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军嫂军娃暑期上高原

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2019年10月23日 06:13

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【非】【洲】【草】【原】【上】【有】【一】【种】【尖】【毛】【草】【,】【是】【那】【里】【长】【得】【最】【高】【的】【茅】【草】【,】【可】【它】【的】【生】【长】【过】【程】【却】【极】【为】【特】【别】【,】【在】【最】【初】【的】【半】【年】【里】【,】【它】【几】【乎】【是】【草】【原】【上】【最】【矮】【的】【草】【,】【只】【有】【一】【寸】【高】【,】【但】【半】【年】【后】【雨】【水】【一】【旦】【到】【来】【时】【,】【它】【却】【像】【被】【施】【了】【魔】【法】【一】【样】【,】【三】【五】【天】【后】【,】【便】【有】【一】【米】【六】【至】【两】【米】【的】【高】【度】【。】【原】【来】【,】【在】【前】【六】【个】【月】【里】【,】【尖】【毛】【草】【不】【是】【不】【长】【,】【而】【是】【一】【直】【在】【长】【根】【部】【,】【雨】【季】【前】【,】【它】【虽】【然】【只】【有】【一】【寸】【高】【,】【但】【却】【扎】【根】【地】【下】【超】【过】【二】【十】【八】【米】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【求】【:】【选】【择】【一】【个】【角】【度】【构】【思】【作】【文】【,】【自】【主】【确】【定】【立】【意】【,】【确】【定】【文】【体】【,】【确】【定】【标】【题】【;】【不】【要】【脱】【离】【材】【料】【内】【容】【及】【含】【意】【的】【范】【围】【作】【文】【,】【不】【得】【抄】【袭】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【思】【路】【点】【拨】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【段】【开】【放】【型】【的】【材】【料】【,】【由】【于】【站】【位】【不】【同】【,】【我】【们】【可】【以】【从】【两】【个】【视】【角】【任】【选】【其】【一】【展】【开】【分】【析】【。】【 】【从】【毛】【尖】【草】【这】【个】【角】【度】【而】【言】【,】【我】【们】【可】【以】【分】【析】【凡】【事】【都】【应】【该】【充】【分】【准】【备】【蓄】【势】【待】【发】【,】【正】【所】【谓】【厚】【积】【薄】【发】【,】【事】【实】【证】【明】【只】【有】【那】【些】【韬】【光】【养】【晦】【的】【人】【才】【可】【能】【成】【就】【一】【番】【大】【事】【业】【。】【试】【想】【,】【诸】【葛】【亮】【倘】【使】【没】【有】【在】【隆】【中】【的】【长】【期】【“】【潜】【伏】【”】【,】【如】【何】【能】【有】【初】【出】【茅】【庐】【的】【连】【战】【连】【捷】【,】【又】【怎】【会】【建】【立】【他】【一】【生】【的】【辉】【煌】【功】【业】【,】【做】【到】【每】【垂】【青】【史】【;】【勾】【践】【若】【不】【是】【卧】【薪】【尝】【胆】【十】【年】【含】【辛】【茹】【苦】【,】【也】【不】【会】【造】【就】【他】【“】【三】【千】【越】【甲】【可】【吞】【吴】【”】【的】【历】【史】【奇】【迹】【!】【然】【而】【这】【“】【二】【十】【八】【米】【”】【对】【于】【我】【们】【来】【讲】【,】【有】【的】【意】【味】【着】【幸】【福】【的】【等】【待】【,】【但】【更】【多】【的】【则】【是】【痛】【苦】【的】【煎】【熬】【!】【君】【不】【见】【那】【受】【尽】【奇】【耻】【的】【司】【马】【迁】【为】【得】【一】【部】【《】【史】【记】【》】【隐】【忍】【苟】【活】【,】【这】【“】【二】【十】【八】【米】【”】【对】【他】【而】【言】【意】【味】【着】【丧】【失】【尊】【严】【与】【人】【格】【,】【生】【不】【如】【死】【;】【看】【破】【世】【事】【纷】【争】【的】【曹】【雪】【芹】【为】【写】【一】【部】【《】【红】【楼】【梦】【》】【“】【披】【阅】【十】【载】【,】【增】【删】【五】【次】【”】【,】【殚】【精】【竭】【虑】【耗】【尽】【毕】【生】【心】【血】【,】【这】【“】【二】【十】【八】【米】【”】【对】【于】【他】【而】【言】【就】【意】【味】【着】【“】【举】【家】【食】【粥】【”】【度】【日】【如】【年】【!】【自】【古】【大】【凡】【成】【就】【大】【事】【者】【必】【定】【有】【一】【个】【长】【期】【的】【为】【某】【一】【事】【业】【锲】【而】【不】【舍】【卓】【绝】【奋】【斗】【的】【过】【程】【,】【这】【个】【过】【程】【中】【他】【们】【或】【者】【是】【乐】【此】【不】【疲】【,】【或】【者】【是】【痛】【不】【欲】【生】【,】【但】【他】【们】【始】【终】【没】【有】【放】【弃】【,】【永】【不】【言】【败】【。】【相】【反】【,】【速】【成】【的】【东】【西】【往】【往】【速】【朽】【,】【正】【如】【没】【有】【根】【基】【的】【房】【屋】【越】【是】【建】【得】【高】【大】【越】【容】【易】【土】【崩】【瓦】【解】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【旁】【观】【者】【的】【角】【度】【而】【言】【,】【我】【们】【看】【待】【一】【切】【成】【功】【,】【都】【不】【能】【只】【看】【到】【表】【象】【,】【更】【要】【思】【考】【、】【挖】【掘】【成】【功】【背】【后】【的】【艰】【辛】【与】【努】【力】【,】【要】【知】【道】【成】【功】【需】【要】【等】【待】【更】【需】【要】【付】【出】【,】【所】【谓】【“】【台】【上】【一】【分】【钟】【,】【台】【下】【十】【年】【功】【”】【。】【这】【对】【于】【那】【些】【汲】【汲】【于】【功】【利】【的】【现】【代】【人】【而】【言】【无】【疑】【是】【一】【剂】【强】【心】【针】【、】【清】【醒】【剂】【。】【华】【人】【影】【星】【张】【曼】【玉】【曾】【是】【一】【位】【热】【情】【服】【务】【的】【商】【场】【售】【货】【员】【,】【风】【光】【无】【限】【的】【华】【仔】【当】【年】【只】【是】【一】【个】【普】【普】【通】【通】【的】【理】【发】【师】【…】【…】【光】【鲜】【背】【后】【往】【往】【是】【鲜】【为】【人】【知】【的】【艰】【辛】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【构】【思】【举】【例】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【材】【料】【作】【文】【文】【体】【不】【限】【,】【各】【种】【样】【式】【都】【可】【以】【一】【展】【身】【手】【,】【关】【键】【取】【决】【于】【考】【生】【的】【特】【长】【。】【应】【该】【说】【对】【于】【大】【多】【数】【考】【生】【而】【言】【都】【会】【选】【择】【议】【论】【类】【文】【体】【。】【写】【议】【论】【文】【应】【该】【注】【意】【观】【点】【明】【确】【,】【开】【宗】【明】【义】【,】【点】【明】【中】【心】【,】【行】【文】【不】【蔓】【不】【枝】【,】【条】【理】【清】【晰】【;】【同】【时】【更】【要】【掌】【握】【相】【关】【的】【写】【作】【素】【材】【,】【所】【谓】【“】【事】【实】【胜】【于】【雄】【辩】【”】【,】【最】【怕】【无】【米】【下】【锅】【,】【东】【拉】【西】【扯】【;】【最】【后】【要】【强】【调】【的】【是】【应】【尽】【可】【能】【做】【到】【分】【析】【辩】【证】【,】【逻】【辑】【分】【明】【,】【鞭】【辟】【八】【里】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【然】【也】【可】【以】【选】【择】【记】【叙】【文】【体】【,】【或】【讲】【述】【一】【夜】【成】【名】【而】【昙】【花】【一】【现】【的】【悲】【剧】【,】【或】【描】【写】【厚】【积】【薄】【发】【功】【成】【名】【就】【的】【传】【奇】【,】【写】【出】【细】【节】【,】【写】【出】【生】【活】【的】【真】【实】【。】