【吃】【饭】【时】【,】【我】【一】【直】【是】【沉】【默】【的】【,】【因】【为】【心】【里】【很】【过】【意】【不】【去】【。】【爸】【爸】【见】【状】【慢】【慢】【地】【开】【口】【道】【:】【“】【孩】【子】【,】【生】【气】【了】【?】【我】【不】【是】【故】【意】【骗】【你】【,】【只】【是】【不】【想】【让】【你】【担】【心】【,】【你】【爸】【爸】【我】【身】【强】【体】【壮】【,】【吹】【吹】【风】【就】【跟】【挠】【痒】【痒】【一】【样】【,】【没】【什】【么】【大】【不】【了】【!】【”】【我】【望】【着】【爸】【爸】【,】【一】【下】【子】【笑】【出】【声】【来】【,】【随】【即】【又】【说】【:】【“】【爸】【爸】【,】【我】【怎】【么】【会】【生】【您】【的】【气】【呢】【,】【女】【儿】【只】【是】【心】【里】【觉】【得】【过】【意】【不】【去】【,】【要】【是】【我】【和】【爸】【爸】【说】【一】【下】【,】【就】【不】【会】【让】【爸】【爸】【苦】【等】【了】【。】【爸】【爸】【,】【以】【后】【你】【要】【是】【等】【不】【到】【我】【,】【你】【就】【先】【走】【,】【我】【自】【己】【也】【能】【回】【家】【的】【!】【”】【爸】【爸】【笑】【着】【点】【头】【,】【眼】【里】【流】【露】【出】【一】【丝】【欣】【喜】【与】【安】【慰】【。】【我】【吃】【着】【可】【口】【的】【饭】【菜】【,】【觉】【得】【满】【嘴】【都】【是】【幸】【福】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【屋】【外】【寒】【风】【呼】【啸】【,】【我】【的】【心】【却】【温】【暖】【无】【比】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【王】【水】【娟】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【写】【我】【读】【:】【文】【章】【的】【情】【节】【设】【计】【得】【很】【巧】【妙】【。】【特】【别】【是】【第】【四】【自】【然】【段】【“】【我】【”】【与】【爸】【爸】【的】【对】【话】【并】【没】【有】【什】【么】【感】【染】【人】【的】【地】【方】【。】【但】【读】【到】【结】【尾】【人】【们】【才】【发】【现】【,】【爸】【爸】【其】【实】【是】【说】【了】【假】【话】【。】【这】【样】【一】【来】【,】【当】【我】【们】【读】【完】【全】【文】【,】【才】【感】【受】【到】【第】【四】【段】【中】【的】【语】【言】【描】【写】【和】【情】【节】【设】【计】【不】【是】【可】【有】【可】【无】【的】【,】【是】【与】【结】【尾】【相】【互】【作】【用】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【微】【格】【素】【材】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【闲】【花】【只】【好】【闲】【中】【看】【,】【一】【折】【归】【来】【便】【不】【鲜】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【出】【处】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【清】【·】【刘】【廷】【玑】【《】【偶】【成】【》】【(】【见】【清】【·】【袁】【枚】【《】【随】【国】【诗】【话】【》】【卷】【十】【四】【第】【四】【十】【条】【)】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【哲】【理】【链】【接】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【些】【闲】【野】【中】【的】【花】【,】【只】【适】【宜】【在】【闲】【野】【中】【观】【赏】【,】【一】【把】【它】【们】【摘】【折】【回】【来】【,】【就】【不】【新】【鲜】【了】【。】【一】【切】【美】【的】【事】【物】【都】【要】【合】【乎】【自】【然】【,】【人】【工】【的】【做】【作】【改】【造】【,】【会】【把】【原】【来】【的】【美】【好】【本】【质】【破】【坏】【。】【又】【可】【以】【用】【来】【说】【明】【做】【任】【何】【事】【情】【都】【要】【因】【地】【制】【宜】【,】【要】【具】【体】【情】【况】【具】【体】【对】【待】【,】【比】【如】【引】【进】【人】【才】【、】【引】【进】【外】【地】【的】【先】【进】【经】【验】【,】【都】【要】【充】【分】【地】【考】【虑】【到】【自】【己】【地】【区】【、】【单】【位】【的】【情】【况】【与】【彼】【处】【的】【差】【异】【,】【要】【注】【意】【分】【析】【人】【才】【、】【经】【验】【在】【什】【么】【“】【土】【壤】【”】【中】【生】【长】【的】【,】【不】【要】【盲】【目】【引】【进】【,】【呆】【板】【效】【法】【,】【生】【搬】【硬】【套】【,】【免】【得】【“】【一】【折】【归】【来】【便】【不】【鲜】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

