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2019年10月18日 19:30

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【真】【题】【回】【放】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【有】【太】【阳】【的】【地】【方】【,】【昏】【暗】【一】【片】【;】【没】【有】【太】【阳】【的】【时】【候】【,】【凄】【冷】【酷】【寒】【。】【太】【阳】【升】【起】【,】【光】【明】【无】【限】【;】【太】【阳】【升】【起】【,】【生】【机】【盎】【然】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【请】【以】【“】【升】【起】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【”】【为】【题】【目】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【不】【少】【于】【6】【0】【0】【字】【的】【作】【文】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【试】【题】【解】【读】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【山】【东】【潍】【坊】【中】【考】【作】【文】【是】【一】【道】【给】【材】【料】【的】【命】【题】【作】【文】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【对】【于】【所】【给】【材】【料】【,】【一】【定】【要】【明】【确】【材】【料】【的】【内】【涵】【,】【找】【准】【方】【向】【,】【这】【样】【作】【文】【就】【成】【功】【了】【一】【半】【。】【材】【料】【中】【给】【我】【们】【展】【示】【了】【太】【阳】【的】【作】【用】【,】【采】【用】【对】【比】【的】【方】【法】【写】【出】【了】【有】【没】【有】【太】【阳】【所】【带】【来】【的】【不】【同】【后】【果】【。】【这】【则】【材】【料】【给】【我】【们】【的】【启】【发】【是】【:】【只】【要】【我】【们】【心】【中】【有】【一】【个】【升】【起】【的】【太】【阳】【,】【我】【们】【的】【生】【活】【就】【会】【充】【满】【无】【限】【的】【光】【明】【。】【这】【里】【的】【“】【太】【阳】【”】【不】【仅】【仅】【指】【的】【是】【大】【自】【然】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【,】【更】【虚】【指】【一】【些】【在】【人】【类】【历】【史】【发】【展】【过】【程】【中】【涌】【现】【出】【的】【伟】【大】【人】【物】【,】【他】【们】【也】【是】【我】【们】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【,】【我】【们】【也】【可】【以】【写】【这】【些】【人】【和】【事】【给】【我】【们】【的】【启】【发】【,】【以】【及】【他】【们】【的】【精】【神】【对】【我】【们】【的】【鼓】【舞】【,】【等】【等】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【道】【题】【的】【写】【作】【内】【容】【非】【常】【广】【泛】【。】【我】【们】【可】【写】【自】【己】【亲】【身】【经】【历】【的】【事】【,】【写】【自】【己】【在】【人】【生】【旅】【途】【中】【遭】【受】【挫】【折】【、】【失】【败】【、】【困】【惑】【、】【痛】【苦】【后】【,】【为】【了】【“】【升】【起】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【”】【而】【努】【力】【,】【结】【果】【获】【得】【某】【种】【意】【外】【惊】【喜】【;】【也】【可】【写】【身】【边】【的】【人】【和】【事】【,】【因】【为】【他】【们】【使】【“】【我】【”】【“】【升】【起】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【”】【,】【因】【此】【“】【我】【”】【对】【他】【们】【无】【比】【崇】【敬】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【何】【让】【自】【己】【的】【文】【章】【内】【容】【丰】【富】【充】【实】【呢】【?】【在】【构】【思】【时】【,】【可】【运】【用】【对】【比】【、】【先】【抑】【后】【扬】【、】【巧】【设】【悬】【念】【等】【方】【法】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【一】【波】【三】【折】【,】【将】【自】【己】【人】【生】【道】【路】【上】【经】【历】【辛】【酸】【苦】【辣】【后】【的】【所】【想】【所】【得】【,】【或】【者】【将】【对】【自】【己】【影】【响】【大】【的】【一】【些】【人】【和】【事】【,】【淋】【漓】【尽】【致】【地】【展】【现】【在】【读】【者】【面】【前】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【选】【择】【写】【议】【论】【文】【,】【可】【以】【以】【“】【为】【什】【么】【要】【升】【起】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【”】【“】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【给】【你】【的】【启】【示】【”】【为】【中】【心】【,】【确】【立】【恰】【当】【的】【分】【论】【点】【,】【选】【择】【切】【题】【的】【素】【材】【来】【展】【开】【论】【述】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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】【你】【前】【有】【《】【楚】【辞】【》】【的】【磅】【礴】【,】【后】【有】【宋】【词】【的】【婉】【转】【;】【你】【左】【有】【杜】【甫】【的】【沉】【郁】【,】【右】【有】【白】【居】【易】【的】【质】【朴】【。】【然】【而】【这】【些】【都】【不】【能】【遮】【盖】【你】【的】【光】【芒】【。】【你】【尽】【管】【有】【机】【会】【做】【官】【,】【但】【官】【场】【的】【腐】【朽】【与】【皇】【帝】【的】【无】【能】【刺】【痛】【了】【你】【的】【心】【,】【于】【是】【你】【升】【起】【了】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【,】【喊】【着】【“】【安】【能】【摧】【眉】【折】【腰】【事】【权】【贵】【,】【使】【我】【不】【得】【开】【心】【颜】【”】【狂】【笑】【而】【去】【。】【你】【让】【自】【己】【的】【豪】【情】【在】【山】【间】【泼】【洒】【,】【在】【水】【中】【流】【淌】【。】【李】【白】【,】【你】【是】【诗】【中】【之】【仙】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【李】【白】【升】【起】【了】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【,】【照】【耀】【于】【青】【史】【之】【上】【,】【永】【耀】【后】【代】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【南】【山】【秋】【菊】【—】【—】【陶】【潜】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【本】【也】【是】【十】【年】【寒】【窗】【盼】【望】【一】【朝】【得】【意】【的】【才】【子】【,】【你】【本】【也】【热】【衷】【于】【做】【官】【,】【梦】【想】【着】【位】【极】【人】【臣】【。】【然】【而】【,】【在】【看】【到】【百】【姓】【的】【贫】【苦】【与】【官】【员】【的】【腐】【朽】【后】【,】【你】【动】【摇】【了】【。】【因】【为】【你】【无】【力】【改】【变】【,】【于】【是】【你】【升】【起】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【,】【着】【一】【身】【布】【衣】【,】【穿】【一】【双】【草】【鞋】【,】【拄】【一】【根】【竹】【杖】【飘】【然】【离】【去】【,】【在】【山】【间】【与】【秋】【菊】【为】【伴】【,】【留】【给】【世】【人】【一】【个】【坚】【毅】【的】【背】【影】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【陶】【潜】【升】【起】【了】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【,】【于】【是】【,】【泛】【黄】【的】【史】【册】【中】【透】【出】【隐】【约】【的】【菊】【香】【,】【流】【芳】【千】【古】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【渌】【水】【亭】【旁】【—】【—】【纳】【兰】【容】【若】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【是】【真】【正】【的】【八】【旗】【子】【弟】【,】【却】【流】【连】【于】【宋】【词】【之】【间】【;】【你】【有】【着】【别】【人】【艳】【羡】【的】【家】【世】【,】【却】【不】【热】【衷】【于】【官】【场】【仕】【途】【;】【你】【也】【曾】【迷】【茫】【过】【、】【怀】【疑】【过】【、】【无】【助】【过】【,】【不】【过】【你】【最】【终】【升】【起】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【,】【驱】【散】【了】【前】【方】【迷】【雾】【,】【使】【清】【词】【在】【文】【学】【史】【上】【占】【有】【一】【席】【之】【地】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【容】【若】【升】【起】【了】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【,】【让】【清】【词】【散】【发】【出】【了】【夺】【目】【光】【彩】【,】【万】【人】【景】【仰】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【也】【许】【人】【生】【有】【时】【更】【像】【熙】【熙】【攘】【攘】【的】【人】【群】【,】【更】【像】【灰】【黑】【色】【的】【胶】【卷】【,】【但】【只】【要】【你】【升】【起】【心】【中】【的】【太】【阳】【,】【便】【可】【驱】【散】【黑】【暗】【,】【驱】【逐】【寒】【冷】【,】【便】【可】【听】【到】【烈】【风】【的】【呢】【喃】【,】【看】【到】【水】【的】【清】【澈】【,】【触】【到】【云】【的】【温】【柔】【,】【嗅】【到】【全】【世】【界】【的】【花】【香】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【卷】【首】【的】【一】【番】【寓】【意】【深】【刻】【的】【话】【语】【,】【紧】【扣】【主】【题】【,】【导】【入】【自】【然】【。】【行】【文】【中】【,】【作】【者】【手】【法】【娴】【熟】【地】【将】【李】【白】【、】【陶】【潜】【、】【纳】【兰】【容】【若】【等】【文】【学】【巨】【匠】【之】【成】【就】【、】【才】【情】【融】【于】【笔】【下】【,】【突】【出】【了】【主】【题】【,】【汇】【成】【了】【这】【样】【一】【篇】【不】【可】【多】【得】【的】【考】【场】【精】【品】【。】【其】【中】【电】【影】【蒙】【太】【奇】【手】【法】【的】【运】【用】【,】【让】【场】【景】【切】【换】【自】【如】【,】【文】【气】【顺】【畅】【自】【然】【,】【极】【富】【表】【现】【力】【。】【而】【文】【末】【的】【点】【染】【,】【更】【是】【诗】【意】【盎】【然】【,】【升】【华】【了】【文】【章】【的】【审】【美】【境】【界】【。】