【但】【不】【论】【哪】【一】【种】【故】【事】【,】【中】【心】【都】【要】【落】【在】【“】【地】【下】【二】【十】【八】【米】【”】【上】【,】【突】【出】【如】【何】【刻】【苦】【发】【奋】【、】【隐】【忍】【努】【力】【,】【或】【是】【如】【何】【乐】【此】【不】【疲】【、】【废】【寝】【忘】【食】【等】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【误】【区】【指】【正】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【好】【本】【题】【主】【要】【存】【在】【以】【下】【问】【题】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【审】【题】【不】【准】【,】【过】【分】【宽】【泛】【。】【考】【生】【在】【写】【作】【本】【题】【时】【一】【般】【出】【现】【三】【类】【问】【题】【:】【一】【是】【不】【少】【考】【生】【没】【有】【抓】【住】【材】【料】【中】【“】【积】【累】【”】【与】【“】【奋】【发】【”】【二】【者】【的】【关】【系】【,】【而】【是】【将】【其】【没】【有】【边】【际】【地】【引】【申】【为】【量】【变】【与】【质】【变】【,】【还】【有】【的】【则】【是】【写】【表】【象】【与】【本】【质】【的】【关】【系】【,】【这】【实】【际】【上】【是】【对】【哲】【学】【概】【念】【理】【解】【不】【到】【位】【造】【成】【的】【。】【二】【是】【中】【心】【不】【明】【了】【,】【主】【题】【游】【离】【,】【作】【文】【的】【每】【个】【部】【分】【不】【是】【围】【绕】【中】【心】【展】【开】【,】【而】【是】【存】【在】【随】【意】【性】【。】【三】【是】【材】【料】【使】【用】【不】【当】【与】【文】【章】【主】【题】【无】【关】【,】【强】【拉】【硬】【拽】【,】【造】【成】【中】【心】【晦】【涩】【不】【明】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【材】【料】【不】【丰】【富】【或】【是】【匮】【乏】【。】【不】【少】【考】【生】【拿】【到】【题】【目】【后】【审】【题】【关】【是】【过】【了】【,】【但】【苦】【于】【手】【头】【没】【有】【材】【料】【而】【空】【发】【议】【论】【,】【致】【使】【议】【论】【的】【语】【言】【既】【平】【淡】【又】【冗】【长】【,】【有】【的】【甚】【至】【用】【扩】【写】【作】【文】【材】【料】【的】【“】【下】【策】【”】【,】【使】【得】【作】【文】【枯】【燥】【乏】【味】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【细】【节】【不】【足】【,】【过】【分】【在】【意】【情】【节】【的】【离】【奇】【曲】【折】【。】【有】【的】【考】【生】【善】【于】【讲】【故】【事】【,】【为】【了】【吸】【引】【阅】【卷】【者】【的】【眼】【球】【而】【将】【情】【节】【写】【得】【曲】【折】【离】【奇】【,】【但】【忽】【视】【了】【细】【节】【描】【写】【,】【形】【象】【不】【丰】【满】【,】【主】【题】【不】【鲜】【明】【,】【有】【的】【还】【造】【成】【了】【感】【染】【力】【不】【足】【,】【甚】【至】【影】【响】【到】【故】【事】【的】【真】【实】【性】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【经】【典】【素】【材】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【、】【孟】【子】【被】【尊】【为】【“】【亚】【圣】【”】【,】【后】【人】【没】【有】【不】【知】【晓】【的】【,】【而】【与】【孟】【子】【同】【时】【代】【的】【大】【学】【问】【家】【邹】【衍】【就】【鲜】【为】【人】【知】【了】【。】【此】【外】【,】【还】【有】【苏】【秦】【,】【幸】【好】【他】【有】【勾】【连】【六】【国】【、】【合】【纵】【拒】【秦】【的】【事】【迹】【才】【让】【后】【人】【记】【起】【。】【可】【今】【人】【哪】【里】【知】【道】【,】【当】【时】【吃】【得】【开】【的】【偏】【偏】【是】【邹】【衍】【、】【苏】【秦】【之】【辈】【,】【孟】【子】【却】【是】【备】【受】【冷】【落】【。】【邹】【衍】【到】【梁】【国】【,】【梁】【惠】【王】【亲】【自】【到】【郊】【外】【迎】【接】【;】【去】【赵】【国】【,】【平】【原】【君】【侧】【着】【身】【子】【伴】【行】【,】【并】【用】【自】【己】【的】【衣】【服】【把】【他】【的】【座】【位】【擦】【干】【净】【;】【上】【燕】【国】【,】【燕】【昭】【王】【不】【仅】【恭】【迎】【到】【国】【界】【,】【而】【且】【亲】【自】【替】【他】【清】【扫】【道】【路】【。】【一】【个】【做】【学】【问】【的】【人】【,】【为】【何】【能】【受】【到】【如】【此】【高】【的】【礼】【遇】【?】【原】【来】【邹】【衍】【谈】【的】【是】【阴】【阳】【玄】【妙】【之】【术】【,】【各】【国】【君】【主】【听】【了】【觉】【得】【高】【深】【莫】【测】【,】【几】【乎】【把】【他】【视】【若】【神】【人】【。】【苏】【秦】【讲】【的】【是】【攻】【伐】【之】【道】【,】【正】【是】【诸】【侯】【们】【安】【邦】【自】【保】【,】【或】【图】【霸】【天】【下】【所】【需】【要】【的】【,】【因】【此】【苏】【秦】【受】【到】【各】【国】【诸】【侯】【礼】【待】【,】【居】【然】【身】【佩】【六】【国】【相】【印】【,】【可】【是】【孟】【子】【就】【可】【怜】【了】【。】【那】【位】【亲】【自】【去】【郊】【外】【迎】【接】【邹】【衍】【的】【梁】【惠】【王】【见】【了】【孟】【子】【,】【连】【先】【生】【都】【不】【愿】【叫】【,】【只】【叫】【他】【“】【叟】【”】【:】【老】【头】【儿】【,】【你】【不】【远】【千】【里】【到】【我】【这】【里】【来】【,】【不】【知】【你】【有】【什】【么】【办】【法】【为】【我】【国】【谋】【利】【?】【孟】【子】【得】【孔】【门】【真】【传】【,】【怎】【么】【会】【开】【口】【就】【是】【利】【?】【于】【是】【他】【回】【答】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【说】【:】【为】【什】【么】【要】【讲】【利】【?】【有】【仁】【义】【就】【行】【了】【。】【孟】【子】【便】【把】【仁】【义】【之】【道】【说】【了】【一】【通】【,】【叫】【梁】【惠】【王】【但】【行】【仁】【义】【就】【够】【了】【。】【梁】【惠】【王】【哪】【里】【听】【得】【进】【这】【些】【东】【西】【?】【便】【以】【为】【孟】【子】【迂】【阔】【。】【好】【在】【最】【后】【发】【言】【的】【是】【历】【史】【。】【受】【到】【万】【世】【尊】【崇】【的】【并】【不】【是】【邹】【衍】【,】【也】【不】【是】【苏】【秦】【,】【而】【是】【曾】【经】【落】【寞】【不】【堪】【的】【孟】【子】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【、】【1】【8】【6】【2】【年】【,】【德】【国】【哥】【丁】【根】【大】【学】【医】【学】【院】【的】【亨】【尔】【教】【授】【迎】【来】【了】【他】【的】【新】【学】【生】【。】【开】【学】【不】【久】【的】【一】【天】【,】【亨】【尔】【教】【授】【突】【然】【把】【自】【己】【多】【年】【积】【下】【的】【论】【文】【手】【稿】【全】【部】【搬】【到】【教】【室】【里】【,】【分】【给】【学】【生】【们】【,】【让】【他】【们】【重】【新】【仔】【细】【工】【整】【地】【眷】【写】【一】【遍】【,】【但】【是】【,】【当】【学】【生】【们】【翻】【开】【亨】【尔】【教】【授】【的】【论】【文】【手】【稿】【时】【,】【发】【现】【这】【些】【手】【稿】【已】【经】【非】【常】【工】【整】【了】【。】【几】【乎】【所】【有】【的】【学】【生】【都】【认】【为】【根】【本】【没】【有】【重】【抄】【一】【遍】【的】【必】【要】【。】【他】【们】【的】【结】【论】【是】【,】【傻】【子】【才】【会】【坐】【在】【那】【里】【当】【抄】【写】【员】【。】【最】【后】【,】【他】【们】【都】【去】【实】【验】【室】【里】【搞】【研】【究】【去】【了】【。】【让】【人】【想】【不】【到】【的】【是】【,】【竟】【然】【真】【有】【一】【个】【“】【傻】【子】【”】【坐】【在】【教】【室】【里】【抄】【写】【教】【授】【的】【论】【文】【手】【稿】【,】【他】【叫】【科】【赫】【。】【一】【个】【学】【期】【以】【后】【,】【科】【赫】【把】【抄】【好】【的】【手】【稿】【送】【到】【了】【亨】【尔】【教】【授】【的】【办】【公】【室】【。】