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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【大】【家】【等】【会】【儿】【下】【去】【照】【毕】【业】【照】【!】【我】【想】【大】【家】【一】【定】【希】【望】【照】【得】【漂】【亮】【点】【儿】【,】【赶】【紧】【把】【衣】【服】【和】【头】【发】【整】【理】【一】【下】【吧】【!】【”】【班】【主】【任】【在】【讲】【台】【上】【微】【笑】【地】【说】【,】【但】【声】【音】【却】【不】【像】【往】【常】【那】【般】【自】【然】【,】【也】【许】【是】【不】【舍】【吧】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【下】【面】【的】【同】【学】【立】【刻】【七】【嘴】【八】【舌】【地】【议】【论】【起】【来】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【今】【天】【就】【要】【照】【毕】【业】【照】【了】【,】【也】【太】【早】【了】【吧】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【不】【早】【啦】【!】【只】【剩】【下】【一】【个】【月】【了】【,】【此】【时】【不】【照】【,】【更】【待】【何】【时】【啊】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【可】【不】【是】【吗】【?】【中】【考】【越】【来】【越】【近】【了】【。】【可】【我】【还】【没】【有】【进】【入】【学】【习】【状】【态】【哪】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【番】【热】【烈】【的】【讨】【论】【之】【后】【,】【我】【们】【在】【班】【主】【任】【的】【带】【领】【下】【来】【到】【学】【校】【门】【口】【。】【“】【男】【女】【生】【各】【一】【组】【,】【按】【大】【小】【个】【儿】【,】【迅】【速】【排】【队】【!】【”】【班】【主】【任】【大】【声】【喊】【道】【。】【命】【令】【一】【下】【,】【同】【学】【们】【都】【自】【觉】【地】【站】【好】【队】【伍】【。】【“】【真】【的】【就】【要】【毕】【业】【了】【吗】【?】【”】【我】【有】【些】【茫】【然】【,】【再】【看】【看】【身】【边】【的】【同】【学】【们】【,】【他】【们】【的】【表】【情】【似】【乎】【在】【回】【答】【我】【:】【“】【真】【的】【!】【”】【站】【在】【队】【伍】【中】【,】【我】【陷】【入】【沉】【思】【:】【三】【年】【前】【刚】【入】【学】【的】【场】【景】【在】【我】【脑】【海】【里】【鲜】【活】【起】【来】【,】【一】【张】【张】【稚】【气】【未】【脱】【的】【面】【孔】【,】【一】【句】【句】【陌】【生】【却】【温】【暖】【的】【话】【语】【…】【…】【似】【乎】【发】【生】【在】【昨】【天】【,】【而】【今】【即】【将】【离】【别】【,】【叫】【我】【们】【如】【何】【承】【受】【?】【可】【时】【间】【并】【不】【会】【因】【为】【我】【们】【的】【不】【舍】【而】【止】【步】【。】【科】【任】【老】【师】【到】【齐】【后】【,】【我】【们】【被】【安】【排】【在】【不】【同】【的】【位】【置】【,】【摄】【像】【师】【大】【声】【喊】【着】【:】【“】【做】【好】【准】【备】【…】【…】【一】【、】【二】【、】【三】【,】【茄】【子】【!】【”】【只】【一】【瞬】【间】【,】【相】【机】【记】【录】【下】【我】【僵】【硬】【的】【笑】【容】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【队】【伍】【散】【去】【,】【同】【学】【还】【在】【调】【侃】【着】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【知】【道】【吗】【?】【你】【刚】【才】【的】【表】【情】【好】【搞】【笑】【哦】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【你】【不】【也】【是】【?】【笑】【得】【好】【勉】【强】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【快】【回】【班】【级】【看】【书】【吧】【,】【中】【考】【真】【的】【快】【来】【啦】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【语】【惊】【醒】【梦】【中】【人】【,】【我】【们】【迅】【速】【散】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【回】【到】【教】【室】【,】【大】【家】【纷】【纷】【拿】【出】【各】【自】【的】【书】【本】【,】【埋】【头】【苦】【学】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【真】【的】【就】【要】【毕】【业】【了】【!】【”】【我】【一】【边】【拿】【书】【,】【一】【边】【对】【自】【己】【说】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【石】【文】【娟】【)】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【近】【年】【来】【,】【中】【考】【作】【文】【试】【题】【讲】【求】【全】【面】【对】【接】【中】【学】【生】【生】【活】【,】【强】【调】【表】【达】【真】【情】【实】【感】【,】【鼓】【励】【学】【生】【表】【露】【自】【己】【的】【真】【实】【情】【怀】【,】【真】【正】【做】【到】【“】【说】【真】【话】【、】【实】【话】【、】【心】【里】【话】【,】【不】【说】【假】【话】【、】【空】【话】【、】【套】【话】【”】【(】【《】【语】【文】【课】【程】【标】【准】【》】【)】【。】【这】【样】【,】【才】【能】【实】【现】【“】【引】【导】【学】【生】【关】【注】【现】【实】【,】【热】【爱】【生】【活】【,】【表】【达】【真】【情】【实】【感】【”】【的】【目】【标】【。】【因】【此】【,】【命】【题】【者】【常】【着】【眼】【于】【以】【下】【四】【个】【方】【面】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【“】【自】【我】【成】【长】【”】【类】【从】【中】【考】【命】【题】【形】【势】【看】【,】【自】【我】【成】【长】【类】【考】【题】【在】【逐】【年】【升】【温】【。】【专】【家】【预】【测】【,】【在】【推】【行】【课】【程】【改】【革】【、】【强】【调】【人】【文】【关】【怀】【的】【新】【时】【代】【,】【此】【类】【考】【题】【会】【逐】【渐】【成】【为】【命】【题】【的】【核】【心】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【自】【我】【成】【长】【类】【文】【章】【,】【有】【三】【条】【出】【彩】【捷】【径】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【1】【)】【展】【示】【真】【我】【风】【采】【,】【内】【容】【求】【新】【。】【尺】【有】【所】【短】【,】【寸】【有】【所】【长】【,】【也】【许】【你】【无】【法】【在】【课】【堂】【上】【侃】【侃】【而】【谈】【,】【但】【你】【可】【以】【在】【球】【场】【上】【一】【马】【当】【先】【;】【也】【许】【你】【无】【法】【在】【舞】【台】【上】【一】【展】【歌】【喉】【,】【但】【你】【可】【以】【在】【考】【场】【上】【胸】【有】【成】【竹】【…】【…】【只】【要】【我】【们】【找】【准】【了】【自】【我】【的】【闪】【光】【点】【,】【精】【彩】【的】【素】【材】【就】【会】【扑】【面】【而】【来】【。】【比】【如】【你】【爱】【好】【音】【乐】【,】【对】【经】【典】【的】【歌】【词】【与】【动】【听】【的】【旋】【律】【自】【然】【会】【情】【有】【独】【钟】【;】【如】【果】【你】【爱】【好】【文】【学】【,】【名】【言】【佳】【句】【与】【诗】【词】【典】【故】【定】【可】【信】【手】【拈】【来】【。】【只】【要】【你】【爱】【好】【写】【作】【,】【往】【往】【能】【有】【意】【想】【不】【到】【的】【收】【获】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【2】【)】【述】【说】【成】【长】【故】【事】【,】【情】【节】【求】【巧】【。】【人】【生】【路】【上】【,】【不】【会】【一】【帆】【风】【顺】【。】【成】【长】【的】【过】【程】【,】【苦】【辣】【酸】【甜】【咸】【,】【五】【味】【俱】【全】【。】【我】【们】【若】【能】【抓】【住】【这】【一】【点】【做】【文】【章】【,】【情】【节】【自】【然】【会】【波】【澜】【迭】【起】【,】【内】【容】【自】【然】【会】【扣】【人】【心】【弦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【3】【)】【融】【入】【感】【情】【清】【泉】【,】【情】【感】【求】【真】【。】【能】【否】【感】【动】【读】【者】【要】【看】【你】【是】【否】【能】【融】【入】【真】【实】【的】【情】【感】【。】【要】【学】【会】【将】【心】【灵】【深】【处】【最】【精】【彩】【的】【点】【滴】【,】【用】【真】【挚】【的】【感】【情】【诉】【诸】【笔】【端】【,】【这】【样】【,】【一】【个】【表】【情】【或】【—】【个】【动】【作】【,】【也】【许】【就】【是】【一】【道】【风】【景】【,】【细】【细】【地】【品】【味】【起】【来】【,】【那】【酸】【甜】【苦】【辣】【的】【味】【儿】【,】【也】【会】【让】【你】【如】【同】【口】【含】【橄】【榄】【,】【回】【味】【无】【穷】【。】【基】【本】【做】【法】【就】【是】【在】【命】【题】【作】【文】【中】【常】【以】【“】【我】【”】【为】【中】【心】【拟】【定】【,】【比】【如】【“】【我】【和】【”】【“】【我】【多】【么】【想】【”】【“】【我】【的】【特】【长】【”】【“】【没】【想】【到】【我】【如】【此】【”】【“】【为】【自】【己】【而】【骄】【傲】【”】【“】【我】【们】【这】【些】【人】【”】【等】【。】【又】【比】【如】【,】【以】【“】【成】【长】【”】【“】【第】【一】【次】【”】【“】【秘】【密】【”】【“】【个】【性】【”】【“】【朋】【友】【”】【“】【回】【答】【”】【“】【做】【好】【准】【备】【”】【等】【为】【主】【题】【写】【作】【,】【内】【容】【上】【贴】【近】【学】【生】【的】【成】【长】【经】【历】【,】【密】【切】【联】【系】【他】【们】【的】【生】【活】【实】【际】【,】【他】【们】【体】【会】【最】【深】【,】【感】【受】【也】【多】【,】【容】【易】【下】【笔】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【“】【素】【质】【情】【感】【”】【类】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【比】【如】【以】【“】【感】【受】【快】【乐】【”】【“】【喜】【欢】【”】【“】【兑】【现】【诺】【言】【”】【“】【美】【德】【”】【“】【珍】【爱】【”】【“】【吃】【苦】【”】【“】【宽】【容】【”】【“】【体】【谅】【”】【“】【温】【暖】【”】【“】【友】【好】【”】【“】【健】【康】【”】【等】【为】【主】【题】【写】【作】【,】【就】【能】【够】【引】【导】【学】【生】【关】【注】【人】【性】【中】【美】【好】【的】【事】【物】【和】【美】【好】【的】【情】【感】【,】【让】【考】【生】【在】【深】【入】【思】【考】【的】【过】【程】【中】【加】【深】【对】【真】【、】【善】【、】【美】【的】【体】【验】【和】【向】【往】【。】【例】【如】【:】【2】【0】【1】【0】【年】【广】【东】【卷】【:】【“】【那】【天】【,】【我】【见】【到】【了】【快】【乐】【的】【钥】【匙】【”】【;】【2】【0】【1】【0】【年】【江】【苏】【南】【通】【卷】【:】【“】【让】【我】【轻】【轻】【告】【诉】【你】【”】【;】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【安】【徽】【省】【卷】【:】【“】【在】【我】【们】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【”】【;】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【陕】【西】【卷】【:】【“】【我】【想】【看】【见】【你】【的】【笑】【”】【等】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【“】【社】【会】【生】【活】【”】【类】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【比】【如】【以】【“】【奥】【运】【”】【“】【和】【谐】【”】【“】【交】【往】【”】【“】【贫】【困】【”】【“】【公】【开】【”】【“】【帮】【助】【”】【“】【关】【注】【”】【“】【动】【力】【”】【“】【书】【”】【“】【回】【忆】【”】【“】【细】【节】【”】【“】【习】【惯】【”】【“】【学】【习】【”】【“】【水】【”】【等】【为】【主】【题】【写】【作】【,】【可】【以】【引】【导】【学】【生】【关】【注】【身】【边】【的】【热】【点】【话】【题】【,】【放】【眼】【社】【会】【生】【活】【。】