【<】【p】【>】【用】【爱】【去】【呵】【护】【每】【一】【个】【脆】【弱】【的】【生】【命】【,】【让】【它】【们】【用】【自】【己】【的】【努】【力】【坚】【强】【的】【过】【程】【变】【成】【瞬】【间】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】兴业证券2011【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【真】【题】【回】【放】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【下】【面】【两】【道】【作】【文】【题】【中】【任】【选】【一】【题】【作】【文】【。】【(】【4】【0】【分】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【一】【)】【“】【我】【的】【_】【_】【老】【师】【”】【,】【横】【线】【处】【可】【选】【填】【“】【语】【文】【”】【“】【数】【学】【”】【“】【英】【语】【”】【…】【…】【等】【学】【科】【名】【称】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【求】【:】【1】【.】【从】【你】【的】【学】【科】【老】【师】【中】【选】【一】【人】【来】【写】【,】【将】【题】【目】【补】【充】【完】【整】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【不】【得】【出】【现】【真】【实】【的】【姓】【名】【、】【校】【名】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【写】【一】【篇】【6】【0】【0】【字】【以】【上】【的】【记】【叙】【文】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【4】【.】【文】【体】【规】【范】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【二】【)】【古】【人】【说】【:】【“】【临】【渊】【羡】【鱼】【,】【不】【如】【退】【而】【结】【网】【。】【”】【生】【活】【中】【我】【们】【不】【乏】【期】【望】【与】【目】【标】【,】【我】【们】【缺】【少】【的】【常】【常】【是】【持】【之】【以】【恒】【的】【努】【力】【。】【你】【对】【此】【有】【何】【见】【解】【?】【请】【自】【拟】【题】【目】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【议】【论】【文】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【求】【:】【1】【.】【观】【点】【鲜】【明】【,】【说】【理】【充】【分】【。】【2】【.】【6】【0】【0】【字】【以】【上】【。】【3】【.】【文】【体】【规】【范】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【试】【题】【解】【读】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【桂】【林】【多】【年】【来】【的】【中】【考】【作】【文】【题】【总】【是】【命】【题】【与】【半】【命】【题】【,】【题】【目】【内】【容】【上】【是】【关】【注】【校】【园】【生】【活】【的】【,】【这】【是】【桂】【林】【中】【考】【作】【文】【命】【题】【的】【一】【个】【特】【点】【,】【多】【年】【延】【续】【这】【个】【理】【念】【。】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【采】【用】【选】【题】【作】【文】【,】【实】【际】【上】【可】【以】【说】【是】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【与】【材】【料】【作】【文】【的】【组】【合】【。】【这】【样】【就】【是】【在】【往】【年】【的】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【上】【多】【了】【一】【道】【材】【料】【,】【这】【要】【比】【往】【年】【选】【择】【的】【范】【围】【更】【宽】【一】【点】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【里】【第】【一】【个】【题】【目】【“】【我】【的】【_】【_】【老】【师】【”】【,】【这】【道】【题】【目】【有】【提】【示】【,】【我】【们】【就】【可】【以】【根】【据】【提】【示】【先】【联】【想】【到】【各】【个】【年】【级】【的】【各】【科】【老】【师】【,】【估】【计】【不】【会】【少】【于】【二】【三】【十】【位】【老】【师】【吧】【,】【那】【么】【你】【对】【谁】【的】【印】【象】【最】【深】【,】【你】【最】【熟】【悉】【谁】【,】【你】【能】【讲】【出】【他】【的】【什】【么】【特】【点】【,】【你】【与】【他】【交】【集】【在】【哪】【里】【,】【你】【知】【道】【他】【哪】【些】【生】【活】【与】【教】【学】【上】【的】【特】【点】【,】【就】【选】【取】【他】【来】【写】【吧】【。】【选】【取】【你】【知】【道】【的】【他】【真】【实】【的】【生】【活】【事】【例】【,】【运】【用】【生】【活】【中】【的】【素】【材】【,】【可】【以】【集】【中】【笔】【墨】【写】【他】【生】【活】【中】【令】【人】【难】【以】【忘】【怀】【的】【一】【言】【一】【行】【,】【或】【者】【将】【他】【的】【事】【迹】【分】【几】【方】【面】【来】【写】【,】【如】【家】【庭】【、】【工】【作】【、】【平】【时】【生】【活】【等】【。】【一】【段】【事】【例】【体】【现】【一】【个】【特】【点】【,】【有】【一】【定】【的】【逻】【辑】【顺】【序】【,】【有】【条】【理】【地】【描】【述】【即】【可】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【二】【道】【题】【目】【是】【材】【料】【作】【文】【,】【这】【里】【就】【是】【要】【求】【学】【生】【阅】【读】【这】【则】【材】【料】【,】【提】【炼】【出】【自】【己】【的】【一】【个】【观】【点】【与】【想】【法】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【议】【论】【文】【。】【其】【实】【这】【句】【格】【言】【,】【我】【们】【是】【很】【熟】【悉】【的】【,】【我】【们】【对】【此】【肯】【定】【有】【许】【多】【看】【法】【,】【这】【样】【的】【议】【论】【文】【是】【我】【们】【比】【较】【好】【掌】【握】【的】【。】【我】【们】【可】【以】【通】【过】【“】【坐】【观】【垂】【钓】【者】【,】【徒】【有】【羡】【鱼】【情】【”】【,】【引】【申】【出】【不】【要】【空】【怀】【实】【现】【理】【想】【的】【激】【情】【,】【要】【为】【自】【己】【的】【理】【想】【付】【诸】【行】【动】【。】【如】【作】【为】【学】【生】【,】【实】【现】【自】【己】【人】【生】【理】【想】【的】【前】【提】【就】【是】【要】【掌】【握】【扎】【实】【的】【基】【础】【知】【识】【。】【还】【可】【以】【沿】【着】【这】【句】【话】【的】【意】【思】【写】【下】【去】【,】【即】【,】【这】【句】【话】【中】【体】【现】【的】【生】【活】【心】【态】【也】【是】【值】【得】【学】【习】【的】【,】【那】【就】【是】【看】【到】【别】【人】【的】【目】【标】【达】【到】【时】【,】【你】【要】【给】【予】【鼓】【掌】【与】【呐】【喊】【;】【并】【将】【这】【些】【人】【的】【思】【考】【方】【式】【学】【为】【己】【用】【,】【这】【样】【自】【己】【也】【会】【解】【决】【自】【己】【的】【问】【题】【,】【达】【到】【自】【己】【的】【期】【望】【目】【标】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【考】【场】【佳】【作】【一】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【的】【物】【理】【老】【师】【 】【桂】【林】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【提】【到】【我】【的】【物】【理】【老】【师】【,】【我】【心】【里】【就】【无】【比】【激】【动】【,】【对】【于】【他】【,】【我】【怀】【有】【感】【激】【、】【歉】【意】【与】【敬】【意】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【是】【我】【的】【班】【主】【任】【,】【是】【我】【刚】【上】【初】【二】【时】【,】【来】【当】【我】【们】【班】【主】【任】【的】【。】【第】【一】【次】【见】【面】【时】【,】【他】【给】【我】【一】【种】【威】【严】【的】【感】【觉】【,】【当】【时】【我】【还】【以】【为】【他】【是】【很】【讨】【人】【厌】【的】【,】【肯】【定】【对】【我】【们】【“】【凶】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【后】【来】【我】【发】【现】【他】【还】【是】【很】【不】【错】【的】【。】【他】【为】【人】【很】【随】【和】【,】【处】【理】【事】【情】【合】【情】【合】【理】【,】【很】【尊】【重】【大】【家】【的】【意】【见】【,】【善】【解】【人】【意】【,】【为】【人】【正】【直】【,】【比】【较】【和】【蔼】【。】【可】【如】【果】【惹】【他】【发】【火】【,】【他】【也】【会】【不】【顾】【一】【切】【,】【怒】【发】【冲】【冠】【。】【他】【原】【来】【当】【过】【校】【长】【,】【他】【的】【教】【育】【理】【念】【是】【“】【以】【人】【为】【本】【”】【,】【处】【理】【班】【上】【的】【事】【情】【尊】【重】【民】【意】【,】【集】【中】【民】【智】【,】【常】【与】【大】【家】【商】【量】【解】【决】【的】【办】【法】【,】【所】【以】【我】【们】【大】【家】【都】【很】【敬】【重】【他】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【教】【学】【方】【面】【,】【他】【是】【很】【优】【秀】【的】【。】【他】【善】【于】【运】【用】【启】【发】【式】【教】【学】【,】【常】【结】【合】【我】【们】【的】【生】【活】【实】【际】【,】【与】【时】【俱】【进】【,】【讲】【的】【东】【西】【大】【家】【爱】【听】【,】【他】【常】【常】【让】【课】【堂】【充】【满】【笑】【声】【,】【让】【大】【家】【在】【笑】【声】【中】【愉】【快】【地】【学】【到】【知】【识】【,】【深】【入】【地】【理】【解】【物】【理】【的】【基】【本】【原】【理】【与】【事】【物】【的】【性】【质】【。】【比】【如】【他】【讲】【《】【电】【》】【这】【节】【,】【电】【同】【性】【相】【斥】【,】【异】【性】【相】【吸】【,】【他】【就】【说】【:】【“】【这】【个】【电】【就】【与】【人】【一】【样】【,】【男】【女】【相】【吸】【,】【但】【是】【同】【性】【相】【斥】【”】【。】【这】【样】【大】【家】【就】【很】【容】【易】【记】【住】【电】【的】【这】【个】【性】【质】【。】【他】【还】【经】【常】【带】【我】【们】【去】【实】【验】【室】【里】【做】【实】【验】【,】【让】【我】【们】【在】【实】【际】【操】【作】【中】【学】【到】【知】【识】【,】【体】【验】【物】【理】【科】【学】【的】【神】【奇】【。】【正】【是】【有】【了】【物】【理】【老】【师】【好】【的】【教】【学】【方】【法】【,】【我】【们】【班】【的】【物】【理】【成】【绩】【很】【好】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【我】【的】【心】【里】【,】【他】【就】【像】【父】【亲】【—】【样】【爱】【护】【我】【们】【。】【他】【很】【善】【于】【做】【思】【想】【工】【作】【。】【有】【一】【段】【时】【间】【,】【我】【与】【班】【上】【的】【另】【一】【个】【同】【学】【一】【起】【逃】【课】【,】【他】【就】【把】【我】【找】【来】【,】【并】【没】【有】【责】【骂】【我】【,】【而】【是】【语】【重】【心】【长】【地】【给】【我】【讲】【了】【许】【多】【道】【理】【。】【他】【的】【一】【席】【话】【打】【动】【了】【我】【,】【让】【我】【懂】【得】【好】【好】【学】【习】【才】【对】【得】【起】【父】【母】【,】【对】【得】【起】【自】【己】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【还】【有】【一】【次】【,】【我】【在】【月】【考】【中】【成】【绩】【下】【滑】【了】【很】【多】【,】【他】【就】【找】【我】【了】【解】【实】【际】【情】【况】【。】【后】【来】【知】【道】【我】【是】【感】【到】【升】【学】【的】【压】【力】【太】【大】【,】【对】【学】【习】【失】【去】【了】【信】【心】【,】【他】【就】【教】【我】【减】【压】【的】【方】【法】【。】【我】【试】【着】【用】【他】【教】【的】【方】【法】【调】【节】【自】【己】【,】【果】【然】【不】【久】【这】【种】【情】【况】【就】【好】【转】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【就】【是】【我】【的】【物】【理】【老】【师】【,】【他】【具】【有】【先】【进】【的】【教】【育】【理】【念】【,】【科】【学】【的】【教】【学】【方】【法】【,】【寓】【教】【于】【乐】【的】【教】【育】【手】【段】【,】【是】【很】【值】【得】【我】【们】【佩】【服】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【条】【理】【清】【楚】【。】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【采】【取】【一】【个】【段】【落】【描】【写】【物】【理】【老】【师】【特】【点】【的】【方】【法】【,】【从】【管】【理】【、】【教】【学】【、】【思】【想】【教】【育】【等】【几】【方】【面】【来】【写】【,】【给】【人】【线】【索】【明】【晰】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【语】【言】【生】【动】【。】【把】【生】【活】【中】【许】【多】【新】【鲜】【的】【语】【言】【都】【用】【到】【作】【文】【中】【。】【如】【“】【他】【善】【于】【运】【用】【启】【发】【式】【教】【学】【,】【常】【结】【合】【我】【们】【的】【生】【活】【实】【际】【,】【与】【时】【俱】【进】【,】【讲】【的】【东】【西】【大】【家】【爱】【听】【”】【中】【的】【“】【与】【时】【俱】【进】【”】【就】【具】【有】【时】【代】【特】【征】【,】【很】【有】【思】【想】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【巧】【妙】【点】【题】【。】