【教】【授】【对】【他】【说】【:】【“】【我】【们】【从】【事】【医】【学】【研】【究】【的】【人】【,】【不】【光】【需】【要】【聪】【明】【的】【头】【脑】【和】【勤】【奋】【的】【精】【神】【,】【更】【为】【重】【要】【的】【是】【一】【定】【要】【具】【备】【一】【种】【一】【丝】【不】【苟】【的】【精】【神】【。】【要】【知】【道】【,】【医】【学】【上】【走】【错】【一】【步】【,】【就】【是】【人】【命】【关】【天】【的】【大】【事】【啊】【!】【而】【抄】【写】【那】【些】【手】【稿】【的】【工】【作】【,】【既】【是】【学】【习】【医】【学】【知】【识】【的】【机】【会】【,】【也】【是】【一】【种】【修】【炼】【心】【性】【的】【过】【程】【。】【”】【这】【番】【话】【深】【深】【触】【动】【了】【科】【赫】【年】【轻】【的】【心】【灵】【。】【此】【后】【,】【他】【老】【老】【实】【实】【做】【“】【最】【傻】【的】【人】【”】【,】【以】【此】【来】【培】【养】【严】【谨】【的】【学】【习】【心】【态】【和】【研】【究】【作】【风】【。】【这】【种】【做】【事】【态】【度】【让】【他】【在】【人】【类】【历】【史】【上】【首】【次】【发】【现】【了】【结】【核】【菌】【、】【霍】【乱】【菌】【。】【1】【9】【0】【5】【年】【,】【鉴】【于】【其】【在】【细】【菌】【研】【究】【方】【面】【的】【卓】【越】【成】【就】【,】【瑞】【典】【皇】【家】【学】【会】【将】【诺】【贝】【尔】【生】【理】【学】【与】【医】【学】【奖】【授】【予】【了】【科】【赫】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【优】【秀】【作】【文】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【积】【淀】【中】【的】【力】【量】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【河】【北】【邯】【郸】【市】【一】【中】【顾】【亚】【楠】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【隔】【河】【对】【岸】【,】【是】【心】【驰】【神】【往】【的】【彼】【岸】【,】【眼】【前】【却】【是】【波】【涛】【汹】【涌】【。】【低】【头】【积】【蓄】【,】【抬】【头】【豁】【然】【,】【唯】【有】【储】【存】【积】【淀】【已】【久】【的】【努】【力】【,】【才】【能】【力】【挽】【狂】【澜】【。】【脚】【下】【是】【曾】【经】【追】【寻】【的】【圣】【土】【,】【蓦】【然】【回】【首】【—】【—】【大】【好】【河】【山】【,】【尽】【绽】【笑】【颜】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【—】【—】【题】【记】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【成】【功】【是】【潜】【移】【默】【化】【的】【过】【程】【,】【积】【蓄】【起】【努】【力】【的】【力】【量】【,】【久】【而】【久】【之】【,】【折】【射】【出】【绚】【丽】【的】【光】【彩】【。】【储】【存】【能】【量】【,】【为】【更】【高】【更】【强】【蓄】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【做】【生】【活】【的】【强】【者】【,】【并】【不】【是】【要】【压】【倒】【一】【切】【,】【而】【是】【要】【学】【会】【不】【被】【一】【切】【压】【倒】【。】【我】【们】【需】【要】【积】【蓄】【,】【我】【们】【等】【待】【薄】【发】【,】【我】【们】【要】【在】【坎】【坷】【中】【砥】【砺】【坚】【忍】【的】【品】【格】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【岁】【月】【悄】【无】【声】【息】【地】【流】【淌】【,】【沿】【着】【时】【间】【的】【旅】【途】【,】【走】【进】【历】【史】【—】【—】【卧】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【天】【傍】【晚】【去】【看】【铁】【生】【,】【是】【希】【米】【开】【的】【门】【,】【她】【还】【是】【那】【么】【笑】【着】【,】【眼】【睛】【弯】【弯】【的】【,】【嘴】【角】【弯】【弯】【的】【,】【好】【像】【从】【不】【知】【道】【什】【么】【忧】【愁】【似】【的】【。】【之】【前】【我】【和】【希】【米】【通】【电】【话】【,】【她】【说】【那】【史】【得】【了】【肺】【炎】【,】【现】【在】【好】【些】【了】【,】【昨】【天】【刚】【出】【院】【。】【我】【就】【说】【好】【吧】【,】【那】【我】【就】【去】【看】【他】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【那】【史】【”】【是】【希】【米】【对】【铁】【生】【的】【爱】【称】【。】【今】【天】【存】【一】【些】【健】【康】【者】【的】【脸】【上】【也】【已】【经】【不】【太】【容】【易】【看】【到】【希】【米】【这】【么】【开】【朗】【的】【笑】【容】【了】【,】【而】【她】【总】【是】【像】【个】【孩】【子】【一】【样】【,】【笑】【得】【纯】【真】【而】【快】【乐】【。】【可】【是】【她】【的】【重】【负】【是】【外】【人】【很】【难】【体】【验】【的】【,】【她】【是】【一】【个】【文】【学】【编】【辑】【,】【也】【做】【翻】【泽】【,】【这】【是】【费】【心】【力】【的】【工】【作】【,】【家】【里】【还】【有】【“】【那】【史】【”】【这】【样】【一】【个】【病】【人】【,】【他】【每】【周】【都】【要】【做】【几】【次】【肾】【透】【析】【。】【有】【的】【人】【在】【这】【样】【的】【重】【压】【之】【下】【也】【许】【会】【皱】【眉】【不】【展】【,】【而】【希】【米】【却】【依】【然】【乐】【观】【豁】【达】【,】【因】【为】【她】【有】【自】【己】【的】【世】【界】【。】【读】【过】【她】【翻】【泽】【和】【编】【辑】【的】【书】【,】【我】【知】【道】【她】【身】【上】【拥】【有】【一】【种】【哲】【学】【的】【力】【量】【。】【她】【的】【心】【灵】【与】【“】【那】【史】【”】【一】【样】【宁】【静】【而】【美】【丽】【,】【那】【是】【一】【个】【很】【多】【人】【看】【不】【到】【的】【地】【方】【,】【那】【里】【绿】【草】【如】【茵】【,】【碧】【水】【潺】【潺】【,】【超】【越】【了】【世】【俗】【的】【一】【切】【尘】【埃】【,】【是】【宽】【广】【而】【辽】【阔】【的】【天】【地】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【与】【希】【米】【说】【着】【笑】【着】【,】【穿】【过】【门】【厅】【,】【来】【到】【卧】【室】【,】【我】【看】【到】【了】【“】【那】【史】【”】【,】【他】【依】【然】【宽】【厚】【地】【微】【笑】【着】【,】【就】【像】【十】【几】【年】【前】【我】【第】【一】【次】【见】【到】【他】【一】【样】【。】【他】【正】【倚】【着】【被】【子】【坐】【在】【那】【里】【。】【他】【跟】【我】【握】【手】【,】【他】【手】【有】【点】【热】【,】【有】【点】【绵】【软】【。】【我】【让】【他】【躺】【下】【,】【他】【不】【干】【,】【非】【要】【坐】【着】【说】【话】【。】【与】【铁】【生】【聊】【天】【一】【点】【也】【不】【用】【拘】【谨】【,】【他】【的】【话】【语】【就】【像】【他】【的】【模】【样】【朴】【实】【而】【亲】【切】【。】【他】【说】【,】【你】【知】【道】【最】【近】【有】【媒】【体】【说】【我】【病】【危】【了】【,】【我】【这】【不】【又】【好】【了】【。】【我】【笑】【了】【说】【,】【我】【知】【道】【你】【会】【好】【的】【,】【有】【一】【位】【女】【作】【家】【跟】【我】【说】【过】【,】【这】【叫】【沉】【船】【不】【破】【,】【破】【船】【不】【沉】【。】【经】【常】【生】【病】【的】【人】【反】【而】【能】【扛】【过】【去】【呢】【!】【铁】【生】【说】【,】【海】【迪】【你】【还】【是】【再】【呼】【吁】【一】【下】【安】【乐】【死】【吧】【。】【我】【说】【,】【天】【啊】【。】【现】【在】【不】【行】【,】【因】【为】【牵】【扯】【的】【问】【题】【太】【复】【杂】【了】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【叫】【我】【看】【到】【墙】【上】【的】【一】【个】【镜】【框】【,】【黑】【白】【照】【片】【上】【是】【一】【个】【小】【男】【孩】【和】【一】【个】【小】【女】【孩】【,】【都】【是】【七】【八】【岁】【的】【样】【了】【。】