【例】【如】【:】【2】【0】【0】【8】【年】【湖】【北】【宜】【昌】【卷】【:】【“】【汶】【川】【地】【震】【有】【巨】【大】【破】【坏】【力】【的】【原】【因】【”】【明】【显】【是】【扣】【“】【四】【川】【汶】【川】【大】【地】【震】【”】【的】【主】【题】【;】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【浙】【江】【嘉】【兴】【卷】【:】【“】【不】【走】【寻】【常】【路】【”】【明】【显】【是】【扣】【“】【周】【杰】【伦】【”】【和】【“】【蔡】【伟】【”】【两】【位】【热】【点】【人】【物】【;】【2】【0】【1】【0】【年】【吉】【林】【卷】【:】【“】【天】【使】【让】【人】【牵】【挂】【”】【明】【显】【是】【扣】【“】【上】【海】【世】【博】【会】【”】【和】【“】【青】【海】【玉】【树】【地】【震】【”】【这】【两】【大】【新】【闻】【事】【件】【。】【再】【如】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【四】【川】【内】【江】【中】【考】【作】【文】【题】【,】【是】【一】【道】【典】【型】【的】【材】【料】【作】【文】【题】【,】【材】【料】【便】【摘】【自】【《】【华】【西】【都】【市】【报】【》】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【4】【.】【“】【想】【象】【创】【新】【”】【类】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【类】【试】【题】【如】【果】【处】【理】【不】【当】【,】【过】【于】【脱】【离】【学】【生】【生】【活】【,】【就】【会】【助】【长】【“】【假】【、】【大】【、】【空】【”】【风】【气】【的】【盛】【行】【。】【命】【题】【时】【要】【有】【利】【于】【写】【作】【者】【从】【生】【活】【出】【发】【,】【大】【胆】【展】【开】【想】【象】【的】【翅】【膀】【。】【如】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【江】【苏】【徐】【州】【卷】【:】【“】【面】【对】【自】【然】【”】【;】【2】【0】【1】【0】【年】【河】【北】【卷】【:】【“】【—】【—】【来】【了】【”】【;】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【山】【东】【德】【州】【卷】【:】【“】【风】【筝】【”】【等】【,】【让】【学】【生】【在】【想】【象】【中】【创】【新】【,】【在】【创】【新】【中】【展】【示】【风】【采】【。】孕妇营养食品【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【间】【过】【得】【真】【快】【,】【又】【到】【周】【末】【了】【,】【望】【着】【窗】【外】【皎】【洁】【的】【月】【光】【,】【我】【忽】【然】【想】【起】【家】【乡】【的】【小】【巷】【—】【—】【那】【个】【曾】【留】【下】【我】【童】【年】【记】【忆】【的】【地】【方】【。】【(】【开】【头】【直】【接】【点】【出】【心】【中】【的】【小】【巷】【,】【很】【好】【地】【引】【出】【了】【下】【文】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【印】【象】【中】【的】【家】【乡】【小】【巷】【是】【美】【丽】【无】【比】【的】【。】【它】【四】【通】【八】【达】【,】【幽】【深】【曲】【折】【,】【宛】【若】【一】【张】【脉】【络】【分】【明】【的】【网】【。】【每】【一】【条】【小】【巷】【都】【铺】【着】【青】【石】【板】【,】【两】【边】【是】【低】【矮】【而】【拥】【挤】【的】【小】【阁】【楼】【,】【屋】【檐】【向】【前】【挑】【着】【,】【显】【得】【古】【朴】【、】【典】【雅】【,】【似】【乎】【与】【外】【面】【的】【喧】【闹】【、】【繁】【华】【极】【不】【协】【调】【。】【(】【这】【里】【重】【点】【介】【绍】【小】【巷】【中】【的】【屋】【檐】【,】【突】【出】【了】【其】【古】【朴】【、】【典】【雅】【之】【美】【。】【)】【然】【而】【,】【当】【你】【独】【行】【在】【小】【巷】【时】【,】【听】【着】【脚】【踏】【青】【石】【板】【发】【出】【的】【“】【啪】【啪】【”】【声】【和】【水】【滴】【的】【溅】【落】【声】【,】【再】【向】【前】【望】【,】【小】【巷】【尽】【头】【透】【着】【时】【隐】【时】【现】【的】【灯】【光】【,】【你】【会】【忽】【然】【感】【到】【一】【阵】【舒】【畅】【,】【一】【阵】【温】【馨】【。】【(】【描】【写】【细】【腻】【,】【尽】【展】【小】【巷】【清】【新】【、】【幽】【深】【之】【美】【。】【)】【一】【切】【都】【是】【那】【么】【清】【新】【、】【自】【然】【,】【不】【加】【任】【何】【修】【饰】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【巷】【里】【的】【热】【闹】【景】【象】【是】【永】【远】【让】【人】【怀】【念】【的】【。】【每】【到】【傍】【晚】【,】【忙】【碌】【了】【一】【天】【的】【人】【们】【回】【到】【家】【,】【听】【吧】【,】【小】【巷】【会】【奏】【出】【一】【首】【锅】【碗】【瓢】【盆】【交】【响】【曲】【。】【接】【着】【,】【一】【股】【夹】【杂】【着】【各】【种】【味】【道】【的】【气】【味】【便】【弥】【漫】【在】【狭】【窄】【的】【小】【巷】【中】【了】【。】【(】【这】【里】【综】【合】【调】【动】【视】【觉】【、】【听】【觉】【、】【嗅】【觉】【等】【感】【觉】【,】【表】【现】【了】【小】【巷】【生】【活】【的】【热】【闹】【和】【温】【馨】【,】【读】【来】【让】【人】【神】【往】【。】【)】【孩】【子】【们】【在】【天】【井】【里】【追】【逐】【打】【闹】【:】【有】【的】【逗】【着】【小】【狗】【乱】【窜】【,】【有】【的】【斗】【蛐】【蛐】【正】【玩】【儿】【得】【不】【亦】【乐】【乎】【,】【有】【的】【蹑】【手】【蹑】【脚】【地】【偷】【摘】【老】【爷】【爷】【们】【的】【鸟】【笼】【…】【…】【嬉】【笑】【打】【闹】【为】【平】【静】【的】【小】【巷】【注】【入】【了】【活】【力】【。】【老】【爷】【爷】【们】【仰】【面】【躺】【在】【太】【师】【椅】【上】【,】【悠】【然】【地】【听】【着】【收】【音】【机】【,】【不】【时】【地】【哼】【上】【几】【句】【…】【…】【此】【时】【,】【小】【巷】【又】【像】【一】【张】【风】【情】【画】【,】【没】【有】【什】【么】【大】【红】【大】【绿】【,】【却】【透】【着】【一】【股】【朴】【实】【—】【—】【朴】【实】【的】【人】【,】【朴】【实】【的】【生】【活】【。】【(】【景】【物】【描】【写】【之】【后】【,】【简】【要】【地】【以】【景】【寓】【情】【,】【既】【表】【现】【了】【作】【者】【对】【小】【巷】【的】【无】【限】【热】【爱】【之】【情】【,】【也】【有】【力】【地】【升】【华】【了】【文】【章】【的】【中】【心】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【想】【起】【小】【巷】【,】【我】【小】【时】【候】【安】【静】【地】【靠】【在】【奶】【奶】【的】【怀】【抱】【中】【乘】【凉】【的】【情】【景】【又】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【地】【浮】【现】【在】【眼】【前】【。】【晚】【上】【,】【人】【们】【都】【歇】【了】【,】【小】【巷】【显】【得】【很】【寂】【静】【,】【只】【有】【一】【些】【小】【虫】【仍】【然】【不】【闲】【着】【。】【我】【依】【偎】【在】【奶】【奶】【怀】【中】【,】【望】【着】【黑】【洞】【洞】【的】【小】【巷】【,】【无】【边】【无】【际】【。】【这】【时】【,】【月】【亮】【已】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【地】【爬】【上】【来】【,】【淡】【淡】【的】【月】【光】【泻】【在】【石】【板】【路】【上】【,】【像】【一】【盆】【水】【泼】【在】【上】【面】【,】【静】【静】【地】【滚】【动】【。】【奶】【奶】【一】【边】【轻】【轻】【摇】【着】【蒲】【扇】【,】【一】【边】【哼】【着】【儿】【歌】【。】【一】【阵】【微】【风】【带】【着】【花】【儿】【淡】【淡】【的】【清】【香】【拂】【过】【面】【庞】【,】【我】【真】【要】【醉】【了】【。】【小】【巷】【仿】【佛】【是】【大】【海】【中】【泊】【着】【的】【一】【叶】【小】【舟】【,】【而】【我】【就】【躺】【在】【它】【的】【怀】【抱】【中】【。】【月】【光】【像】【为】【我】【盖】【上】【一】【层】【薄】【被】【,】【船】【在】【轻】【轻】【摇】【动】【,】【我】【的】【心】【也】【随】【之】【微】【微】【荡】【漾】【…】【…】【(】【比】【喻】【新】【奇】【而】【优】【美】【,】【给】【人】【以】【无】【尽】【的】【联】【想】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【窗】【外】【虫】【声】【啾】【啾】【,】【叫】【醒】【了】【我】【那】【遥】【远】【的】【思】【绪】【。】【我】【离】【开】【家】【乡】【已】【好】【几】【年】【了】【,】【再】【也】【听】【不】【见】【那】【熟】【悉】【的】【声】【音】【,】【再】【也】【看】【不】【到】【那】【熟】【悉】【的】【小】【巷】【了】【。】【小】【巷】【还】【在】【吗】【?】【奶】【奶】【依】【旧】【在】【月】【夜】【下】【哼】【着】【歌】【吗】【?】【小】【巷】【还】【在】【,】【不】【过】【奶】【奶】【老】【了】【;】【小】【巷】【还】【在】【,】【不】【过】【我】【已】【难】【得】【再】【见】【了】【,】【只】【有】【月】【光】【依】【旧】【皎】【洁】【明】【亮】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【什】【么】【时】【候】【再】【回】【到】【家】【乡】【的】【小】【巷】【呢】【?】【(】【结】【尾】【既】【回】【应】【了】【标】【题】【,】【也】【升】【华】【了】【文】【章】【的】【中】【心】【,】【达】【到】【了】【言】【有】【尽】【而】【意】【无】【穷】【的】【效】【果】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【升】【格】【评】【点】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【优】【美】【的】【写】【景】【抒】【情】【的】【佳】【作】【。】【文】【章】【由】【表】【及】【里】【,】【由】【物】【到】【人】【,】【抒】【发】【了】【对】【家】【乡】【及】【亲】【人】【的】【思】【念】【之】【情】【,】【感】【染】【力】【很】【强】【。】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【在】【写】【作】【上】【有】【一】【个】【鲜】【明】【的】【特】【点】【,】【那】【就】【是】【描】【写】【细】【腻】【优】【美】【,】【给】【人】【以】【非】【常】【形】【象】【具】【体】【的】【感】【受】【。】【文】【章】【描】【写】【小】【巷】【既】【调】【动】【了】【各】【种】【感】【觉】【来】【展】【现】【小】【巷】【的】【特】【点】【,】【又】【综】【合】【运】【用】【各】【种】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【来】【突】【出】【小】【巷】【的】【特】【征】【,】【读】【来】【我】【们】【也】【仿】【佛】【置】【身】【于】【小】【巷】【之】【中】【,】【给】【人】【以】【身】【临】【其】【境】【之】【感】【。】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【真】【题】【展】【示】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【题】【目】【:】【不】【能】【没】【有】【你】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【求】【:】【①】【 】【除】【诗】【歌】【外】【,】【文】【体】【不】【限】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【②】【 】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【,】【不】【得】【抄】【袭】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【③】【 】【不】【少】【于】【6】【0】【0】【字】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【④】【 】【文】【中】【不】【得】【出】【现】【真】【实】【的】【人】【名】【、】【校】【名】【和】【地】【名】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【题】【解】【读】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【不】【能】【没】【有】【你】【”】【是】【一】【个】【动】【宾】【短】【语】【,】【题】【目】【省】【略】【了】【主】【语】【,】【体】【现】【了】【命】【题】【者】【对】【考】【生】【的】【人】【文】【关】【怀】【,】【为】【考】【生】【提】【供】【了】【广】【阔】【的】【写】【作】【空】【间】【,】【具】【有】【强】【烈】【的】【抒】【情】【意】【味】【和】【思】【维】【的】【发】【散】【性】【。】