红稚莲球松:中考作文热点考题预测(三)

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【过】【去】【,】【我】【一】【直】【认】【为】【讨】【价】【还】【价】【是】【一】【件】【很】【俗】【气】【的】【事】【,】【有】【时】【在】【市】【场】【上】【看】【到】【别】【人】【为】【了】【几】【块】【钱】【而】【争】【得】【不】【可】【开】【交】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【甚】【至】【还】【有】【点】【鄙】【视】【。】【可】【经】【过】【自】【己】【几】【次】【上】【当】【花】【冤】【枉】【钱】【的】【教】【训】【后】【,】【我】【决】【定】【去】【实】【地】【“】【考】【察】【”】【一】【下】【还】【价】【的】【“】【艺】【术】【”】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【机】【会】【终】【于】【来】【了】【!】【星】【期】【天】【,】【老】【爸】【要】【去】【买】【家】【里】【装】【修】【用】【的】【卫】【浴】【用】【品】【,】【在】【我】【的】【百】【般】【央】【求】【下】【,】【爸】【爸】【勉】【强】【答】【应】【带】【我】【去】【,】【虽】【然】【我】【嘴】【上】【说】【只】【是】【去】【散】【散】【心】【,】【其】【实】【是】【想】【学】【学】【老】【爸】【是】【如】【何】【还】【价】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【驱】【车】【来】【到】【了】【“】【望】【湖】【美】【家】【居】【”】【。】【宽】【阔】【的】【商】【场】【里】【,】【各】【类】【家】【装】【用】【品】【琳】【琅】【满】【目】【,】【令】【人】【眼】【花】【缭】【乱】【。】【爸】【爸】【领】【着】【我】【径】【直】【来】【到】【卫】【浴】【专】【卖】【区】【,】【只】【见】【他】【先】【是】【不】【动】【声】【色】【地】【逐】【户】【询】【问】【了】【十】【几】【家】【商】【店】【的】【卫】【浴】【五】【件】【套】【的】【价】【格】【,】【对】【该】【商】【品】【的】【总】【体】【价】【格】【先】【做】【到】【心】【中】【有】【数】【,】【便】【于】【后】【面】【砍】【价】【顺】【利】【进】【行】【。】【之】【后】【,】【他】【挑】【选】【了】【几】【户】【基】【本】【符】【合】【自】【己】【心】【理】【价】【位】【的】【商】【家】【,】【准】【备】【开】【始】【砍】【价】【。】【在】【进】【商】【店】【前】【,】【老】【爸】【把】【我】【拉】【到】【一】【旁】【,】【神】【秘】【地】【告】【诉】【我】【如】【何】【配】【合】【。】【他】【要】【我】【进】【商】【店】【后】【,】【表】【面】【上】【不】【要】【流】【露】【出】【对】【看】【中】【的】【商】【品】【特】【别】【感】【兴】【趣】【,】【先】【去】【看】【其】【他】【的】【商】【品】【,】【让】【店】【主】【摸】【不】【透】【我】【们】【的】【想】【法】【,】【要】【不】【然】【他】【是】【不】【会】【多】【让】【价】【的】【,】【然】【后】【再】【慢】【慢】【转】【到】【我】【们】【所】【需】【要】【的】【商】【品】【上】【,】【先】【是】【大】【幅】【度】【地】【跟】【他】【砍】【价】【,】【一】【般】【是】【报】【价】【的】【一】【半】【,】【因】【为】【一】【般】【这】【样】【的】【商】【品】【利】【润】【很】【高】【。】【当】【双】【方】【僵】【持】【不】【下】【时】【,】【爸】【爸】【让】【我】【在】【一】【旁】【“】【鸡】【蛋】【里】【挑】【骨】【头】【”】【,】【作】【为】【降】【价】【的】【理】【由】【,】【或】【者】【故】【意】【说】【不】【买】【了】【,】【说】【去】【另】【一】【家】【看】【看】【有】【没】【有】【更】【便】【宜】【的】【,】【然】【后】【我】【们】【装】【着】【要】【转】【身】【离】【去】【的】【样】【子】【,】【如】【果】【这】【时】【店】【主】【让】【步】【了】【,】【就】【说】【明】【这】【个】【价】【格】【基】【本】【到】【位】【了】【。】