【他】【们】【一】【个】【坐】【着】【,】【一】【个】【站】【着】【,】【他】【们】【手】【牵】【着】【手】【,】【表】【情】【天】【真】【又】【稚】【气】【。】【你】【猜】【猜】【他】【们】【是】【谁】【?】【铁】【生】【问】【我】【。】【我】【说】【我】【看】【出】【来】【了】【!】【这】【正】【是】【他】【们】【—】【—】【童】【年】【的】【铁】【生】【和】【希】【米】【!】【P】【H】【O】【T】【O】【S】【H】【O】【P】【把】【他】【们】【永】【远】【连】【接】【在】【一】【起】【了】【,】【他】【们】【的】【手】【和】【心】【。】【铁】【生】【快】【乐】【地】【笑】【了】【,】【而】【我】【却】【忽】【然】【有】【点】【伤】【感】【,】【真】【希】【望】【他】【是】【健】【康】【的】【,】【生】【活】【得】【长】【长】【久】【久】【,】【与】【那】【心】【爱】【的】【人】【。】【我】【想】【起】【去】【年】【来】【看】【铁】【生】【,】【他】【给】【我】【一】【本】【涛】【刊】【,】【里】【面】【有】【他】【写】【的】【十】【首】【诗】【,】【其】【中】【有】【一】【首】【叫】【做】【《】【希】【米】【,】【希】【米】【》】【。】【他】【写】【道】【:】【希】【米】【,】【希】【米】【,】【见】【到】【你】【就】【像】【见】【到】【家】【乡】【,】【所】【有】【神】【情】【我】【都】【熟】【悉】【。】【你】【来】【了】【黑】【夜】【才】【听】【懂】【期】【待】【,】【你】【来】【了】【白】【昼】【才】【看】【破】【藩】【篱】【…】【…】【这】【黑】【白】【照】【片】【凝】【固】【着】【当】【下】【生】【活】【中】【最】【真】【挚】【的】【情】【感】【,】【让】【物】【质】【的】【一】【切】【在】【它】【的】【面】【前】【都】【褪】【去】【了】【颜】【色】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【铁】【生】【忍】【耐】【着】【许】【多】【男】【人】【无】【法】【忍】【受】【的】【痛】【苦】【,】【而】【他】【却】【像】【一】【泓】【深】【蓝】【的】【湖】【,】【轻】【轻】【荡】【漾】【着】【,】【没】【有】【一】【丝】【涟】【漪】【,】【因】【为】【远】【离】【尘】【嚣】【,】【所】【以】【淡】【泊】【宁】【静】【;】【因】【为】【懂】【得】【生】【命】【,】【所】【以】【活】【得】【从】【容】【。】【在】【那】【个】【简】【朴】【温】【馨】【的】【小】【屋】【里】【,】【我】【们】【聊】【了】【很】【久】【,】【临】【走】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【对】【他】【许】【下】【一】【个】【诺】【言】【,】【也】【许】【没】【有】【人】【知】【道】【那】【是】【什】【么】【,】【但】【是】【铁】【生】【笑】【了】【。】【我】【对】【希】【米】【说】【的】【还】【是】【一】【句】【话】【,】【让】【“】【那】【史】【”】【好】【好】【休】【息】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【新】【的】【一】【年】【,】【绿】【的】【春】【天】【,】【冰】【雪】【就】【要】【融】【化】【,】【不】【沉】【的】【船】【又】【要】【起】【航】【了】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【素】【材】【运】【用】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【透】【露】【出】【铁】【生】【的】【病】【痛】【和】【淡】【定】【,】【海】【迪】【的】【伤】【感】【和】【希】【望】【。】【其】【中】【最】【让】【人】【难】【忘】【的】【是】【希】【米】【的】【微】【笑】【。】【记】【得】【作】【家】【陈】【村】【曾】【经】【在】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【中】【写】【道】【:】【“】【希】【米】【是】【铁】【生】【的】【妻】【子】【,】【是】【‘】【我】【们】【上】【海】【人】【’】【,】【她】【的】【笑】【是】【天】【使】【的】【笑】【容】【,】【灿】【烂】【又】【本】【分】【地】【笑】【着】【。】【”】【也】【许】【,】【因】【为】【有】【了】【她】【的】【笑】【,】【史】【铁】【生】【才】【很】【艰】【难】【地】【从】【生】【存】【的】【窄】【缝】【里】【走】【出】【来】【,】【带】【着】【豁】【然】【开】【朗】【的】【喜】【悦】【,】【用】【残】【缺】【的】【身】【体】【 】【 】【说】【出】【了】【最】【为】【健】【全】【而】【丰】【满】【的】【思】【想】【。】【张】【海】【迪】【和】【史】【铁】【生】【都】【身】【有】【疾】【患】【,】【但】【他】【们】【都】【懂】【得】【生】【命】【,】【活】【得】【从】【容】【。】【一】【会】【儿】【笑】【盈】【盈】【,】【一】【会】【儿】【沉】【甸】【甸】【,】【这】【就】【是】【生】【活】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【桑】【尔】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【话】【题】【拓】【展】【:】【笑】【对】【生】【活】【 】【 】【百】【折】【不】【挠】天津滨海新区规划【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【一】【种】【植】【物】【叫】【蓟】【,】【它】【以】【惊】【人】【的】【力】【量】【再】【生】【,】【让】【你】【感】【受】【到】【那】【种】【顽】【强】【和】【乐】【观】【一】【如】【人】【类】【的】【生】【活】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【入】【冬】【,】【农】【人】【们】【的】【犁】【铧】【翻】【耕】【了】【土】【地】【,】【这】【是】【来】【年】【播】【种】【必】【备】【的】【程】【序】【。】【但】【是】【,】【对】【于】【野】【草】【,】【对】【于】【一】【切】【经】【过】【犁】【铧】【切】【割】【的】【植】【物】【,】【这】【无】【异】【于】【天】【降】【的】【灾】【难】【,】【它】【们】【被】【突】【然】【从】【根】【部】【切】【断】【,】【那】【些】【依】【靠】【种】【子】【繁】【殖】【的】【植】【物】【,】【只】【有】【期】【待】【来】【年】【秋】【后】【种】【子】【的】【播】【撒】【了】【。】【蓟】【却】【不】【。】【春】【天】【,】【在】【去】【年】【翻】【耕】【过】【的】【土】【地】【上】【,】【只】【有】【蓟】【,】【只】【有】【蓟】【类】【一】【族】【,】【旺】【盛】【地】【生】【长】【起】【来】【,】【很】【快】【地】【铺】【展】【、】【占】【领】【了】【那】【一】【片】【看】【上】【去】【有】【些】【单】【调】【的】【土】【地】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【蓟】【鲜】【嫩】【、】【肥】【胖】【的】【叶】【子】【,】【是】【春】【天】【野】【蔬】【果】【最】【独】【特】【的】【一】【味】【,】【它】【鲜】【,】【却】【苦】【。】【扯】【开】【叶】【子】【,】【如】【同】【扯】【断】【根】【,】【会】【有】【白】【色】【的】【血】【流】【出】【。】【当】【犁】【铧】【突】【然】【切】【断】【蓟】【的】【根】【部】【时】【,】【蓟】【有】【旺】【盛】【的】【血】【流】【表】【示】【着】【那】【切】【肤】【的】【疼】【痛】【。】【可】【是】【,】【蓟】【会】【在】【每】【一】【个】【断】【面】【迅】【速】【地】【把】【血】【凝】【结】【成】【痂】【,】【你】【会】【想】【象】【到】【那】【时】【,】【蓟】【无】【声】【地】【呼】【号】【、】【呻】【吟】【和】【战】【栗】【。】【这】【应】【该】【是】【一】【切】【生】【命】【经】【历】【灾】【难】【时】【,】【都】【难】【以】【避】【免】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【蓟】【的】【迅】【速】【自】【我】【“】【疗】【治】【”】【,】【让】【人】【吃】【惊】【。】【别】【的】【断】【根】【的】【植】【物】【都】【死】【去】【了】【,】【蓟】【的】【故】【事】【如】【同】【传】【奇】【,】【却】【在】【继】【续】【。】