【发】【散】【思】【维】【的】【关】【键】【是】【要】【打】【破】【思】【维】【的】【定】【式】【,】【改】【变】【单】【一】【的】【思】【维】【方】【式】【,】【尽】【可】【能】【地】【拓】【展】【思】【路】【,】【从】【同】【一】【问】【题】【的】【各】【个】【角】【度】【、】【各】【个】【方】【面】【、】【各】【个】【层】【次】【进】【行】【,】【或】【顺】【向】【、】【逆】【向】【、】【纵】【向】【、】【横】【向】【的】【思】【考】【,】【从】【而】【获】【得】【众】【多】【的】【独】【特】【新】【颖】【的】【材】【料】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【构】【思】【时】【,】【首】【先】【,】【针】【对】【宾】【语】【“】【你】【”】【是】【谁】【,】【可】【从】【人】【、】【景】【、】【物】【三】【个】【角】【度】【发】【散】【:】【可】【以】【选】【择】【与】【亲】【人】【、】【师】【长】【、】【朋】【友】【、】【对】【手】【等】【交】【往】【的】【材】【料】【来】【写】【,】【也】【可】【以】【选】【择】【给】【人】【以】【生】【活】【乐】【趣】【或】【启】【示】【的】【动】【物】【、】【植】【物】【这】【类】【材】【料】【来】【写】【;】【可】【以】【选】【择】【有】【生】【命】【意】【趣】【的】【物】【品】【,】【像】【舞】【台】【、】【传】【媒】【、】【书】【、】【乐】【器】【、】【画】【笔】【、】【某】【件】【纪】【念】【品】【等】【材】【料】【来】【写】【,】【也】【可】【以】【选】【择】【抚】【慰】【心】【灵】【、】【寄】【放】【情】【感】【的】【自】【然】【山】【水】【、】【日】【月】【星】【辰】【、】【城】【市】【乡】【村】【等】【材】【料】【来】【写】【,】【还】【可】【以】【选】【择】【事】【业】【、】【诗】【歌】【、】【感】【情】【等】【抽】【象】【事】【物】【来】【写】【。】【如】【果】【“】【你】【”】【指】【代】【的】【是】【某】【个】【人】【,】【那】【必】【须】【是】【“】【单】【数】【(】【个】【体】【)】【”】【,】【不】【能】【写】【成】【“】【复】【数】【(】【群】【体】【)】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【其】【次】【,】【针】【对】【主】【语】【—】【—】【谁】【“】【不】【能】【没】【有】【你】【”】【,】【也】【可】【从】【人】【、】【环】【境】【、】【事】【物】【三】【个】【角】【度】【发】【散】【:】【可】【以】【从】【“】【我】【”】【是】【主】【语】【的】【角】【度】【切】【入】【,】【也】【可】【以】【不】【一】【定】【写】【“】【我】【”】【,】【譬】【如】【一】【个】【民】【族】【不】【能】【没】【有】【为】【之】【骄】【傲】【的】【伟】【人】【,】【一】【个】【时】【代】【不】【能】【没】【有】【思】【想】【的】【先】【驱】【,】【航】【天】【事】【业】【不】【能】【没】【有】【忠】【诚】【敬】【业】【的】【科】【技】【人】【才】【,】【广】【阔】【天】【空】【不】【能】【没】【有】【流】【云】【、】【飞】【鸟】【等】【等】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【后】【,】【要】【明】【确】【写】【作】【的】【主】【体】【是】【作】【谓】【语】【的】【双】【重】【否】【定】【词】【“】【不】【能】【没】【有】【”】【,】【也】【就】【是】【要】【浓】【墨】【重】【彩】【地】【写】【为】【什】【么】【“】【不】【能】【没】【有】【你】【”】【,】【可】【从】【因】【果】【关】【系】【、】【假】【设】【关】【系】【、】【转】【折】【关】【系】【、】【条】【件】【关】【系】【等】【角】【度】【思】【考】【,】【抓】【住】【“】【你】【”】【的】【外】【在】【特】【征】【,】【写】【出】【“】【你】【”】【的】【内】【在】【品】【质】【,】【写】【出】【“】【不】【能】【没】【有】【”】【的】【理】【由】【依】【据】【,】【即】【阐】【明】【“】【你】【”】【的】【重】【要】【性】【。】【行】【文】【时】【,】【或】【运】【用】【真】【情】【动】【人】【法】【,】【带】【着】【真】【情】【去】【构】【思】【,】【捕】【捉】【生】【活】【中】【的】【闪】【光】【点】【,】【采】【撷】【真】【情】【的】【花】【朵】【,】【从】【而】【打】【动】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【的】【心】【,】【得】【到】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【的】【青】【睐】【;】【或】【运】【用】【细】【节】【描】【写】【技】【法】【,】【抓】【住】【“】【你】【”】【生】【活】【中】【的】【细】【微】【而】【又】【具】【体】【的】【典】【型】【情】【节】【,】【加】【以】【生】【动】【细】【致】【的】【描】【写】【,】【既】【能】【使】【人】【物】【形】【象】【栩】【栩】【如】【生】【,】【又】【能】【深】【刻】【地】【反】【映】【出】【人】【物】【形】【象】【的】【本】【质】【特】【征】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【考】【场】【佳】【作】【一】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【能】【没】【有】【你】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【○】【 】【扬】【州】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【总】【是】【习】【惯】【嘴】【角】【上】【扬】【2】【5】【°】【,】【你】【总】【是】【习】【惯】【眼】【睛】【闭】【合】【1】【5】【°】【;】【你】【曾】【经】【在】【我】【身】【边】【,】【抚】【平】【我】【心】【灵】【的】【伤】【痛】【,】【驱】【赶】【我】【灵】【魂】【的】【黑】【暗】【。】【然】【而】【,】【自】【负】【蒙】【蔽】【了】【双】【眼】【,】【好】【强】【塞】【住】【了】【双】【耳】【,】【我】【坚】【定】【地】【告】【诉】【你】【,】【我】【不】【再】【需】【要】【你】【了】【。】【我】【没】【有】【发】【现】【你】【的】【落】【寞】【与】【伤】【心】【,】【就】【这】【样】【疏】【远】【了】【你】【。】【远】【离】【,】【冷】【漠】【,】【你】【最】【后】【还】【是】【悄】【悄】【离】【开】【了】【我】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【现】【实】【的】【风】【雨】【折】【断】【理】【想】【的】【翅】【膀】【,】【当】【世】【俗】【的】【高】【墙】【阻】【挡】【前】【行】【的】【道】【路】【,】【我】【的】【心】【变】【得】【空】【虚】【而】【寂】【寞】【,】【我】【才】【发】【现】【不】【能】【没】【有】【你】【。】【我】【在】【心】【底】【召】【唤】【,】【踏】【遍】【千】【山】【万】【水】【,】【只】【为】【寻】【找】【你】【的】【身】【影】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【一】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【新】【学】【期】【来】【临】【,】【班】【里】【转】【来】【一】【个】【新】【同】【学】【。】【曾】【经】【和】【我】【一】【样】【也】【是】【“】【冷】【血】【动】【物】【”】【,】【从】【来】【不】【和】【同】【学】【们】【交】【流】【,】【也】【从】【不】【和】【同】【学】【们】【玩】【耍】【。】【可】【是】【,】【我】【看】【到】【了】【你】【的】【身】【影】【出】【现】【在】【他】【的】【身】【边】【。】【我】【看】【到】【你】【向】【他】【伸】【出】【了】【友】【谊】【之】【手】【,】【嘴】【角】【禁】【不】【住】【上】【扬】【2】【5】【°】【,】【眼】【睛】【禁】【不】【住】【闭】【合】【1】【5】【°】【,】【告】【诉】【他】【,】【欢】【迎】【他】【加】【入】【我】【们】【这】【个】【新】【集】【体】【。】【他】【看】【着】【你】【,】【显】【得】【有】【些】【诧】【异】【,】【不】【过】【还】【是】【伸】【出】【了】【友】【谊】【之】【手】【。】【后】【来】【,】【我】【渐】【渐】【发】【现】【他】【开】【始】【融】【入】【新】【环】【境】【,】【他】【变】【得】【开】【朗】【了】【。】【我】【才】【发】【现】【不】【能】【没】【有】【你】【,】【因】【为】【你】【可】【以】【打】【开】【陌】【生】【人】【的】【心】【扉】【,】【展】【开】【一】【次】【真】【诚】【的】【心】【灵】【对】【话】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【二】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【那】【场】【演】【讲】【比】【赛】【上】【,】【我】【的】【心】【跳】【得】【很】【厉】【害】【,】【甚】【至】【喘】【不】【过】【气】【来】【。】【轮】【到】【我】【了】【,】【我】【慢】【慢】【地】【走】【上】【讲】【台】【,】【咽】【了】【咽】【吐】【沫】【,】【看】【着】【台】【下】【黑】【压】【压】【的】【一】【片】【,】【我】【慌】【了】【。】【我】【的】【脑】【海】【里】【白】【茫】【茫】【一】【片】【,】【竟】【不】【知】【从】【何】【说】【起】【。】【主】【持】【人】【不】【断】【地】【催】【促】【我】【,】【我】【更】【紧】【张】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【扫】【了】【一】【眼】【台】【下】【的】【观】【众】【,】【在】【人】【群】【中】【找】【到】【了】【你】【。】【你】【依】【然】【嘴】【角】【上】【扬】【2】【5】【°】【,】【眼】【睛】【闭】【合】【1】【5】【°】【,】【从】【你】【的】【眼】【睛】【里】【我】【看】【到】【了】【信】【任】【和】【鼓】【励】【。】【我】【深】【吸】【了】【一】【口】【气】【,】【好】【像】【台】【下】【只】【有】【你】【一】【个】【人】【,】【紧】【张】【的】【心】【情】【慢】【慢】【平】【静】【下】【来】【,】【终】【于】【开】【始】【了】【我】【的】【演】【讲】【。】【演】【讲】【中】【,】【我】【也】【是】【嘴】【角】【上】【扬】【2】【5】【°】【,】【眼】【睛】【闭】【合】【1】【5】【°】【。】【演】【讲】【完】【毕】【,】【我】【听】【到】【了】【台】【下】【的】【掌】【声】【,】【我】【知】【道】【成】【功】【了】【。】【在】【人】【群】【中】【搜】【索】【你】【的】【身】【影】【,】【你】【正】【在】【为】【我】【鼓】【掌】【呢】【!】【我】【渐】【渐】【地】【发】【现】【不】【能】【没】【有】【你】【,】【因】【为】【你】【能】【给】【我】【勇】【气】【和】【信】【心】【,】【去】【收】【获】【成】【功】【的】【掌】【声】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【三】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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】【“】【你】【”】【是】【谁】【呢】【?】【直】【至】【读】【完】【全】【文】【,】【方】【揭】【开】【谜】【底】【,】【这】【样】【层】【层】【设】【置】【悬】【念】【,】【有】【助】【于】【吸】【引】【读】【者】【的】【阅】【读】【兴】【趣】【。】【行】【文】【的】【重】【点】【落】【实】【在】【“】【不】【能】【没】【有】【你】【”】【上】【,】【与】【“】【我】【”】【的】【行】【为】【举】【止】【相】【比】【照】【,】【使】【文】【章】【的】【中】【心】【更】【加】【突】【出】【。】【文】【章】【采】【用】【自】【然】【分】【段】【的】【方】【式】【,】【不】【用】【任】【何】【过】【渡】【,】【也】【不】【显】【别】【扭】【,】【相】【反】【还】【大】【大】【增】【加】【了】【文】【章】【的】【内】【在】【张】【力】【。】【另】【外】【,】【运】【用】【生】【动】【而】【形】【象】【的】【比】【喻】【也】【使】【文】【章】【增】【色】【不】【少】【,】【是】【一】【篇】【不】【可】【多】【见】【的】【应】【试】【佳】【作】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【考】【场】【佳】【作】【二】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【能】【没】【有】【你】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【○】【 】【扬】【州】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【,】【总】【是】【默】【默】【地】【付】【出】【,】【细】【心】【地】【照】【顾】【着】【我】【们】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【好】【儿】【媳】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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】【这】【篇】【考】【场】【作】【文】【的】【最】【大】【特】【色】【是】【以】【小】【见】【大】【,】【在】【叙】【事】【中】【透】【过】【平】【凡】【的】【现】【象】【挖】【出】【不】【平】【凡】【的】【本】【质】【,】【使】【主】【题】【深】【刻】【。】