【起】【初】【我】【有】【些】【不】【解】【,】【怀】【疑】【这】【种】【方】【法】【的】【可】【行】【度】【,】【能】【否】【真】【的】【把】【价】【格】【砍】【下】【来】【,】【不】【过】【我】【还】【是】【半】【信】【半】【疑】【地】【跟】【着】【爸】【爸】【进】【了】【商】【店】【。】【我】【们】【如】【法】【实】【施】【精】【心】【排】【演】【好】【的】【双】【簧】【,】【经】【过】【老】【爸】【同】【店】【主】【十】【几】【个】【回】【合】【斗】【智】【斗】【勇】【的】【口】【才】【较】【量】【,】【和】【我】【在】【一】【旁】【煽】【风】【点】【火】【的】【配】【合】【,】【对】【方】【终】【于】【“】【败】【”】【下】【阵】【来】【。】【一】【场】【没】【有】【硝】【烟】【的】【价】【格】【战】【终】【于】【结】【束】【了】【。】【嗨】【!】【你】【还】【别】【说】【,】【原】【价】【3】【2】【0】【元】【的】【卫】【浴】【五】【件】【套】【,】【以】【现】【价】【2】【0】【0】【元】【成】【交】【,】【竟】【省】【了】【1】【2】【0】【元】【哟】【!】【当】【我】【们】【带】【着】【“】【战】【利】【品】【”】【,】【带】【着】【胜】【利】【者】【的】【喜】【悦】【走】【出】【商】【店】【时】【,】【心】【里】【别】【提】【多】【高】【兴】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【回】【家】【的】【路】【上】【,】【爸】【爸】【对】【我】【说】【,】【还】【价】【是】【一】【门】【学】【问】【,】【不】【但】【能】【锻】【炼】【你】【的】【口】【才】【,】【而】【且】【能】【增】【强】【你】【的】【理】【财】【能】【力】【,】【同】【时】【,】【还】【节】【省】【了】【“】【银】【子】【”】【,】【你】【还】【可】【以】【从】【中】【得】【到】【一】【种】【满】【足】【感】【,】【一】【举】【多】【得】【何】【乐】【而】【不】【为】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【一】【次】【尝】【到】【了】【还】【价】【的】【滋】【味】【,】【真】【爽】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【微】【格】【素】【材】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【欲】【凭】【莺】【燕】【留】【春】【住】【,】【无】【奈】【东】【风】【信】【杜】【鹃】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【出】【处】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【宋】【·】【吕】【人】【龙】【《】【春】【归】【》】【:】【“】【过】【却】【清】【明】【艳】【冶】【天】【,】【梨】【花】【飞】【雪】【柳】【森】【烟】【。】【欲】【凭】【莺】【燕】【留】【春】【住】【,】【无】【奈】【东】【风】【信】【杜】【鹃】【。】【”】【(】【过】【去】【了】【,】【这】【清】【丽】【明】【媚】【的】【艳】【阳】【天】【,】【梨】【花】【如】【雪】【飘】【飞】【,】【柳】【条】【密】【密】【如】【烟】【。】【想】【靠】【着】【黄】【莺】【和】【燕】【子】【将】【春】【天】【留】【住】【,】【无】【奈】【习】【习】【的】【东】【风】【只】【相】【信】【杜】【鹃】【鸟】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【哲】【理】【链】【接】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【事】【物】【的】【发】【展】【不】【以】【人】【们】【的】【意】【志】【为】【转】【移】【,】【即】【使】【原】【是】【美】【好】【的】【事】【物】【也】【会】【走】【向】【其】【反】【面】【。】【因】【为】【任】【何】【事】【物】【自】【身】【都】【包】【含】【着】【它】【的】【否】【定】【方】【面】【,】【事】【物】【的】【发】【展】【就】【是】【通】【过】【不】【断】【地】【否】【定】【自】【身】【来】【发】【展】【自】【己】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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