【蓟】【的】【每】【一】【个】【创】【伤】【的】【断】【面】【,】【都】【是】【一】【个】【新】【生】【叶】【芽】【的】【萌】【生】【面】【。】【它】【在】【一】【端】【生】【了】【根】【,】【另】【一】【端】【挺】【起】【来】【,】【以】【新】【鲜】【乐】【观】【的】【姿】【态】【,】【冒】【出】【地】【面】【,】【作】【为】【早】【春】【的】【象】【征】【,】【向】【太】【阳】【伸】【出】【双】【臂】【,】【展】【开】【绿】【色】【的】【旗】【帜】【。】【于】【是】【,】【先】【前】【,】【大】【地】【上】【只】【有】【一】【朵】【一】【朵】【的】【蓟】【,】【如】【今】【,】【却】【变】【成】【一】【簇】【一】【簇】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【五】【月】【,】【活】【下】【来】【的】【蓟】【会】【伸】【长】【自】【己】【的】【茎】【,】【开】【出】【一】【颗】【一】【颗】【紫】【红】【色】【的】【花】【朵】【。】【一】【种】【自】【尊】【而】【顽】【强】【的】【植】【物】【啊】【,】【蓟】【的】【根】【简】【直】【就】【是】【植】【物】【里】【能】【再】【生】【的】【蚯】【蚓】【。】【它】【白】【色】【的】【血】【是】【苦】【味】【的】【,】【它】【绿】【色】【的】【叶】【是】【苦】【味】【的】【,】【它】【生】【长】【的】【历】【程】【充】【满】【了】【苦】【难】【,】【人】【们】【叫】【蓟】【“】【苦】【苦】【菜】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【类】【的】【生】【活】【不】【正】【如】【这】【“】【蓟】【”】【么】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【年】【前】【,】【当】【地】【震】【突】【如】【其】【来】【降】【临】【在】【人】【们】【的】【头】【顶】【,】【人】【们】【的】【脆】【弱】【,】【不】【会】【比】【蓟】【对】【于】【犁】【铧】【的】【切】【断】【强】【大】【多】【少】【。】【房】【倒】【屋】【塌】【,】【一】【瞬】【间】【,】【生】【活】【如】【同】【陆】【沉】【,】【那】【么】【多】【鲜】【活】【的】【生】【命】【消】【失】【了】【,】【残】【损】【了】【;】【哭】【嚎】【、】【呻】【吟】【、】【战】【栗】【,】【人】【们】【的】【惊】【恐】【哀】【伤】【,】【远】【远】【超】【过】【了】【蓟】【的】【疼】【痛】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【人】【们】【从】【废】【墟】【里】【站】【起】【来】【,】【抖】【掉】【身】【上】【灰】【尘】【的】【时】【候】【,】【就】【宣】【布】【了】【生】【活】【重】【新】【发】【轫】【;】【瞬】【间】【的】【断】【裂】【,】【不】【是】【生】【活】【的】【死】【灰】【。】【掩】【埋】【逝】【者】【,】【医】【治】【伤】【者】【,】【垒】【石】【立】【木】【,】【重】【造】【屋】【舍】【;】【新】【的】【爱】【情】【,】【重】【新】【建】【立】【;】【新】【的】【生】【命】【,】【如】【期】【诞】【生】【。】【生】【活】【,】【如】【同】【能】【分】【泌】【出】【奇】【异】【胶】【质】【的】【植】【物】【,】【断】【裂】【处】【被】【悄】【悄】【地】【重】【新】【弥】【合】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【巨】【大】【的】【创】【伤】【,】【当】【然】【不】【会】【像】【蓟】【那】【样】【迅】【速】【被】【遗】【忘】【,】【迅】【速】【会】【复】【苏】【。】【可】【是】【,】【人】【类】【的】【自】【我】【疗】【冶】【,】【生】【命】【的】【顽】【强】【繁】【衍】【,】【却】【也】【不】【会】【是】【蓟】【所】【能】【比】【拟】【的】【。】【否】【则】【,】【数】【以】【千】【年】【万】【年】【计】【的】【进】【化】【过】【程】【,】【就】【不】【会】【跨】【越】【冰】【、】【火】【,】【震】【、】【洪】【,】【延】【续】【至】【今】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【仅】【仅】【一】【年】【,】【还】【只】【是】【一】【年】【。】【我】【看】【见】【人】【们】【在】【尚】【未】【清】【除】【的】【废】【墟】【边】【建】【起】【的】【华】【屋】【粉】【墙】【上】【画】【美】【的】【生】【活】【向】【往】【;】【在】【刚】【刚】【清】【扫】【过】【的】【广】【场】【上】【边】【舞】【边】【唱】【古】【老】【的】【羌】【族】【爱】【情】【歌】【谣】【;】【曾】【经】【被】【痛】【苦】【电】【击】【般】【呆】【滞】【了】【的】【脸】【庞】【上】【复】【苏】【了】【笑】【容】【;】【道】【路】【上】【,】【沉】【重】【的】【脚】【步】【已】【约】【略】【变】【得】【轻】【松】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【生】【活】【在】【继】【续】【。】【像】【一】【个】【人】【猛】【然】【跌】【倒】【了】【,】【爬】【起】【来】【,】【会】【有】【短】【时】【间】【的】【喘】【息】【;】【而】【后】【,】【是】【慢】【步】【、】【快】【步】【,】【如】【果】【可】【能】【,】【还】【会】【跑】【步】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【很】【钦】【佩】【蓟】【,】【一】【种】【植】【物】【让】【我】【思】【考】【了】【人】【的】【生】【活】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【素】【材】【运】【用】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【非】【常】【典】【型】【的】【借】【物】【抒】【情】【的】【散】【文】【。】【从】【文】【中】【我】【们】【看】【到】【了】【“】【苦】【苦】【菜】【”】【的】【坚】【强】【和】【乐】【观】【,】【它】【经】【受】【了】【千】【犁】【万】【铧】【,】【千】【磨】【万】【难】【,】【生】【命】【不】【但】【没】【有】【终】【结】【,】【反】【而】【又】【孕】【育】【出】【一】【簇】【簇】【新】【生】【命】【,】【演】【绎】【着】【一】【个】【个】【传】【奇】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【者】【由】【蓟】【联】【系】【到】【人】【类】【的】【生】【活】【,】【并】【以】【汶】【川】【地】【震】【为】【例】【,】【进】【而】【说】【明】【万】【物】【之】【灵】【一】【一】【人】【类】【的】【自】【我】【疗】【治】【的】【力】【量】【,】【升】【华】【了】【文】【章】【的】【主】【题】【。】【没】【有】【谁】【喜】【欢】【品】【尝】【苦】【难】【,】【但】【苦】【难】【却】【常】【常】【在】【人】【们】【不】【经】【意】【的】【时】【候】【来】【临】【,】【让】【我】【们】【无】【法】【躲】【闪】【,】【一】【如】【汶】【川】【大】【地】【震】【留】【给】【我】【们】【的】【震】【撼】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【生】【活】【如】【蓟】【,】【蓟】【如】【人】【生】【。】【同】【蓟】【一】【样】【,】【人】【可】【以】【被】【毁】【灭】【,】【但】【不】【可】【被】【打】【倒】【。】【苦】【难】【制】【造】【了】【废】【墟】【,】【但】【在】【废】【墟】【中】【人】【类】【又】【演】【绎】【出】【了】【生】【命】【的】【奇】【迹】【。】【那】【些】【依】【靠】【爱】【和】【信】【念】【凝】【结】【在】【一】【起】【的】【力】【量】【就】【是】【抵】【御】【苦】【难】【的】【良】【方】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【话】【题】【拓】【展】【:】【生】【活】【 】【苦】【难】【 】【信】【念】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【都】【喜】【欢】【手】【上】【有】【一】【朵】【花】【,】【是】【别】【人】【送】【的】【。】