【文】【章】【选】【择】【妈】【妈】【为】【写】【作】【的】【对】【象】【,】【选】【取】【家】【庭】【生】【活】【中】【的】【小】【事】【儿】【,】【叙】【写】【“】【作】【为】【好】【儿】【媳】【,】【默】【默】【地】【为】【公】【公】【付】【出】【;】【作】【为】【好】【妻】【子】【,】【真】【心】【地】【关】【心】【丈】【夫】【;】【作】【为】【好】【妈】【妈】【,】【细】【心】【地】【照】【顾】【子】【女】【”】【的】【细】【节】【来】【表】【现】【妈】【妈】【的】【美】【好】【情】【操】【,】【读】【来】【让】【人】【真】【切】【地】【感】【受】【到】【了】【亲】【情】【的】【伟】【大】【,】【从】【而】【有】【力】【地】【凸】【显】【了】【“】【我】【们】【不】【能】【没】【有】【你】【”】【的】【深】【刻】【内】【涵】【。】孕妇营养食品【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【业】【这】【个】【词】【,】【我】【想】【大】【家】【都】【再】【熟】【悉】【不】【过】【了】【。】【可】【是】【,】【今】【天】【我】【们】【的】【政】【治】【老】【师】【给】【我】【们】【留】【了】【一】【个】【特】【殊】【的】【作】【业】【—】【—】【回】【家】【给】【父】【母】【洗】【手】【洗】【脸】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【放】【学】【的】【路】【上】【,】【我】【冥】【思】【苦】【想】【:】【这】【个】【作】【业】【要】【怎】【么】【说】【,】【怎】【么】【做】【呀】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【回】【家】【后】【,】【正】【好】【要】【开】【饭】【了】【,】【我】【磨】【磨】【蹭】【蹭】【地】【把】【妈】【妈】【拉】【到】【卫】【生】【间】【的】【水】【池】【旁】【,】【吞】【吞】【吐】【吐】【半】【天】【也】【没】【好】【意】【思】【开】【口】【。】【这】【时】【妈】【妈】【可】【急】【了】【:】【“】【你】【有】【什】【么】【事】【,】【赶】【紧】【说】【,】【说】【完】【赶】【紧】【吃】【饭】【吧】【。】【”】【一】【看】【妈】【妈】【着】【急】【了】【,】【就】【想】【豁】【出】【去】【了】【,】【我】【一】【下】【子】【拉】【住】【妈】【妈】【的】【手】【说】【:】【“】【我】【给】【您】【洗】【冼】【手】【吧】【!】【”】【我】【的】【话】【音】【刚】【落】【,】【妈】【妈】【一】【下】【就】【把】【手】【缩】【了】【回】【去】【,】【脸】【红】【着】【说】【:】【“】【我】【又】【不】【是】【小】【孩】【儿】【,】【不】【用】【你】【给】【我】【冼】【,】【等】【我】【老】【了】【不】【能】【动】【的】【时】【候】【你】【再】【孝】【敬】【我】【。】【”】【说】【完】【便】【走】【了】【。】【就】【这】【样】【,】【我】【被】【妈】【妈】【拒】【绝】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【本】【怕】【自】【己】【不】【好】【意】【思】【,】【可】【现】【在】【倒】【是】【妈】【妈】【不】【知】【所】【措】【了】【。】【吃】【完】【饭】【后】【,】【我】【在】【自】【己】【的】【房】【间】【里】【盘】【算】【了】【很】【久】【,】【怎】【么】【才】【能】【让】【妈】【妈】【同】【意】【我】【为】【她】【洗】【手】【洗】【脸】【呢】【?】【这】【时】【想】【到】【“】【一】【鼓】【作】【气】【,】【再】【而】【衰】【,】【三】【而】【竭】【”】【这】【句】【话】【,】【于】【是】【我】【接】【了】【一】【盆】【水】【,】【然】【后】【去】【妈】【妈】【房】【间】【把】【妈】【妈】【硬】【拉】【进】【卫】【生】【间】【,】【没】【等】【妈】【妈】【反】【应】【过】【来】【,】【我】【抓】【住】【妈】【妈】【的】【手】【,】【往】【盆】【里】【一】【放】【,】【便】【不】【管】【不】【顾】【地】【给】【妈】【妈】【冼】【起】【了】【手】【,】【见】【没】【办】【法】【再】【拒】【绝】【了】【,】【妈】【妈】【只】【好】【半】【推】【半】【就】【地】【由】【我】【去】【洗】【了】【。】【冼】【完】【后】【我】【才】【发】【现】【,】【妈】【妈】【的】【手】【上】【竟】【有】【许】【多】【老】【茧】【,】【甚】【至】【有】【的】【地】【方】【还】【裂】【开】【了】【。】【看】【看】【自】【己】【白】【白】【嫩】【嫩】【的】【手】【,】【再】【看】【看】【妈】【妈】【干】【裂】【的】【手】【,】【我】【的】【鼻】【子】【酸】【了】【。】【当】【我】【抬】【头】【时】【,】【看】【到】【妈】【妈】【的】【眼】【睛】【已】【经】【又】【红】【又】【肿】【了】【。】【我】【再】【也】【控】【制】【不】【住】【自】【己】【,】【呜】【咽】【着】【对】【妈】【妈】【说】【:】【“】【妈】【妈】【,】【我】【爱】【您】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【一】【刻】【,】【我】【和】【妈】【妈】【紧】【紧】【地】【拥】【抱】【在】【一】【起】【,】【我】【感】【到】【全】【世】【界】【好】【像】【都】【美】【好】【了】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【特】【殊】【作】【业】【的】【完】【成】【让】【我】【说】【出】【了】【那】【最】【美】【好】【的】【三】【个】【字】【,】【也】【让】【我】【感】【受】【到】【人】【生】【中】【最】【美】【好】【的】【爱】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【情】【感】【真】【切】【自】【然】【,】【无】【矫】【揉】【造】【作】【之】【嫌】【,】【以】【平】【淡】【心】【现】【真】【情】【。】【刻】【画】【细】【致】【,】【描】【写】【生】【动】【。】【首】【尾】【照】【应】【,】【结】【尾】【点】【题】【,】【结】【构】【合】【理】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【刘】【喜】【云】【)】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妈】【妈】【对】【我】【的】【爱】【就】【像】【一】【根】【无】【形】【的】【绳】【索】【,】【把】【我】【这】【只】【渴】【望】【远】【航】【的】【小】【船】【牢】【牢】【地】【拴】【在】【她】【的】【手】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【每】【天】【早】【上】【,】【我】【最】【讨】【厌】【和】【害】【怕】【的】【就】【是】【妈】【妈】【那】【震】【耳】【的】【“】【雷】【声】【”】【—】【—】【“】【快】【起】【来】【,】【把】【数】【学】【概】【念】【背】【几】【遍】【。】【”】【我】【只】【好】【硬】【着】【头】【皮】【穿】【好】【衣】【服】【和】【鞋】【。】【抬】【头】【一】【看】【才】【5】【点】【,】【“】【这】【么】【早】【就】【叫】【人】【家】【起】【来】【呀】【!】【”】【我】【真】【想】【扎】【进】【被】【窝】【再】【甜】【甜】【地】【睡】【上】【一】【觉】【,】【可】【想】【起】【妈】【妈】【那】【震】【耳】【的】【“】【雷】【声】【”】【,】【只】【好】【捧】【起】【那】【令】【人】【烦】【恼】【的】【数】【学】【书】【。】【“】【唉】【!】【觉】【还】【没】【睡】【好】【就】【起】【来】【背】【概】【念】【。】【”】【我】【埋】【怨】【道】【,】【“】【能】【记】【下】【什】【么】【呀】【,】【反】【倒】【越】【背】【越】【糊】【涂】【。】【”】【恰】【巧】【这】【自】【言】【自】【语】【的】【话】【被】【正】【在】【做】【饭】【的】【妈】【妈】【听】【见】【了】【,】【震】【耳】【的】【“】【雷】【声】【”】【又】【来】【了】【:】【“】【早】【晨】【是】【头】【脑】【最】【清】【醒】【的】【时】【候】【,】【记】【不】【住】【,】【还】【是】【你】【不】【用】【心】【。】【”】【我】【只】【好】【继】【续】【奋】【战】【在】【我】【的】【“】【第】【一】【战】【线】【”】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【梅】【小】【红】【)】孕妇营养食品【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【间】【过】【得】【真】【快】【,】【又】【到】【周】【末】【了】【,】【望】【着】【窗】【外】【皎】【洁】【的】【月】【光】【,】【我】【忽】【然】【想】【起】【家】【乡】【的】【小】【巷】【—】【—】【那】【个】【曾】【留】【下】【我】【童】【年】【记】【忆】【的】【地】【方】【。】【(】【开】【头】【直】【接】【点】【出】【心】【中】【的】【小】【巷】【,】【很】【好】【地】【引】【出】【了】【下】【文】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【印】【象】【中】【的】【家】【乡】【小】【巷】【是】【美】【丽】【无】【比】【的】【。】【它】【四】【通】【八】【达】【,】【幽】【深】【曲】【折】【,】【宛】【若】【一】【张】【脉】【络】【分】【明】【的】【网】【。】【每】【一】【条】【小】【巷】【都】【铺】【着】【青】【石】【板】【,】【两】【边】【是】【低】【矮】【而】【拥】【挤】【的】【小】【阁】【楼】【,】【屋】【檐】【向】【前】【挑】【着】【,】【显】【得】【古】【朴】【、】【典】【雅】【,】【似】【乎】【与】【外】【面】【的】【喧】【闹】【、】【繁】【华】【极】【不】【协】【调】【。】【(】【这】【里】【重】【点】【介】【绍】【小】【巷】【中】【的】【屋】【檐】【,】【突】【出】【了】【其】【古】【朴】【、】【典】【雅】【之】【美】【。】【)】【然】【而】【,】【当】【你】【独】【行】【在】【小】【巷】【时】【,】【听】【着】【脚】【踏】【青】【石】【板】【发】【出】【的】【“】【啪】【啪】【”】【声】【和】【水】【滴】【的】【溅】【落】【声】【,】【再】【向】【前】【望】【,】【小】【巷】【尽】【头】【透】【着】【时】【隐】【时】【现】【的】【灯】【光】【,】【你】【会】【忽】【然】【感】【到】【一】【阵】【舒】【畅】【,】【一】【阵】【温】【馨】【。】【(】【描】【写】【细】【腻】【,】【尽】【展】【小】【巷】【清】【新】【、】【幽】【深】【之】【美】【。】【)】【一】【切】【都】【是】【那】【么】【清】【新】【、】【自】【然】【,】【不】【加】【任】【何】【修】【饰】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【巷】【里】【的】【热】【闹】【景】【象】【是】【永】【远】【让】【人】【怀】【念】【的】【。】【每】【到】【傍】【晚】【,】【忙】【碌】【了】【一】【天】【的】【人】【们】【回】【到】【家】【,】【听】【吧】【,】【小】【巷】【会】【奏】【出】【一】【首】【锅】【碗】【瓢】【盆】【交】【响】【曲】【。】【接】【着】【,】【一】【股】【夹】【杂】【着】【各】【种】【味】【道】【的】【气】【味】【便】【弥】【漫】【在】【狭】【窄】【的】【小】【巷】【中】【了】【。】【(】【这】【里】【综】【合】【调】【动】【视】【觉】【、】【听】【觉】【、】【嗅】【觉】【等】【感】【觉】【,】【表】【现】【了】【小】【巷】【生】【活】【的】【热】【闹】【和】【温】【馨】【,】【读】【来】【让】【人】【神】【往】【。】【)】【孩】【子】【们】【在】【天】【井】【里】【追】【逐】【打】【闹】【:】【有】【的】【逗】【着】【小】【狗】【乱】【窜】【,】【有】【的】【斗】【蛐】【蛐】【正】【玩】【儿】【得】【不】【亦】【乐】【乎】【,】【有】【的】【蹑】【手】【蹑】【脚】【地】【偷】【摘】【老】【爷】【爷】【们】【的】【鸟】【笼】【…】【…】【嬉】【笑】【打】【闹】【为】【平】【静】【的】【小】【巷】【注】【入】【了】【活】【力】【。】【老】【爷】【爷】【们】【仰】【面】【躺】【在】【太】【师】【椅】【上】【,】【悠】【然】【地】【听】【着】【收】【音】【机】【,】【不】【时】【地】【哼】【上】【几】【句】【…】【…】【此】【时】【,】【小】【巷】【又】【像】【一】【张】【风】【情】【画】【,】【没】【有】【什】【么】【大】【红】【大】【绿】【,】【却】【透】【着】【一】【股】【朴】【实】【—】【—】【朴】【实】【的】【人】【,】【朴】【实】【的】【生】【活】【。】【(】【景】【物】【描】【写】【之】【后】【,】【简】【要】【地】【以】【景】【寓】【情】【,】【既】【表】【现】【了】【作】【者】【对】【小】【巷】【的】【无】【限】【热】【爱】【之】【情】【,】【也】【有】【力】【地】【升】【华】【了】【文】【章】【的】【中】【心】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【想】【起】【小】【巷】【,】【我】【小】【时】【候】【安】【静】【地】【靠】【在】【奶】【奶】【的】【怀】【抱】【中】【乘】【凉】【的】【情】【景】【又】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【地】【浮】【现】【在】【眼】【前】【。】【晚】【上】【,】【人】【们】【都】【歇】【了】【,】【小】【巷】【显】【得】【很】【寂】【静】【,】【只】【有】【一】【些】【小】【虫】【仍】【然】【不】【闲】【着】【。】【我】【依】【偎】【在】【奶】【奶】【怀】【中】【,】【望】【着】【黑】【洞】【洞】【的】【小】【巷】【,】【无】【边】【无】【际】【。】