【在】【结】【尾】【处】【说】【:】【“】【这】【就】【是】【我】【的】【物】【理】【老】【师】【,】【他】【具】【有】【先】【进】【的】【教】【育】【理】【念】【,】【科】【学】【的】【教】【学】【方】【法】【,】【寓】【教】【于】【乐】【的】【教】【育】【手】【段】【,】【是】【很】【值】【得】【我】【们】【佩】【服】【的】【。】【”】【既】【达】【到】【了】【点】【题】【的】【效】【果】【,】【又】【深】【化】【了】【主】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【考】【场】【佳】【作】【二】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【的】【生】【活】【指】【导】【老】【师】【 】【桂】【林】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【是】【清】【晨】【的】【露】【珠】【,】【有】【一】【颗】【晶】【莹】【剔】【透】【的】【心】【;】【你】【是】【天】【空】【中】【的】【那】【颗】【启】【明】【星】【,】【指】【引】【着】【我】【成】【长】【的】【道】【路】【;】【你】【是】【黑】【暗】【中】【的】【一】【根】【火】【柴】【,】【点】【燃】【了】【我】【求】【知】【的】【欲】【望】【。】【我】【今】【天】【由】【衷】【地】【赞】【美】【你】【,】【我】【的】【生】【活】【指】【导】【老】【师】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【我】【刚】【来】【这】【里】【读】【书】【时】【,】【就】【发】【现】【你】【在】【我】【们】【宿】【舍】【值】【班】【室】【值】【班】【,】【我】【在】【这】【里】【读】【了】【三】【年】【,】【你】【就】【在】【我】【们】【宿】【舍】【坚】【守】【了】【三】【年】【。】【本】【来】【你】【的】【任】【务】【只】【是】【看】【着】【东】【西】【不】【要】【被】【人】【偷】【去】【,】【但】【你】【遇】【到】【了】【我】【们】【之】【后】【,】【却】【又】【增】【加】【了】【一】【份】【任】【务】【,】【那】【就】【是】【对】【我】【们】【无】【微】【不】【至】【的】【关】【怀】【。】【我】【生】【病】【了】【,】【向】【你】【借】【钱】【,】【你】【从】【来】【都】【是】【亳】【不】【犹】【豫】【地】【借】【给】【我】【。】【我】【吃】【药】【需】【要】【开】【水】【,】【来】【向】【你】【要】【,】【无】【论】【多】【少】【次】【,】【你】【总】【是】【热】【情】【地】【给】【我】【。】【你】【的】【心】【真】【好】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【得】【我】【们】【刚】【来】【这】【里】【时】【,】【不】【懂】【得】【学】【校】【里】【的】【规】【矩】【,】【不】【会】【叠】【被】【子】【和】【打】【扫】【卫】【生】【,】【你】【就】【来】【给】【我】【们】【细】【心】【地】【讲】【解】【,】【并】【一】【个】【一】【个】【地】【教】【我】【们】【叠】【被】【子】【。】【你】【教】【导】【我】【们】【时】【那】【种】【严】【肃】【的】【态】【度】【、】【严】【格】【的】【要】【求】【、】【严】【明】【的】【纪】【律】【一】【下】【子】【就】【把】【我】【们】【震】【慑】【住】【了】【,】【我】【们】【只】【得】【跟】【着】【你】【把】【被】【子】【叠】【得】【像】【“】【豆】【腐】【块】【”】【。】【你】【还】【教】【我】【们】【打】【扫】【卫】【生】【、】【整】【理】【内】【务】【,】【教】【我】【们】【按】【先】【后】【次】【序】【排】【队】【吃】【饭】【、】【接】【水】【、】【进】【出】【大】【门】【等】【。】【你】【的】【这】【些】【礼】【节】【让】【我】【们】【这】【些】【从】【农】【村】【来】【的】【孩】【子】【大】【开】【眼】【界】【,】【你】【是】【一】【道】【开】【启】【我】【们】【懵】【懂】【心】【灵】【的】【亮】【光】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【到】【初】【三】【时】【,】【我】【由】【于】【贪】【玩】【,】【学】【习】【成】【绩】【渐】【渐】【滑】【坡】【,】【以】【致】【有】【一】【次】【没】【有】【考】【好】【。】【生】【来】【脆】【弱】【的】【我】【禁】【不】【住】【如】【此】【沉】【重】【的】【打】【击】【,】【流】【下】【了】【眼】【泪】【。】【我】【想】【我】【已】【经】【不】【适】【合】【学】【习】【了】【,】【想】【趁】【早】【出】【去】【打】【工】【。】【就】【在】【这】【时】【,】【是】【你】【轻】【轻】【叩】【开】【了】【我】【郁】【闷】【的】【心】【扉】【。】【你】【循】【循】【善】【诱】【,】【耐】【心】【地】【开】【导】【我】【,】【让】【我】【鼓】【起】【继】【续】【学】【习】【的】【勇】【气】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【至】【今】【还】【记】【得】【你】【对】【我】【说】【:】【“】【生】【活】【的】【道】【路】【不】【是】【一】【帆】【风】【顺】【的】【,】【都】【会】【遇】【到】【风】【浪】【,】【遇】【到】【风】【浪】【,】【跌】【倒】【了】【不】【算】【什】【么】【,】【可】【以】【再】【爬】【起】【来】【啊】【!】【不】【经】【风】【雨】【哪】【里】【能】【见】【到】【彩】【虹】【?】【不】【经】【历】【失】【败】【,】【就】【不】【会】【有】【成】【功】【的】【喜】【悦】【,】【相】【信】【自】【己】【,】【一】【定】【能】【行】【…】【…】【”】【我】【那】【时】【茅】【塞】【顿】【开】【,】【我】【没】【有】【放】【弃】【学】【习】【。】【经】【过】【一】【段】【时】【间】【的】【努】【力】【,】【我】【的】【学】【习】【成】【绩】【直】【线】【上】【升】【,】【我】【也】【重】【新】【获】【得】【了】【学】【习】【的】【信】【心】【与】【动】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【的】【生】【活】【指】【导】【老】【师】【,】【你】【是】【一】【株】【常】【春】【藤】【,】【永】【远】【都】【给】【我】【春】【天】【般】【的】【幸】【福】【。】【你】【为】【我】【的】【成】【长】【付】【出】【了】【许】【多】【心】【血】【,】【在】【此】【,】【千】【言】【万】【语】【汇】【成】【一】【句】【话】【:】【“】【谢】【谢】【你】【,】【我】【的】【生】【活】【指】【导】【老】【师】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【事】【例】【精】【当】【。】【文】【章】【选】【择】【了】【生】【活】【老】【师】【生】【活】【上】【教】【我】【整】【理】【内】【务】【,】【思】【想】【动】【摇】【时】【安】【慰】【我】【等】【几】【个】【事】【例】【,】【这】【样】【选】【材】【很】【精】【当】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【笔】【优】【美】【。】【结】【尾】【处】【对】【老】【师】【深】【情】【的】【赞】【颂】【,】【语】【言】【优】【美】【。】【“】【你】【是】【一】【株】【常】【春】【藤】【,】【永】【远】【都】【给】【我】【春】【天】【般】【的】【幸】【福】【。】【你】【为】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【是】【一】【项】【复】【杂】【的】【创】【作】【,】【其】【语】【言】【要】【求】【是】【多】【方】【面】【的】【。】【有】【时】【,】【当】【我】【们】【写】【完】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【后】【,】【感】【觉】【文】【章】【结】【构】【完】【整】【,】【行】【文】【流】【畅】【,】【文】【从】【字】【顺】【,】【似】【乎】【已】【经】【找】【不】【出】【什】【么】【毛】【病】【了】【。】【其】【实】【不】【然】【,】【因】【为】【文】【章】【不】【仅】【会】【有】【语】【法】【方】【面】【的】【错】【误】【,】【有】【时】【还】【会】【有】【非】【语】【法】【方】【面】【的】【错】【误】【。】【语】【法】【错】【误】【显】【而】【易】【见】【,】【通】【常】【人】【们】【也】【比】【较】【重】【视】【,】【而】【非】【语】【法】【错】【误】【往】【往】【比】【较】【隐】【蔽】【,】【—】【般】【人】【不】【易】【察】【觉】【,】【所】【以】【笔】【者】【称】【之】【为】【“】【另】【类】【”】【错】【误】【。】【什】【么】【是】【文】【章】【中】【的】【非】【语】【法】【错】【误】【呢】【?】【从】【字】【面】【上】【讲】【,】【就】【是】【语】【法】【错】【误】【之】【外】【的】【错】【误】【。】【那】【么】【,】【作】【文】【中】【一】【般】【有】【哪】【些】【“】【另】【类】【”】【的】【非】【语】【法】【错】【误】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【观】【察】【描】【写】【类】【错】【误】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【凭】【空】【想】【象】【,】【描】【写】【失】【真】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【例】【1】【:】【“】【国】【庆】【节】【,】【我】【和】【表】【哥】【来】【到】【了】【北】【京】【,】【游】【览】【了】【天】【坛】【公】【园】【。】【虽】【说】【已】【是】【深】【秋】【,】【可】【公】【园】【里】【依】【旧】【盛】【开】【着】【各】【种】【各】【样】【的】【鲜】【花】【,】【素】【洁】【高】【雅】【的】【菊】【花】【、】【雍】【容】【华】【贵】【的】【牡】【丹】【…】【…】【它】【们】【争】【奇】【斗】【艳】【,】【互】【不】【相】【让】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【只】【要】【具】【备】【一】【点】【花】【卉】【知】【识】【的】【人】【就】【会】【知】【道】【,】【菊】【花】【和】【牡】【丹】【的】【花】【期】【不】【一】【样】【。】【在】【北】【京】【,】【菊】【花】【是】【秋】【天】【开】【放】【,】【而】【牡】【丹】【则】【在】【春】【天】【开】【花】【,】【它】【们】【不】【可】【能】【在】【一】【起】【“】【争】【奇】【斗】【艳】【”】【,】【这】【怕】【是】【作】【者】【的】【凭】【空】【想】【象】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【例】【2】【:】【“】【月】【亮】【像】【玉】【盘】【,】【像】【明】【镜】【,】【高】【高】【地】【挂】【在】【天】【空】【,】【放】【射】【出】【皎】【洁】【的】【光】【亮】【。】【满】【天】【的】【繁】【星】【晶】【莹】【明】【亮】【,】【闪】【烁】【着】【璀】【璨】【的】【清】【辉】【。】【银】【河】【两】【边】【各】【有】【一】【颗】【星】【星】【格】【外】【醒】【目】【,】【那】【是】【传】【说】【中】【的】【牛】【郎】【织】【女】【在】【翘】【首】【相】【望】【…】【…】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【个】【同】【学】【在】【《】【中】【秋】【月】【夜】【》】【里】【描】【写】【夜】【景】【的】【一】【段】【话】【,】【初】【看】【,】【这】【段】【景】【物】【描】【写】【语】【言】【优】【美】【,】【为】【大】【家】【展】【示】【出】【一】【幅】【迷】【人】【的】【夜】【景】【图】【,】【但】【仔】【细】【一】【读】【,】【问】【题】【出】【来】【了】【:】【古】【语】【就】【有】【“】【月】【朗】【星】【稀】【”】【的】【说】【法】【,】【而】【作】【者】【让】【“】【月】【亮】【”】【和】【“】【繁】【星】【”】【同】【时】【闪】【亮】【登】【场】【,】【不】【符】【合】【自】【然】【规】【律】【,】【描】【写】【失】【真】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【“】【此】【景】【”】【和】【“】【彼】【景】【”】【混】【淆】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【例】【3】【:】【“】【小】【麦】【快】【熟】【了】【。】【沉】【甸】【甸】【的】【麦】【穗】【把】【麦】【秆】【压】【弯】【了】【腰】【,】【农】【民】【伯】【伯】【看】【着】【这】【丰】【收】【的】【景】【象】【,】【高】【兴】【得】【合】【不】【拢】【嘴】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【一】【句】【中】【作】【者】【用】【“】【沉】【甸】【甸】【”】【来】【形】【容】【麦】【穗】【,】【不】【够】【准】【确】【,】【这】【是】【把】【观】【察】【稻】【谷】【的】【印】【象】【移】【到】【了】【麦】【子】【上】【了】【。】【麦】【子】【只】【要】【一】【弯】【腰】【,】【那】【就】【不】【只】【是】【“】【快】【熟】【了】【”】【,】【而】【是】【熟】【过】【头】【了】【。】【熟】【过】【头】【的】【麦】【子】【一】【动】【就】【掉】【粒】【。】