【那】【一】【朵】【小】【花】【,】【也】【许】【是】【情】【人】【节】【的】【礼】【物】【,】【也】【许】【是】【你】【和】【他】【之】【间】【的】【秘】【密】【,】【也】【许】【与】【别】【人】【都】【没】【有】【关】【系】【,】【只】【是】【你】【自】【己】【,】【在】【山】【间】【小】【径】【漫】【步】【,】【信】【手】【从】【路】【旁】【的】【草】【坡】【上】【,】【摘】【下】【的】【一】【朵】【野】【菊】【,】【把】【它】【带】【进】【了】【你】【的】【房】【间】【,】【也】【就】【把】【山】【野】【的】【气】【味】【和】【色】【彩】【留】【在】【自】【己】【的】【身】【边】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【过】【,】【自】【己】【手】【上】【有】【一】【朵】【花】【的】【时】【间】【好】【像】【总】【是】【比】【别】【人】【于】【上】【有】【一】【朵】【花】【的】【时】【间】【少】【,】【因】【为】【“】【别】【人】【”】【有】【无】【数】【个】【。】【这】【是】【道】【数】【学】【题】【?】【不】【,】【是】【心】【理】【学】【的】【题】【目】【?】【也】【不】【。】【只】【是】【生】【活】【最】【真】【实】【的】【内】【容】【,】【只】【是】【我】【们】【忘】【记】【了】【安】【放】【它】【的】【位】【置】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【报】【上】【有】【这】【么】【一】【段】【文】【字】【:】【“】【姚】【明】【对】【他】【的】【朋】【友】【说】【,】【生】【活】【能】【选】【择】【吗】【?】【永】【远】【像】【现】【在】【这】【样】【,】【我】【羡】【慕】【你】【清】【闲】【,】【你】【羡】【慕】【我】【有】【钱】【。】【”】【也】【许】【不】【只】【是】【姚】【明】【和】【他】【的】【朋】【友】【,】【有】【这】【种】【互】【相】【羡】【慕】【,】【或】【是】【互】【相】【欣】【赏】【,】【遇】【到】【另】【外】【的】【情】【境】【,】【手】【上】【的】【花】【会】【长】【出】【刺】【,】【还】【会】【是】【互】【相】【妒】【忌】【。】【我】【们】【在】【这】【个】【时】【候】【,】【常】【常】【会】【因】【对】【方】【手】【上】【的】【“】【那】【朵】【花】【”】【而】【心】【生】【羡】【慕】【,】【甚】【至】【心】【生】【妒】【忌】【,】【心】【生】【不】【平】【之】【怨】【:】【老】【天】【爷】【,】【怎】【么】【好】【事】【都】【落】【在】【他】【的】【手】【上】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【姚】【明】【对】【他】【朋】【友】【所】【说】【的】【话】【,】【是】【老】【实】【话】【,】【但】【不】【是】【什】【么】【真】【理】【和】【高】【论】【,】【因】【为】【那】【只】【是】【一】【枚】【硬】【币】【的】【一】【面】【。】【只】【看】【到】【这】【一】【面】【,】【就】【自】【然】【产】【生】【羡】【慕】【甚】【至】【妒】【忌】【之】【心】【。】【这】【句】【话】【换】【一】【个】【人】【来】【看】【,】【比】【方】【我】【,】【我】【就】【这】【么】【想】【:】【有】【钱】【的】【姚】【明】【这】【下】【子】【没】【办】【法】【过】【我】【这】【样】【自】【由】【自】【在】【的】【日】【子】【了】【,】【我】【得】【感】【谢】【老】【天】【让】【我】【能】【有】【如】【此】【清】【闲】【的】【一】【段】【时】【光】【!】【于】【是】【我】【拒】【绝】【让】【我】【的】【钱】【包】【去】【和】【N】【B】【A】【的】【钱】【包】【打】【比】【赛】【,】【我】【愉】【快】【地】【安】【排】【这】【段】【清】【闲】【,】【读】【几】【本】【好】【书】【,】【写】【几】【篇】【文】【章】【,】【包】【括】【这】【一】【篇】【正】【在】【写】【的】【短】【文】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【从】【这】【一】【段】【话】【,】【想】【到】【了】【关】【于】【鲜】【花】【和】【命】【运】【的】【故】【事】【。】【看】【了】【许】【多】【“】【二】【战】【”】【集】【中】【营】【的】【故】【事】【,】【这】【些】【故】【事】【,】【让】【我】【去】【知】【晓】【善】【恶】【,】【同】【时】【也】【让】【我】【思】【索】【命】【运】【。】【在】【集】【中】【营】【恶】【劣】【的】【现】【实】【生】【活】【中】【,】【囚】【徒】【被】【剥】【夺】【了】【一】【切】【,】【而】【党】【卫】【军】【则】【占】【有】【了】【一】【切】【,】【阳】【光】【、】【食】【物】【、】【水】【,】【甚】【至】【清】【新】【的】【空】【气】【,】【这】【真】【是】【太】【不】【公】【平】【了】【,】【这】【个】【世】【界】【所】【有】【的】【不】【公】【平】【都】【集】【中】【在】【这】【个】【叫】【集】【中】【营】【的】【地】【方】【。】【但】【是】【在】【这】【个】【集】【中】【营】【里】【所】【有】【的】【内】【心】【里】【,】【在】【夜】【晚】【的】【梦】【里】【,】【却】【是】【另】【外】【的】【两】【种】【境】【遇】【。】【囚】【徒】【“】【拥】【有】【”】【希】【望】【和】【明】【天】【,】【这】【明】【天】【和】【希】【望】【是】【维】【系】【他】【们】【生】【命】【的】【最】【好】【礼】【物】【。】【梦】【里】【会】【有】【蓝】【天】【、】【草】【地】【、】【鲜】【花】【和】【解】【放】【者】【带】【来】【的】【阳】【光】【下】【的】【自】【由】【呼】【吸】【,】【不】【是】【每】【个】【人】【都】【能】【得】【到】【,】【但】【只】【要】【活】【着】【就】【有】【希】【望】【得】【到】【!】【而】【党】【卫】【军】【的】【噩】【梦】【,】【是】【绞】【架】【,】【是】【审】【判】【厅】【,】【是】【无】【休】【无】【止】【的】【追】【捕】【,】【只】【要】【他】【们】【活】【到】【战】【争】【结】【束】【,】【就】【会】【实】【现】【噩】【梦】【中】【可】【怕】【的】【预】【言】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【集】【中】【营】【的】【故】【事】【有】【许】【许】【多】【多】【,】【下】【面】【这】【段】【话】【是】【当】【年】【集】【中】【营】【里】【一】【名】【囚】【徒】【的】【祈】【祷】【:】【“】【亲】【爱】【的】【上】【帝】【,】【别】【让】【我】【死】【在】【这】【里】【,】【请】【求】【你】【听】【我】【这】【一】【次】【!】【我】【要】【死】【在】【外】【面】【。】【我】【还】【年】【轻】【,】【请】【让】【我】【死】【在】【外】【面】【!】【我】【还】【想】【看】【一】【眼】【自】【由】【!】【请】【求】【你】【,】【让】【我】【看】【一】【眼】【自】【由】【再】【死】【。】【我】【知】【道】【自】【己】【不】【会】【活】【多】【久】【,】【可】【是】【,】【我】【想】【死】【在】【外】【面】【的】【草】【地】【上】【。】【”】【这】【就】【是】【一】【个】【人】【被】【剥】【夺】【得】【只】【剩】【下】【生】【的】【希】【望】【时】【发】【出】【的】【心】【声】【,】【当】【生】【的】【希】【望】【那】【么】【渺】【茫】【时】【,】【死】【也】【“】【想】【死】【在】【外】【面】【的】【草】【地】【上】【”】【!】【在】【这】【个】【党】【卫】【军】【枪】【口】【下】【的】【死】【亡】【集】【中】【营】【里】【,】【还】【有】【比】【“】【渴】【求】【活】【着】【”】【更】【有】【用】【的】【东】【西】【吗】【?】【这】【就】【是】【亲】【爱】【的】【上】【帝】【给】【囚】【徒】【们】【最】【美】【的】【“】【花】【朵】【”】【,】【囚】【徒】【们】【用】【心】【血】【滋】【养】【着】【这】【朵】【花】【,】【直】【到】【集】【中】【营】【成】【为】【一】【个】【记】【忆】【,】【而】【苦】【难】【中】【的】【这】【段】【祈】【求】【,】【证】【实】【了】【生】【命】【的】【美】【丽】【与】【顽】【强】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【永】【远】【不】【要】【只】【会】【羡】【慕】【别】【人】【而】【忘】【记】【自】【己】【手】【上】【还】【有】【另】【外】【一】【朵】【“】【美】【丽】【的】【花】【”】【。】【相】【信】【命】【运】【在】【关】【上】【一】【扇】【门】【的】【时】【候】【,】【会】【打】【开】【另】【一】【扇】【窗】【。】【一】【定】【要】【为】【生】【活】【找】【到】【理】【由】【,】【只】【要】【活】【着】【,】【就】【别】【让】【自】【己】【手】【上】【的】【那】【朵】【花】【枯】【萎】【了】【,】【那】【是】【命】【运】【的】【赐】【予】【。】