【这】【时】【,】【月】【亮】【已】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【地】【爬】【上】【来】【,】【淡】【淡】【的】【月】【光】【泻】【在】【石】【板】【路】【上】【,】【像】【一】【盆】【水】【泼】【在】【上】【面】【,】【静】【静】【地】【滚】【动】【。】【奶】【奶】【一】【边】【轻】【轻】【摇】【着】【蒲】【扇】【,】【一】【边】【哼】【着】【儿】【歌】【。】【一】【阵】【微】【风】【带】【着】【花】【儿】【淡】【淡】【的】【清】【香】【拂】【过】【面】【庞】【,】【我】【真】【要】【醉】【了】【。】【小】【巷】【仿】【佛】【是】【大】【海】【中】【泊】【着】【的】【一】【叶】【小】【舟】【,】【而】【我】【就】【躺】【在】【它】【的】【怀】【抱】【中】【。】【月】【光】【像】【为】【我】【盖】【上】【一】【层】【薄】【被】【,】【船】【在】【轻】【轻】【摇】【动】【,】【我】【的】【心】【也】【随】【之】【微】【微】【荡】【漾】【…】【…】【(】【比】【喻】【新】【奇】【而】【优】【美】【,】【给】【人】【以】【无】【尽】【的】【联】【想】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【窗】【外】【虫】【声】【啾】【啾】【,】【叫】【醒】【了】【我】【那】【遥】【远】【的】【思】【绪】【。】【我】【离】【开】【家】【乡】【已】【好】【几】【年】【了】【,】【再】【也】【听】【不】【见】【那】【熟】【悉】【的】【声】【音】【,】【再】【也】【看】【不】【到】【那】【熟】【悉】【的】【小】【巷】【了】【。】【小】【巷】【还】【在】【吗】【?】【奶】【奶】【依】【旧】【在】【月】【夜】【下】【哼】【着】【歌】【吗】【?】【小】【巷】【还】【在】【,】【不】【过】【奶】【奶】【老】【了】【;】【小】【巷】【还】【在】【,】【不】【过】【我】【已】【难】【得】【再】【见】【了】【,】【只】【有】【月】【光】【依】【旧】【皎】【洁】【明】【亮】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【什】【么】【时】【候】【再】【回】【到】【家】【乡】【的】【小】【巷】【呢】【?】【(】【结】【尾】【既】【回】【应】【了】【标】【题】【,】【也】【升】【华】【了】【文】【章】【的】【中】【心】【,】【达】【到】【了】【言】【有】【尽】【而】【意】【无】【穷】【的】【效】【果】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【升】【格】【评】【点】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【优】【美】【的】【写】【景】【抒】【情】【的】【佳】【作】【。】【文】【章】【由】【表】【及】【里】【,】【由】【物】【到】【人】【,】【抒】【发】【了】【对】【家】【乡】【及】【亲】【人】【的】【思】【念】【之】【情】【,】【感】【染】【力】【很】【强】【。】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【在】【写】【作】【上】【有】【一】【个】【鲜】【明】【的】【特】【点】【,】【那】【就】【是】【描】【写】【细】【腻】【优】【美】【,】【给】【人】【以】【非】【常】【形】【象】【具】【体】【的】【感】【受】【。】【文】【章】【描】【写】【小】【巷】【既】【调】【动】【了】【各】【种】【感】【觉】【来】【展】【现】【小】【巷】【的】【特】【点】【,】【又】【综】【合】【运】【用】【各】【种】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【来】【突】【出】【小】【巷】【的】【特】【征】【,】【读】【来】【我】【们】【也】【仿】【佛】【置】【身】【于】【小】【巷】【之】【中】【,】【给】【人】【以】【身】【临】【其】【境】【之】【感】【。】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【真】【题】【展】【示】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【题】【目】【:】【爱】【与】【时】【间】【同】【行】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【求】【:】【①】【 】【除】【诗】【歌】【外】【,】【文】【体】【不】【限】【,】【可】【以】【记】【叙】【经】【历】【,】【抒】【发】【感】【情】【,】【发】【表】【见】【解】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【②】【 】【字】【迹】【工】【整】【,】【书】【写】【规】【范】【,】【6】【0】【0】【~】【8】【0】【0】【字】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【③】【 】【文】【中】【不】【要】【出】【现】【真】【实】【的】【人】【名】【、】【校】【名】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【题】【解】【读】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【道】【命】【题】【作】【文】【虽】【然】【一】【点】【儿】【都】【不】【陌】【生】【,】【但】【审】【题】【仍】【需】【谨】【慎】【。】【“】【爱】【”】【是】【作】【文】【的】【中】【心】【,】【“】【时】【间】【”】【是】【文】【章】【的】【线】【索】【,】【“】【同】【行】【”】【是】【要】【求】【把】【“】【爱】【”】【和】【“】【时】【间】【”】【交】【织】【着】【写】【。】【题】【目】【换】【言】【之】【,】【就】【是】【“】【爱】【与】【时】【俱】【进】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【作】【时】【,】【应】【首】【先】【考】【虑】【“】【时】【间】【”】【,】【只】【要】【把】【时】【间】【顺】【序】【安】【排】【好】【了】【,】【作】【文】【就】【有】【了】【思】【路】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【间】【顺】【序】【可】【考】【虑】【以】【下】【几】【点】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【 】【上】【学】【的】【年】【级】【顺】【序】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【 】【自】【己】【的】【年】【龄】【顺】【序】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【 】【一】【年】【的】【季】【节】【顺】【序】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【4】【.】【 】【节】【日】【的】【先】【后】【顺】【序】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【因】【为】【体】【现】【“】【爱】【”】【的】【材】【料】【不】【难】【选】【择】【,】【所】【以】【可】【放】【在】【“】【时】【间】【”】【之】【后】【考】【虑】【。】【选】【择】【材】【料】【一】【定】【要】【以】【时】【间】【为】【基】【础】【,】【大】【体】【应】【该】【这】【样】【想】【:】【随】【着】【时】【间】【的】【推】【移】【,】【什】【么】【样】【的】【爱】【在】【加】【深】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【考】【场】【佳】【作】【一】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【爱】【与】【时】【间】【同】【行】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【○】【 】【沈】【阳】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【看】【到】【别】【人】【头】【发】【长】【了】【,】【我】【总】【爱】【提】【醒】【“】【该】【剪】【头】【发】【了】【”】【。】【因】【为】【对】【头】【发】【我】【有】【一】【段】【难】【忘】【的】【经】【历】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【你】【的】【头】【发】【长】【了】【,】【走】【,】【妈】【妈】【背】【你】【剪】【头】【发】【去】【。】【”】【这】【时】【,】【我】【会】【愉】【快】【地】【趴】【在】【妈】【妈】【的】【背】【上】【,】【和】【妈】【妈】【一】【起】【去】【理】【发】【店】【。】【因】【为】【我】【知】【道】【,】【你】【去】【也】【得】【去】【,】【不】【去】【也】【得】【去】【,】【痛】【痛】【快】【快】【地】【去】【了】【,】【妈】【妈】【会】【奖】【励】【你】【点】【儿】【什】【么】【,】【如】【雪】【糕】【、】【画】【片】【、】【面】【包】【…】【…】【只】【要】【是】【你】【想】【要】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【你】【的】【头】【发】【长】【了】【,】【走】【,】【妈】【妈】【领】【你】【剪】【头】【发】【去】【。】【”】【长】【大】【后】【,】【妈】【妈】【这】【样】【对】【我】【说】【。】【这】【时】【,】【我】【会】【把】【手】【伸】【向】【妈】【妈】【,】【她】【便】【拉】【起】【我】【的】【手】【,】【走】【出】【家】【门】【。】【横】【过】【马】【路】【时】【,】【妈】【妈】【叮】【嘱】【我】【:】【“】【等】【对】【面】【的】【灯】【绿】【了】【,】【你】【再】【走】【,】【还】【要】【注】【意】【躲】【避】【两】【边】【拐】【弯】【的】【车】【,】【不】【能】【跑】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【久】【而】【久】【之】【,】【我】【就】【知】【道】【该】【怎】【样】【过】【马】【路】【了】【。】【为】【了】【考】【验】【我】【,】【有】【时】【到】【了】【斑】【马】【线】【,】【她】【会】【故】【意】【加】【快】【速】【度】【往】【前】【走】【,】【这】【时】【我】【就】【拽】【住】【她】【说】【:】【“】【妈】【妈】【,】【再】【等】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【灯】【还】【没】【变】【绿】【呢】【!】【”】【她】【转】【过】【头】【笑】【了】【,】【让】【我】【拉】【着】【她】【的】【手】【走】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【妈】【妈】【,】【我】【的】【头】【发】【太】【长】【了】【,】【陪】【我】【剪】【头】【发】【去】【吧】【。】【”】【“】【你】【都】【这】【么】【大】【了】【,】【自】【己】【去】【吧】【。】【”】【妈】【妈】【不】【高】【兴】【地】【说】【。】【“】【不】【嘛】【,】【你】【陪】【我】【去】【。】【”】【“】【你】【不】【怕】【别】【人】【笑】【话】【呀】【,】【这】【么】【大】【了】【还】【要】【人】【陪】【?】【要】【不】【就】【别】【剪】【了】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【看】【看】【镜】【子】【里】【的】【长】【发】【,】【我】【一】【脸】【无】【奈】【,】【只】【好】【懒】【洋】【洋】【地】【自】【己】【去】【了】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【到】【了】【理】【发】【店】【,】【阿】【姨】【说】【:】【“】【你】【长】【大】【了】【,】【孩】【子】【,】【再】【也】【不】【用】【家】【长】【陪】【了】【。】【”】【我】【听】【了】【,】【心】【里】【感】【到】【很】【舒】【服】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【头】【发】【快】【剪】【完】【了】【,】【我】【看】【见】【一】【个】【中】【年】【人】【扶】【着】【一】【位】【爷】【爷】【来】【剪】【头】【发】【。】【两】【个】【人】【都】【小】【心】【翼】【翼】【,】【每】【走】【一】【步】【都】【很】【认】【真】【。】【“】【爸】【,】【慢】【点】【儿】【,】【咱】【不】【着】【急】【,】【看】【好】【脚】【底】【下】【啊】【。】【”】【看】【在】【眼】【里】【,】【我】【的】【心】【动】【了】【一】【下】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【我】【的】【头】【发】【长】【了】【,】【该】【去】【剪】【剪】【喽】【!】【”】【妈】【妈】【自】【言】【自】【语】【。】【“】【妈】【,】【我】【陪】【你】【去】【。】【”】【我】【放】【下】【手】【中】【的】【笔】【,】【拉】【起】【妈】【妈】【。】【妈】【妈】【看】【着】【我】【,】【一】【脸】【的】【幸】【福】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【现】【在】【我】【明】【白】【了】【:】【妈】【妈】【背】【着】【我】【去】【剪】【头】【发】【,】【让】【我】【知】【道】【你】【只】【有】【去】【做】【才】【能】【得】【到】【你】【想】【要】【的】【。】【妈】【妈】【领】【我】【去】【剪】【头】【发】【,】【让】【我】【懂】【得】【做】【什】【么】【都】【要】【遵】【守】【规】【则】【。】