【农】【民】【对】【这】【种】【现】【象】【,】【是】【不】【会】【有】【闲】【心】【欣】【赏】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【“】【近】【景】【”】【和】【“】【远】【景】【”】【掺】【和】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【例】【4】【:】【“】【我】【走】【进】【山】【谷】【,】【忽】【听】【得】【一】【阵】【笑】【声】【随】【风】【飘】【来】【。】【循】【声】【望】【去】【,】【一】【群】【‘】【红】【领】【巾】【’】【正】【在】【对】【面】【山】【坡】【植】【树】【。】【他】【们】【抬】【水】【的】【抬】【水】【,】【刨】【坑】【的】【刨】【坑】【。】【个】【个】【脸】【上】【都】【挂】【着】【大】【而】【晶】【莹】【的】【汗】【珠】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【唐】【代】【诗】【人】【王】【维】【写】【过】【一】【本】【谈】【绘】【画】【经】【验】【的】【书】【—】【—】【《】【山】【水】【论】【》】【,】【书】【中】【有】【“】【远】【人】【无】【目】【”】【的】【说】【法】【。】【意】【思】【是】【画】【远】【处】【的】【人】【,】【不】【要】【画】【眼】【睛】【,】【因】【为】【看】【不】【清】【楚】【。】【连】【眼】【睛】【都】【看】【不】【清】【楚】【,】【怎】【能】【看】【到】【这】【汗】【珠】【“】【大】【而】【晶】【莹】【”】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【想】【象】【联】【想】【类】【错】【误】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【“】【景】【语】【”】【和】【“】【情】【语】【”】【冲】【突】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【例】【5】【:】【“】【夕】【阳】【如】【血】【,】【落】【在】【西】【山】【的】【崖】【顶】【上】【,】【缕】【缕】【红】【光】【渗】【透】【山】【涧】【,】【那】【是】【利】【比】【亚】【人】【民】【在】【美】【军】【的】【屠】【刀】【下】【流】【淌】【的】【鲜】【血】【,】【它】【染】【红】【了】【山】【冈】【,】【染】【红】【了】【树】【叶】【,】【溅】【红】【了】【山】【腰】【上】【缠】【绕】【的】【云】【雾】【…】【…】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【文】【章】【《】【夕】【阳】【礼】【赞】【》】【中】【的】【一】【段】【文】【字】【,】【文】【章】【的】【题】【眼】【是】【“】【赞】【”】【,】【前】【文】【一】【直】【都】【在】【赞】【美】【“】【夕】【阳】【像】【那】【些】【志】【士】【仁】【人】【一】【样】【,】【临】【终】【前】【也】【要】【燃】【尽】【最】【后】【一】【抹】【绚】【丽】【的】【光】【”】【,】【这】【里】【却】【突】【然】【生】【发】【出】【这】【么】【一】【段】【想】【象】【之】【景】【,】【给】【人】【一】【种】【悲】【凉】【凄】【怆】【之】【感】【,】【其】【情】【感】【基】【调】【与】【前】【文】【截】【然】【相】【反】【,】【极】【不】【和】【谐】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【“】【后】【景】【”】【和】【“】【前】【景】【”】【矛】【盾】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【例】【6】【:】【“】【到】【了】【山】【顶】【,】【俯】【瞰】【南】【闸】【像】【一】【根】【腰】【带】【将】【虎】【渡】【河】【系】【住】【,】【此】【时】【闸】【的】【上】【游】【没】【有】【了】【昨】【日】【千】【帆】【竞】【发】【、】【百】【舸】【争】【流】【的】【景】【象】【,】【下】【游】【也】【缺】【少】【了】【往】【昔】【回】【流】【激】【荡】【、】【猛】【狼】【若】【奔】【的】【气】【势】【。】【山】【的】【鞍】【部】【有】【两】【座】【寺】【庙】【,】【看】【不】【见】【往】【日】【缭】【绕】【的】【云】【雾】【,】【已】【是】【菩】【萨】【依】【旧】【在】【,】【僧】【去】【寺】【庙】【空】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【文】【章】【《】【初】【游】【黄】【山】【头】【》】【末】【尾】【的】【一】【段】【景】【物】【描】【写】【,】【文】【题】【为】【“】【初】【游】【”】【,】【前】【文】【没】【有】【描】【绘】【黄】【山】【头】【昔】【日】【的】【景】【象】【,】【作】【者】【却】【在】【这】【一】【段】【中】【联】【想】【到】【黄】【山】【头】【“】【昨】【日】【”】【“】【往】【昔】【”】【“】【往】【日】【”】【的】【繁】【华】【场】【面】【,】【前】【后】【矛】【盾】【。】【这】【种】【联】【想】【之】【景】【表】【面】【看】【起】【来】【优】【美】【如】【画】【,】【但】【对】【文】【章】【的】【整】【体】【而】【言】【却】【是】【败】【笔】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【常】【识】【类】【知】【识】【错】【误】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【例】【7】【:】【“】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【7】【月】【2】【0】【日】【,】【世】【界】【篮】【球】【巨】【星】【、】【圣】【安】【东】【尼】【奥】【马】【刺】【队】【著】【名】【球】【员】【姚】【明】【在】【上】【海】【浦】【东】【嘉】【里】【酒】【店】【召】【开】【‘】【明】【谢】【’】【新】【闻】【发】【布】【会】【,】【正】【式】【宣】【布】【退】【役】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【些】【体】【育】【常】【识】【的】【人】【都】【知】【道】【,】【姚】【明】【是】【N】【B】【A】【的】【休】【斯】【敦】【火】【箭】【队】【球】【员】【,】【不】【是】【圣】【安】【东】【尼】【奥】【马】【刺】【队】【球】【员】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【例】【8】【:】【“】【月】【食】【这】【种】【天】【文】【现】【象】【是】【不】【常】【见】【的】【。】【那】【么】【,】【什】【么】【时】【候】【会】【出】【现】【月】【食】【呢】【?】【这】【取】【决】【于】【太】【阳】【、】【地】【球】【和】【月】【亮】【三】【者】【的】【位】【置】【。】【只】【有】【月】【球】【运】【行】【到】【地】【球】【和】【太】【阳】【的】【中】【间】【时】【才】【会】【出】【现】【月】【食】【现】【象】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【月】【球】【运】【行】【到】【地】【球】【和】【太】【阳】【的】【中】【间】【时】【,】【会】【产】【生】【日】【食】【现】【象】【,】【而】【非】【月】【食】【现】【象】【。】【当】【地】【球】【运】【行】【到】【月】【球】【和】【太】【阳】【中】【间】【时】【才】【会】【产】【生】【月】【食】【现】【象】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【么】【,】【怎】【样】【才】【能】【避】【免】【作】【文】【中】【的】【这】【些】【另】【类】【错】【误】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【首】【先】【,】【要】【有】【严】【谨】【的】【写】【作】【态】【度】【。】【写】【作】【是】【一】【项】【综】【合】【性】【十】【分】【强】【的】【活】【动】【。】【作】【文】【时】【会】【涉】【及】【各】【种】【各】【样】【的】【知】【识】【,】【要】【求】【大】【家】【对】【百】【科】【知】【识】【都】【了】【然】【于】【胸】【是】【不】【可】【能】【的】【,】【也】【是】【不】【现】【实】【的】【,】【但】【这】【并】【不】【是】【说】【对】【我】【们】【作】【文】【中】【遇】【到】【的】【不】【熟】【悉】【的】【知】【识】【就】【可】【以】【放】【任】【不】【管】【,】【就】【可】【以】【想】【当】【然】【。】【相】【反】【我】【们】【应】【该】【抱】【着】【对】【读】【者】【负】【责】【、】【对】【自】【己】【负】【责】【的】【严】【谨】【态】【度】【,】【敢】【于】【质】【疑】【,】【依】【据】【工】【具】【书】【和】【相】【关】【资】【料】【,】【把】【不】【清】【楚】【、】【不】【明】【白】【的】【地】【方】【搞】【懂】【,】【使】【文】【章】【真】【实】【客】【观】【地】【反】【映】【实】【际】【,】【像】【文】【中】【例】【7】【、】【例】【8】【的】【错】【误】【就】【可】【以】【避】【免】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【其】【次】【,】【要】【有】【敏】【锐】【的】【观】【察】【能】【力】【。】【文】【章】【是】【客】【观】【事】【物】【的】【反】【映】【,】【而】【客】【观】【事】【物】【是】【纷】【繁】【复】【杂】【的】【。】【这】【就】【要】【求】【我】【们】【平】【时】【要】【认】【真】【细】【心】【地】【观】【察】【生】【活】【,】【体】【验】【生】【活】【,】【把】【事】【物】【看】【清】【楚】【,】【想】【清】【楚】【,】【进】【而】【写】【清】【楚】【。】【否】【则】【,】【文】【中】【就】【会】【出】【现】【这】【样】【或】【那】【样】【的】【问】【题】【。】【如】【本】【文】【例】【1】【到】【例】【4】【的】【错】【误】【可】【以】【说】【都】【是】【由】【于】【没】【有】【细】【致】【地】【观】【察】【造】【成】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【再】【次】【,】【要】【有】【一】【定】【的】【写】【作】【技】【巧】【。】【写】【作】【技】【巧】【对】【作】【文】【有】【一】【定】【的】【指】【导】【作】【用】【,】【缺】【少】【必】【要】【的】【写】【作】【技】【巧】【往】【往】【也】【会】【使】【文】【章】【出】【错】【。】【如】【例】【5】【和】【例】【6】【就】【属】【于】【这】【种】【类】【型】【。】【这】【里】【笔】【者】【以】【例】【5】【为】【例】【进】【行】【简】【单】【的】【分】【析】【。】【人】【们】【常】【说】【“】【一】【切】【景】【语】【皆】【情】【语】【”】【,】【就】【是】【说】【要】【把】【景】【物】【描】【写】【和】【人】【物】【的】【主】【观】【感】【情】【有】【机】【结】【合】【起】【来】【,】【让】【景】【物】【体】【现】【人】【物】【心】【情】【,】【使】【外】【景】【和】【内】【情】【高】【度】【融】【合】【,】【这】【是】【人】【们】【普】【遍】【的】【审】【美】【观】【点】【。】【可】【仍】【有】【人】【不】【明】【白】【这】【个】【道】【理】【,】【不】【能】【很】【好】【地】【处】【理】【“】【景】【语】【”】【和】【“】【情】【语】【”】【的】【关】【系】【,】【作】【文】【就】【容】【易】【出】【错】【。】【他】【们】【常】【常】【会】【让】【一】【个】【心】【情】【沉】【重】【的】【人】【去】【欣】【赏】【“】【月】【亮】【穿】【过】【轻】【云】【,】【露】【出】【了】【笑】【脸】【”】【;】【让】【一】【个】【兴】【高】【采】【烈】【的】【人】【去】【驱】【赶】【“】【唧】【唧】【喳】【喳】【的】【山】【鸟】【”】【,】【去】【践】【踏】【“】【满】【山】【遍】【野】【的】【山】【花】【”】【。】【本】【想】【给】【文】【章】【增】【添】【美】【感】【,】【结】【果】【却】【是】【弄】【巧】【成】【拙】【,】【使】【文】【章】【黯】【然】【失】【色】【。】兴业证券2011【<】【p】【>】【朋】【友】【要】【回】【来】【了】【,】【让】【我】【带】【上】【金】【鱼】【去】【火】【车】【站】【。】【我】【能】【想】【象】【她】【的】【愤】【怒】【。】【当】【她】【看】【到】【那】【空】【的】【鱼】【缸】【,】【我】【更】【能】【想】【象】【到】【她】【对】【我】【的】【不】【解】【与】【怀】【疑】【,】【事】【实】【果】【如】【所】【料】【,】【当】【朋】【友】【知】【道】【真】【相】【后】【毅】【然】【离】【我】【而】【去】【,】【留】【下】【我】【一】【人】【在】【火】【车】【站】【徘】【徊】【。】【委】【屈】【的】【泪】【水】【模】【糊】【了】【视】【野】【,】【我】【在】【心】【中】【千】【遍】【万】【遍】【呼】【唤】【:】【其】【实】【,】【我】【不】【愿】【骗】【你】【,】【我】【一】【直】【很】【珍】【惜】【你】【的】【友】【谊】【。】【可】【是】【现】【在】【又】【有】【什】【么】【用】【呢】【?】【天】【空】【中】【又】【一】【次】【下】【起】【了】【那】【绵】【绵】【的】【细】【雨】【,】【溅】【落】【到】【伞】【布】【上】【,】【如】【同】【在】【弹】【奏】【一】【曲】【离】【歌】【,】【或】【许】【天】【是】【能】【理】【解】【我】【的】【良】【苦】【用】【心】【。】【可】【是】【,】【朋】【友】【呢】【?】【<】【/】【p】【>】

兴业证券2011:女中学生校长