【只】【要】【关】【注】【了】【手】【中】【的】【这】【朵】【花】【,】【你】【的】【生】【活】【就】【一】【定】【会】【变】【得】【不】【一】【样】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【素】【材】【运】【用】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【世】【界】【上】【每】【一】【个】【人】【都】【是】【独】【一】【无】【二】【的】【,】【我】【们】【不】【必】【艳】【羡】【别】【人】【手】【里】【的】【花】【,】【自】【己】【手】【中】【的】【那】【一】【朵】【才】【和】【你】【一】【样】【举】【世】【无】【双】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【话】【题】【拓】【展】【:】【特】【别】【的】【你】【 】【角】【度】天津滨海新区规划【<】【p】【>】【童】【年】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【去】【过】【一】【个】【美】【丽】【的】【地】【方】【&】【m】【d】【a】【s】【h】【;】【&】【m】【d】【a】【s】【h】【;】【海】【南】【,】【海】【南】【是】【一】【个】【充】【满】【活】【力】【的】【地】【方】【。】【他】【有】【着】【奇】【妙】【的】【风】【土】【人】【情】【,】【有】【着】【天】【蓝】【色】【的】【海】【,】【还】【有】【这】【温】【暖】【的】【沙】【,】【有】【着】【,】【高】【高】【的】【椰】【子】【树】【,】【还】【有】【那】【个】【个】【棕】【褐】【色】【的】【椰】【子】【。】【当】【然】【,】【这】【只】【是】【我】【童】【年】【记】【忆】【中】【的】【一】【部】【分】【。】【这】【一】【部】【分】【中】【有】【着】【快】【乐】【,】【有】【着】【愉】【快】【的】【玩】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

天津滨海新区规划:未来装备五万辆!

【<】【p】【>】【八】【百】【年】【前】【的】【一】【个】【秋】【天】【,】【冷】【风】【来】【袭】【,】【为】【战】【场】【更】【是】【增】【添】【了】【一】【份】【神】【秘】【感】【。】【夜】【晚】【来】【临】【,】【我】【站】【在】【山】【头】【,】【俯】【视】【军】【队】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】天津滨海新区规划【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【非】【驴】【非】【马】【,】【缺】【少】【文】【体】【意】【识】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【命】【题】【作】【文】【的】【一】【个】【重】【要】【特】【征】【是】【“】【文】【体】【不】【限】【”】【,】【但】【对】【此】【有】【不】【少】【老】【师】【与】【学】【生】【存】【在】【的】【错】【误】【理】【解】【:】【认】【为】【“】【文】【体】【不】【限】【”】【就】【是】【不】【需】【要】【文】【体】【的】【规】【范】【,】【写】【起】【作】【文】【来】【信】【马】【由】【缰】【,】【随】【心】【所】【欲】【,】【其】【结】【果】【,】【写】【出】【的】【文】【章】【成】【了】【非】【驴】【非】【马】【、】【非】【猪】【非】【狗】【“】【四】【不】【像】【”】【。】【其】【实】【,】【“】【文】【体】【不】【限】【”】【并】【非】【不】【需】【要】【文】【体】【的】【规】【范】【。】【对】【目】【前】【高】【考】【作】【文】【中】【的】【“】【文】【体】【不】【限】【”】【宜】【作】【这】【样】【的】【理】【解】【:】【提】【供】【考】【生】【多】【种】【选】【择】【的】【机】【会】【,】【便】【于】【学】【生】【在】【自】【己】【擅】【长】【的】【文】【体】【中】【自】【由】【发】【挥】【,】【写】【出】【自】【己】【的】【最】【高】【水】【平】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【而】【从】【今】【年】【的】【阅】【卷】【情】【况】【看】【,】【这】【方】【面】【考】【生】【做】【得】【不】【尽】【如】【人】【意】【。】【相】【当】【一】【部】【分】【的】【考】【生】【,】【开】【头】【引】【用】【或】【概】【括】【一】【下】【作】【文】【材】【料】【,】【提】【出】【观】【点】【,】【中】【间】【记】【叙】【有】【关】【主】【题】【的】【一】【件】【事】【,】【结】【尾】【来】【一】【番】【议】【论】【。】【从】【开】【头】【结】【尾】【看】【,】【属】【于】【议】【论】【文】【,】【但】【从】【主】【体】【看】【,】【却】【又】【像】【记】【叙】【文】【。】【文】【体】【不】【伦】【不】【类】【,】【最】【后】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【只】【能】【根】【据】【其】【语】【言】【功】【底】【,】【给】【个】【三】【类】【文】【上】【下】【浮】【动】【的】【分】【数】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【简】【陋】【寒】【伧】【,】【缺】【少】【素】【材】【意】【识】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【的】【构】【成】【来】【说】【,】【文】【章】【所】【选】【用】【的】【材】【料】【才】【是】【文】【章】【的】【血】【肉】【,】【是】【文】【章】【的】【神】【,】【只】【有】【材】【料】【精】【彩】【了】【,】【文】【章】【才】【能】【形】【神】【兼】【具】【,】【血】【肉】【丰】【满】【,】【生】【动】【感】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【但】【我】【们】【不】【无】【遗】【憾】【地】【看】【到】【,】【在】【本】【次】【高】【考】【的】【作】【文】【中】【,】【考】【生】【表】【现】【出】【素】【材】【的】【匮】【乏】【令】【人】【咂】【舌】【。】【概】【括】【起】【来】【表】【现】【为】【以】【下】【几】【方】【面】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【、】【浮】【光】【掠】【影】【,】【泛】【泛】【而】【谈】【。】【有】【些】【文】【章】【,】【总】【体】【构】【思】【尚】【可】【,】【角】【度】【也】【较】【新】【颖】【,】【但】【其】【论】【述】【时】【只】【是】【蜻】【蜓】【点】【水】【,】【隔】【靴】【搔】【痒】【,】【论】【述】【不】【深】【入】【,】【不】【到】【位】【,】【说】【理】【仅】【停】【留】【在】【表】【面】【,】【文】【章】【也】【就】【缺】【乏】【一】【定】【的】【说】【服】【力】【。】【好】【比】【一】【个】【外】【表】【英】【俊】【的】【人】【,】【谈】【吐】【却】【俗】【之】【又】【俗】【,】【很】【难】【让】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【留】【下】【好】【印】【象】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【、】【一】【事】【到】【底】【,】【材】【料】【单】【薄】【。】【与】【平】【时】【作】【文】【中】【泛】【泛】【而】【谈】【比】【较】【相】【似】【的】【是】【,】【不】【少】【考】【生】【由】【于】【积】【累】【缺】【乏】【或】【者】【考】【场】【中】【想】【不】【起】【来】【,】【通】【篇】【只】【运】【用】【一】【个】【材】【料】【(】【这】【个】【材】【料】【往】【往】【即】【是】【话】【题】【中】【的】【材】【料】【)】【。】【这】【类】【文】【章】【,】【有】【的】【考】【生】【语】【言】【功】【底】【尚】【可】【,】【分】【析】【能】【力】【也】【可】【以】【,】【只】【得】【了】【二】【三】【类】【文】【,】【非】【常】【可】【惜】【。】【其】【补】【救】【办】【法】【是】【怎】【样】【把】【“】【有】【限】【”】【转】【化】【为】【“】【无】【限】【”】【,】【充】【实】【文】【章】【的】【材】【料】【,】【丰】【富】【文】【章】【的】【内】【容】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【、】【材】【料】【堆】【砌】【,】【不】【会】【分】【析】【。】