【妈】【妈】【不】【领】【我】【去】【剪】【头】【发】【,】【是】【让】【我】【学】【会】【自】【立】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【长】【大】【了】【,】【妈】【妈】【对】【我】【的】【爱】【更】【深】【了】【,】【爱】【与】【时】【间】【同】【行】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【以】【小】【见】【大】【。】【理】【发】【,】【是】【日】【常】【生】【活】【中】【的】【小】【事】【,】【作】【文】【以】【它】【为】【素】【材】【,】【演】【绎】【出】【“】【爱】【与】【时】【间】【同】【行】【”】【的】【主】【题】【,】【可】【谓】【小】【事】【件】【折】【射】【出】【大】【道】【理】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【思】【路】【清】【晰】【。】【妈】【妈】【背】【我】【剪】【头】【发】【—】【妈】【妈】【领】【我】【剪】【头】【发】【—】【妈】【妈】【让】【我】【自】【己】【去】【剪】【头】【发】【,】【文】【章】【写】【得】【有】【条】【不】【紊】【,】【得】【力】【于】【作】【者】【清】【晰】【的】【思】【路】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【情】【真】【意】【切】【。】【考】【生】【从】【剪】【头】【发】【的】【小】【事】【儿】【中】【感】【受】【到】【母】【爱】【,】【从】【中】【年】【人】【领】【着】【父】【亲】【剪】【头】【发】【中】【懂】【得】【了】【感】【恩】【,】【让】【我】【们】【也】【感】【受】【到】【了】【他】【的】【真】【情】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【考】【场】【佳】【作】【二】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【爱】【与】【时】【间】【同】【行】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【○】【 】【沈】【阳】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【0】【0】【5】【年】【9】【月】【1】【0】【日】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【今】【天】【,】【是】【我】【上】【学】【以】【来】【经】【历】【的】【第】【三】【个】【教】【师】【节】【。】【早】【晨】【起】【来】【,】【我】【就】【把】【给】【老】【师】【做】【的】【贺】【卡】【小】【心】【地】【装】【进】【书】【包】【里】【。】【因】【为】【下】【午】【休】【息】【,】【所】【以】【中】【午】【我】【要】【把】【礼】【物】【送】【给】【老】【师】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【丁】【零】【零】【…】【…】【”】【放】【学】【的】【铃】【声】【响】【了】【,】【我】【第】【一】【个】【走】【到】【教】【室】【前】【边】【:】【“】【给】【您】【,】【老】【师】【。】【”】【老】【师】【接】【过】【来】【一】【看】【,】【笑】【了】【,】【因】【为】【我】【在】【贺】【卡】【上】【画】【了】【一】【个】【大】【人】【打】【着】【一】【把】【大】【伞】【,】【伞】【下】【站】【着】【一】【群】【小】【孩】【儿】【。】【老】【师】【笑】【着】【对】【同】【学】【们】【说】【:】【“】【这】【样】【的】【礼】【物】【我】【喜】【欢】【,】【一】【是】【同】【学】【不】【用】【花】【钱】【;】【二】【是】【把】【你】【们】【的】【心】【意】【都】【画】【在】【画】【里】【边】【了】【,】【老】【师】【可】【以】【慢】【慢】【品】【味】【;】【三】【是】【这】【上】【边】【有】【时】【间】【,】【以】【后】【看】【到】【它】【我】【会】【想】【起】【你】【们】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【听】【了】【老】【师】【的】【话】【,】【我】【的】【心】【里】【有】【些】【得】【意】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【0】【0】【8】【年】【9】【月】【1】【0】【日】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【今】【天】【,】【是】【我】【在】【小】【学】【给】【老】【师】【过】【的】【最】【后】【一】【个】【教】【师】【节】【,】【明】【年】【我】【就】【是】【初】【中】【生】【了】【。】【下】【午】【,】【我】【想】【去】【老】【师】【家】【看】【望】【她】【,】【因】【为】【老】【师】【的】【嗓】【子】【最】【近】【有】【些】【哑】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【姥】【爷】【,】【您】【的】【偏】【方】【好】【使】【吗】【?】【这】【可】【是】【给】【老】【师】【用】【的】【啊】【!】【”】【“】【放】【心】【吧】【,】【孩】【子】【,】【你】【姥】【爷】【干】【了】【这】【么】【多】【年】【中】【医】【,】【经】【验】【丰】【富】【着】【呢】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【来】【到】【老】【师】【家】【的】【楼】【下】【,】【碰】【见】【了】【同】【班】【的】【另】【外】【五】【个】【同】【学】【。】【看】【来】【大】【家】【是】【不】【谋】【而】【合】【,】【那】【就】【一】【起】【上】【楼】【吧】【。】【老】【师】【见】【我】【们】【来】【了】【非】【常】【高】【兴】【,】【忙】【着】【给】【我】【们】【找】【饮】【料】【喝】【。】【“】【老】【师】【,】【您】【嗓】【子】【不】【好】【,】【这】【是】【我】【姥】【爷】【给】【您】【的】【偏】【方】【。】【”】【“】【老】【师】【…】【…】【”】【“】【老】【师】【…】【…】【”】【老】【师】【的】【眼】【里】【有】【些】【湿】【润】【了】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【9】【月】【1】【0】【日】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【今】【天】【下】【午】【老】【师】【休】【息】【,】【我】【们】【在】【家】【写】【作】【业】【。】【升】【入】【初】【三】【后】【,】【气】【氛】【紧】【张】【了】【许】【多】【,】【一】【切】【都】【在】【围】【绕】【中】【考】【展】【开】【!】【可】【是】【今】【天】【是】【教】【师】【节】【,】【我】【还】【想】【为】【老】【师】【做】【点】【什】【么】【。】【对】【,】【发】【电】【子】【邮】【件】【,】【将】【我】【的】【祝】【福】【通】【过】【电】【子】【邮】【件】【传】【递】【给】【各】【位】【老】【师】【,】【省】【时】【省】【力】【省】【钱】【。】【说】【做】【就】【做】【,】【几】【分】【钟】【的】【时】【间】【,】【我】【的】【祝】【福】【就】【在】【网】【络】【的】【帮】【助】【下】【送】【到】【了】【老】【师】【的】【面】【前】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【老】【师】【:】【在】【教】【师】【节】【来】【临】【的】【时】【候】【,】【送】【上】【我】【衷】【心】【的】【祝】【福】【。】【有】【人】【说】【你】【们】【是】【园】【丁】【,】【是】【蜡】【烛】【,】【是】【春】【蚕】【…】【…】【但】【人】【们】【只】【看】【到】【了】【你】【们】【奉】【献】【的】【一】【面】【,】【却】【忽】【略】【了】【你】【们】【自】【己】【的】【生】【活】【。】【你】【们】【也】【应】【该】【阳】【光】【、】【时】【尚】【、】【与】【时】【俱】【进】【。】【你】【们】【不】【但】【是】【知】【识】【的】【传】【播】【者】【,】【也】【应】【该】【是】【风】【尚】【盛】【会】【的】【引】【领】【者】【。】【希】【望】【你】【们】【在】【闲】【暇】【的】【时】【候】【也】【能】【走】【进】【K】【T】【V】【,】【一】【展】【别】【样】【的】【风】【采】【。】【再】【一】【次】【地】【祝】【老】【师】【节】【日】【快】【乐】【,】【永】【远】【快】【乐】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【后】【记】【:】【日】【记】【伴】【我】【成】【长】【,】【爱】【与】【时】【间】【同】【行】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【串】【编】【日】【记】【。】【写】【日】【记】【简】【单】【,】【串】【编】【起】【来】【,】【就】【不】【简】【单】【了】【。】【从】【日】【记】【的】【时】【间】【节】【点】【上】【,】【我】【们】【不】【难】【看】【出】【作】【者】【构】【思】【的】【巧】【妙】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【巧】【用】【节】【日】【。】【教】【师】【节】【虽】【然】【是】【普】【通】【的】【节】【日】【,】【但】【考】【生】【以】【时】【间】【为】【序】【,】【连】【写】【有】【代】【表】【性】【的】【三】【个】【教】【师】【节】【,】【匠】【心】【之】【处】【,】【可】【见】【一】【斑】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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】【“】【书】【和】【作】【业】【本】【都】【装】【书】【包】【里】【了】【?】【上】【次】【你】【把】【语】【文】【书】【落】【在】【家】【里】【了】【,】【害】【得】【我】【跑】【了】【一】【趟】【学】【校】【,】【还】【打】【车】【去】【的】【呢】【。】【”】【“】【放】【心】【吧】【,】【昨】【晚】【我】【就】【收】【拾】【好】【了】【,】【我】【长】【记】【性】【了】【。】【”】【“】【噢】【,】【对】【了】【,】【天】【气】【预】【报】【说】【今】【天】【下】【午】【有】【小】【雨】【,】【你】【把】【伞】【带】【上】【。】【”】【说】【着】【,】【妈】【妈】【把】【伞】【递】【给】【我】【。】【一】【切】【收】【拾】【妥】【当】【,】【我】【说】【:】【“】【妈】【,】【我】【上】【学】【去】【了】【!】【”】【“】【走】【吧】【,】【过】【马】【路】【注】【意】【车】【…】【…】【”】【“】【哎】【,】【带】【水】【了】【吗】【?】【”】【妈】【妈】【又】【追】【出】【来】【。】【“】【带】【了】【,】【放】【心】【吧】【!】【”】【走】【在】【上】【学】【的】【路】【上】【,】【耳】【边】【还】【回】【响】【着】【妈】【妈】【的】【叮】【咛】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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】【在】【你】【小】【的】【时】【候】【,】【她】【用】【大】【大】【的】【爱】【爱】【着】【小】【小】【的】【你】【,】【无】【怨】【无】【悔】【;】【当】【她】【老】【去】【,】【你】【用】【大】【大】【的】【爱】【爱】【着】【小】【小】【的】【她】【,】【一】【心】【一】【意】【。】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【间】【过】【得】【真】【快】【,】【又】【到】【周】【末】【了】【,】【望】【着】【窗】【外】【皎】【洁】【的】【月】【光】【,】【我】【忽】【然】【想】【起】【家】【乡】【的】【小】【巷】【—】【—】【那】【个】【曾】【留】【下】【我】【童】【年】【记】【忆】【的】【地】【方】【。】【(】【开】【头】【直】【接】【点】【出】【心】【中】【的】【小】【巷】【,】【很】【好】【地】【引】【出】【了】【下】【文】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【印】【象】【中】【的】【家】【乡】【小】【巷】【是】【美】【丽】【无】【比】【的】【。】【它】【四】【通】【八】【达】【,】【幽】【深】【曲】【折】【,】【宛】【若】【一】【张】【脉】【络】【分】【明】【的】【网】【。】【每】【一】【条】【小】【巷】【都】【铺】【着】【青】【石】【板】【,】【两】【边】【是】【低】【矮】【而】【拥】【挤】【的】【小】【阁】【楼】【,】【屋】【檐】【向】【前】【挑】【着】【,】【显】【得】【古】【朴】【、】【典】【雅】【,】【似】【乎】【与】【外】【面】【的】【喧】【闹】【、】【繁】【华】【极】【不】【协】【调】【。】【(】【这】【里】【重】【点】【介】【绍】【小】【巷】【中】【的】【屋】【檐】【,】【突】【出】【了】【其】【古】【朴】【、】【典】【雅】【之】【美】【。】【)】【然】【而】【,】【当】【你】【独】【行】【在】【小】【巷】【时】【,】【听】【着】【脚】【踏】【青】【石】【板】【发】【出】【的】【“】【啪】【啪】【”】【声】【和】【水】【滴】【的】【溅】【落】【声】【,】【再】【向】【前】【望】【,】【小】【巷】【尽】【头】【透】【着】【时】【隐】【时】【现】【的】【灯】【光】【,】【你】【会】【忽】【然】【感】【到】【一】【阵】【舒】【畅】【,】【一】【阵】【温】【馨】【。】【(】【描】【写】【细】【腻】【,】【尽】【展】【小】【巷】【清】【新】【、】【幽】【深】【之】【美】【。】