【<】【p】【>】【小】【蜗】【牛】【在】【一】【片】【草】【叶】【上】【爬】【行】【,】【一】【阵】【风】【吹】【过】【,】【幼】【小】【的】【小】【蜗】【牛】【,】【不】【禁】【被】【风】【吹】【倒】【在】【地】【,】【在】【将】【要】【掉】【到】【地】【上】【时】【,】【一】【股】【有】【劲】【的】【力】【量】【推】【动】【了】【它】【,】【哦】【是】【蜗】【妈】【妈】【,】【那】【一】【个】【瞬】【间】【那】【么】【美】【,】【蜗】【牛】【妈】【妈】【的】【小】【小】【的】【扶】【把】【,】【都】【充】【满】【了】【爱】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】兴业证券2011【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【很】【多】【时】【候】【。】【由】【于】【我】【们】【的】【粗】【心】【,】【会】【失】【去】【许】【多】【美】【好】【的】【东】【西】【,】【有】【些】【东】【西】【,】【今】【生】【今】【世】【可】【能】【找】【不】【回】【来】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【—】【—】【题】【记】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【常】【常】【回】【想】【过】【去】【,】【回】【想】【赖】【在】【母】【亲】【怀】【里】【的】【感】【觉】【;】【回】【想】【拽】【着】【爸】【爸】【胡】【须】【时】【爸】【爸】【扭】【曲】【的】【笑】【容】【;】【回】【想】【童】【年】【的】【摇】【车】【和】【奶】【奶】【哼】【唱】【的】【歌】【儿】【;】【回】【想】【我】【曾】【经】【坐】【过】【的】【现】【在】【不】【知】【丢】【在】【哪】【个】【角】【落】【的】【小】【板】【凳】【…】【…】【岁】【月】【让】【我】【们】【不】【能】【再】【回】【到】【从】【前】【,】【如】【今】【的】【爸】【爸】【妈】【妈】【已】【不】【能】【再】【承】【受】【我】【们】【日】【趋】【长】【大】【的】【身】【体】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【早】【已】【改】【变】【了】【。】【我】【们】【不】【再】【乖】【巧】【,】【不】【再】【活】【蹦】【乱】【跳】【地】【围】【在】【爸】【爸】【妈】【妈】【的】【身】【前】【身】【后】【,】【糖】【果】【、】【糕】【点】【、】【美】【衣】【、】【美】【食】【已】【经】【不】【能】【让】【我】【们】【安】【分】【,】【有】【时】【我】【们】【竟】【敢】【大】【胆】【地】【否】【决】【家】【人】【的】【许】【多】【善】【良】【的】【意】【见】【。】【我】【们】【的】【身】【体】【里】【流】【动】【着】【叛】【逆】【的】【血】【液】【,】【看】【着】【家】【人】【无】【奈】【的】【目】【光】【,】【我】【们】【感】【觉】【格】【外】【得】【意】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【上】【学】【放】【学】【,】【走】【亲】【戚】【串】【门】【,】【面】【对】【父】【母】【的】【叮】【嘱】【,】【我】【们】【不】【再】【老】【老】【实】【实】【地】【点】【头】【,】【而】【是】【冲】【他】【们】【大】【吼】【:】【“】【烦】【死】【了】【,】【唠】【叨】【死】【了】【!】【”】【跟】【随】【父】【母】【去】【买】【衣】【服】【,】【对】【于】【他】【们】【的】【选】【择】【,】【我】【们】【总】【会】【皱】【着】【眉】【头】【:】【“】【丑】【死】【了】【,】【我】【才】【不】【穿】【呢】【!】【”】【在】【家】【的】【时】【候】【,】【总】【会】【一】【个】【人】【玩】【电】【脑】【,】【把】【空】【闲】【的】【父】【母】【丢】【在】【一】【边】【。】【父】【母】【也】【很】【想】【了】【解】【电】【脑】【,】【很】【想】【知】【道】【怎】【样】【使】【用】【电】【脑】【,】【我】【们】【却】【不】【肯】【耐】【心】【地】【指】【点】【。】【面】【对】【父】【母】【的】【询】【问】【,】【我】【们】【总】【会】【不】【耐】【烦】【地】【说】【:】【“】【不】【懂】【就】【别】【说】【话】【!】【”】【我】【们】【这】【些】【话】【虽】【然】【“】【无】【心】【”】【,】【却】【深】【深】【伤】【害】【了】【他】【们】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【家】【人】【为】【我】【们】【付】【出】【很】【多】【,】【我】【们】【却】【把】【这】【当】【做】【天】【经】【地】【义】【,】【我】【们】【的】【心】【离】【父】【母】【越】【来】【越】【远】【。】【父】【母】【没】【有】【放】【弃】【我】【们】【,】【他】【们】【的】【温】【暖】【羽】【翼】【时】【刻】【保】【护】【着】【我】【们】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【可】【爱】【的】【少】【年】【朋】【友】【,】【我】【们】【的】【家】【人】【,】【不】【是】【我】【们】【成】【长】【中】【的】【绊】【脚】【石】【,】【不】【是】【我】【们】【生】【活】【中】【的】【假】【想】【敌】【人】【!】【你】【受】【欺】【负】【了】【,】【受】【伤】【害】【了】【,】【是】【谁】【用】【关】【怀】【修】【补】【你】【那】【颗】【疼】【痛】【的】【心】【?】【你】【和】【“】【生】【死】【之】【交】【”】【划】【界】【绝】【交】【,】【觉】【得】【自】【己】【遭】【背】【叛】【了】【,】【又】【是】【谁】【陪】【在】【你】【身】【旁】【,】【给】【你】【讲】【述】【朋】【友】【之】【义】【?】【你】【做】【错】【了】【事】【,】【正】【后】【悔】【着】【,】【正】【着】【急】【找】【不】【到】【解】【决】【问】【题】【的】【办】【法】【时】【,】【是】【谁】【虽】【然】【嘴】【上】【责】【怪】【你】【,】【但】【仍】【然】【帮】【你】【解】【决】【问】【题】【?】【身】【边】【的】【一】【切】【都】【会】【发】【生】【变】【化】【,】【但】【唯】【独】【父】【母】【的】【爱】【是】【永】【远】【不】【会】【变】【的】【,】【只】【要】【我】【们】【试】【着】【去】【了】【解】【他】【们】【,】【倾】【听】【他】【们】【,】【我】【们】【会】【发】【现】【,】【我】【们】【的】【父】【母】【,】【一】【直】【在】【为】【我】【们】【牵】【挂】【,】【一】【直】【注】【视】【着】【我】【们】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【要】【留】【住】【父】【母】【的】【这】【些】【爱】【,】【永】【远】【不】【要】【把】【父】【母】【抛】【在】【一】【边】【,】【珍】【惜】【现】【在】【所】【拥】【有】【的】【父】【母】【疼】【你】【爱】【你】【的】【每】【一】【个】【细】【节】【。】【岁】【月】【已】【经】【给】【父】【母】【带】【来】【了】【脸】【上】【的】【皱】【纹】【、】【身】【体】【上】【的】【病】【痛】【,】【我】【们】【的】【体】【谅】【和】【回】【报】【让】【父】【母】【等】【得】【太】【久】【了】【。】【不】【要】【等】【自】【己】【身】【心】【疲】【惫】【了】【才】【想】【起】【父】【母】【的】【种】【种】【关】【怀】【,】【不】【要】【等】【到】【与】【父】【母】【诀】【别】【的】【那】【一】【天】【才】【痛】【哭】【流】【涕】【追】【思】【他】【们】【的】【点】【滴】【之】【恩】【。】【只】【有】【懂】【得】【幸】【福】【、】【珍】【惜】【幸】【福】【的】【人】【才】【能】【得】【到】【真】【正】【的】【幸】【福】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【钱】【彩】【泉】【)】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【件】【事】【在】【我】【心】【中】【一】【直】【挥】【之】【不】【去】【,】【上】【初】【中】【时】【有】【次】【看】【到】【一】【条】【野】【狗】【被】【几】【个】【男】【孩】【儿】【活】【活】【打】【死】【,】【一】【旁】【的】【我】【劝】【阻】【未】【成】【,】【结】【果】【因】【伤】【悲】【而】【落】【泪】【,】【后】【来】【在】【作】【文】【里】【记】【下】【此】【事】【,】【得】【到】【的】【批】【语】【竟】【然】【是】【:】【不】【要】【多】【愁】【善】【感】【,】【而】【要】【学】【会】【坚】【强】【。】【大】【概】【在】【老】【师】【看】【来】【,】【伤】【悲】【落】【泪】【是】【没】【出】【息】【的】【表】【现】【吧】【。】【可】【是】【我】【想】【不】【通】【,】【难】【道】【看】【到】【狗】【被】【打】【死】【,】【应】【该】【快】【乐】【才】【对】【吗】【?】【想】【起】【这】【则】【评】【语】【,】【至】【今】【我】【还】【有】【点】【“】【伤】【悲】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【告】【诉】【你】【吧】【,】【就】【在】【前】【几】【天】【我】【还】【伤】【悲】【而】【落】【了】【一】【次】【泪】【呢】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【天】【,】【在】【回】【家】【的】【公】【交】【车】【上】【,】【父】【亲】【坐】【我】【身】【旁】【。】【车】【厢】【里】【都】【是】【刚】【考】【完】【试】【的】【学】【生】【,】【叽】【叽】【喳】【喳】【地】【谈】【论】【着】【考】【题】【。】【父】【亲】【一】【言】【不】【发】【,】【神】【情】【有】【点】【让】【人】【琢】【磨】【不】【透】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【伸】【出】【手】【,】【放】【在】【父】【亲】【宽】【大】【粗】【糙】【的】【手】【掌】【中】【,】【抚】【摸】【着】【,】【心】【中】【满】【是】【酸】【涩】【。】【父】【亲】【侧】【过】【头】【,】【温】【柔】【地】【笑】【了】【笑】【,】【笑】【容】【中】【带】【有】【一】【丝】【疲】【惫】【。】【我】【也】【含】【有】【歉】【意】【地】【回】【笑】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【次】【考】【试】【我】【又】【要】【让】【父】【亲】【失】【望】【了】【。】【进】【入】【初】【三】【以】【来】【,】【我】【几】【乎】【从】【来】【没】【有】【让】【父】【亲】【为】【我】【高】【兴】【过】【。】【从】【小】【到】【大】【,】【父】【亲】【没】【有】【对】【我】【凶】【过】【,】【即】【使】【我】【做】【错】【了】【事】【,】【他】【也】【只】【是】【心】【平】【气】【和】【地】【说】【两】【句】【。】【我】【知】【道】【他】【在】【我】【身】【上】【寄】【予】【了】【很】【大】【的】【期】【望】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【渐】【渐】【少】【了】【,】【车】【厢】【里】【清】【静】【了】【下】【来】【,】【我】【把】【头】【靠】【在】【父】【亲】【的】【肩】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【累】【了】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【嗯】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【睡】【一】【会】【儿】【吧】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【闭】【上】【双】【眼】【,】【却】【毫】【无】【睡】【意】【,】【心】【里】【闷】【闷】【的】【,】【无】【处】【宣】【泄】【。】【罪】【恶】【感】【一】【次】【一】【次】【冲】【击】【着】【内】【心】【的】【堤】【防】【。】【我】【深】【吸】【了】【一】【口】【气】【,】【努】【力】【忍】【住】【泪】【水】【,】【我】【不】【想】【在】【父】【亲】【面】【前】【哭】【泣】【,】【因】【为】【我】【知】【道】【他】【心】【中】【的】【痛】【楚】【并】【不】【比】【我】【少】【,】【厂】【子】【最】【近】【又】【不】【景】【气】【,】【压】【力】【可】【想】【而】【知】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【想】【着】【想】【着】【,】【泪】【水】【流】【了】【下】【来】【。】【父】【亲】【耸】【了】【耸】【肩】【,】【我】【连】【忙】【抬】【起】【头】【,】【擦】【干】【脸】【上】【眼】【泪】【,】【却】【发】【现】【他】【已】【睡】【着】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【是】【啊】【!】【父】【亲】【太】【累】【了】【,】【我】【多】【想】【让】【他】【靠】【在】【我】【的】【肩】【膀】【上】【美】【美】【地】【睡】【一】【睡】【,】【就】【像】【我】【靠】【在】【他】【的】【肩】【头】【一】【样】【。】【我】【这】【个】【小】【女】【生】【的】【肩】【膀】【还】【太】【过】【单】【薄】【,】【连】【自】【己】【的】【失】【败】【都】【快】【承】【担】【不】【起】【了】【,】【又】【怎】【能】【成】【为】【父】【亲】【的】【依】【靠】【呢】【?】