【与】【材】【料】【单】【薄】【相】【反】【,】【不】【少】【考】【生】【以】【为】【,】【多】【运】【用】【一】【些】【材】【料】【,】【文】【章】【内】【容】【才】【算】【充】【实】【。】【于】【是】【,】【他】【们】【在】【作】【文】【中】【堆】【砌】【了】【大】【量】【的】【材】【料】【,】【却】【不】【懂】【得】【去】【分】【析】【所】【运】【用】【材】【料】【与】【文】【题】【要】【表】【达】【的】【观】【点】【存】【在】【怎】【样】【内】【在】【的】【逻】【辑】【联】【系】【,】【结】【果】【材】【料】【是】【材】【料】【,】【观】【点】【是】【观】【点】【,】【如】【同】【水】【与】【油】【,】【不】【能】【很】【好】【地】【融】【合】【在】【一】【起】【,】【材】【料】【变】【成】【了】【展】【览】【品】【,】【不】【能】【起】【到】【应】【有】【的】【作】【用】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【若】【即】【若】【离】【,】【缺】【少】【扣】【题】【意】【识】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【意】【犹】【帅】【也】【”】【、】【“】【万】【变】【不】【离】【其】【宗】【”】【、】【“】【古】【人】【作】【文】【一】【篇】【,】【定】【有】【一】【篇】【之】【主】【脑】【”】【,】【这】【里】【所】【说】【的】【“】【帅】【”】【、】【“】【宗】【”】【和】【“】【主】【脑】【”】【指】【的】【均】【是】【文】【章】【的】【中】【心】【。】【怎】【样】【才】【能】【使】【中】【心】【突】【出】【呢】【?】【别】【无】【他】【法】【,】【只】【要】【增】【强】【扣】【题】【意】【识】【。】【从】【阅】【卷】【情】【况】【来】【看】【,】【考】【生】【这】【方】【面】【的】【问】【题】【确】【实】【不】【少】【。】【或】【记】【叙】【了】【一】【件】【事】【,】【让】【阅】【卷】【者】【看】【不】【出】【你】【所】【写】【的】【与】【文】【题】【到】【底】【有】【无】【关】【联】【;】【或】【为】【追】【求】【语】【言】【的】【诗】【意】【,】【运】【用】【了】【原】【先】【准】【备】【好】【的】【话】【,】【不】【管】【文】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【、】【东】【拉】【西】【扯】【,】【缺】【少】【构】【思】【意】【识】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【朱】【光】【潜】【说】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【中】【每】【一】【个】【意】【想】【或】【字】【句】【就】【是】【一】【个】【兵】【,】【你】【在】【调】【用】【之】【前】【,】【须】【加】【一】【番】【检】【阅】【,】【不】【能】【作】【战】【的】【,】【须】【一】【律】【淘】【汰】【。】【只】【留】【下】【精】【锐】【,】【让】【他】【们】【各】【站】【各】【的】【岗】【位】【,】【各】【发】【各】【的】【效】【能】【。】【排】【定】【岗】【位】【就】【是】【摆】【阵】【势】【,】【在】【文】【章】【上】【叫】【做】【“】【布】【局】【”】【。】【从】【考】【生】【实】【际】【情】【况】【看】【,】【大】【部】【分】【考】【生】【缺】【乏】【谋】【篇】【意】【识】【,】【信】【手】【写】【来】【,】【想】【到】【哪】【里】【写】【到】【哪】【里】【,】【“】【跟】【着】【感】【觉】【走】【”】【,】【除】【此】【之】【外】【就】【是】【对】【提】【供】【的】【材】【料】【进】【行】【扩】【写】【,】【这】【样】【的】【文】【章】【,】【最】【终】【只】【能】【在】【基】【准】【分】【上】【下】【徘】【徊】【,】【难】【成】【气】【候】【。】

【<】【p】【>】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【嘻】【嘻】【,】【啊】【啊】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【孩】【子】【们】【爽】【朗】【的】【笑】【声】【传】【入】【了】【我】【的】【耳】【中】【,】【他】【们】【放】【着】【风】【筝】【,】【高】【兴】【的】【跑】【来】【跑】【去】【,】【春】【风】【也】【跟】【着】【起】【劲】【,】【微】【微】【吹】【拂】【着】【女】【孩】【的】【发】【丝】【,】【男】【孩】【的】【脸】【颊】【,】【与】【他】【们】【一】【起】【高】【兴】【,】【一】【起】【玩】【耍】【。】【孩】【子】【们】【一】【声】【又】【一】【声】【的】【笑】【声】【,】【仿】【佛】【幼】【小】【的】【石】【子】【被】【抛】【入】【了】【春】【水】【中】【。】【孩】【子】【们】【就】【是】【祖】【国】【的】【春】【天】【,】【他】【们】【是】【祖】【国】【的】【幼】【苗】【,】【也】【是】【祖】【国】【的】【希】【望】【。】【春】【,】【这】【股】【浓】【浓】【的】【韵】【味】【仿】【佛】【藏】【在】【孩】【子】【们】【的】【笑】【容】【中】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】天津滨海新区规划【<】【p】【>】【来】【到】【了】【墓】【地】【之】【时】【,】【天】【空】【中】【突】【然】【飘】【起】【了】【春】【雨】【,】【这】【春】【雨】【贵】【如】【油】【,】【它】【们】【落】【在】【了】【路】【旁】【的】【一】【排】【排】【的】【桃】【树】【梨】【树】【上】【,】【使】【树】【木】【们】【非】【常】【茂】【盛】【,】【就】【像】【是】【笑】【开】【了】【花】【一】【样】【,】【我】【来】【到】【了】【老】【师】【父】【亲】【的】【墓】【前】【,】【与】【其】【一】【起】【祭】【拜】【,】【我】【在】【目】【前】【放】【了】【鸡】【鸭】【鱼】【肉】【,】【又】【把】【一】【坛】【酒】【洒】【在】【墓】【上】【,】【就】【在】【这】【时】【我】【突】【然】【想】【起】【了】【这】【里】【的】【一】【个】【富】【人】【的】【墓】【,】【他】【的】【墓】【上】【的】【祭】【品】【是】【这】【里】【最】【多】【的】【,】【我】【倒】【是】【想】【起】【那】【位】【奇】【人】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

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【<】【p】【>】【<】【s】【t】【r】【o】【n】【g】【>】【【】【篇】【五】【:】【清】【明】【改】【写】【作】【文】【】】【<】【/】【s】【t】【r】【o】【n】【g】【>】【<】【/】【p】【>】天津滨海新区规划【<】【p】【>】【一】【声】【鸟】【啼】【。】【辗】【转】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

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【<】【p】【>】【在】【前】【一】【天】【,】【我】【喝】【醉】【了】【酒】【,】【夜】【里】【,】【我】【酒】【醒】【了】【,】【用】【针】【将】【油】【灯】【挑】【亮】【,】【抚】【摸】【着】【我】【朝】【夕】【相】【处】【的】【宝】【剑】【,】【心】【里】【燃】【烧】【着】【蓬】【勃】【的】【雄】【心】【。】【之】【后】【,】【我】【又】【睡】【了】【过】【去】【,】【在】【梦】【中】【,】【我】【听】【见】【了】【初】【晨】【时】【每】【个】【军】【营】【接】【连】【响】【起】【了】【雄】【壮】【的】【号】【角】【声】【,】【一】【声】【接】【着】【一】【声】【,】【显】【得】【绵】【长】【、】【悠】【扬】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【到】【了】【吃】【饭】【时】【间】【,】【所】【有】【的】【将】【士】【们】【都】【围】【在】【军】【旗】【下】【,】【互】【相】【打】【闹】【、】【交】【谈】【,】【吃】【着】【大】【块】【大】【块】【被】【烤】【熟】【的】【牛】【肉】【。】【听】【着】【由】【诸】【多】【乐】【器】【弹】【奏】【出】【来】【的】【那】【雄】【壮】【、】【悲】【凉】【的】【军】【歌】【,】【心】【中】【不】【禁】【一】【番】【惆】【怅】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

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