【)】【一】【切】【都】【是】【那】【么】【清】【新】【、】【自】【然】【,】【不】【加】【任】【何】【修】【饰】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【巷】【里】【的】【热】【闹】【景】【象】【是】【永】【远】【让】【人】【怀】【念】【的】【。】【每】【到】【傍】【晚】【,】【忙】【碌】【了】【一】【天】【的】【人】【们】【回】【到】【家】【,】【听】【吧】【,】【小】【巷】【会】【奏】【出】【一】【首】【锅】【碗】【瓢】【盆】【交】【响】【曲】【。】【接】【着】【,】【一】【股】【夹】【杂】【着】【各】【种】【味】【道】【的】【气】【味】【便】【弥】【漫】【在】【狭】【窄】【的】【小】【巷】【中】【了】【。】【(】【这】【里】【综】【合】【调】【动】【视】【觉】【、】【听】【觉】【、】【嗅】【觉】【等】【感】【觉】【,】【表】【现】【了】【小】【巷】【生】【活】【的】【热】【闹】【和】【温】【馨】【,】【读】【来】【让】【人】【神】【往】【。】【)】【孩】【子】【们】【在】【天】【井】【里】【追】【逐】【打】【闹】【:】【有】【的】【逗】【着】【小】【狗】【乱】【窜】【,】【有】【的】【斗】【蛐】【蛐】【正】【玩】【儿】【得】【不】【亦】【乐】【乎】【,】【有】【的】【蹑】【手】【蹑】【脚】【地】【偷】【摘】【老】【爷】【爷】【们】【的】【鸟】【笼】【…】【…】【嬉】【笑】【打】【闹】【为】【平】【静】【的】【小】【巷】【注】【入】【了】【活】【力】【。】【老】【爷】【爷】【们】【仰】【面】【躺】【在】【太】【师】【椅】【上】【,】【悠】【然】【地】【听】【着】【收】【音】【机】【,】【不】【时】【地】【哼】【上】【几】【句】【…】【…】【此】【时】【,】【小】【巷】【又】【像】【一】【张】【风】【情】【画】【,】【没】【有】【什】【么】【大】【红】【大】【绿】【,】【却】【透】【着】【一】【股】【朴】【实】【—】【—】【朴】【实】【的】【人】【,】【朴】【实】【的】【生】【活】【。】【(】【景】【物】【描】【写】【之】【后】【,】【简】【要】【地】【以】【景】【寓】【情】【,】【既】【表】【现】【了】【作】【者】【对】【小】【巷】【的】【无】【限】【热】【爱】【之】【情】【,】【也】【有】【力】【地】【升】【华】【了】【文】【章】【的】【中】【心】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【想】【起】【小】【巷】【,】【我】【小】【时】【候】【安】【静】【地】【靠】【在】【奶】【奶】【的】【怀】【抱】【中】【乘】【凉】【的】【情】【景】【又】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【地】【浮】【现】【在】【眼】【前】【。】【晚】【上】【,】【人】【们】【都】【歇】【了】【,】【小】【巷】【显】【得】【很】【寂】【静】【,】【只】【有】【一】【些】【小】【虫】【仍】【然】【不】【闲】【着】【。】【我】【依】【偎】【在】【奶】【奶】【怀】【中】【,】【望】【着】【黑】【洞】【洞】【的】【小】【巷】【,】【无】【边】【无】【际】【。】【这】【时】【,】【月】【亮】【已】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【地】【爬】【上】【来】【,】【淡】【淡】【的】【月】【光】【泻】【在】【石】【板】【路】【上】【,】【像】【一】【盆】【水】【泼】【在】【上】【面】【,】【静】【静】【地】【滚】【动】【。】【奶】【奶】【一】【边】【轻】【轻】【摇】【着】【蒲】【扇】【,】【一】【边】【哼】【着】【儿】【歌】【。】【一】【阵】【微】【风】【带】【着】【花】【儿】【淡】【淡】【的】【清】【香】【拂】【过】【面】【庞】【,】【我】【真】【要】【醉】【了】【。】【小】【巷】【仿】【佛】【是】【大】【海】【中】【泊】【着】【的】【一】【叶】【小】【舟】【,】【而】【我】【就】【躺】【在】【它】【的】【怀】【抱】【中】【。】【月】【光】【像】【为】【我】【盖】【上】【一】【层】【薄】【被】【,】【船】【在】【轻】【轻】【摇】【动】【,】【我】【的】【心】【也】【随】【之】【微】【微】【荡】【漾】【…】【…】【(】【比】【喻】【新】【奇】【而】【优】【美】【,】【给】【人】【以】【无】【尽】【的】【联】【想】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【窗】【外】【虫】【声】【啾】【啾】【,】【叫】【醒】【了】【我】【那】【遥】【远】【的】【思】【绪】【。】【我】【离】【开】【家】【乡】【已】【好】【几】【年】【了】【,】【再】【也】【听】【不】【见】【那】【熟】【悉】【的】【声】【音】【,】【再】【也】【看】【不】【到】【那】【熟】【悉】【的】【小】【巷】【了】【。】【小】【巷】【还】【在】【吗】【?】【奶】【奶】【依】【旧】【在】【月】【夜】【下】【哼】【着】【歌】【吗】【?】【小】【巷】【还】【在】【,】【不】【过】【奶】【奶】【老】【了】【;】【小】【巷】【还】【在】【,】【不】【过】【我】【已】【难】【得】【再】【见】【了】【,】【只】【有】【月】【光】【依】【旧】【皎】【洁】【明】【亮】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【什】【么】【时】【候】【再】【回】【到】【家】【乡】【的】【小】【巷】【呢】【?】【(】【结】【尾】【既】【回】【应】【了】【标】【题】【,】【也】【升】【华】【了】【文】【章】【的】【中】【心】【,】【达】【到】【了】【言】【有】【尽】【而】【意】【无】【穷】【的】【效】【果】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【升】【格】【评】【点】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【优】【美】【的】【写】【景】【抒】【情】【的】【佳】【作】【。】【文】【章】【由】【表】【及】【里】【,】【由】【物】【到】【人】【,】【抒】【发】【了】【对】【家】【乡】【及】【亲】【人】【的】【思】【念】【之】【情】【,】【感】【染】【力】【很】【强】【。】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【在】【写】【作】【上】【有】【一】【个】【鲜】【明】【的】【特】【点】【,】【那】【就】【是】【描】【写】【细】【腻】【优】【美】【,】【给】【人】【以】【非】【常】【形】【象】【具】【体】【的】【感】【受】【。】【文】【章】【描】【写】【小】【巷】【既】【调】【动】【了】【各】【种】【感】【觉】【来】【展】【现】【小】【巷】【的】【特】【点】【,】【又】【综】【合】【运】【用】【各】【种】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【来】【突】【出】【小】【巷】【的】【特】【征】【,】【读】【来】【我】【们】【也】【仿】【佛】【置】【身】【于】【小】【巷】【之】【中】【,】【给】【人】【以】【身】【临】【其】【境】【之】【感】【。】孕妇营养食品【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【近】【年】【来】【,】【中】【考】【作】【文】【试】【题】【讲】【求】【全】【面】【对】【接】【中】【学】【生】【生】【活】【,】【强】【调】【表】【达】【真】【情】【实】【感】【,】【鼓】【励】【学】【生】【表】【露】【自】【己】【的】【真】【实】【情】【怀】【,】【真】【正】【做】【到】【“】【说】【真】【话】【、】【实】【话】【、】【心】【里】【话】【,】【不】【说】【假】【话】【、】【空】【话】【、】【套】【话】【”】【(】【《】【语】【文】【课】【程】【标】【准】【》】【)】【。】【这】【样】【,】【才】【能】【实】【现】【“】【引】【导】【学】【生】【关】【注】【现】【实】【,】【热】【爱】【生】【活】【,】【表】【达】【真】【情】【实】【感】【”】【的】【目】【标】【。】【因】【此】【,】【命】【题】【者】【常】【着】【眼】【于】【以】【下】【四】【个】【方】【面】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【“】【自】【我】【成】【长】【”】【类】【从】【中】【考】【命】【题】【形】【势】【看】【,】【自】【我】【成】【长】【类】【考】【题】【在】【逐】【年】【升】【温】【。】【专】【家】【预】【测】【,】【在】【推】【行】【课】【程】【改】【革】【、】【强】【调】【人】【文】【关】【怀】【的】【新】【时】【代】【,】【此】【类】【考】【题】【会】【逐】【渐】【成】【为】【命】【题】【的】【核】【心】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【自】【我】【成】【长】【类】【文】【章】【,】【有】【三】【条】【出】【彩】【捷】【径】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【1】【)】【展】【示】【真】【我】【风】【采】【,】【内】【容】【求】【新】【。】【尺】【有】【所】【短】【,】【寸】【有】【所】【长】【,】【也】【许】【你】【无】【法】【在】【课】【堂】【上】【侃】【侃】【而】【谈】【,】【但】【你】【可】【以】【在】【球】【场】【上】【一】【马】【当】【先】【;】【也】【许】【你】【无】【法】【在】【舞】【台】【上】【一】【展】【歌】【喉】【,】【但】【你】【可】【以】【在】【考】【场】【上】【胸】【有】【成】【竹】【…】【…】【只】【要】【我】【们】【找】【准】【了】【自】【我】【的】【闪】【光】【点】【,】【精】【彩】【的】【素】【材】【就】【会】【扑】【面】【而】【来】【。】【比】【如】【你】【爱】【好】【音】【乐】【,】【对】【经】【典】【的】【歌】【词】【与】【动】【听】【的】【旋】【律】【自】【然】【会】【情】【有】【独】【钟】【;】【如】【果】【你】【爱】【好】【文】【学】【,】【名】【言】【佳】【句】【与】【诗】【词】【典】【故】【定】【可】【信】【手】【拈】【来】【。】【只】【要】【你】【爱】【好】【写】【作】【,】【往】【往】【能】【有】【意】【想】【不】【到】【的】【收】【获】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【2】【)】【述】【说】【成】【长】【故】【事】【,】【情】【节】【求】【巧】【。】【人】【生】【路】【上】【,】【不】【会】【一】【帆】【风】【顺】【。】【成】【长】【的】【过】【程】【,】【苦】【辣】【酸】【甜】【咸】【,】【五】【味】【俱】【全】【。】【我】【们】【若】【能】【抓】【住】【这】【一】【点】【做】【文】【章】【,】【情】【节】【自】【然】【会】【波】【澜】【迭】【起】【,】【内】【容】【自】【然】【会】【扣】【人】【心】【弦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【3】【)】【融】【入】【感】【情】【清】【泉】【,】【情】【感】【求】【真】【。】【能】【否】【感】【动】【读】【者】【要】【看】【你】【是】【否】【能】【融】【入】【真】【实】【的】【情】【感】【。】【要】【学】【会】【将】【心】【灵】【深】【处】【最】【精】【彩】【的】【点】【滴】【,】【用】【真】【挚】【的】【感】【情】【诉】【诸】【笔】【端】【,】【这】【样】【,】【一】【个】【表】【情】【或】【—】【个】【动】【作】【,】【也】【许】【就】【是】【一】【道】【风】【景】【,】【细】【细】【地】【品】【味】【起】【来】【,】【那】【酸】【甜】【苦】【辣】【的】【味】【儿】【,】【也】【会】【让】【你】【如】【同】【口】【含】【橄】【榄】【,】【回】【味】【无】【穷】【。】【基】【本】【做】【法】【就】【是】【在】【命】【题】【作】【文】【中】【常】【以】【“】【我】【”】【为】【中】【心】【拟】【定】【,】【比】【如】【“】【我】【和】【”】【“】【我】【多】【么】【想】【”】【“】【我】【的】【特】【长】【”】【“】【没】【想】【到】【我】【如】【此】【”】【“】【为】【自】【己】【而】【骄】【傲】【”】【“】【我】【们】【这】【些】【人】【”】【等】【。】【又】【比】【如】【,】【以】【“】【成】【长】【”】【“】【第】【一】【次】【”】【“】【秘】【密】【”】【“】【个】【性】【”】【“】【朋】【友】【”】【“】【回】【答】【”】【“】【做】【好】【准】【备】【”】【等】【为】【主】【题】【写】【作】【,】【内】【容】【上】【贴】【近】【学】【生】【的】【成】【长】【经】【历】【,】【密】【切】【联】【系】【他】【们】【的】【生】【活】【实】【际】【,】【他】【们】【体】【会】【最】【深】【,】【感】【受】【也】【多】【,】【容】【易】【下】【笔】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【“】【素】【质】【情】【感】【”】【类】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【比】【如】【以】【“】【感】【受】【快】【乐】【”】【“】【喜】【欢】【”】【“】【兑】【现】【诺】【言】【”】【“】【美】【德】【”】【“】【珍】【爱】【”】【“】【吃】【苦】【”】【“】【宽】【容】【”】【“】【体】【谅】【”】【“】【温】【暖】【”】【“】【友】【好】【”】【“】【健】【康】【”】【等】【为】【主】【题】【写】【作】【,】【就】【能】【够】【引】【导】【学】【生】【关】【注】【人】【性】【中】【美】【好】【的】【事】【物】【和】【美】【好】【的】【情】【感】【,】【让】【考】【生】【在】【深】【入】【思】【考】【的】【过】【程】【中】【加】【深】【对】【真】【、】【善】【、】【美】【的】【体】【验】【和】【向】【往】【。】