【此】【刻】【,】【我】【多】【么】【希】【望】【自】【己】【能】【够】【独】【立】【,】【尽】【快】【成】【熟】【起】【来】【,】【能】【够】【不】【再】【让】【父】【亲】【为】【我】【操】【心】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【始】【终】【不】【能】【认】【同】【初】【中】【老】【师】【的】【话】【,】【伤】【悲】【落】【泪】【不】【是】【懦】【弱】【,】【不】【是】【消】【极】【悲】【观】【,】【而】【是】【一】【种】【正】【常】【不】【过】【的】【情】【感】【流】【露】【,】【是】【一】【种】【悲】【悯】【情】【怀】【,】【况】【且】【,】【它】【还】【有】【积】【极】【的】【一】【面】【,】【越】【王】【勾】【践】【伤】【悲】【于】【国】【之】【殇】【才】【有】【卧】【薪】【尝】【胆】【之】【举】【;】【韩】【信】【伤】【悲】【于】【曾】【经】【的】【胯】【下】【之】【辱】【才】【崛】【起】【于】【战】【场】【的】【厮】【杀】【;】【鲁】【迅】【先】【生】【伤】【悲】【于】【国】【人】【的】【愚】【昧】【无】【知】【才】【写】【出】【了】【不】【朽】【的】【作】【品】【。】【可】【以】【说】【,】【没】【有】【伤】【悲】【,】【就】【没】【有】【白】【居】【易】【的】【《】【琵】【琶】【行】【》】【;】【没】【有】【伤】【悲】【,】【就】【没】【有】【瞎】【子】【阿】【炳】【的】【《】【二】【泉】【映】【月】【》】【;】【没】【有】【伤】【悲】【,】【就】【没】【有】【艾】【青】【《】【大】【堰】【河】【-】【我】【的】【保】【姆】【》】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【既】【然】【伤】【悲】【无】【可】【避】【免】【,】【就】【应】【该】【好】【好】【面】【对】【它】【。】【毕】【竟】【,】【快】【乐】【是】【短】【暂】【的】【,】【灰】【暗】【的】【情】【绪】【却】【可】【以】【在】【时】【间】【的】【作】【用】【下】【淘】【洗】【出】【人】【生】【的】【亮】【色】【,】【在】【思】【考】【中】【沉】【淀】【出】【智】【慧】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【高】【与】【低】【可】【组】【成】【美】【丽】【曲】【线】【,】【光】【与】【影】【能】【交】【织】【成】【趣】【。】【有】【时】【,】【我】【们】【不】【妨】【伤】【悲】【,】【一】【味】【地】【强】【调】【快】【乐】【,】【思】【想】【则】【失】【之】【肤】【浅】【。】【真】【正】【能】【使】【人】【成】【长】【起】【来】【的】【,】【不】【是】【快】【乐】【而】【是】【伤】【悲】【,】【甚】【至】【痛】【苦】【。】【没】【有】【伤】【悲】【,】【也】【就】【没】【有】【快】【乐】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【毛】【荣】【富】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【看】【“】【有】【时】【,】【不】【妨】【伤】【悲】【”】【这】【个】【文】【题】【,】【就】【让】【人】【感】【到】【很】【有】【吸】【引】【力】【,】【有】【点】【标】【新】【立】【异】【的】【味】【道】【,】【在】【许】【多】【人】【眼】【里】【伤】【悲】【的】【情】【绪】【似】【乎】【不】【应】【该】【属】【于】【青】【少】【年】【学】【生】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【中】【提】【到】【的】【老】【师】【写】【的】【那】【句】【“】【不】【要】【多】【愁】【善】【感】【,】【而】【要】【学】【会】【坚】【强】【”】【的】【评】【语】【,】【使】【我】【想】【起】【一】【件】【往】【事】【,】【笔】【者】【在】【上】【世】【纪】【六】【十】【年】【代】【读】【高】【中】【时】【在】【作】【文】【中】【写】【过】【一】【句】【“】【我】【是】【多】【么】【孤】【独】【啊】【”】【,】【结】【果】【老】【师】【给】【我】【的】【批】【语】【是】【“】【要】【培】【养】【集】【体】【主】【义】【思】【想】【,】【要】【投】【入】【到】【火】【热】【的】【斗】【争】【生】【活】【中】【去】【”】【。】【看】【来】【,】【语】【文】【教】【学】【的】【有】【些】【东】【西】【已】【经】【由】【来】【已】【久】【,】【本】【应】【最】【具】【人】【情】【味】【和】【人】【文】【关】【怀】【,】【可】【是】【面】【对】【学】【生】【产】【生】【的】【各】【种】【各】【样】【的】【心】【理】【问】【题】【,】【都】【用】【政】【治】【的】【眼】【光】【来】【看】【待】【,】【用】【一】【套】【革】【命】【的】【词】【语】【对】【他】【们】【进】【行】【所】【谓】【的】【思】【想】【教】【育】【。】【好】【在】【余】【倩】【倩】【同】【学】【有】【独】【立】【思】【考】【的】【能】【力】【,】【否】【则】【真】【要】【不】【知】【所】【措】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【伤】【悲】【是】【一】【种】【人】【之】【常】【情】【。】【文】【中】【写】【到】【的】【公】【交】【车】【上】【的】【一】【幕】【十】【分】【真】【实】【感】【人】【。】【作】【者】【内】【心】【的】【伤】【悲】【,】【实】【质】【源】【于】【对】【父】【亲】【的】【挚】【爱】【深】【情】【,】【因】【为】【考】【试】【成】【绩】【不】【佳】【,】【面】【对】【十】【分】【疼】【爱】【自】【己】【的】【慈】【父】【,】【内】【心】【充】【满】【了】【愧】【疚】【、】【自】【责】【和】【遗】【憾】【。】【她】【深】【知】【父】【亲】【最】【希】【望】【看】【到】【的】【就】【是】【自】【己】【优】【秀】【的】【学】【习】【成】【绩】【,】【而】【在】【她】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【,】【也】【只】【有】【拿】【出】【好】【成】【绩】【才】【能】【安】【慰】【父】【亲】【,】【才】【能】【对】【父】【亲】【“】【尽】【孝】【”】【,】【而】【她】【偏】【偏】【却】【难】【以】【做】【到】【。】【有】【的】【同】【学】【读】【了】【此】【文】【深】【有】【同】【感】【,】【也】【流】【出】【了】【眼】【泪】【。】【他】【们】【说】【,】【自】【己】【也】【很】【想】【把】【成】【绩】【搞】【上】【去】【,】【而】【且】【也】【付】【出】【了】【极】【大】【的】【努】【力】【,】【但】【总】【是】【不】【能】【如】【愿】【,】【对】【小】【小】【年】【纪】【的】【学】【子】【来】【说】【,】【这】【是】【多】【么】【的】【无】【奈】【啊】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【的】【可】【贵】【之】【处】【还】【在】【于】【作】【者】【对】【“】【伤】【悲】【”】【作】【了】【理】【性】【的】【观】【照】【,】【文】【章】【的】【末】【尾】【几】【段】【对】【伤】【悲】【的】【积】【极】【意】【义】【作】【了】【精】【到】【的】【概】【述】【,】【篇】【幅】【虽】【不】【长】【,】【却】【颇】【具】【分】【量】【。】【“】【毕】【竟】【,】【快】【乐】【是】【短】【暂】【的】【,】【灰】【暗】【的】【情】【绪】【却】【可】【以】【在】【时】【间】【的】【作】【用】【下】【淘】【洗】【出】【人】【生】【的】【亮】【色】【,】【在】【思】【考】【中】【沉】【淀】【出】【智】【慧】【”】【这】【句】【话】【含】【有】【对】【人】【生】【的】【丰】【富】【体】【验】【和】【对】【伤】【悲】【之】【情】【的】【深】【入】【感】【悟】【。】【而】【“】【一】【味】【地】【强】【调】【快】【乐】【,】【思】【想】【则】【失】【之】【肤】【浅】【。】【真】【正】【能】【使】【人】【成】【长】【起】【来】【的】【,】【不】【是】【快】【乐】【而】【是】【伤】【悲】【甚】【至】【痛】【苦】【”】【这】【句】【话】【讲】【得】【也】【很】【好】【,】【它】【使】【我】【们】【想】【到】【学】【校】【教】【育】【的】【弊】【端】【之】【一】【就】【是】【不】【能】【直】【面】【人】【生】【,】【总】【是】【回】【避】【现】【实】【生】【活】【的】【矛】【盾】【,】【以】【至】【于】【离】【校】【之】【后】【学】【生】【常】【常】【感】【到】【复】【杂】【的】【社】【会】【并】【不】【如】【在】【校】【时】【所】【了】【解】【的】【那】【样】【,】【学】【校】【教】【给】【自】【己】【的】【东】【西】【都】【远】【离】【了】【实】【际】【需】【要】【。】【试】【想】【,】【在】【作】【文】【中】【流】【露】【一】【点】【孤】【独】【、】【伤】【悲】【的】【情】【绪】【都】【会】【受】【到】【批】【评】【,】【这】【样】【教】【育】【出】【来】【的】【人】【岂】【能】【有】【健】【全】【的】【心】【智】【去】【适】【应】【甚】【至】【改】【变】【社】【会】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【文】【中】【可】【以】【看】【出】【,】【余】【倩】【倩】【文】【中】【对】【伤】【悲】【的】【理】【解】【和】【认】【识】【是】【借】【助】【于】【自】【己】【历】【史】【文】【学】【的】【知】【识】【来】【完】【成】【的】【。】【她】【平】【时】【喜】【欢】【读】【这】【方】【面】【的】【书】【,】【而】【可】【贵】【的】【是】【她】【把】【书】【读】【活】【了】【,】【能】【够】【运】【用】【知】【识】【,】【从】【中】【形】【成】【自】【己】【的】【思】【想】【观】【点】【。】【文】【中】【所】【列】【举】【的】【人】【物】【和】【作】【品】【也】【为】【许】【多】【同】【学】【所】【熟】【知】【,】【却】【未】【必】【能】【使】【之】【为】【我】【所】【用】【。】【这】【正】【是】【需】【要】【我】【们】【向】【她】【学】【习】【的】【地】【方】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【后】【我】【想】【对】【那】【位】【老】【师】【讲】【几】【句】【。】【作】【文】【不】【是】【宣】【传】【品】【,】【而】【是】【个】【人】【思】【想】【情】【感】【的】【真】【实】【记】【录】【。】【宣】【传】【事】【关】【政】【治】【,】【而】【作】【文】【则】【是】【事】【关】【心】【灵】【。】【如】【果】【总】【是】【用】【政】【治】【的】【眼】【光】【来】【看】【待】【和】【指】【导】【作】【文】【,】【学】【生】【不】【仅】【写】【不】【出】【好】【文】【章】【,】【而】【且】【会】【在】【作】【文】【中】【充】【满】【假】【大】【空】【。】【我】【们】【对】【学】【生】【辛】【辛】【苦】【苦】【的】【教】【导】【很】【可】【能】【成】【为】【一】【种】【误】【导】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【荐】【评】【老】【师】【:】【毛】【荣】【富】【)】兴业证券2011【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妈】【妈】【越】【来】【越】【忙】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【早】【晨】【,】【早】【饭】【整】【整】【齐】【齐】【地】【摆】【在】【桌】【面】【上】【,】【她】【早】【已】【出】【门】【;】【晚】【上】【我】【回】【来】【时】【,】【她】【已】【安】【然】【入】【睡】【。】【我】【不】【知】【道】【她】【在】【忙】【些】【什】【么】【,】【只】【是】【安】【静】【地】【把】【成】【绩】【单】【放】【在】【她】【的】【床】【头】【,】【我】【也】【不】【知】【道】【她】【有】【没】【有】【看】【上】【一】【眼】【。】【因】【为】【,】【我】【总】【也】【没】【时】【间】【和】【她】【交】【流】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【周】【六】【我】【走】【进】【家】【门】【,】【竟】【然】【破】【天】【荒】【地】【发】【现】【妈】【妈】【躺】【在】【床】【上】【,】【她】【脸】【色】【苍】【白】【。】【我】【情】【不】【自】【禁】【地】【走】【到】【她】【的】【床】【前】【:】【“】【妈】【,】【你】【怎】【么】【了】【?】【”】【“】【没】【啥】【,】【就】【是】【有】【点】【儿】【累】【。】【”】【她】【的】【手】【一】【边】【抚】【摩】【着】【我】【的】【头】【,】【一】【边】【又】【轻】【拍】【着】【我】【的】【脸】【,】【开】【心】【地】【笑】【着】【:】【“】【你】【的】【成】【绩】【,】【我】【都】【看】【到】【了】【,】【我】【的】【丫】【头】【,】【就】【是】【了】【不】【起】【。】【”】【听】【着】【妈】【妈】【略】【显】【沉】【重】【的】【话】【语】【,】【我】【流】【下】【了】【泪】【,】【再】【看】【看】【妈】【妈】【近】【来】【突】【然】【变】【得】【又】【红】【又】【肿】【的】【手】【,】【我】【更】【是】【泣】【不】【成】【声】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【隔】【天】【吃】【午】【饭】【,】【我】【随】【口】【对】【爸】【爸】【说】【:】【“】【爸】【,】【我】【今】【天】【去】【找】【我】【妈】【要】【书】【费】【了】【,】【她】【那】【儿】【可】【真】【远】【。】【”】【爸】【爸】【惊】【慌】【失】【措】【:】【“】【怎】【么】【?】【你】【去】【你】【妈】【工】【作】【的】【饭】【店】【了】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【什】【么】【?】【你】【说】【我】【妈】【在】【饭】【店】【工】【作】【?】【”】【爸】【爸】【知】【道】【中】【计】【,】【只】【好】【全】【盘】【招】【了】【:】【“】【其】【实】【,】【我】【早】【想】【告】【诉】【你】【,】【你】【妈】【工】【作】【的】【那】【家】【工】【厂】【倒】【闭】【了】【,】【她】【在】【饭】【店】【找】【了】【个】【洗】【碗】【的】【活】【儿】【,】【怕】【影】【响】【你】【学】【习】【,】【就】【执】【意】【不】【让】【我】【告】【诉】【你】【。】【最】【近】【,】【她】【的】【风】【湿】【病】【又】【犯】【了】【,】【整】【晚】【疼】【得】【睡】【不】【着】【觉】【…】【…】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【爱】【若】【有】【心】【无】【口】【,】【是】【可】【悲】【的】【。】【妈】【妈】【,】【您】【为】【什】【么】【不】【让】【我】【明】【白】【您】【小】【心】【翼】【翼】【的】【爱】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【又】【是】【一】【个】【周】【六】【的】【下】【午】【,】【我】【早】【早】【回】【家】【,】【骑】【车】【去】【了】【妈】【妈】【工】【作】【的】【饭】【店】【。】【在】【嘈】【杂】【的】【后】【厨】【房】【,】【我】【看】【见】【妈】【妈】【蹲】【在】【洗】【碗】【池】【边】【,】【戴】【着】【长】【长】【的】【橡】【胶】【手】【套】【,】【一】【个】【个】【碗】【从】【她】【的】【手】【中】【飞】【过】【。】【我】【叫】【了】【一】【声】【“】【妈】【”】【后】【,】【泪】【水】【忍】【不】【住】【地】【流】【出】【来】【。】【她】【抬】【起】【头】【,】【抹】【了】【一】【把】【脸】【,】【表】【情】【诧】【异】【地】【说】【:】【“】【你】【咋】【来】【了】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【说】【:】【“】【我】【来】【接】【你】【回】【家】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【回】【家】【的】【路】【上】【,】【我】【载】【着】【瘦】【弱】【的】【母】【亲】【,】【骑】【得】【飞】【快】【。】【一】【回】【头】【,】【花】【全】【开】【了】【。】【好】【像】【谁】【讲】【了】【个】【笑】【话】【,】【逗】【乐】【了】【一】【片】【花】【海】【。】【不】【过】【,】【一】【路】【上】【最】【美】【的】【风】【景】【还】【是】【妈】【妈】【的】【笑】【靥】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【就】【在】【那】【一】【刻】【,】【我】【和】【妈】【妈】【的】【春】【天】【来】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妈】【妈】【,】【云】【是】【风】【的】【故】【事】【,】【山】【是】【水】【的】【故】【事】【,】【我】【是】【你】【的】【故】【事】【。】【我】【想】【陪】【你】【一】【路】【看】【春】【暖】【花】【开】【,】【一】【路】【,】【一】【直】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【爱】【是】【沉】【默】【的】【,】【大】【爱】【无】【言】【。】【爱】【我】【们】【的】【人】【,】【总】【是】【无】【声】【地】【关】【怀】【着】【我】【们】【,】【从】【不】【要】【求】【什】【么】【,】【但】【其】【实】【这】【份】【小】【心】【翼】【翼】【的】【爱】【,】【“】【我】【”】【早】【已】【明】【白】【。】【爱】【是】【双】【向】【的】【,】【“】【妈】【妈】【”】【默】【默】【为】【“】【我】【”】【付】【出】【了】【很】【多】【,】【“】【我】【”】【亦】【对】【“】【妈】【妈】【”】【充】【满】【了】【爱】【意】【,】【两】【股】【爱】【的】【旋】【律】【交】【织】【在】【一】【起】【,】【谱】【写】【了】【一】【曲】【“】【春】【暖】【花】【开】【”】【的】【赞】【歌】【。】【“】【妈】【妈】【”】【给】【“】【我】【”】【春】【天】【一】【般】【的】【温】【暖】【,】【让】【“】【我】【”】【的】【春】【天】【永】【远】【绽】【放】【着】【美】【丽】【的】【色】【彩】【,】【“】【我】【”】【为】【什】【么】【就】【不】【能】【给】【“】【妈】【妈】【”】【以】【春】【天】【一】【般】【的】【温】【暖】【,】【让】【“】【妈】【妈】【”】【也】【一】【样】【绽】【放】【春】【天】【的】【色】【彩】【呢】【?】【这】【篇】【考】【场】【满】【分】【作】【文】【,】【给】【了】【我】【们】【一】【个】【满】【意】【的】【答】【案】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【荐】【评】【老】【师】【:】【崔】【益】【林】【)】

兴业证券2011:【生活需要鼓励作文】生活需要鼓励作文600

【<】【p】【>】【抬】【头】【,】【又】【见】【一】【盏】【灯】【搭】【载】【着】【微】【风】【逍】【遥】【飘】【过】【,】【灯】【火】【因】【为】【风】【而】【忽】【闪】【忽】【闪】【,】【仿】【佛】【天】【空】【又】【多】【了】【一】【颗】【星】【。】【我】【迫】【不】【及】【待】【地】【拿】【出】【心】【愿】【灯】【,】【也】【想】【早】【些】【拥】【有】【自】【己】【的】【一】【颗】【星】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】兴业证券2011【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【转】【眼】【间】【,】【升】【入】【初】【中】【已】【有】【十】【余】【天】【了】【,】【我】【又】【认】【识】【了】【一】【些】【新】【老】【师】【,】【其】【中】【,】【让】【我】【印】【象】【最】【深】【刻】【的】【还】【是】【我】【们】【的】【语】【文】【老】【师】【—】【—】【王】【小】【兵】【。】【他】【四】【十】【岁】【左】【右】【,】【眼】【睛】【大】【而】【有】【神】【,】【声】【音】【亮】【如】【洪】【钟】【,】【虽】【略】【微】【发】【福】【,】【但】【身】【姿】【矫】【健】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【王】【老】【师】【上】【课】【很】【有】【魔】【力】【。】【每】【节】【课】【,】【他】【都】【用】【他】【的】【幽】【默】【风】【趣】【的】【话】【语】【把】【一】【篇】【课】【文】【讲】【得】【绘】【声】【绘】【色】【、】【形】【象】【生】【动】【,】【他】【把】【我】【们】【的】【视】【线】【紧】【紧】【吸】【引】【,】【让】【人】【无】【法】【分】【心】【,】【课】【堂】【不】【时】【传】【出】【开】【心】【的】【笑】【声】【。】【上】【他】【的】【课】【,】【总】【让】【人】【感】【觉】【不】【是】【在】【上】【课】【,】【而】【是】【在】【某】【卫】【视】【的】【现】【场】【参】【加】【一】【个】【互】【动】【的】【娱】【乐】【节】【目】【呢】【,】【这】【大】【概】【就】【是】【他】【上】【课】【的】【魔】【力】【所】【在】【吧】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【王】【老】【师】【非】【常】【重】【视】【我】【们】【的】【朗】【读】【。】【刚】【开】【学】【时】【,】【同】【学】【们】【彼】【此】【之】【间】【都】【很】【陌】【生】【,】【对】【王】【老】【师】【也】【不】【熟】【悉】【,】【上】【课】【朗】【诵】【课】【文】【时】【,】【同】【学】【们】【不】【是】【读】【得】【声】【如】【蚊】【蝇】【,】【就】【是】【慢】【如】【蜗】【牛】【,】【声】【音】【既】【平】【淡】【如】【水】【,】【又】【无】【感】【情】【可】【言】【。】【王】【老】【师】【为】【了】【解】【决】【这】【个】【问】【题】【,】【就】【一】【次】【次】【地】【为】【我】【们】【高】【声】【范】【诵】【,】【纠】【正】【发】【音】【,】【讲】【解】【语】【速】【重】【音】【和】【感】【情】【处】【理】【的】【技】【巧】【,】【从】【未】【觉】【得】【麻】【烦】【。】【渐】【渐】【地】【,】【我】【们】【在】【他】【的】【指】【导】【下】【,】【终】【于】【可】【以】【自】【信】【地】【大】【声】【读】【书】【了】【,】【并】【且】【节】【奏】【语】【调】【恰】【到】【好】【处】【。】【他】【的】【朗】【诵】【形】【式】【更】【是】【多】【种】【多】【样】【:】【个】【人】【读】【、】【小】【组】【读】【、】【听】【读】【、】【范】【读】【、】【跟】【读】【、】【分】【角】【色】【读】【、】【快】【读】【、】【慢】【读】【。】【在】【朗】【读】【中】【,】【我】【们】【倾】【注】【了】【自】【己】【的】【情】【感】【,】【读】【出】【了】【自】【己】【的】【理】【解】【。】【我】【们】【算】【是】【开】【了】【眼】【界】【了】【,】【原】【来】【读】【书】【还】【可】【以】【变】【着】【花】【样】【读】【呀】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【虽】【然】【开】【学】【才】【十】【多】【天】【,】【可】【王】【老】【师】【的】【幽】【默】【风】【趣】【和】【富】【有】【魅】【力】【的】【朗】【诵】【却】【给】【我】【们】【留】【下】【了】【难】【以】【磨】【灭】【的】【印】【象】【,】【我】【坚】【信】【:】【在】【他】【的】【教】【导】【下】【,】【我】【们】【一】【定】【会】【领】【略】【到】【更】【美】【的】【语】【文】【风】【景】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【的】【小】【作】【者】【突】【破】【传】【统】【写】【人】【的】【手】【法】【,】【不】【去】【描】【写】【老】【师】【的】【语】【言】【、】【动】【作】【、】【神】【态】【,】【而】【通】【过】【重】【点】【描】【写】【老】【师】【上】【课】【时】【同】【学】【们】【的】【具】【体】【感】【受】【来】【突】【出】【“】【王】【老】【师】【的】【课】【很】【有】【魔】【力】【”】【的】【特】【点】【,】【通】【过】【描】【写】【老】【师】【具】【体】【指】【导】【学】【生】【朗】【读】【的】【方】【式】【、】【方】【法】【来】【表】【现】【“】【王】【老】【师】【非】【常】【重】【视】【我】【们】【的】【朗】【读】【”】【的】【特】【点】【。】【行】【文】【流】【畅】【,】【文】【中】【自】【然】【流】【露】【出】【对】【语】【文】【老】【师】【的】【敬】【佩】【和】【赞】【美】【之】【情】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【王】【小】【兵】【)】

兴业证券2011:谭星信箱

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【件】【事】【在】【我】【心】【中】【一】【直】【挥】【之】【不】【去】【,】【上】【初】【中】【时】【有】【次】【看】【到】【一】【条】【野】【狗】【被】【几】【个】【男】【孩】【儿】【活】【活】【打】【死】【,】【一】【旁】【的】【我】【劝】【阻】【未】【成】【,】【结】【果】【因】【伤】【悲】【而】【落】【泪】【,】【后】【来】【在】【作】【文】【里】【记】【下】【此】【事】【,】【得】【到】【的】【批】【语】【竟】【然】【是】【:】【不】【要】【多】【愁】【善】【感】【,】【而】【要】【学】【会】【坚】【强】【。】【大】【概】【在】【老】【师】【看】【来】【,】【伤】【悲】【落】【泪】【是】【没】【出】【息】【的】【表】【现】【吧】【。】【可】【是】【我】【想】【不】【通】【,】【难】【道】【看】【到】【狗】【被】【打】【死】【,】【应】【该】【快】【乐】【才】【对】【吗】【?】【想】【起】【这】【则】【评】【语】【,】【至】【今】【我】【还】【有】【点】【“】【伤】【悲】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【告】【诉】【你】【吧】【,】【就】【在】【前】【几】【天】【我】【还】【伤】【悲】【而】【落】【了】【一】【次】【泪】【呢】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【天】【,】【在】【回】【家】【的】【公】【交】【车】【上】【,】【父】【亲】【坐】【我】【身】【旁】【。】【车】【厢】【里】【都】【是】【刚】【考】【完】【试】【的】【学】【生】【,】【叽】【叽】【喳】【喳】【地】【谈】【论】【着】【考】【题】【。】【父】【亲】【一】【言】【不】【发】【,】【神】【情】【有】【点】【让】【人】【琢】【磨】【不】【透】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【伸】【出】【手】【,】【放】【在】【父】【亲】【宽】【大】【粗】【糙】【的】【手】【掌】【中】【,】【抚】【摸】【着】【,】【心】【中】【满】【是】【酸】【涩】【。】【父】【亲】【侧】【过】【头】【,】【温】【柔】【地】【笑】【了】【笑】【,】【笑】【容】【中】【带】【有】【一】【丝】【疲】【惫】【。】【我】【也】【含】【有】【歉】【意】【地】【回】【笑】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【次】【考】【试】【我】【又】【要】【让】【父】【亲】【失】【望】【了】【。】【进】【入】【初】【三】【以】【来】【,】【我】【几】【乎】【从】【来】【没】【有】【让】【父】【亲】【为】【我】【高】【兴】【过】【。】【从】【小】【到】【大】【,】【父】【亲】【没】【有】【对】【我】【凶】【过】【,】【即】【使】【我】【做】【错】【了】【事】【,】【他】【也】【只】【是】【心】【平】【气】【和】【地】【说】【两】【句】【。】