【例】【如】【:】【2】【0】【1】【0】【年】【广】【东】【卷】【:】【“】【那】【天】【,】【我】【见】【到】【了】【快】【乐】【的】【钥】【匙】【”】【;】【2】【0】【1】【0】【年】【江】【苏】【南】【通】【卷】【:】【“】【让】【我】【轻】【轻】【告】【诉】【你】【”】【;】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【安】【徽】【省】【卷】【:】【“】【在】【我】【们】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【”】【;】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【陕】【西】【卷】【:】【“】【我】【想】【看】【见】【你】【的】【笑】【”】【等】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【“】【社】【会】【生】【活】【”】【类】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【比】【如】【以】【“】【奥】【运】【”】【“】【和】【谐】【”】【“】【交】【往】【”】【“】【贫】【困】【”】【“】【公】【开】【”】【“】【帮】【助】【”】【“】【关】【注】【”】【“】【动】【力】【”】【“】【书】【”】【“】【回】【忆】【”】【“】【细】【节】【”】【“】【习】【惯】【”】【“】【学】【习】【”】【“】【水】【”】【等】【为】【主】【题】【写】【作】【,】【可】【以】【引】【导】【学】【生】【关】【注】【身】【边】【的】【热】【点】【话】【题】【,】【放】【眼】【社】【会】【生】【活】【。】【例】【如】【:】【2】【0】【0】【8】【年】【湖】【北】【宜】【昌】【卷】【:】【“】【汶】【川】【地】【震】【有】【巨】【大】【破】【坏】【力】【的】【原】【因】【”】【明】【显】【是】【扣】【“】【四】【川】【汶】【川】【大】【地】【震】【”】【的】【主】【题】【;】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【浙】【江】【嘉】【兴】【卷】【:】【“】【不】【走】【寻】【常】【路】【”】【明】【显】【是】【扣】【“】【周】【杰】【伦】【”】【和】【“】【蔡】【伟】【”】【两】【位】【热】【点】【人】【物】【;】【2】【0】【1】【0】【年】【吉】【林】【卷】【:】【“】【天】【使】【让】【人】【牵】【挂】【”】【明】【显】【是】【扣】【“】【上】【海】【世】【博】【会】【”】【和】【“】【青】【海】【玉】【树】【地】【震】【”】【这】【两】【大】【新】【闻】【事】【件】【。】【再】【如】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【四】【川】【内】【江】【中】【考】【作】【文】【题】【,】【是】【一】【道】【典】【型】【的】【材】【料】【作】【文】【题】【,】【材】【料】【便】【摘】【自】【《】【华】【西】【都】【市】【报】【》】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【4】【.】【“】【想】【象】【创】【新】【”】【类】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【类】【试】【题】【如】【果】【处】【理】【不】【当】【,】【过】【于】【脱】【离】【学】【生】【生】【活】【,】【就】【会】【助】【长】【“】【假】【、】【大】【、】【空】【”】【风】【气】【的】【盛】【行】【。】【命】【题】【时】【要】【有】【利】【于】【写】【作】【者】【从】【生】【活】【出】【发】【,】【大】【胆】【展】【开】【想】【象】【的】【翅】【膀】【。】【如】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【江】【苏】【徐】【州】【卷】【:】【“】【面】【对】【自】【然】【”】【;】【2】【0】【1】【0】【年】【河】【北】【卷】【:】【“】【—】【—】【来】【了】【”】【;】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【山】【东】【德】【州】【卷】【:】【“】【风】【筝】【”】【等】【,】【让】【学】【生】【在】【想】【象】【中】【创】【新】【,】【在】【创】【新】【中】【展】【示】【风】【采】【。】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【对】【于】【曾】【经】【的】【我】【来】【说】【是】【一】【种】【可】【怕】【的】【存】【在】【。】【传】【说】【,】【初】【三】【的】【学】【生】【面】【对】【的】【是】【恶】【狼】【般】【让】【人】【无】【招】【架】【之】【力】【的】【考】【试】【、】【超】【级】【繁】【重】【的】【作】【业】【、】【硕】【大】【的】【书】【包】【,】【与】【两】【只】【有】【蔓】【延】【到】【下】【巴】【嫌】【疑】【的】【“】【熊】【猫】【眼】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【然】【,】【这】【种】【“】【传】【说】【”】【有】【夸】【大】【现】【实】【的】【嫌】【疑】【,】【不】【过】【若】【是】【去】【掉】【一】【些】【形】【容】【词】【,】【初】【三】【生】【活】【的】【轮】【廓】【已】【经】【基】【本】【呈】【现】【在】【你】【眼】【前】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【刚】【刚】【步】【入】【初】【三】【的】【我】【,】【怀】【揣】【一】【颗】【紧】【张】【又】【十】【分】【期】【待】【的】【心】【,】【还】【算】【圆】【满】【地】【考】【完】【了】【第】【一】【次】【重】【要】【的】【考】【试】【—】【—】【摸】【底】【考】【。】【这】【次】【考】【试】【给】【了】【我】【一】【定】【的】【信】【心】【,】【让】【我】【对】【于】【“】【传】【说】【”】【的】【紧】【张】【感】【有】【了】【点】【点】【的】【平】【复】【。】【于】【是】【,】【在】【开】【学】【的】【头】【一】【个】【星】【期】【,】【我】【感】【觉】【一】【切】【都】【好】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【的】【第】【二】【周】【,】【作】【业】【量】【开】【始】【稳】【步】【上】【升】【,】【一】【个】【月】【过】【去】【了】【,】【作】【业】【和】【考】【试】【像】【沸】【水】【冒】【泡】【—】【样】【蜂】【拥】【而】【出】【,】【愈】【发】【勇】【猛】【。】【面】【对】【这】【些】【有】【着】【向】【“】【传】【说】【”】【发】【展】【趋】【势】【的】【情】【况】【,】【我】【终】【于】【意】【识】【到】【,】【初】【三】【生】【活】【可】【不】【是】【轻】【轻】【松】【松】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【渐】【渐】【地】【,】【由】【于】【按】【照】【以】【前】【的】【作】【息】【安】【排】【学】【习】【,】【我】【无】【法】【保】【证】【按】【时】【完】【成】【计】【划】【的】【内】【容】【,】【我】【每】【天】【不】【得】【不】【到】【凌】【晨】【才】【睡】【觉】【,】【时】【间】【一】【长】【,】【听】【课】【效】【率】【不】【如】【以】【前】【,】【最】【糟】【糕】【的】【是】【我】【的】【成】【绩】【开】【始】【有】【下】【滑】【的】【危】【险】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【了】【危】【机】【感】【的】【我】【开】【始】【做】【自】【我】【分】【析】【—】【—】【回】【家】【一】【定】【要】【先】【写】【作】【业】【,】【不】【能】【像】【原】【来】【那】【样】【先】【休】【息】【一】【会】【儿】【才】【动】【笔】【了】【;】【写】【作】【业】【的】【时】【候】【也】【不】【可】【以】【东】【摸】【摸】【西】【碰】【碰】【,】【一】【定】【要】【抓】【紧】【时】【间】【;】【平】【时】【在】【学】【校】【争】【取】【多】【完】【成】【些】【作】【业】【,】【这】【样】【回】【家】【学】【习】【的】【时】【间】【更】【多】【…】【…】【分】【析】【完】【毕】【,】【我】【不】【禁】【感】【叹】【:】【是】【要】【抓】【紧】【啊】【,】【根】【本】【没】【有】【时】【间】【容】【我】【休】【闲】【娱】【乐】【呢】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【及】【时】【的】【调】【整】【,】【让】【我】【阻】【止】【了】【成】【绩】【下】【滑】【的】【趋】【势】【,】【并】【且】【逐】【渐】【使】【成】【绩】【上】【升】【。】【这】【种】【上】【升】【是】【缓】【慢】【的】【,】【但】【在】【一】【段】【时】【间】【后】【,】【我】【终】【于】【掌】【握】【了】【规】【律】【,】【不】【再】【像】【刚】【开】【始】【那】【样】【成】【天】【困】【得】【睁】【不】【开】【眼】【,】【而】【是】【将】【时】【间】【以】【新】【的】【方】【式】【安】【排】【得】【游】【刃】【有】【余】【,】【不】【光】【按】【时】【完】【成】【每】【天】【应】【做】【的】【,】【还】【留】【出】【—】【部】【分】【时】【间】【让】【自】【己】【消】【化】【当】【天】【的】【知】【识】【,】【预】【习】【新】【的】【内】【容】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【一】【学】【期】【的】【题】【海】【战】【术】【让】【我】【被】【迫】【改】【变】【了】【舒】【适】【懒】【散】【的】【学】【习】【习】【惯】【,】【而】【改】【变】【后】【的】【我】【却】【得】【到】【了】【不】【少】【好】【处】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【二】【学】【期】【开】【始】【了】【,】【我】【信】【心】【满】【怀】【地】【踏】【入】【校】【园】【,】【惊】【喜】【地】【发】【现】【这】【学】【期】【的】【作】【业】【量】【大】【大】【减】【少】【,】【不】【过】【都】【是】【留】【给】【我】【的】【自】【主】【复】【习】【时】【间】【。】【就】【在】【我】【以】【为】【初】【三】【生】【活】【可】【以】【有】【所】【放】【松】【的】【时】【候】【,】【体】【育】【老】【师】【又】【扔】【来】【一】【排】【响】【雷】【—】【—】【体】【育】【标】【准】【上】【升】【了】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【对】【于】【体】【育】【不】【好】【的】【我】【来】【说】【是】【当】【头】【一】【棒】【,】【我】【痛】【下】【决】【心】【,】【不】【光】【回】【家】【要】【练】【体】【育】【,】【在】【学】【校】【,】【放】【学】【后】【也】【要】【练】【!】【于】【是】【,】【每】【天】【放】【学】【后】【,】【我】【都】【和】【几】【个】【同】【学】【—】【起】【到】【操】【场】【上】【奋】【力】【地】【练】【习】【,】【天】【快】【黑】【了】【才】【回】【家】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【的】【下】【学】【期】【,】【美】【术】【、】【音】【乐】【、】【外】【教】【…】【…】【都】【没】【有】【了】【,】【每】【天】【到】【学】【校】【就】【是】【全】【身】【心】【地】【投】【入】【学】【习】【和】【锻】【炼】【中】【去】【,】【然】【后】【带】【着】【一】【天】【的】【收】【获】【,】【回】【家】【再】【细】【细】【消】【化】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【看】【似】【非】【常】【累】【、】【非】【常】【枯】【燥】【,】【其】【实】【是】【可】【以】【提】【炼】【出】【丝】【丝】【乐】【趣】【的】【。】【要】【知】【道】【,】【累】【的】【不】【是】【我】【一】【个】【人】【,】【每】【个】【努】【力】【的】【同】【学】【都】【是】【一】【样】【的】【。】【在】【我】【们】【身】【边】【还】【有】【老】【师】【、】【家】【长】【在】【给】【我】【们】【鼓】【劲】【儿】【呢】【,】【想】【到】【这】【些】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【心】【里】【还】【是】【很】【愉】【快】【的】【。】【每】【天】【看】【着】【已】【经】【写】【完】【的】【作】【业】【、】【厚】【厚】【的】【笔】【记】【,】【成】【就】【感】【与】【自】【豪】【之】【情】【也】【是】【实】【实】【在】【在】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【现】【在】【的】【我】【早】【已】【从】【容】【看】【待】【初】【三】【生】【活】【了】【,】【初】【三】【生】【活】【就】【是】【这】【样】【的】【,】【虽】【苦】【犹】【甜】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【就】【像】【那】【浩】【瀚】【无】【垠】【的】【学】【海】【,】【我】【便】【如】【那】【只】【小】【舟】【,】【在】【时】【而】【惊】【涛】【骇】【浪】【,】【时】【而】【平】【静】【无】【波】【的】【学】【海】【中】【前】【行】【—】【—】【每】【天】【都】【是】【面】【对】【朝】【阳】【,】【意】【气】【风】【发】【,】【向】【着】【成】【功】【彼】【岸】【进】【发】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【王】【礼】【平】【)】

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