【我】【知】【道】【他】【在】【我】【身】【上】【寄】【予】【了】【很】【大】【的】【期】【望】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【渐】【渐】【少】【了】【,】【车】【厢】【里】【清】【静】【了】【下】【来】【,】【我】【把】【头】【靠】【在】【父】【亲】【的】【肩】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【累】【了】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【嗯】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【睡】【一】【会】【儿】【吧】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【闭】【上】【双】【眼】【,】【却】【毫】【无】【睡】【意】【,】【心】【里】【闷】【闷】【的】【,】【无】【处】【宣】【泄】【。】【罪】【恶】【感】【一】【次】【一】【次】【冲】【击】【着】【内】【心】【的】【堤】【防】【。】【我】【深】【吸】【了】【一】【口】【气】【,】【努】【力】【忍】【住】【泪】【水】【,】【我】【不】【想】【在】【父】【亲】【面】【前】【哭】【泣】【,】【因】【为】【我】【知】【道】【他】【心】【中】【的】【痛】【楚】【并】【不】【比】【我】【少】【,】【厂】【子】【最】【近】【又】【不】【景】【气】【,】【压】【力】【可】【想】【而】【知】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【想】【着】【想】【着】【,】【泪】【水】【流】【了】【下】【来】【。】【父】【亲】【耸】【了】【耸】【肩】【,】【我】【连】【忙】【抬】【起】【头】【,】【擦】【干】【脸】【上】【眼】【泪】【,】【却】【发】【现】【他】【已】【睡】【着】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【是】【啊】【!】【父】【亲】【太】【累】【了】【,】【我】【多】【想】【让】【他】【靠】【在】【我】【的】【肩】【膀】【上】【美】【美】【地】【睡】【一】【睡】【,】【就】【像】【我】【靠】【在】【他】【的】【肩】【头】【一】【样】【。】【我】【这】【个】【小】【女】【生】【的】【肩】【膀】【还】【太】【过】【单】【薄】【,】【连】【自】【己】【的】【失】【败】【都】【快】【承】【担】【不】【起】【了】【,】【又】【怎】【能】【成】【为】【父】【亲】【的】【依】【靠】【呢】【?】【此】【刻】【,】【我】【多】【么】【希】【望】【自】【己】【能】【够】【独】【立】【,】【尽】【快】【成】【熟】【起】【来】【,】【能】【够】【不】【再】【让】【父】【亲】【为】【我】【操】【心】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【始】【终】【不】【能】【认】【同】【初】【中】【老】【师】【的】【话】【,】【伤】【悲】【落】【泪】【不】【是】【懦】【弱】【,】【不】【是】【消】【极】【悲】【观】【,】【而】【是】【一】【种】【正】【常】【不】【过】【的】【情】【感】【流】【露】【,】【是】【一】【种】【悲】【悯】【情】【怀】【,】【况】【且】【,】【它】【还】【有】【积】【极】【的】【一】【面】【,】【越】【王】【勾】【践】【伤】【悲】【于】【国】【之】【殇】【才】【有】【卧】【薪】【尝】【胆】【之】【举】【;】【韩】【信】【伤】【悲】【于】【曾】【经】【的】【胯】【下】【之】【辱】【才】【崛】【起】【于】【战】【场】【的】【厮】【杀】【;】【鲁】【迅】【先】【生】【伤】【悲】【于】【国】【人】【的】【愚】【昧】【无】【知】【才】【写】【出】【了】【不】【朽】【的】【作】【品】【。】【可】【以】【说】【,】【没】【有】【伤】【悲】【,】【就】【没】【有】【白】【居】【易】【的】【《】【琵】【琶】【行】【》】【;】【没】【有】【伤】【悲】【,】【就】【没】【有】【瞎】【子】【阿】【炳】【的】【《】【二】【泉】【映】【月】【》】【;】【没】【有】【伤】【悲】【,】【就】【没】【有】【艾】【青】【《】【大】【堰】【河】【-】【我】【的】【保】【姆】【》】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【既】【然】【伤】【悲】【无】【可】【避】【免】【,】【就】【应】【该】【好】【好】【面】【对】【它】【。】【毕】【竟】【,】【快】【乐】【是】【短】【暂】【的】【,】【灰】【暗】【的】【情】【绪】【却】【可】【以】【在】【时】【间】【的】【作】【用】【下】【淘】【洗】【出】【人】【生】【的】【亮】【色】【,】【在】【思】【考】【中】【沉】【淀】【出】【智】【慧】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【高】【与】【低】【可】【组】【成】【美】【丽】【曲】【线】【,】【光】【与】【影】【能】【交】【织】【成】【趣】【。】【有】【时】【,】【我】【们】【不】【妨】【伤】【悲】【,】【一】【味】【地】【强】【调】【快】【乐】【,】【思】【想】【则】【失】【之】【肤】【浅】【。】【真】【正】【能】【使】【人】【成】【长】【起】【来】【的】【,】【不】【是】【快】【乐】【而】【是】【伤】【悲】【,】【甚】【至】【痛】【苦】【。】【没】【有】【伤】【悲】【,】【也】【就】【没】【有】【快】【乐】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【毛】【荣】【富】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【看】【“】【有】【时】【,】【不】【妨】【伤】【悲】【”】【这】【个】【文】【题】【,】【就】【让】【人】【感】【到】【很】【有】【吸】【引】【力】【,】【有】【点】【标】【新】【立】【异】【的】【味】【道】【,】【在】【许】【多】【人】【眼】【里】【伤】【悲】【的】【情】【绪】【似】【乎】【不】【应】【该】【属】【于】【青】【少】【年】【学】【生】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【中】【提】【到】【的】【老】【师】【写】【的】【那】【句】【“】【不】【要】【多】【愁】【善】【感】【,】【而】【要】【学】【会】【坚】【强】【”】【的】【评】【语】【,】【使】【我】【想】【起】【一】【件】【往】【事】【,】【笔】【者】【在】【上】【世】【纪】【六】【十】【年】【代】【读】【高】【中】【时】【在】【作】【文】【中】【写】【过】【一】【句】【“】【我】【是】【多】【么】【孤】【独】【啊】【”】【,】【结】【果】【老】【师】【给】【我】【的】【批】【语】【是】【“】【要】【培】【养】【集】【体】【主】【义】【思】【想】【,】【要】【投】【入】【到】【火】【热】【的】【斗】【争】【生】【活】【中】【去】【”】【。】【看】【来】【,】【语】【文】【教】【学】【的】【有】【些】【东】【西】【已】【经】【由】【来】【已】【久】【,】【本】【应】【最】【具】【人】【情】【味】【和】【人】【文】【关】【怀】【,】【可】【是】【面】【对】【学】【生】【产】【生】【的】【各】【种】【各】【样】【的】【心】【理】【问】【题】【,】【都】【用】【政】【治】【的】【眼】【光】【来】【看】【待】【,】【用】【一】【套】【革】【命】【的】【词】【语】【对】【他】【们】【进】【行】【所】【谓】【的】【思】【想】【教】【育】【。】【好】【在】【余】【倩】【倩】【同】【学】【有】【独】【立】【思】【考】【的】【能】【力】【,】【否】【则】【真】【要】【不】【知】【所】【措】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【伤】【悲】【是】【一】【种】【人】【之】【常】【情】【。】【文】【中】【写】【到】【的】【公】【交】【车】【上】【的】【一】【幕】【十】【分】【真】【实】【感】【人】【。】【作】【者】【内】【心】【的】【伤】【悲】【,】【实】【质】【源】【于】【对】【父】【亲】【的】【挚】【爱】【深】【情】【,】【因】【为】【考】【试】【成】【绩】【不】【佳】【,】【面】【对】【十】【分】【疼】【爱】【自】【己】【的】【慈】【父】【,】【内】【心】【充】【满】【了】【愧】【疚】【、】【自】【责】【和】【遗】【憾】【。】【她】【深】【知】【父】【亲】【最】【希】【望】【看】【到】【的】【就】【是】【自】【己】【优】【秀】【的】【学】【习】【成】【绩】【,】【而】【在】【她】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【,】【也】【只】【有】【拿】【出】【好】【成】【绩】【才】【能】【安】【慰】【父】【亲】【,】【才】【能】【对】【父】【亲】【“】【尽】【孝】【”】【,】【而】【她】【偏】【偏】【却】【难】【以】【做】【到】【。】【有】【的】【同】【学】【读】【了】【此】【文】【深】【有】【同】【感】【,】【也】【流】【出】【了】【眼】【泪】【。】【他】【们】【说】【,】【自】【己】【也】【很】【想】【把】【成】【绩】【搞】【上】【去】【,】【而】【且】【也】【付】【出】【了】【极】【大】【的】【努】【力】【,】【但】【总】【是】【不】【能】【如】【愿】【,】【对】【小】【小】【年】【纪】【的】【学】【子】【来】【说】【,】【这】【是】【多】【么】【的】【无】【奈】【啊】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【的】【可】【贵】【之】【处】【还】【在】【于】【作】【者】【对】【“】【伤】【悲】【”】【作】【了】【理】【性】【的】【观】【照】【,】【文】【章】【的】【末】【尾】【几】【段】【对】【伤】【悲】【的】【积】【极】【意】【义】【作】【了】【精】【到】【的】【概】【述】【,】【篇】【幅】【虽】【不】【长】【,】【却】【颇】【具】【分】【量】【。】【“】【毕】【竟】【,】【快】【乐】【是】【短】【暂】【的】【,】【灰】【暗】【的】【情】【绪】【却】【可】【以】【在】【时】【间】【的】【作】【用】【下】【淘】【洗】【出】【人】【生】【的】【亮】【色】【,】【在】【思】【考】【中】【沉】【淀】【出】【智】【慧】【”】【这】【句】【话】【含】【有】【对】【人】【生】【的】【丰】【富】【体】【验】【和】【对】【伤】【悲】【之】【情】【的】【深】【入】【感】【悟】【。】【而】【“】【一】【味】【地】【强】【调】【快】【乐】【,】【思】【想】【则】【失】【之】【肤】【浅】【。】【真】【正】【能】【使】【人】【成】【长】【起】【来】【的】【,】【不】【是】【快】【乐】【而】【是】【伤】【悲】【甚】【至】【痛】【苦】【”】【这】【句】【话】【讲】【得】【也】【很】【好】【,】【它】【使】【我】【们】【想】【到】【学】【校】【教】【育】【的】【弊】【端】【之】【一】【就】【是】【不】【能】【直】【面】【人】【生】【,】【总】【是】【回】【避】【现】【实】【生】【活】【的】【矛】【盾】【,】【以】【至】【于】【离】【校】【之】【后】【学】【生】【常】【常】【感】【到】【复】【杂】【的】【社】【会】【并】【不】【如】【在】【校】【时】【所】【了】【解】【的】【那】【样】【,】【学】【校】【教】【给】【自】【己】【的】【东】【西】【都】【远】【离】【了】【实】【际】【需】【要】【。】【试】【想】【,】【在】【作】【文】【中】【流】【露】【一】【点】【孤】【独】【、】【伤】【悲】【的】【情】【绪】【都】【会】【受】【到】【批】【评】【,】【这】【样】【教】【育】【出】【来】【的】【人】【岂】【能】【有】【健】【全】【的】【心】【智】【去】【适】【应】【甚】【至】【改】【变】【社】【会】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【文】【中】【可】【以】【看】【出】【,】【余】【倩】【倩】【文】【中】【对】【伤】【悲】【的】【理】【解】【和】【认】【识】【是】【借】【助】【于】【自】【己】【历】【史】【文】【学】【的】【知】【识】【来】【完】【成】【的】【。】【她】【平】【时】【喜】【欢】【读】【这】【方】【面】【的】【书】【,】【而】【可】【贵】【的】【是】【她】【把】【书】【读】【活】【了】【,】【能】【够】【运】【用】【知】【识】【,】【从】【中】【形】【成】【自】【己】【的】【思】【想】【观】【点】【。】【文】【中】【所】【列】【举】【的】【人】【物】【和】【作】【品】【也】【为】【许】【多】【同】【学】【所】【熟】【知】【,】【却】【未】【必】【能】【使】【之】【为】【我】【所】【用】【。】【这】【正】【是】【需】【要】【我】【们】【向】【她】【学】【习】【的】【地】【方】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【后】【我】【想】【对】【那】【位】【老】【师】【讲】【几】【句】【。】【作】【文】【不】【是】【宣】【传】【品】【,】【而】【是】【个】【人】【思】【想】【情】【感】【的】【真】【实】【记】【录】【。】【宣】【传】【事】【关】【政】【治】【,】【而】【作】【文】【则】【是】【事】【关】【心】【灵】【。】【如】【果】【总】【是】【用】【政】【治】【的】【眼】【光】【来】【看】【待】【和】【指】【导】【作】【文】【,】【学】【生】【不】【仅】【写】【不】【出】【好】【文】【章】【,】【而】【且】【会】【在】【作】【文】【中】【充】【满】【假】【大】【空】【。】【我】【们】【对】【学】【生】【辛】【辛】【苦】【苦】【的】【教】【导】【很】【可】【能】【成】【为】【一】【种】【误】【导】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【荐】【评】【老】【师】【:】【毛】【荣】【富】【)】

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